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"Mike's Trip" by SR (adult/teen sex) 10, 7, 5
"Mike's Trip" by SR (parasol_60@yahoo.com). Actually, SR did not write this story. SR writes on his disclaimer: "It was written by 'Mike' for 'Angel' -- a supposed pre-legal nymphet he met and chatted with online. Does that make this 'M/f pedo'? Even if there wasn't a chance in hell she was really a pre-legal nymphet?" The answer is no, that's no what makes this story M/f pedo. It's the content of the story that accomplishes that task. Mike goes to Florida and finds a teenage nymphet in his room. She joins him for a shower and for sex. She's going to be his little sex slave for as long as he likes. I didn't find this story to be seriously depraved; but it WAS a bit of an emotional turn-off. The constant references to the "adolescent" and "teen" features of the girl kept reminding me in a rather silly fashion that we had an adult boinking a kid. The story was actually more laughable than depraved. The conversations followed a sort of ritualistic language: ""Yes, baby. Fuck your cum-slave's tight little asshole with your thick man-cock!" Has any teenage girl ever shouted to her adult Big Bopper, "Fuck my young ass!" It was like reading the stilted dialogue of some of the old romantic authors we used to have to read in uninspired English classes. I'm not going to name names here. I get in too much trouble with these authors' fan clubs. But be assured that I am NOT talking about John Milton this time. Ratings for "Mike's Trip" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 7 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 5 |