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"A Meeting" by Bob (bdsm) 8, 8, 8
"A Meeting" by Bob (McPeery@Bellsouth.net). Guest review by Kim. This is a "first attempt" by Bob to post a sex story, so it says here. Oooh, Bob, ya ready for this? I'll take it slow at first... Two unnamed people, a woman and a man, meet on a flight to London, he a computer engineer, her a flower buyer. They hit it off, and arrange a date for that evening. No jet lag for them, oh no, it's off to a very strange restaurant with an odd line in entertainment. After eating their way though a lovingly detailed menu, they settle down to watch the floor show. This consists of the spectacle of a woman getting tied to a sawhorse and then getting beaten to orgasm by a guy in a long black cape wielding an assortment of implements of corporal punishment. Now you might expect this to be a bit racy for a first date, but not our couple, soon they're back at her hotel getting up to their own little bit of spanking fun. Having warmed her ass once, they decide they will continue there dom/sub relationship by flying off to Paris, as you do. Once there, a much more detailed meeting of Master and willing submissive takes place, involving such whimsy as her undressing him using just her teeth. It all ends with them cuddling each other to sleep. Maybe not everyone's idea of a romantic story, and while not entirely gentle, then certainly loving, none the less. As a story, it lacks much of a coherent narrative, but it's really an excuse for the linking of the BDSM scenes. The English was a bit lacking in places, but nothing too wayward. I did notice a technical error. I haven't been to London for a long time, but they didn't have single pound notes even then. But then again, this could be set in the past (apart from the fact that the guy is a network engineer, which I don't think have been around for all that long). Ah well, whatever, I doubt it makes much of a difference, all things considered. Generally I quite like consensual spanking stories, though I personally don't care for dom males, but hey, it wasn't written just for me. Not too bad for a "first attempt". Ratings for "A Meeting" Athena (technical quality): 8 (Nothing really bad) Venus (plot & character): 8 (Precious little story, but good sequences) Kim (appeal to reviewer): 8 (Read a lot worse, specially first time efforts) |