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* "Steven After Hours" by Backrub (hot sex with a
superstud) 10
* "Steven After Hours" by Backrub (BCKRUB@aol.com). I strongly urge that authors revise their stories when they repost them. I have reviewed something like 175 stories so far, and I think four of them have been revised - all by Backrub. (Backrub even revises *other people's* stories! The revisions all earned ratings of 10. So there's probably a lesson in this somewhere. Here's what I wrote in my review of the unrevised version in Celestial Reviews 3: "...at my present level of mature sophistication (yeah!), I would *not* be interested in having sex with a person as shallow as Steven - a sexy stud with a nine inch cock who thinks he's God's gift to women just because he drives them out of their mind with sexual ecstasy while he's satisfying his own lusts. But in our fantasies we can excuse a few minor personality flaws. Seriously, if you're a mature person interested in reading about the romantic relationship of your dreams, you may not like this story at all. But if you're looking for literate and hot descriptions of oral, vaginal, and anal heterosexual activity that make it all sound like a helluva lot of fun, this one's for you. In the revision Backrub cleaned up a few minor problems in the original and added a final section with a bondage theme. This is the kind of bondage that anti-degradation Celeste enjoys: the dominator is simply taking charge and the person being bound knows that she's in for a free ride if she's just willing to have it in the non-harmful way he wants to give it to her. Another good story! (Rating: 10) |