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"How to Succeed in Chicago" by Wombat (friendly sex slavery) 8, 8, 8
"How to Succeed in Chicago" by Wombat (Wombat888@ hotmail.com). Our narrator is a female lawyer who has just finished a tough job in Chicago. Her colleague, who has just demonstrated himself to be a competent professional, convinces her to stay over in the Windy City instead of returning to the Big Apple; and he also quickly proves himself to be a good listener. Will he also prove himself to be a good lover? Well, at least he's a very considerate person with a talent for foreplay and a genius for cunnilingus. Hence, they are faced with a decision: Either he can show her the high spots of the city, or they can make this weekend a sexual odyssey – as in exploring new dimensions in sex. So she becomes his sex slave – and really likes it. It's a good story, but just a little too simplistic. I think the author wanted to write something more than a simple stroke story but didn't quite get to the point of fully developed characters. I suspect that people who are already sold on the notion that women derive their main pleasure by following the instructions of a friendly but dominating man may enjoy this story more than those of us who harbor a little skepticism in this regard. Ratings for "How to Succeed in Chicago" Athena (technical quality): 8 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |