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"I am her Lover's Assistant" by DonW38. (humiliated husband)
BitBard: 10, 10, 4
"I am her Lover's Assistant" by DonW38 (DonW38@aol.com). Guest review by BitBard (bitbard@newsguy.com). (*) I'll acknowledge a personal bias against humiliation stories before I begin the review. This will affect the appeal scores at the end of this review. In this "slut wife" story, a husband gets off on knowing his wife is getting royally serviced by her boss. She goes out on her "dates" with her boss, then comes home and tells her husband all the graphic details while he masturbates and eventually sucks her lover's seed from her pussy. As you can see, this story is geared to a very select audience. This story is well written: the dialog is smooth and clean, the descriptions are arousing and enticing, and there's no real fault with the story line or characters. A "slut wife" story often portrays a remarkably open and healthy relationship between a husband and a wife. The sex is usually positive, healthy, and rewarding for everyone involved. This story however focuses on how much better the wife's lover is than her husband. The whole story is geared towards humiliating her husband. There are no positive messages only a continual stream of groveling and cruelty. In short I couldn't get past the thought that this was a very dysfunctional relationship and that the husband's lack of self-esteem bordered on the miraculous. The sexual descriptions we very well done, the ambiance that gives those descriptions meaning simply weren't there for me. People who are into humiliation (mental rather than physical) may ignore my mark on appeal. Ratings for "I am her Lover's Assistant" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 BitBard (appeal to reviewer): 4 (*) |