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"Users and Losers" By David 2 {Revenge & Romance}
BitBard: 10, 10, 9
"Users and Losers" By David 2 (davidm2@mindspring.com). Guest review by BitBard (review@bitbard.pair.com) It seems like everyone has a Bradley K. Smith in their lives. You know the type: people who get whatever they want and its usually handed to them on a silver platter. They get the best jobs, the best money, the best cars, the trophy wife taking care of the trophy house, and they get it all with such effortless ease. Fortunately not everyone has THE Bradley K. Smith in their lives. This guy has all of the above but he also keeps a trophy geek as a friend so he can remind himself of how good Bradley K. Smith is. And what happens when the trophy geek threatens to show up the ultimate user? Well let's just say Bradley K. Smith has very few scruples. So how is this a sex story? Well Bradley K. Smith isn't completely perfect. Seems he's shooting blanks and family and friends want a little miniature Bradley K. Smith clone, so his trophy wife is shamed into visiting a _gasp_ sperm bank! Our intrepid geek sees her and they have a nice little chat and if you haven't figured out where this is going by now, you're not old enough to be reading sex stories! A word of warning: this story has what I can only describe as a consensual rape scene in it that, while relatively tame by ASS non-consensual standards, may be too much for some readers. I found this story to be a very easy read from start to finish though I did pull back at the "rape" scene. I was rewarded by persevering to find no further such problems. The subsequent sex was very consensual, positive and well described. With the "consensual rape" warning in mind, I'd say this is a story that's worth your time and attention. There's a lot of feeling and emotion in this story, some are obvious threads meant to be picked up and traveled, and some less obvious but perhaps more enlightening. Ratings for "Users and Losers" Pandora (Story Codes): MF, pregnancy, mild non-consensual. Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 BitBard (appeal to reviewer): 9 |