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"Dirty Old Men" by xx x (cherry popping) 10, 9, 9
"Dirty Old Men" by xx x (pashun73@yahoo.com) This is a strange story. I think the author is British or something. It begins with this disclaimer: " This story includes some minor reform spellings. If you repost you must not change the spelling to trad spelling (if you want to post it with a more radical reformed spelling, go ahead). The story is about a dirty old man even dirtier old man), who are enlisted by a cheeky young lady to deflower her friend. It seems that Anita is a virgin but she doesn't want to stay that way. She reckons she can lose her virginity only once, and so it might as well be something to remember. So she wants to lose it to a "perv" that's so old, wrinkled, and "repulsiv" that no one in their right mind would fancy. So the cheeky young lady thought of our narrator and his friend. It turns out that Anita is 100% Phwoaar. She's "the type you see at your local college who you just know are feminists, lesbians or both but knowing they'll totally out of reach doesn't stop you knowing that you'd risk death to get your cock inside them." I guess I see his point. I still don't see the point in the "reformed spelling," but it's really not all that annoying. This is a bizarre but interesting story. Ratings "Dirty Old Men" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9 |