A Summer at the Comeuppance Lodge Part 1
by SusieQue
masshysteria52@hotmail.com

copyright 2007 by SusieQue, all rights reserved

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depictions of sexual activity involving minors. If you are
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A Summer at the Comeuppance Lodge
a fictional story written by SusieQue 

Part 1 

The Roberts children were spoiled, unruly, self-involved and
completely unfocused and unmotivated. 12 year old Jordan was
the oldest. He was mean and lazy and quite overweight for
his age due to doing nothing but watching TV and playing
video games. His room was a pigsty and although he was un-
bathed and had unkempt hair, and clothes that were wrinkled
and mismatched, beneath the bloated face and body you could
see the potential of a handsome young man with chestnut
brown hair and deep brown eyes. Rebecca who was 10 and the
only female child was thin and willowy and had long golden
blonde hair with gentle waves that she wore wild and free
flowing about her delicate frame almost to her waist like
the mane of a show horse. Rebecca was not lazy, she was in
fact hyperactive, and highly motivated when she wanted to
be, but she was mean and heartless and had a temper like a
fiery volcano. She mercilessly tortured her younger
siblings, 8 year old twins James and Jeffrey. James was 5
minutes older by birth and he was definitely the instigator
of all the twins woes. Jeffrey was perhaps the only Roberts
child that showed any signs of character prior to the summer
of their comeuppance, but alas he was just the hand puppet
of his twin brother who thought getting into trouble was the
most fun in the world, and if Jeffrey ever tried to defy his
brothers mischievous plans, Rebecca would do terrible things
to him, like the time Jeffrey refused to throw rocks at old
man Winters barn to break the windows, Rebecca and James
held poor Jeffrey down, and stripped off all his clothes,
and then with Jeffrey lying naked in the dirt, James held
Jeffery's hands over his head, and Rebecca took a box elder
tree switch..and beat her little brother as he flailed in
the dirt rolling from front to back, she striped his legs
and buttocks and gave him some particularly cruel welts
across his genital area. The adorable flaxen haired twin
boys were definitely in need of some serious guidance and
discipline.

Both of the Roberts parents worked full time, both were
successful professionals, and although they had tried to
raise their children right, the birth of the twins left them
feeling overwhelmed and totally out of control. One day Mrs
Roberts received a call at work that all 4 of her children
had been caught shoplifting at a local store and the police
chief was holding them until a parent arrived.

This happened on the very first day of summer vacation and
Mrs Roberts was nearly in a panic before she arrived at the
police station as to how she was ever going to get through
the summer with these children. No one wanted to babysit
them and she felt totally helpless.

When she arrived at the police station the kindly old chief
who felt for her plight handed her a brochure and grabbed
her arm and whispered, "take your kids home, put them to
bed..and read this..don't delay."

Mrs Roberts thanked him for his understanding, she wrote a
check of restitution for the shoplifting..and loaded her
kids in the car..and sent them all to bed..they of course
were snickering and cocky..but she just couldn't deal with
it.

She made herself a cup of green tea..and curled up on the
window seat of her lavish home..and pulled out the brochure
the chief had given her.

"Manners, discipline, motivation and accountability a
problem in your home? No time to teach your children the
basics of behavior?"  Mrs Roberts found herself shaking her
head emphatically and her heartbeat raced as she read on
hoping her cure for her troubles were in this pamphlet.
"send your child or children to the Comeuppance Lodge
nestled in the rustic foothills just 20 miles outside of the
booming city of Horizon, West Virginia (population 600,000)
and in one summers time we will cure a lifetime of bad
manners and bad habits via strict rules and regulations and
a healthy dose of severe corporal punishment, emphasis on
building a good work ethic via mandatory chores, and lots of
other unique and creative methods designed to build
character, humility and respect for authority.

"Does your child have trouble sitting still in public
situations..church..movie
theaters..plays...funerals..weddings..do you long to be the
one with the child that everyone gasps at as being such a
polite angel?"  Mrs Roberts fantasy of yes! yes!! Yes!! I
want that to be my children!! was interrupted by loud
thumping and loud laughter from upstairs..her children would
not even obey to go to bed when told and they were running
through the upstairs throwing things and acting like the
unruly brats they were. She yelled up at them "You are all
going away to summer camp tomorrow!! now GO to bed!!"  She
went back to reading..."We can cure squirming and lack of
attention and assure polite quietness with 2 words 'ginger
root' "Don't ask" the brochure said. Mrs Roberts
thought..hmmm..dietary supplement?

During the course of the summer the children would not be
allowed to call home at all and there would only be one
parent visitation weekend which would be 3 weeks before
summers end. Although the brochure promised to re-school any
disobedient child during the course of the summer, they also
offered an option for the child to attend their school the
following year..if improved academics and performance in
school was a major problem. Sign up for the academic year
would take place during the parent visitation weekend when
the parents could see how their child had improved thus far.
The cost was high but money was no object for the Roberts.
THUD giggle giggle giggle Mrs Roberts heard from upstairs
again, she couldn't grab the phone soon enough and she knew
if she waited she'd never have the guts to do what she knew
in her heart was the best thing for her children, even if it
meant making this decision without her husband who was once
again..working late.

