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* "Among Friends" by Mark Aster (dream orgy) 10, 10, 10
* "Among Friends" by Mark Aster (MyFrThAl@aol.com). "Warm naked female skin presses against my palms in the darkness. She kisses me again, and her breasts are smooth and soft and tender against my chest. I wonder who she is?" Earlier that evening Our Hero had been with the two beautiful Allen sisters and two of their female friends. The two friends were obviously in love with each other, and the lustful ambiance caused Our Horny Hero to slip away with Pat for some private passion. After he and Pat have punched each other's tickets and have fallen asleep, Our Hero is vaguely awakened by the naked presence of a person who makes tender love to him. As he drifts back to sleep, he imagines who she might have been. Actually, he could figure it out by waking up completely and thinking logically. But the images are all so sweet that he hates to give any of them up. It could have been Julie rising quietly from the other side of the bed and making love to him in the darkness, struggling to suppress her usual orgasmic screams. It could have been Rachel creeping from Ariana's side and coming down the stairs, coming to him and giving herself to him for old times' sake. Or, most erotic of all because most unfamiliar, it could have been red-haired Ariana impaled on his cock, her small breasts bouncing as she rode him to orgasm and he pulled her pale stiff nipples. Sleep overtakes him, and he falls happily into the arms of his unknown assailant, and Julie and Rachel and Ariana swirl naked around him in his mind, their eyes happy and their bodies flushed with sex. In his dreams Pat stands behind them all and runs her hands down over the curves of her body, and he quietly fucks them all in his flights of fancy until morning. I'd really like to know if guys find this story as erotic as I did! Ratings for "Among Friends" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |