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"File This!" by MD James (office sex) 9, 8, 8
"File This!" by MD James (d2beast@aol.com). Guest review by Dart. Allison is the sexiest lady at the office; and since the day she started working there, the unnamed narrator has had his lustful eyes glued to her. Finally, a conjunction of events that he has dreamed of arrives. Allison's boss is out of town, and she's going to be working in the file room, the least frequented room in the office (which is hard to believe since it contains the copy machine). But, putting that aside, our narrator plots and then acts on how to take advantage of Allison's isolation. This story's appeal to me varied more, paragraph to paragraph, than any a.s.s story that I've read for quite a while. Because of the interesting twist at the end, I wound up liking the story. I do feel, however, that the end should have been developed in just a little more detail. Ratings for "File This!" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 8 Dart (appeal to reviewer): 8 |