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"The Substitute" by Losgud (sister-in-law sex) 10, 10, 10
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"The Substitute" by Losgud (losgud@hotmail.com). Wayne and
Barbara are visiting her Mom and her family. Barbara leaves Wayne
alone with Anne overnight, and Wayne learns some interesting
things about his sister-in-law.

As a character in this story says about the author: " . . . his stories
are far from perfect, but in a way they're entirely perfect. _Terribly_
funny, these densely woven plots, you read along . . . and then with a
sudden jerk you find yourself immersed in these full-throttle sex scenes
. . . "

The sex and the sexual innuendo are both really pretty hot. This
is a very good story.

Ratings for "The Substitute"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10