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"On Wilder Shores" by Adhara (déjà vu sex) 10, 10, 10
"On Wilder Shores" by Adhara (eros_dreams@hotmail.com). When I was growing up, "The Twilight Zone" was a big show. OK, so when I was growing up reruns of "The Twilight Zone" were a big thing. The basic theme of that TV series was that things happened to be people that just couldn't be real – could they? This story is essentially an adult – or promiscuous adolescent – version of "The Twilight Zone." All the erotic dreams that the protagonist has seem to come true at the coffee shop the next day. That can't happen, can it? Not only does this story have deja vu experiences; it also has crashing waves, a rising tide, snaking hips, and a rising crescendo with fingernails digging deep into the into the poor guy's shoulders moments before his release. What more can you ask for? Ratings for "On Wilder Shores" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |