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*"The Gold Swizzle Stick" by Zombie Night (miscellaneous orgies) 9.5, 10, 10
* "The Gold Swizzle Stick" by Zombie Night (ZombieNight@hotmail.com). This was originally posted under the title "Behind the Bar" as one of those rather lengthy postings by TheEditor, also known as Grobert, who posts stories with the names of the original authors deleted. My current information is that this story was written in 1994 by Zombie Night, whose address is given above, and who has also written several other long, fully-developed stories. This story focuses on a common a.s.s. theme: if a husband and wife are having a little trouble in their relationship, one of them should run around on the other, and this will cause them to become closer in their matrimonial bliss. In this case, Brandy has become insatiably hungry for sex because her husband has been out of town for a few days while he is studying for the bar. {Actually, he's learning how to RUN a bar; but I thought it would be clever to make it sound like he was studying law.} After Dave the Bartender fucks Brandy, he suggests a way that they can expand the bar's clientele while simultaneously allaying Brandy's horniness. This strategy is immensely successful, and when the harried husband returns home unexpectedly and finds Brandy flagrante delicto, he smiles happily and eagerly offers to supply a similar service to gladden the hearts of the female customers. As I reread the preceding description, the story sounds a bit far-fetched. I mean, Dave and Brandy come across as counselors or social service agents who selflessly solve the problems of their sexually dysfunctional or otherwise needy customers. In real life it would be at least slightly unlikely that Brandy's activity would solidify her relationship with her husband, that Dave would suggest his plan to Brandy when he could instead get a lot of really good sex himself, or that the patrons of the bar would simply cheer for the lucky winners when Dave obviously cheated in his distribution of Brandy's favors. However, this really is a good fantasy, and the sexual action is really hot. Ratings for "The Gold Swizzle Stick" Athena (technical quality): 9.5 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |