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"An Outsider's Education" by fcp (romance & sexual emergence) 10, 10, 10
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"An Outsider's Education" by fcp (fcp2718@poboxes.com). Set in the
exotic environment of Princeton University during March Madness, this is
a romantic story about strangely normal college students falling in love
and having sex for the first time. You'll probably understand the story
a little better if you know something about basketball {otherwise you'll
miss the irony of Princeton students, who are actually students, playing
in a major tournament against professional amateurs from the rest of the
United States) and "the black experience" in America {otherwise you'll
miss a major part of Tracy's emotional background}. However, even if
you are uninformed regarding this topics, you can use this story as a
pleasant entry-point to expand your cultural horizons.

For perfectly good reasons, Tracy has grown deeply attached to Don; and
for perfectly good reasons she says no when he suggests they make love.
For equally good reasons, her refusal stresses Tracy out, and her two
closest friends counsel her. In the process everyone discloses details
about their adolescent sexual experiences. The eventual first time
between Tracy and Donald is extremely sexy and romantic.

Cultural footnotes: "That's all right, that's okay. You're going to
work for us someday!" That's Princeton's informal official cheer.
"Hope springs eternal in the human breast...." That's in either the
Constitution or "Casey at the Bat."

The most realistic passage in this story is this brief one: ""Oh no, not
Dick Vitale! Get the ear-plugs!" {Note to foreigners: DV is a loud-
mouthed, demonstrably ignorant basketball announcer who uses
abbreviations in absurd situations. His advice to prevent pregnancy
would be, "OK, baybeee. No S tonight without a C."}

This story is not perfect: for example, I think the resolution of
Tracy's relationship with her mother is hasty and contrived. But this is
an exceptionally good story. Don't miss it!

Ratings for "An Outsider's Education"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10