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"The Vibrator" by DTRulz69 (masturbation) 9, 9, 9
"The Vibrator" by DTRulz69 (dtrulz69@aol.com). While she is cleaning the basement (as per her mother's specific instructions), 15-year-old Dana comes across along with some explicit pictures of her mother making use of that item back in the days before its warranty expired. So Dana tries it out, and the vibrator works just fine. Then she realizes that her 12-year-old sister has been watching at least part of the activity, and so she invites Jodi to join in for the encore. Assuming Dana's mother really has set the appliance aside for a long time, what is really impressive about the story is the fact that the batteries keep going and going and going after all those years. This could give those ad writers an idea for replacing that damned rabbit that batteries keeps going and going and going -- as if they haven't thought of the vibrator idea already! But I digress. The story could use a little more development and attention to details, but it's already a pretty good story. Ratings for "The Vibrator" Athena (technical quality): 9 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |