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"Rag Doll" by LeAnna (infidelity & revenge) 10, 10, 10
"Rag Doll" by LeAnna (kalika@main.provost.msu.edu). Although it still has a few minor errors {e.g., "had bore" for "had borne"}, this is an extremely creative, well-written story. In a sense, this is a spouse-watching story. The wife knows her husband has been cheating on her. She has confronted the Other Woman - in fact, she has had sex with the other woman while extracting the details of the liaison from her. Now she has handcuffed her husband and is retelling the those details to him, while she forces him to pleasure her. What I like best about this story is that it does NOT make the naive assumption that the wife who catches her husband cheating will forgive him, as long as she can join in on the fun. But the way in which the author declines to make this assumption is very creative indeed. I trust my husband. I really do. But I have jokingly told him that if he ever messes around on me, I'll scratch the other woman's eyes out and then cut off his dick. This lady may have a better idea. {Note: A guest reviewer also submitted a spontaneous review for this story. Therefore, there is a second review of this story later in this issue of CR.} Ratings for "Rag Doll" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |