Review: Wife Seducer's "Morganrunner14"

   By Little Bree

   REVIEWER'S NOTE:

   This is part of a series of reviews of smutty
stories that I like and recommend.  I'm posting it both to my FTP site on
asstr.org, and to my website at lttlbree.blogspot.com (also accessible
through http://www.asstr.org/~Little_Bree/).  If you have comments,
questions or concerns (or just want to say hi!) please feel to email me at
lttlbree@yahoo.com.

   As always, if you're not over 18, don't read this!
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I was 11 the first time a boy touched me between my legs. It wasn't an especially romantic episode. We were in a living room with three other pairs of overly hormonal preteens, and my friend's mother was making dinner in the next room. The fingering was awkward and fast, and we both stayed fully clothed. Still, I don't think my heart ever beat faster than it did the moment I felt his fingers beneath the waist band of my panties.  

What many writers don't get, is that there's more to eroticism than sex. The build up to sex--those thrilling moments when your brain just repeats "oh my god oh my god oh my god" over and over again because you can't believe these things are actually happening--are so much more important than the act itself. Of course, those moments can't be conveyed in fiction with the ease of finding another clever way to phrase "the penis slipped into the vagina." It takes real talent.

Wife Seducer's Morganrunner14 series is one that did it right.

The story follows 14 year old Morgan Healy, a pretty blonde, living with her single mom in a typical suburban setting. She's a very normal girl who likes soccer, track, hanging out with her friends, and other typical 14 year old things.  When she lets a pervy widower next door believe he's clandestinely watching her through her webcam, it excites her. After he lets annymous strangers in a chat room in on his secret spy cam, she gets very excited.

Things progress slowly in this story, but that's not a criticism. Whole chapters have slipped away before it even dawns on you that there hasn't been any actual sex.  As naive, nervous Morgan tests her own limits, constantly terrified that she's pushed things too far, we get a sense of the palpable tension on both sides of the webcam.  You can feel her adrenaline when she finally shows them her body, and you can feel their testosterone as they take it in.

The story is a bit dated at this point, because it relies heavily on chat programs that have become obsolete. I wasn't much older than Morgan when I first read this. By now, I imagine the budding exhibitionist has gone off to college and found new ways to tease and please the boys. I think that because I feel like she's somehow real, which is rare in these sorts of stories.

(Also, Wife Seducer seems to have updated his webpage recently enough that Asstr highlighted it in their author listing. When you're done loving this story, I highly encourage you all to drop him a line and demand a sequel!)

Morganrunner 14 Story Page: http://www.asstr.org/~Wifeseducer/MorganRunner14.htm