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"Wishfull Thinking" by WinterWindz (quickie) 5, 5, 5
"Wishfull Thinking" by WinterWindz (winterwindz@yahoo.com). The author probably wrote this story for her "master" in about five short sessions - using a new paragraph and a new verb tense each time. There's actually a certain sexy exuberance to this story, but it's buried beneath the grammatical mishmash and lack of plot development. Ratings for "Wishfull Thinking" Athena (technical quality): 5 Venus (plot & character): 5 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 5 |