She dialed the number.."Hello?" Yes I'd like some more
information on your Lodge..well actually I'd like to sign my
children up now I think I know all I need to know" The very
pleasant voice on the other end said "yes ma'am that's
excellent!! oh you won't be sorry I can promise you that!! I
came here 10 years ago as an unruly resident, and I've never
left! I got my high school diploma here and earned the money
for college answering phones and doing bookkeeping, I
graduate next spring with a degree in Business! Anyway I
apologize for talking about myself, how many children do you
wish to enroll and what are their names and ages?"

Mrs Roberts gave all the pertinent information as well as a
little background on each child. "I see well it sounds like
you do have your hands full! We do actually have 4 separate
villages here each self sufficient, and fully functional on
its own, we recommend separating siblings when enrolling
more than one child especially in the case of twins, so I
will assign each of your children to a different village.
Which child would you say is the most unruly?", she asked. 
"Rebecca" Mrs Roberts replied without hesitation. "Fine"
said the young woman I will assign her to Daddy Bailey's
village"  Mrs Roberts asked "why" The young lady replied
"Each of our villages has a daddy that oversees all
operations and monitors everyone's progress. The village
daddy is by far not the villages only disciplinarian not by
a longshot, but every other guidance person in the village
answers to him and carries out his commands and if the
village daddy is displeased with any of his staffs
performance, he has the right and obligation to severely
whip the staff member and make sure that the staff member
corrects whatever it was that displeased him. Daddy Bailey
is our most effective and severe daddy, he is a very large
man, has a full scruffy beard and stands over 6'5" tall and
has large hands and a grand belly that slaps against the
naughty child's back that has the misfortune of going across
his knee. He was my daddy and when I first came here, he
used to scare me so much just looking at me that I used to
pee myself! I grew to love him and to this day he still
scares me but when I feel I need an attitude adjustment I
always go to him for a dose of his hard love. Every time he
reduces me to a blubbering child, but he always knows just
exactly what I needed."  Mrs Roberts said "Hmmm..sounds like
just what Rebecca needs!"

The helpful receptionist them took payment information and
told Mrs. Roberts that additional paperwork would arrive in
the mail as well, and that consent forms were going to be
Faxed to her office and even though the children could leave
in the morning, she would have to fax the signed forms back
to the office before the children arrived. She further
informed Mrs Roberts that the children were not to bring or
pack anything. Everything they needed including clothing and
personal items like tooth brushes would be provided.
Anything a child does bring besides weather appropriate
Spartan clothing will result in the child getting a severe
welcome spanking for not following the rules.

She then said "and last but not least your children may
catch the same flight here they are all booked to arrive at
3 PM tomorrow afternoon..have them at the airport by 8 am
tomorrow. No luggage..tell them only that they are going to
summer camp..and do not tell them they are going to be
separated. Get them all on that plane we will meet them at
the airport at the other end and we will take everything
from there. Just fax us back those forms after you drop your
children off at the airport and enjoy your summer and
progress reports and an invitation to the parents weekend
will be sent to you. Leave it all up to us now!" the perky
voice chimed.

"Thank you....thank you so much"...Mrs Roberts sobbed as a
rush of many emotions came over her.."You are doing the
right thing for your children" assured the kindly young
voice.  "I knnn-ow" Mrs Roberts said..as she hung up the
phone..she felt exhausted..and went up to bed..and set her
alarm..she decided not to even tell her husband until the
children were gone..she laid down..and closed her eyes..and
slept more deeply than she had in a long time....

Sometime during the night Mr. Roberts came home and was gone
the next morning again before Mrs. Roberts and the children
awoke. Her alarm went off and she arose feeling energized
and refreshed, she quickly awoke all the children and her
energy and enthusiasm got them all up and dressed in record
time.

She told them all not to pack or bring anything but the
light summer clothes on their backs.

Off to the airport they went, their tickets were waiting at
the counter and the check-in clerk winked at Mrs. Roberts
and said "oh yes these are the resort children, we will take
GOOD care of them don't you worry one bit."  Mrs Roberts
attempted to hug her children none of whom wanted any part
of it except Jeffrey. She turned, waved..and rushed out of
the terminal to her car.

Once inside her car she smiled and felt better about herself
than she had in years. She decided to take the day off of
work after retrieving, signing and faxing back the consent
forms, and enjoy the quiet and peace in her house. As she
padded about her quiet home, the words of the consent forms
rang in her ears.."child will be subjected to severe
corporal punishment involving various implements, as well as
public nakedness and forced public masturbation, public
punishment with no regard or reprieve due to how many people
may be watching nor how much the child cries. There will be
no coddling nor any mercy and a child will come to know he
or she has performed well when they are spared punishment or
on special occasions exemplary performance will be rewarded
with a single pat on the head. No child will be denied
regular nutritious food nor any necessary medical attention
for any situation that may arise. By signing this agreement
you are allowing us to take full control of your children's
care for the duration of the summer, allowing us to do as we
see fit without asking your permission"

As they snuggled in bed together for the first night without
having to fight with ill mannered children, Mrs Roberts
smiled and wondered what the kids first day had been
like....

  

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