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"Legal" by Wile E. Coyote (in-law sex) 6, 8, 8
"Legal" by Wile E. Coyote (ellem@webspan.net). Webster defines "legal" as "old enough to be fucked without legal recriminations against the person who performs the Act." That's Little Oral Annie Webster, of course - not Noah or Daniel. The girl has just turned 17, which makes her legal in her state, which is apparently Arousal. Since she was 14 she has been trying to seduce her brother-in-law, who was at that time one year more than twice her age. {This is a question actually taken from the math portion of the SAT: how old is the brother-in-law now?} But he has always said, "No; not until you're legal." Now that she's legal, he fucks her brains out - rather brutally. The fact that the girl enjoys the harshness of the sex actually makes sense in this case, since she is portrayed as a bit of an airhead who wouldn't recognize love or a meaningful relationship if someone shoved one up her ass. This is by no means the best story I've reviewed lately. It's full of silly errors; but it's possible that the author did this on purpose - to convey the authentic impression that this babe ain't gonna be a rocket scientist. She's just young, dumb, and full of cum. Ratings for "Legal" Athena (technical quality): 6 Venus (plot & character): 8 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 8 |