|
Return To the Celestial Review (This does NOT open a new window) Return To the Index (This does NOT open a new window) Note, to make reading multi-part stories easier, story links (links with dejanews.com or www.qz.to, NOT the review or profile links) will open up a new browser window. When you are done reading the story, or section of the story simply CLOSE the story window. |
|
"Illusion" by Miss Behavin' (sex with boss's wife). Owl: 10, 10, 9
"Illusion" by Miss Behavin' (missbehavin@sprint.ca). Guest review by Watchful Owl. I'm annoyed with myself that I didn't see the ending coming. It's pretty predictable, in hindsight. But I didn't, and I enjoyed every second of this read. It was well written (not a single grammatical or structural error in the whole thing!) and the characters were quite believable. The plot features an aspiring young lawyer being asked by her boss to sleep with his wife for a large sum of money. She decides to do it, and we're off into a well-done (if somewhat formulaic) plot. However, the ending was a bit of a turnoff, so it doesn't get full points. Give "Illusion" a read. You won't be sorry. Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot and character): 10 Watchful Owl (appeal to reviewer): 9 |