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"Mail Call" by Pan (long-distance sex) 10, 10, 10
"Mail Call" by Pan (pan@nym.alias.net). Guest review by Bookman. This will be short and sweet. A young collegian receives a videotape from the girlfriend he left home. She shows a short travelogue of places they both know well--then continues with a private tour. Not much more than that, but--oh, baby. I liked this story. Short, clean, compact, and, for all that the two main partners never even come close to touching each other, remarkably hot. A well-written little narration. Ratings for "Mail Call" Athena (general appeal): 9 Aphrodite (erotic appeal): 9 Apollo (personal appeal): 9 |