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* "Fresh Air and Exercise" by Mark Aster (sex in the
great outdoors) 10, 8, 8
* "Fresh Air and Exercise" by Mark Aster (MyFrThAl@aol.com). Some readers have commented to me that they are impressed that I can turn out two lengthy sets of reviews each week. Actually, my job is not all that hard - as long as I can find the time to read the stories. Good stories trigger a reaction in me that makes it easy for me to say something interesting. As I have grown accustomed to the job, I have let more of myself flow into my reviews; and I think readers enjoy this. And even bad stories trigger a reaction of some sort. So my main burden is meeting a deadline. The people that really impress me are the authors who come up with really creative ideas. Up to a month ago, for example, I had never heard of Mark Aster. Then one day he sent me a story, which (as I recall) I rated a "5." Since then I have received more stories at the rate of 2 to 4 a week. I realize that he's working from a bit of a backlog - but my question is, where does he get all these creative ideas? Maybe people who can do this just have a hot sex life - or fantasize a lot while they masturbate. The last time I left Our Hero and the Allen Sisters, they had just crashed after a bad drug trip accompanied by some grotesque sex. Here they clean it all out of their system with some good clean rapture in the great outdoors. If you've never read one of this author's stories before, you'll perhaps be more impressed than I was with this one. This is by no means a bad story; it's clearly written, but there's really little plot to it - just two sexy young ladies and a healthy stud fucking their brains out during a camping trip. Ratings for "Fresh Air and Exercise" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |