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"The Gift" by ThisClose9 (birthday bi bdsm). R'khaan: 7, 8, 8
"The Gift" by ThisClose9 (thisclose9@aol.com). Guest Review by R'khaan (rkhaan@ix.netcom.com) A week before his 30th birthday, Jan's having dinner with his wife, Kay, who asked him what he wanted for his birthday. A little buzzed from the wine they had consumed, Jay makes an off-the-wall comment about never getting what he really wanted. Naturally, Kay asks what he really wants and Jay tells her that he wants one of those nights he's read about in Penthouse. "Something we've never done. Something really wild." Kay's response sounded uninterested and the conversation turned to everyday sort of things. A week later, we find Jay coming home from work, bitching about having to work on his birthday. As he enters the house and grabs a glass of wine, he hears some strange sounds coming from their bedroom and notices a faint light. Approaching the closed door, the sounds are louder and, curious, Jay peeks into the room, finding his lovely wife watching a porno flick, something she's not known to do. After watching Kay masturbate, they go get more wine and Kay begins to present Jay's birthday present by undressing him. Once undressed, Kay ties her hubby up with some old nylons and because he's comfortable, clips clothespins onto his nipples before blindfolding him. After getting Jay's assurance that things will go "all the way," Kay leaves him bound, clipped, blindfolded and naked on the bed. She adds a wicked touch by opening the blinds in the room; anyone walking by and looking would see him. After a while, Kay returns - but she's obviously not alone as Jay overhears his wife talking to someone. Kay returns to the bedroom, checks on her husband and the fun begins with a tantalizing blowjob. Jay's in heaven but something's not quite right here - how can Kay be talking to him and sucking his cock at the same time? Jay's questions are answered when Kay mounts him and hard cock slides between his lips, fulfilling another of his fantasies. The trio get down and dirty big time, with Jay getting two helpings of come to taste - his from his own wife's coochie and from the still-mysterious hard cock in his mouth. Eventually the blindfold comes off. Jay is introduced to Drew, the owner of the cock he'd just sucked. Now watching the movie again, the trio really gets things going; as Jay fucks Kay, his last fantasy is fulfilled as Drew fills Jay's backside with hot man-meat. Then Kay reminds Jay that she has a birthday coming soon... This was a pretty nice story - I thought the part with the open window was deliciously nasty! Ratings for "The Gift" R'khaan (technical quality): 7 R'khaan (plot & character): 8 R'khaan (appeal to reviewer): 8 |