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"Study Partner" by DevoSpudC (academic sex) 9, 9, 9
"Study Partner" by DevoSpudC (cwilson9@ix.netcom.com). Guest review by Dart. This is a very pleasant, gentle, and modestly erotic story. Jessica and Vicki are together in the library. Vicki is studying, and also chastising Jessica for being distracted by the gorgeous young man she's watching through a window near their table. Jessica has a calculus exam the following day which she really needs to pass, and she's behind; and Vicki enjoys pointing out to her that she hasn't the freedom to idle away her time gazing at young men. Jessica agrees and applies herself to her studies. Prim Vicki, meanwhile, leaves Jessica to struggle with her studies by herself, since she has a class. Like all good calculus students, Jessica becomes so engrossed in her studies that by the time she thinks she's in reasonably good shape for the exam, it's after ten and the library's deserted, except for a shy- appearing young man who smiles at her when she finally looks up. She smiles back. She's about to ask him what he's studying, when he drops his pen. She waits while he bends down to retrieve it. He doesn't reappear where she expects; and she never does find out, academically at least, what he was studying. But by the time she's back in her room, she's a lot more relaxed. I would have liked a sentence explaining why Vicki never returned to the library after her class. Also, Vicki was sometimes referred to as "Vicky." Finally, the author begins a sentence: She had ceased wearing bras some ago as ..., when I think he means: She had ceased wearing bras some time ago as .... Ratings for "Study Partner" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 9 Dart (appeal to reviewer): 9 |