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"90210: Valerie" by Beowulf The Dragon Slayer (disjointed
adolescent sitcum parody) 5, 5, 3
"90210: Valerie" by Beowulf The Dragon Slayer (dragonslayer@iname.com) The author states in his disclaimer, "Feedback is most wellcome. Again, I don't have time to proof-read is so there are bound to be some mistakes." Yes there IS some mistakes. Do you suppose there really are a lot of people so desperate for something to read that they'll take the time to read a story that the author himself doesn't give a shit about? This author had an idea about sex and 90210. It was such an exciting idea that he wanted to share it with us. He sat down and started typing. He forgot some of his ideas as he went along and got others confused, but there was nothing he could do about this, because - as we all know - the only way to write a story is to start it, keep on typing, and never look back. He had a basic plot that had become garbled, boring, and essentially illiterate. What could he do with it? What indeed! And he's going to write more stories in this series! I'll beet there going to half mistakes two. Ratings for "90210: Valerie" Athena (technical quality): 5 Venus (plot & character): 5 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 3 |