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"Slippery Fun" by Unknown Author (suck & fuck story) 7, 1, 1
"Slippery Fun" by Unknown Author (rocketscandy@hotmail.com). Guest review by Sven the Elder. Right from the word 'go', from the point of view of this reviewer, this story gets two strikes against it. There is no clear idea as to who the author is and there is spam for a story site at the start and finish of the story. The latter, particularly, *SMELLS*!!! If I want to be spammed I can do so by trying to find stories in what used to be a.s.s - I do *NOT* want to find it within a story I am trying to read. I do not refer to where an author has a reference to their own site, but rather the sort that reads, and I quote : " Would you like thousands of erotic stories in many different topics? Cum to http:..." As to the missing author name - was the poster the author, or has someone decided to steal this story, remove the authors name and then just post it? Sadly it is impossible to tell, perhaps the *real* author will stand up and either claim or reclaim the story. Who knows. Rant mode off!! - And I haven't even read the story yet. The story is a somewhat uninteresting suck and fuck story involving a lesbian four-way with a follow-up of some equally uninteresting MF to close. The idea may well be taken from the screenplay of one of the poorer quality porn videos that seem to float around. There are a number of credulous assumptions and zilch in the way of plot. It isn't even good one-handed fiction. There would appear to be little in the way of technical errors, but having read it once I am not about to go back and waste time a second time. Advice to possible readers - if you like this sort of thing it may well be of interest - If you like your stories to have a start, middle and end, look elsewhere, this was not worth reading. Ratings for "Slippery Fun" Technical quality: 7 Plot & character: 1 Sven (appeal to reviewer): 1 |