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* "Tease" by Hawk Richards (sexual titillation). Bear: 10, 10, 10
* "Tease" by Hawk Richards (hawkrds@aol.com). Guest review by The Bear (thebear@io.com). The time has come for The Wease1 to come scampering out of the closet, or slinking out of the closet, or turning cartwheels out of the closet, or whatever the heck Wease1s do -- and to reveal himself as none other than The Bear (aka The New Bear or TheBear@io.com). Those that understood the joke are probably tired of it, and those that didn't understand didn't miss much. -"Tease," by Hawk Richards, is a good story. It begins with a man and woman on a date at a nice restaurant. The male narrator describes the woman's exquisite features in appreciative detail while they flirt over dinner, and then he takes her home and she invites him in for coffee. Sexual activity ensues, including an arousingly written session of cunnilingus. I'm not going to say anything further about the plot, except that the teasing you expect may not be the teasing that you find. This story gets a 10 on technical quality, meaning not that it was perfect technically but that it was at least as well written as the last thing *I* posted harder time with the plot and character rating - the story doesn't have a great deal of plot or character development, but then it is a fairly short and straightforward story and didn't need much. I say it has the right amount of plot and character for the story it tells, and that gets it a 10. I had an even more difficult time with the subjective appeal to reviewer rating. The story as a whole didn't really push any buttons for me, but then there were those nice descriptions of the girl and those hot paragraphs of oral sex ... I finally decided that was worth a 10. Ratings for "Tease" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot and character): 10 Bear (appeal to reviewer): 10 |