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"School Daze" by Gargoyle (high school sex fantasy)
8, 9, 9
"School Daze" by by Gargoyle (gargoyle@northernnet.com). Guest Review by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com). Imagine if you will a school where attendance is dropping, seriously jeopardizing the school's funding. Well, our narrator puts things back on the straight and narrow, by abandoning the straight and narrow. From now on, all female teachers must wear skimpy outfits and being exhibitionists at heart they all fall willingly into line and show as much flesh as possible. We know this is a fantasy because at least in MY high school, there were more than a few teachers that would have caused me to ditch school if they tried to pull anything like this. In fact, it is my belief that our "health" teacher was specifically selected because no sane teenage boy, however raging the hormones, would ever be aroused by words such as "penis" and "vagina" when uttered from her lips. The first chapter in this 90K story briefly introduces us to the various teachers. The subsequent chapters are a more thorough exploration of the fun each teacher has with her students. This begins with simple exhibition and moves very quickly into finding out exactly how many penises can be stuffed into a teacher at the same time. By golly math can be fun! If you have six teenage boys with raging erections how many orgasms will the teacher have? If I had word problems like that in school, maybe I wouldn't have to go rooting around for my calculator so often! I have to admit this story was fun. I also have to admit a bias. A bunch of adult women having sex with high school boys is perfectly OK by me. If School Daze had been about a bunch of adult men having sex with high school girls, I probably would have had significant problems with the story, regardless of the fantasy aspect. That thought is profoundly deeper than anything you'll find in this story. "School Daze" was totally unrealistic. There were some awkward sentences, a few misused words, a lack of transitions to smooth the reading; but it was outrageous as hell, and I enjoyed it. If you're looking for fun, uncomplicated, fantasy sex you'll probably like this one a lot. Athena (technical quality): 8-- Needs a good proof, not too distracting. Venus (plot & character): 9-- Lots of sex, stayed a fantasy. Sandman (appeal to reviewer): 9-- It's not a classic, but I enjoyed it. |