Author: Julie Hypnotic
Title: Drowning in Rain
Summary: On a deserted beach, an older couple teach a girl about the pleasures of flesh.
Keywords: MFF, oral, intercourse, outdoors


DROWNING IN RAIN


Even after so much time, I always thought I could feel that night over and over.  If I 
closed my eyes and held very still, the scent of sea air and wood smoke would engage my 
senses and my mind would respond by igniting my body.

The caress of air across my naked flesh, the gentle lull of surf lapping sand, the warmth 
of bodies pressed upon one another.  All of those memories would carry me back to a 
time when I was eighteen and alone in the world.  Although it was a self-imposed 
solitude, it was unpleasant all the same.

I sat on the beach, having nowhere else to go.  The ocean had drawn me, as it always did, 
and I hitched a ride from Alabama to a beach in south Texas, alone and hungry, but still 
better off, at least in my mind, because I was far away, and I was my own person.

Although my tummy rumbled, and I felt weak, I was blissfully happy sitting there.  The 
loneliness had abated as I watched the tide come in.  The stars above were brilliant and 
the beach had emptied of most people.   When I looked around, I was filled with a sense 
of belonging to the scene around me.  It was as if I was a lone rock centered in the 
expanse of white sand upon which I sat.  This was my place, my rightful place.

Down a bit, and to my left, a crowd of kids about my age lingered, laughing, talking, 
flirting.  Doing all the things that normal teenagers do.  I did not envy them for they could 
not know the things that I knew.  They would not know them for many years, if ever.  I 
alone was master of my destiny, and I thought that even if I should die right there, sitting 
on that beach, then I would have died a better death than so many other people in the 
world.

Tears came to my eyes and I cried silently... tears of joy, tears of relief.  Thank God I left 
when I did.  Thank the fates that I had taken control of my life and walked away, not just 
a survivor, but a participator in my own life.  None of those things made much sense to 
me, but I was overcome with emotion and a deep hunger to simply live.

As I sat there, tears drying on my face, a lovely woman passed by.  She smiled at me and 
nodded her head.  Eagerly, starving for kindness, I returned the nod and felt a great smile 
break across my face.  She walked away, her swimsuit hugging her curves, her long 
blonde hair billowing out behind her.

I returned to my musings, wishing not for food, but for a pad of paper and a pencil so I 
could jot down my thoughts.  I was completely lost in myself when the woman returned.   
She startled me with a soft tap on the shoulder and I jerked as I looked up at her.  She 
wore that same sweet smile and held out her hand.

"Come on little one.  Come join my husband and I.  We're a lonely old couple and could 
use a bit of youth to make us feel good."

I returned her smile again, and took her hand.  Together we walked a long way down the 
beach.  I could see no destination at first, but eventually a plume of smoke began to take 
shape in the night.  She was silent, but held my hand as we walked.  I felt so safe with 
her.  So warm and welcome.  

The smoke soon became a low fire beside a tent, as it grew large on the horizon, and I 
made out the shape of a man sitting nearby.  He rose as we approached and put his arm 
around his wife.  In the light of the fire, I guessed the two of them to be in their forties, 
although they were both very attractive and youthful.

The man had black curly hair, long, casual, and roguish in style.  His dark eyes glittered 
as he took my hand and offered me a place to sit.  I was near tears again at their kindness 
and seated myself cross-legged in front of their fire.

"My name is Allie, and this is Peter.  We travel a bit to see the world while we're still 
young enough to enjoy it.  We came here in the seventies right after we'd met, and now 
we're back to revisit our youth."  She smiled as she looked at Peter, the light of deep love 
glittering in her eyes.

"Are you hungry little one?" Peter asked, returning that loving look to his wife before he 
spoke to me.  "We have cheese and crackers and I believe we still have a bit of smoked 
oysters left.  You're welcome to anything we have."

I tugged at my leather bound braids.  "Yes, thank you.  I'm very hungry."  I whispered 
softly.  

Allie moved immediately to the tent and emerged a few minutes later with a Styrofoam 
plate heaping with pungent cheddar, small delicate wafers, oysters and a handful of fruit.  
She handed it to me reverently, as if she was afraid I would run away, that enigmatic 
smile still naturally in place on her lips.

I felt my stomach quiver in anticipation as the smell of the cheese struck me.  
Immediately I began to eat, forgetting about the two of them in my hunger.  Some 
minutes later, the plate empty, I raised my head, expecting the both of them to be staring 
at me like the graceless fool that I felt, but I was pleased to see that Peter was reclining in 
a lounge chair, staring up at the stars, and Allie was draped across his lap.  They had 
respectfully given me privacy as I gorged my empty belly on their humble, but 
appreciated offering.

"T-thank you," I whispered, "Thank you very much.  I was hungry."

"Anytime sweetheart.  Do you have a name, or do you prefer little one?"  Allie asked 
kindly.

I grinned at once.  "Sorry.  My name is Rain."

Peter smiled and remarked what a nice name that was, but that he might slip and call me 
little one anyway because I was so tiny and delicate.  He hoped I wouldn't mind if he did.  

Laughing, I assured him I would not.  Somehow, as we sat there, I began to tell them 
about myself, although they never once asked.  I told them my age, and where I had come 
from and how I came to be all alone on a near deserted beach in south Texas.  I found 
myself spilling over about the epiphanies I had experienced just before Allie found me.  
Sobbing with happiness, I exposed my soul to them and felt only warm acceptance in 
return.

"Rain, you're such a lovely young woman.  I feel very close to you and appreciate the 
way you've opened up to us.  I'm certain Peter feels the same way.  All too often in this 
world, people tighten up and never allow those inner feelings to emerge.  I can't help 
thinking that if more folks did, the world might become infected and this would be a 
much better place to live."  

Allie's words calmed me and made me feel good about baring my soul.  Peter nodded in 
agreement with his wife and I saw them exchange a meaningful look.  She rose and 
rummaged about in a bag by her feet, finally removing a hairbrush and a spray bottle 
filled with what looked like water.  Approaching me slowly, she put her hand on my 
shoulder and spoke close to my ear.

"I'm a hairdresser by trade, though I gave it up long ago.  May I brush your hair Rain?"

"Yes."  I replied, although I didn't know why I would agree to such a strange request. I 
only knew that I felt safe, warm, full and happy.

She sat down behind me and put both legs around my body.  I felt her gentle fingers 
slowly loosen the small bands of leather that held my hair.  I blinked my eyes and sighed 
as she worked on each tight braid, first working out the knots that had accumulated, then 
spreading each section away from the other until my hair hung free and loose.

"That's better," she whispered, "Now let's see if we can brush those tangles out."

I sat still and watched Peter close his eyes, a look of deep contentment on his handsome 
face. Allie's fingers were like magic.  She held the brush loosely and worked on each 
section for a long time, humming softly under her breath.  Floating on a cloud of 
happiness and well-being, I drifted away to another place, a place that I shared with Allie 
and Peter.

As I sat there, feeling so good, so sleepy and happy with Allie's long cool fingers 
entwined in my hair, I felt a hand on my knee.  Opening my eyes, I saw Peter's face 
before me, his eyes staring intently, his hand softly stroking my skin.

"You're so beautiful Rain... so young and fresh.  Your hair is the same color as mine and 
your eyes are so blue it almost hurts to look into them."  He wore a smile, a smile that set 
me at ease right away.

Behind me, Allie murmured her agreement, set the brush down and began to spray the 
exposed parts of my body with water.  Peter took a soft cloth and wiped away the water, 
taking with it the accumulation of dirt from the road.  I felt their hands on me, but I was 
not alarmed.  Instead, I was overwhelmed at their caring touches and their small murmurs 
of encouragement.

Dazed, and beginning to feel like I was in the middle of a fairy tale, I eventually felt 
hands tugging at my t-shirt.  As if in a dream, I lifted my arms and felt the cool night air 
lick my body as Allie tugged the shirt away.  Next, my embroidered shorts were 
unsnapped, Allie urged me to lie back against her, and Peter began to tug them over my 
hips and down the length of my legs.

When I lay naked before them, a blanket protecting my skin from the sand, I realized I 
was trembling with excitement.  I should have been alarmed, but only good feelings 
washed over me.

Peter went on remarking how beautiful I was as Allie continued to spray me down in 
order to cleanse the dirt from my body. Peter's fingers and cloth moved to my breasts 
after she had sprayed them and I moaned low in my throat as he caressed my nipples, 
teasing them up and out to stand tall before his admiring eyes.  I felt Allie's soft hands 
urging my thighs apart, her fingers spreading my lips, her mist of cool water landing on 
my rapidly heating skin, and always Peter with his cloth right behind her, washing me, 
making me clean, preparing me.

By the time they finished, I was a quivering mass of flesh.  Their loving caresses had 
opened the door to extreme excitement and I only wanted them to continue... to love me... 
touch me... please me.

Peter stood up and removed his shorts, then lay down beside me.  I raised my eyes to 
Allie and watched in amazement as she reached behind her back and untied the string to 
her swimsuit top.  Her breasts were beautiful, still very high on her chest and tipped with 
dark pink nipples in the center of the lighter shade of pink that colored her aureole.  Her 
bikini bottoms were next; I watched with growing passion as she slid them down her 
curvaceous hips exposing her clean-shaven pussy to my amazed eyes.

