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"The Basketball Game" by Gargoyle (athletic group sex) 10, 7, 7 "The Basketball Game" by Gargoyle (gargoyle@northernnet.com). This story is supposed to be about me. The high school English teacher is also in charge of scheduling special events. One day there is a scheduling conflict, and the visiting basketball players can't use the locker room to change their clothes; and so they go to the teacher's classroom to wait. They decide to change their clothes in the classroom; and since they have their clothes off anyway, all the players do various forms of horizontal folk dancing with the teacher. This wears them out or at least distracts them, and so they lose the basketball game to the home team. Subsequently, there seem to be a lot of scheduling problems before big games, and the visiting teams often play listlessly. This is an interesting fantasy and I appreciate the friendly spirit in which it was written. However, from my own perspective, it just didn't seem like me in the story, and I suspect that people who follow these reviews faithfully will have a similar reaction to mine. Even though I enjoy looking at the bodies of sexy athletes, I just don't get high on the idea of either being gangbanged by them or seducing them en masse. Having said that and setting aside the notion that it would really be hard to accomplish all of this in a typical high school classroom, I hasten to add this is still a pretty good story. Ratings for "The Basketball Game" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 7 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 7