A Summer at the Comeuppance Lodge Part 2
by SusieQue
masshysteria52@hotmail.com

copyright 2007 by SusieQue, all rights reserved

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This story is intended for ADULTS ONLY It contains explicit
depictions of sexual activity involving minors. If you are
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A Summer at the Comeuppance Lodge
a fictional story written by SusieQue 

Part 2 

The Roberts children were their usual unpleasant selves on
the long plane ride to their destination. To their delight
no one told them to be quiet or to stop doing anything, but
there were these 2 peculiar men sitting in back of them
writing the whole time, who were now debarking the plane
with them and announced they were their escorts to the bus
that would take them to camp.

Once on the bus, the children marveled at the beautiful
scenery and began to get excited about camp. "I wonder if
there's horseback riding...or archery", Jordan pondered to
the total delight of their escorts. When the bus started
making its climb up the road to their destination Jordan
read "Comeuppance? what does that mean?"  His siblings shook
their heads.

When they pulled into the parking lot of the huge complex
the children felt uneasy with how clean..yet..Spartan the
accommodations seemed to be it didn't really look like a fun
place. "LOOK!" shouted Rebecca. Four noses pressed against
the window..saw 5 children of varying ages totally naked and
weeding a garden in the hot summer sun, occasionally
swatting at a bug of some sort..when one stood up too long
swatting and not weeding, a stern hefty man standing nearby
with a stout switch in his hand, soundly applied the switch
to the upper legs of the swatting child to piercing cries of
"OWWWWWWWWWWWIEEEEEEEEEE" and the child quickly went back to
work on the weeds. The Roberts children chuckled at the
silly cry of owie but seemed uneasy at what they were
seeing.

Once the bus stopped the children were quickly escorted off
the bus and marched to a line of what looked like hitching
posts of varying heights with assorted leathers, boards,
sticks either propped up next to them or draped over the
posts, and 4 stern looking husky men dressed in faded
overalls, flannel shirts, full beards and wild hair with
wild eyes, each with a kerchief hanging from their pocket.
All looked muscular and were taller than average and all but
one was quite overweight with considerable bellies. The
largest and scariest of them stepped forward, and spoke.
"Welcome to Comeuppance Lodge, the rules are carved on the
board over there (he pointed) on our welcome tree. Read
them, know them and live them. From this moment forward not
knowing or following them would result in severe
consequences."

The children went to the tree and started to read:

You are all here because your behavioral and obedience
issues could not be resolved in the real world. You have now
entered a new world that will correct any issues you have
anyway it takes.

1. no personal items or clothing are allowed everything you
came here with is to be deposited in the welcome bin
immediately after you read this.

2. No contact with your family or friends..for the summer we
are your family and these are your friends.

3. You are to refer to all adults as either ma'am or sir and
all adults you encounter here are either daddy sir or mommy
ma'am.

4. You  will do anything and everything you are told to do
by an adult here without question or hesitation or endure
painful corporal punishment.

5. You must NEVER touch or cover your genital area out of
modesty and hands are always at your sides unless told to do
otherwise.

6. When you are punished you may not break position nor may
you ever rub. You are allowed to cry out but the only word
you may say is "owie", when your punishment is over you may
or may not be allowed to do the owie dance at the discretion
of your punisher. If your punisher says you may do the owie
dance these are the requirements, hands must be on head
fingers interlaced, you must hop or jump from foot to
foot..no 2 feet can be on the ground at the same time for
more than a second or two and you must constantly say Owie
the whole time you are dancing. You are expected to spin and
twirl, jump and crouch, and constantly say owie. When the
dance is done you will have a 30 minute display time during
which your spanked flesh will be on display and you will
stand quietly and your hands will not leave your head.

7. When asked a question you will make eye contact when not
your eyes will be downward. Correct answers are yes sir and
no sir never yeah ok.

8. All older residents in the program will be frequently
shaved or waxed of genital hair and boys heads will be
shaved and girls have hair no longer than shoulder length
worn in tight pigtails or ponytails and procedures needed to
adhere to these rules will be carried out frequently and
harshly.

9. The rest of the rules you will learn as you go along
<evil grin>

Proceed to the welcome bin take off all your clothes and
deposit anything you have in the bin. NOW!!

All 4 of the children were openly sobbing now, and Jeffrey
was peeing himself, hoping no one would notice. The children
were nudged by their escorts to move towards the bin. Slowly
they all sobbing and shaking..started to undress and deposit
their clothes in the bin. Embarrassed hands went to cover
genital areas, and the 4 burly men each grabbed for the
closest implement and started to wail on any child
attempting to cover up. "yeouch!!  Owwww STOP DON'T were all
heard coming from the children..and the escorts continued to
write. One of the men stepped forward. He spoke "Jordan!" 
"y-y-yes sir daddy" a trembling Jordan stammered. Proceed to
bend over the wooden crossbar closest to your waist height,
bend as far over it as you can, spread your legs wide and
stretch your arms forward. NOW!!" Jordan moved to the proper
bar and did exactly as he was told. He trembled and flinched
at the vulnerability he felt and shivered as a cool breeze
washed over his dangling chubby cock and heavy totally
exposed and visible balls. he felt the blood rush to his
genital area as his cock began to grow and harden and his
balls seemed to swell up and droop lower. "Now the rest of
you go grab your brothers hands and do NOT let him go or it
will mean more severe consequences for you all"! "yes sir
daddy" they all muttered and James and Jeffrey grabbed one
arm and Rebecca grabbed the other. Stern eyes shot towards
the children "Got Him??"  "Yes sir daddy"  they all chimed
together. Jordan started to clench his chubby buttocks and
with a vicious yank downward on his genitals by daddy, and
an stern "NO CLENCHING" Jordan let out a yelp of
OWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW.............ie"  Remembering at the
last moment the proper word to yelp hoping it was
acceptable. "Nice save"  said his daddy...Jordans cock and
balls were throbbing so badly that he was barely able to let
out a "thannnkkkk youuu daddy sir"   "If you do not have the
self control to keep from clenching we have ways of training
you to do so, but I highly recommend you use your own will
power to remain loose in the buttock area to allow for
proper punishment of your naughty fat ass."  One of the
escorts handed the daddy a piece of paper, he looked it over
and announced "For acts of rudeness, misbehavior,
irresponsibility and for the breaking of rules you are
hereby sentenced to a welcome spanking of 20 lashes with the
strap, across the buttocks, and 10 lashes with a green cut
switch across your upper and lower legs followed by 2 laps
around the race track pulling me in the rickshaw as you run
around the track strapped into a harness pulling me. If you
go too slow I will have a whip I can lash you with wherever
I see fit to speed you up. Because of your disgusting weight
you will spend a lot of time on the track. After your
punishment, you will be shown to your living quarters and
bathed by your house mothers and put to bed. Now relax your
buttocks here we go!"  Jordan found it in himself to relax
and yelped the appropriate "OWIES" as his legs trembled and
urine started spurting out as his helpless cock bobbed and
jiggled under the impact of the punishment on his frame.
Trying to stop the flow of urine he inadvertently clenched
his buttocks and on stroke 7 his daddy stopped and said "I'm
not surprised a disgusting fat ass like you couldn't control
his clench" With that he reached into his shirt pocket and
pulled out something that looked like a large cork from a
wine bottle. He put it in his mouth and slobbered all over
it as if to thoroughly wet it down. "Let go of his hands",
"Yes sir daddy" the obedient children immediately let go of
his hands.  "Now Jordan listen very carefully do NOT
rub..but simply reach back and pull your buttocks as far
apart as you can and hold them apart til I tell you to let
go." "yes sir daddy" Jordan did as he was told and let out a
low pitiful "owwwwwwie" as his hands clenched his already
reddened and welted previously un-spanked behind. He pulled
as far apart as he could them was told "Now relax your
butthole" he did as he was told and suddenly a painful and
abrasive thrust filled his virgin butthole with pain and
stinging and embarrassment. The other children gasped as
they saw his puckered hole stretched to a circle the size of
a nickel. "Excellent, now stretch your arms out like before
the rest of you hold on to him" "yes sir daddy" they all
said and moved into position. "Now try to clench your cheeks
Jordan" daddy chuckled. "owwwwwie..I-I-I cannnn't daddy sir" 
"Exactly" daddy's eyes glistened as one hand playfully
bounced around Jordans jingly loose butt cheeks, and the
other hand clearly grabbed and rubbed his own genital area.
The strapping continued and Jordan although sobbing and
wriggling with pain did yell only "owies" and did not break
position. Just as soon as the strapping stopped, daddy
picked up a green switch dipped it in a barrel of saltwater
and commenced whipping Jordan about the legs ankles and
thighs. Jordan danced and yelped pitiful owies but his
siblings did not let him break his position. As soon as that
was over, Daddy yanked Jordan to a standing position and
told him to put his hands on his head. Jordan said "yes sir
daddy" and immediately complied. behind him the rickshaw was
already in place once strapped in to the rickshaw, Daddy
climbed in the cab and said "run boy!" Jordan replied "yes
sir daddy" and began to jog towards the track, huffing and
puffing like an old man.

"Lift those feet higher boy prance like a show horse," Daddy
yelled as he struck Jordan with the whip on the outside of
his left hip striping him almost down to his ankle. "yessss
sir daddy Owieeeeeee Owie Owieeeee" he yelped as he tried to
prance. Being very out of shape Jordan slowed down for the
second lap and received several lashes with the whippy buggy
whip making him lurch and leap and wish he had exercised
more! Finally he had made the last lap and almost collapsed
with exhaustion. After being unstrapped from the harness
daddy said, Run and stand by your siblings"  "Yes sir daddy
and thank you for correcting me"

The largest of the 4 men stepped forward. He was the
scariest of all and all 4 children cringed. "Rebecca!" he
bellowed. "yes sir daddy Rebecca said as she stepped
forward. "you know what to do young lady don't aggravate me
by making me repeat it all MOVE NOW!!!" "yes sir daddy' she
said as she moved to her proper height bar and bent herself
over the bar, spreading her legs and stretching out her
arms. Her siblings quickly grabbed her arms. Daddy couldn't
help but notice that not only did Rebecca move quickly, but
she also kept her cheeks unclenched and actually seemed to
be raising her buttocks up to meet their fate with wicked
anticipation. The escort handed her daddy a paper, after
scanning over it he announced "Rebecca for acts of rudeness,
meanness, socially unacceptable behavior and violation of
lodge rules you are hereby sentenced to a welcome spanking
of 20 lashes from the 3 armed tawse applied liberally to the
sit down spot of your buttocks with legs spread far apart-
Rebecca widened her stance without being told-special aim
being taken to adequately redden your genital area without
mercy to your cries, lashes will be hard and fast and will
not stop til all 20 have been delivered. Rebecca heaved a
huge sigh of air as her chest expanded and deflated in
anticipation of what's to come. Daddy reached down and felt
her buttocks..hmmm..firm..yet loose and unclenched she had
one of the most spankable bottoms he had ever seen. Her
pussy was already swollen and glistening with moisture as it
winked slightly in anticipation of what was coming when
daddy ran his hands over her engorged adolescent sexual
organ. "Ready?"  "yes sir daddy I'm ready" she said as she
lifted her buttocks higher to meet the tawse. "no clenching" 
"Yes sir daddy I remember I won't clench"

Her daddy felt his cock and balls swelling and hardening and
he reached down and unzipped the long fly on his overalls
and pulled his cock and balls out to a huge sigh of relief.
The children's eyes went to his huge cock and he yelled
"Eyes down unless spoken to! " "Yes sir daddy" they said as
their eyes shot to the ground. Rebecca squirmed and writhed
and owied such pitiful cries daddy almost felt sorry for
her. Not once did she clench or try to get up. When it was
over daddy told her that she could owie dance. She
remembered the owie dance perfectly and began immediately as
soon as she was released. As she hopped in place several
times her thighs brushed against daddy's exposed cock, but
his hard throbbing member brushing her leg as well as his
moans of pleasurable discomfort went unnoticed to her as she
bobbed and leapt and screeched consecutive owies as her
little mosquito bites of breasts danced up and down tiny
nipples rock hard. Moisture spurting from her soaked
punished pussy also splashed on daddy's cock furthering his
"heavenly discomfort". When she was told to stop dancing,
she took her place beside her siblings. Her reddened and
tear streaked face still managed to shoot daddy a little
smile, even as her knees quivered her thighs felt weak and
her pussy burned and stung from harsh lashes and ached to be
rubbed. The last 2 daddies each grabbed a twin by the
shoulder and said "you may take your charges to their
quarters we know you still have much shaving and hair
cutting to do. We can handle the sentence of these 2 little
buggers alone, James! over my knee now!" as he settled into
a large chair.."yyyess sir daddy" ..James said as he lifted
his lead feet one after the other to the chair to lay across
his daddies lap ..."for a long slow and hard bare ass hand
spanking of  100 spanks" his daddy continued, "sure to
blister your naughty bottom for its offenses of the day" 
"Jeffrey same for you get across my lap as well for 100 hand
spanks followed by 5 hard strokes with the privates paddle"
, daddy held up the implement that looked like a riding crop
with a short (4-5") 2 fingered tawse with a 3rd middle
finger of a barely visible thin flexible nylon "rod" no
bigger in diameter than the stick on a sucker with a nylon
"ball" on the end slightly larger than a BB used in BB guns,
"applied of course to your private area for the offense of
peeing upon arrival" Jeffrey was bawling and said "yes sir
daddy" as he ran to get in position for the spanking feeling
like he was protecting his little twig and berries for at
least a short time. The boys were spanked almost unison and
their increasingly urgent cries of "owie" sounded like an
angelic cry for mercy.

When Jeffery's spanking stopped he was quickly flipped over
to a sharp OWIE as his painful bum lay hard on his daddies
lap. Daddy raised the private paddle high in the air and
THWACK!!! the two fingers of the tawse stung the sides of
Jeffery's penis and landed HARD on his tiny testicles..and
the middle whippy finger with the ball whipped around and
stung the tender tip of his penis just like he had been shot
with      a BB gun. His body uncontrollably twitched and
almost levitated off daddies lap and before he could even
catch his breath from the first whack the second, third,
fourth and fifth fell as he twitched and gasped and felt
such immeasurable pain..that he couldn't even cry out. He
twitched and writhed glossy eyed snot bubbles coming from
his nose and his balls were swelling and discolored, his
little penis was red, striped and chubby with swelling and
his velvet tender tip was the deepest darkest crimson it
could be, covered with round welts that looked like his
innocent tip had been stung by 5 bees. When his punishment
was done he was raised to his feet and hands on head he felt
every ounce of his blood rush to his genital area and his
cock and balls felt like they weighed 100 lbs. He wanted to
cup them so badly and fan them to ease the burn, but he
dared not move. The boys were then marched to their separate
compounds, their heads shaved, roughly bathed by their house
mommies and plunked into bed, left in the dark to ponder
their plight and try to sleep through the pain..they both
knew..this was only the beginning....

Over in Rebecca's compound, her wild and free hair was
roughly brushed and pulled into 2 tight and high
pigtails..then a thick pair of shears cut close to 20 inches
off each pigtail. She was then laid flat on a table and hot
wax was applied to the peach fuzz in her genital area and
she was waxed smooth as the day she was born again. Just
then daddy came in..and inserted his fat finger into her
private hole..and nodded that hymen was intact. He then
yanked her off the table and smacked her soundly and told
her to go to bed. Minutes after she settled in bed a bright
flashlight was shined in her face. the flashlight was then
turned to the face of the person holding the flashlight, her
daddy, and his face looked scary and threatening lit in that
way in the dark of the night. He grabbed her arm tightly,
ands spoke in a stern voice "If you think that acting like
you like being spanked and teasing my cock is going to make
this summer easy on you, you've got another thing coming
little girl. I am here to correct your ill behavior not
encourage it and if I have to beat you til the cows come
home to make you whimper and plead for mercy and reprieve
from your ordeal and sob like a little girl instead of a
teasing nymph then you can bet I'll do it. I'll whip you
with every implement known to man until you are reduced to
the baby you are. ONLY when you realize that the ones that
sport THIS" the flashlight shot to his crotch where he was
firmly gripping his cock and balls and waving them for
emphasis "are the ones that dominate this world then and
only then..will you begin your path to being a woman. So
play your little tart role with me again young lady and I
will flail the flesh from your hide til you look like road
kill. DO we understand each other?"

"yyyyessss sir daddy" she whispered. "Rollover and stick
your bare butt up in the air, face in your pillow NOW!"
Rebecca did so and cried into her pillow and trembled at the
thought of another stroke of punishment landing on her
tormented flesh.  She braced in anticipation..she heard
something that sounded kind of "squishy" and within a few
minutes felt something hot and sticky squirt on her
buttocks. A rough hand rubbed it into her painful welts then
she was pushed down into the bed and covered up. "THAT was
because of you..don't let it happen again!"  "yessss sir
daddy" she said..not knowing what happened..the stickiness
was uncomfortable..but at the same time..interesting..as was
the odor that permeated under the covers of her new bed....

Over in Jordans compound the waxing was more extensive and
painful than Rebecca's, the head shaving actually felt
good..and after a rough bath..Jordan asked his stern mommy
for some ice to put on his aching genital area. Her eyes
widened with fire and she threw back Jordans covers, rolled
him onto his back and holding both his wrists in one of her
amazingly strong hands, she started HARD and fast hand
spanking Jordans already tender tormented cock and balls. He
cried out and pleaded in shock and tried to wriggle out of
the line of rapid fire of relentless hard stinging spanks.
she continued to spank until his entire area from just below
his navel to the crease between his legs and torso to the
tender thighs just below his package was bright glowing red.
When she finally stopped as the boy painfully sobbed she
said "You are punished to feel pain! We do NOT allow rubbing
nor administering ice, pain relievers or anything to mask
the pain you were meant to endure!! Do not ever ask for
something like that again!!"  "Yes ma'am mommy" the boy
wailed. "Now as an added punishment you will sleep tonight
without covers and sleep on your back so that the guardians
and I can treat your fat little package to some treatments
that won't let you forget this night for a long time." "Yes
ma'am mommy I'm sorry"  He was afraid to sleep but the days
ordeal had been just too much and he soon drifted off.
During the course of the night...guardians giggled and
pointed at his tormented cock and laughed at his disgusting
blubber..but they did nothing to him..but next morning..when
he awoke..and began examining himself to see what been
done..watchful guardians came out of nowhere it seemed..and
said "JORDAN???  Why are you playing with yourself???"

  

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