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"The Back Rub" by G Smith (romance) 10, 10, 10
"The Back Rub" by G Smith (gsmith@hotmail.com). This story consists of a little over 8000 words about a back rub. Well , not just a back rub - also a front rub, a clit massage, and a few other forms of foreplay leading up to full vaginal penetration. But it starts out as a back rub from one coworker to another. It seems that Marty has left G a voice-mail message, indicating that she has had a rough day. G decides to drop by and give Marty a back rub. He does so very nicely, and one thing leads to another, and they discover that they have both been hot for each other for a while. Now they are even hotter. The author says this is his first story. I hope his second story is equally good. Ratings for "The Back Rub" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |