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* "Charlie" by Mary Anne Mohanraj (infidelity & quickie)
10, 10, 10
* "Charlie" by Mary Anne Mohanraj (moh2@midway.uchicago.edu). This story is about the same length as the last one; but there's more of a story to it. A woman gets her husband out of the house just barely in time to have a frantic quickie with her lover in the kitchen. Wham, bam, the microwave timer goes off, thank you ma'am and he's out the door and she's off to work. The style of the story nicely parallels the frantic pace and emotions of the lovemaking session. Ratings for "Charlie" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |