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"The Cabin" by Patrick Donovan (cybersex becomes real sex)
10, 10, 10
"The Cabin" by Patrick Donovan (drwho@world.std.com). Lee Ann and Patrick met in a chat area on the Internet. Lee Ann has been infatuated with another person (named Tim) on the Internet, but she's afraid to meet with him because she's still a virgin. She discusses the matter with the more worldly Patrick, who offers to meet with her at a cabin in New York. Do you know where this is going? Do you think there really is or ever was a Tim? Well, I'm certainly not going to tell you anything more than that this is a very nice little love story. Ratings for "Cabin" Athena (technical quality): 10 Venus (plot & character): 10 Celeste (appeal to reviewer): 10 |