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"Rag Doll" by LeAnna (infidelity & revenge) 10, 10, 10
"Rag Doll" by LeAnna (leanna1@hotmail.com). Guest review by Stephen Peters (sxjames@aol.com). This story is archived at the She's beautiful and sexy, has a good house in an upscale suburban neighborhood, but her oh-so-successful husband has been up to no good. Specifically, he's been screwing his secretary. What's a gal to do? Well, she gets revenge. And, in 300 or so lines, LeAnna shows us revenge at its sweetest, sexiest -- and its most poignant. I really liked this story, not the least because of the detailed, lush and very erotic seduction/teasing scene that makes up the bulk of the tale. The un-named wife meets her husband (Todd) in the bedroom after work, but instead of the promised sex Todd ends up handcuffed to the bed post while his wife describes in extended, delicious detail her conversation (and later sex) with the woman he had been fucking on the side. To add to the hot talk she climbs all over Todd's body, mercilessly teasing the poor fool, driving Todd (not to mention this reviewer) to the point of leaking...well, you get the idea. Yes, she lets Todd know *exactly* what he is throwing away by his infidelity. And throw it away he does. You see, the true strength of this story is that Todd never really believes what is coming. He seems to think if he apologizes and gets his cum it will all be better. Poor fool. Technically, the story rates a 9. There was one typo, (she 'tasted' the tinge of her husbands cum in his lovers pussy, not 'felt') and a few awkward sentences, but this did not seriously distract from my enjoyment. Again, the interplay between Todd and his wife was excellent, and the dialog rang true -- solid 10 for plot and character. All in all, I highly recommend this tale, and hope to read a lot more from this author. Ratings for "Rag Doll" Technical Quality: 9 Plot & Character: 10 Appeal to Reviewer: 10 |