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"Island" by Janey Urquhart (really friendly bondage) 10, 10, 10
"Island" by Janey Urquhart (Janey98@hotmail.com). Jim and Josh are just humble scientists, but they save Angela's life after she has been drifting about in a life raft. I see a TV series in this…. Josh wants to send for help – maybe even send her to a hospital – but the more experienced Jim gently reminds him that neither of them have had sex with a woman in six months. And as near as I can figure there are no sheep or camels on their island. So Angela recovers her health and feels grateful to the guys, even though she longs for her beau George, who is somewhere else. She figures she'll just make the best of things until Jim gets the radio fixed. But Jim is pulling a Penelope with the radio. To understand that reference, you'll have to check out the Odyssey, where the wife of the Wiley Odysseus pursues a more honorable goal by undoing each day's needlework before the following dawn. The guys are studying El Nina or La Muchacha or something of that ilk. As the plot thickens, they tell Angela that a tsunami is coming. This shows that the author is scientifically literate, since she knows the difference between a tidal wave and a tsunami. However, that's about where my knowledge ends. I don't know for sure that you can predict these things really accurately or that the best way to deal with one would be to shack up in a basement with two sexy guys until the Big One comes and goes. But I suppose it would be worth a try. I mean, it beats sacrificing a virgin…. But I digress. The story has lots of non-sexual details – maybe too many. But as I continued to read, I just KNEW that these three fine people were going to do the wild thing together. But alas! Angela has a conscience, one that puts her between the horns of a dilemma, which is itself a pun-filled metaphor in this case. To put it succinctly, the Guys know perfectly well that Angela wants to practice horizontal folk dancing with them, but her inhibitions stand in her way – she doesn't want to be deliberately unfaithful to what's his name wherever he is. What can they do? Well, remove her inhibitions, of course. How? Well, by tying her up before they fuck her brains out. And so a good time is had by all. A real good time. To put it mildly. Ratings for "Island" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |