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"Competitive Women" by David Rogers (business sex)
8, 7, 7
"Competitive Women" by David Rogers (davidr8@poboxes.com). A business executive finds himself in a position - actually in several positions, most of which are not missionary - where he has to decide which of two former classmates will receive an important business contract from his company. Alas, they are both eager to trade sexual favors for the contract; and also alas, they each have a tendency to be on the phone talking to him while the other is engaging in more direct sexual stimulation. So he awards the contract to both of them. This results in a cat fight and more sex. The story ends abruptly - as if the author just ran out of idea or lost interest in the story. Too bad. It had potential. Ratings for "Competitive Women" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 7 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 7 |