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"Dance of the Worm" by Peter (nice friendly sex) 8, 9, 9
"Dance of the Worm" by Peter. Guest review by Mark Aster. This is a nice, warm, sexy human-interest story, about a young man who has no luck with random superficial girls his own age, but meets a pretty slightly-older woman at a dance class and, well, gets along very well with her. In the back seat of the car. This story is more in the true-life-experience genre than the literary- sex-story genre; which is to say, not that it's true, but that it reads like it might be, like it might be a friend telling the story to you. The story as story has a few imperfections; I found the first two or three sections rather beside the point, or at least too long for what they did. The diction is awkward in a few places, but nothing seriously distracting. My only complaint about the story or the sex is that the idea of making love in the back seat of a Datsun makes my leg-muscles cramp up! Recommended as a heartwarming story of nice friendly sex, with some dirty talk thrown in as a bonus. Ratings for "Dance of the Worm": Athena: 8 (basic correct writing) Venus: 9 (friendly and sexy and convincing) Mark: 9 (nice story) |