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"Dream Girl" by Chew Toy (hypnosis) 10, 9, 9 http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=390946789 --- http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/15291.txt "Dream Girl" by Chew Toy (wellgnawed@hotmail.com) http://www.dejanews.com/getdoc.xp?AN=390946789 --- http://www.qz.to/erotica/assm/Year98/15291.txt This story was listed as (mc, hyp, mf, md, fd, cons, rom, bond, bdsmlmnop). I wasn't really sure what to expect. Now that I've read the story, I suppose the labeling was accurate, except for the innovative bdsmlmnop. The guy is acting as the Master of his dream girl, whom he met at a party where she hypnotized him. But if she hypnotized him, why is he hypnotizing her? Ah! There's the rub. I guess you'll have to read the story to find out. Ratings "Dream Girl" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 9 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 9