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"Autobiographical Essay" by Jordan Shelbourne (development of a sex story) 10, 10, 10
http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=329250714


"Autobiographical Essay" by Jordan Shelbourne (jordan@u36.com).
As its title suggests, this is more of an essay than a short
story, but it's still a darned good story. The story is
essentially a case study in which the author describes how he
concocted events from real life to write "Unwrap Party," a very
sexy story that he posted back when I first encountered this
author's work on a.s.s

I would suggest reading or rereading "Unwrap Party" before the
present story.

Ratings for "Autobiographical Essay"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10