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"It's a Wonderful Wife" by Spoonbender (sex slavery)
8, 9, 9
"It's a Wonderful Wife" by Spoonbender (Theodore@Spoonbender.demon.co.uk). This is a sex slavery story, but it doesn't start out that way. It actually poses an interesting dilemma - what would a relatively straight, attractive woman do if she took a job in an isolated place where it was disclosed to her that part of her job description was to provide sexual merriment for all the horny men who worked there? The author uses effective language; in fact, he often displays a very nice way of expressing himself. However, he also occasionally mars the story with silly and annoying grammar errors. Could something like this happen in real life? I'll answer that question with another. Can you imagine how wealthy a woman could become by suing the oil company that permitted this kind of activity among its employees? Ratings for "It's a Wonderful Wife" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |