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"Precious" by Crimson Dragon (really bad day) 10, 10, 10
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"Precious" by Crimson Dragon (dcrimson@yahoo.com).
http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=393587728

This story could be described as the morose self-ruminations of a rejected
woman at the end of a bad day. Molested, fired, her ankle nearly broken, her
liquor gone, she now finds that her savings have been stolen by her live-in
boyfriend who has just dumped her. This story will not win the Good-Humor
Stroke Story of the Month Award.

Although it sucks as stroke material, this story is excellent as literature.
You know – the sort of stuff you read to achieve a more complete insight into
life – the stuff that lets you vicariously experience feelings and emotions
that, if you're lucky, will probably never happen to you.

This is one of those stories where I dislike the abbreviated labels that try
to classify it. My advice is to ignore them; just call this one (good story).
The author calls it depressing, but I wouldn't. Of course, you'll have to
read the story to decide whether "depressing" is an overstatement or an
understatement.

Ratings for "Precious"
Athena (technical quality): 10
Venus (plot & character): 10
Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10