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"Georgetta: The Bet" by Dolphin (tender bondage) 10, 10, 10
"Georgetta: The Bet" by Dolphin (dolphin31p@hotmail.com). Guest review by Sandman (sandman@bitsmart.com). Three CRs ago in CR#278 I reviewed a BDSM story, a bit unfavorably. This story is three times the size of the last one and has basically the same theme: woman looses bet, man gets to play God for a while. Both men dress their women very elaborately. In this story, Georgetta is dressed like a "Motorcycle slut from LA". Both women are ordered to have a dildo stuffed up their pussy. The last story was reviewed unfavorably, this story is going to get a very good recommendation. So what's the difference you ask? Character and respect. Where the previous BDSM story failed in my opinion was that the woman was one-dimensional - she existed, nothing more. In this story, Georgetta is vividly real with feelings, emotions, and desires that don't always coincide with her lover's. "The Bet" is also about respect, trust, and love. No one's needs are ignored, feelings are respected, and above everything else this couple had a lot of fun and I enjoyed reading about it. The author goes to a lot of trouble to make Georgetta AND the reader anticipate the sex which is to come. For the most part it was highly effective. The first twenty-three pages of this thirty-three page story (from an Agent printout) are devoted to titillating and tantalizing both the reader and Georgetta. And the finale pretty much lives up to all that buildup. After so much sexy buildup, the finale coulda simply said "then he fucked her" and that would probably be enough to throw the reader over the edge. Oh there are a few cliches and assumptions like a woman when undressing will immediately become as preoccupied with her breasts as a man would be (if it's not a Celestial assumption, it should be). Then there is the generous tolerance for the woman's multiple orgasms and a very short refractory time for Chris. But hey - this is a stroke/trash/call the SO and get yer rocks off story so I'm not going to knock off any points here. There are also a few glitches in Athena but given the size of the story a few allowances can be made here as well. All in all, this is a most excellent story that serves as a wonderful introduction to the joys of Bondage and it was very much enjoyed. If sex with my future Mrs. ever borders on the mundane I think I'll revisit this story to see how to put a little life back in the relationship. Ratings for "Georgetta: The Bet" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Sandman (appeal to reviewer): 10 |