Peter stroked my tummy, easing his rough hands down across my skin until I could not 
contain my moans of pleasure.  

"Isn't Allie beautiful little one?  We want to love you together... will you let us?"  His 
lips tugged at my earlobe as I groaned and moved my body closer.

"Yes... oh yes... please."  I pleaded, letting the vision of Allie's nakedness fuel my desire.

She dropped down, leaned over me and took her husband's mouth.  Right above me, they 
kissed, locked together in an embrace so passionate that I wanted to reach up and touch 
them both.

As if sensing my need, Peter took my hand and placed it on Allie's left breast as it swung 
heavy above me.  She moaned into his mouth and covered my hand with hers as Peter 
instructed me, breaking their soul kiss.  

"Just a little light pressure at first Rain.  Cup her breast, feel the way its heaviness 
satisfies the palm of your hand.  Lift it up a little.  Yes... like that sweetheart."  His voice 
was thick and heavy, and so low.  "Now, tug at her nipple... tease it with your thumb.  
Softly at first.  Hear that groan?  She likes it... she loves your touch little one."  

He lowered his head and slipped his tongue across my belly.  My skin jerked under his 
wet caress and began to undulate, as I stroked Allie's erect nipples.  She came to me, 
poised above my body, smiling that smile as she lowered the nipple that I held in my 
fingers down to my mouth.

"Suck it for me Rain.  Taste me." She whispered with a groan.

It was my first hesitation, and my last.  I'd never been so close to a woman before, but 
then I'd never wanted to.  I worried my lower lip with my teeth, my voice panting, then I 
gave in to the feelings sweeping through me, opened my mouth, and moaned as her stiff 
nipple contacted my tongue.

She was like fire and I felt her heat seep into me as I rolled my tongue around her nipple.  
She groaned endlessly and pushed down a little, easing more of herself into my eager 
mouth.

Peter stroked my body, taking his time, enjoying the sight of two women loving each 
other.  He spoke again, and once more I heard deep desire spill from his lips as though it 
were a heavy thing that one could see or touch.

"Yes sweetheart... yes angel.  Suck her.  Suck it good and hard, Allie likes that, don't you 
baby?"

"Yes," was Allie's only response but it was followed closely by a whimper of pleasure.

"See little Rain?  You're making her feel so good... so sexy.  Now, use your teeth.  Just a 
tiny bit of pressure.  Feel the softness as you scrape across her tender flesh.  You look so 
good with Allie's beautiful breast in your mouth.  Suck again.  Yes love, like that.  
Suckle like the little girl you are, darling."  Peter's voice was raspy, grainy, husky with 
passion.  "Oh sweetheart, you're so sexy.  I want to love you so badly.  I want to love you 
both, my beautiful angels."

While I joyfully licked and sucked at the lovely woman's breast, Peter reached up and 
caressed her other nipple.  She nearly swooned in delight, as her voice became deep.  

"Oh, that feels so good.  Peter, she 'is' an angel.  Suck it honey.  Please don't stop."  

I thought she was going to cum right then and there, but Peter, wise Peter, eased her away 
from me and took her in his arms.  "Now Allie, we have to give Rain some pleasure too.  
You know you want that my love, don't you?"

She nodded fiercely, turning her dreamy eyes to me as I lay there gasping for breath and 
feeling emptier than I ever had in my life.  She kissed her husband, lay down beside me, 
and began to rub my thighs.  Her touch was so exquisite, like velvet on ice, cool and yet 
hot at once, and I opened myself up to her as Peter leaned in for a kiss.  

He took my lips passionately, and I ached so deep inside.  Winding my arms up around 
him, I entwined them in his black hair, stroking his tongue eagerly with my own.  I felt 
his body tense as he applied suction to my tongue, drawing it deeply into his mouth and 
running his own all around it as he continued that sucking motion. 

I was lost, moaning softly, calling out their names and begging them to touch me.  Allie 
gently spread my legs and nuzzled her face close to my sex.  I heard her breathe in my 
scent and I struggled to push up against her as Peter again took my tongue with his lips.  
Over and over he sucked me in, then released me until I was gasping for breath and 
crying for more.  He tugged insistently at my lips, alternating between soft, sensual 
touches that delighted my body, and hard, passionate, soul reaching kisses that made me 
feel his desire for me.

As he pulled away and stroked his wife's hair, I glanced down and saw his erection.  It 
was massive, truly so large I thought he would split me in two if he tried to insert it, but 
oh how I wanted it.  I wanted to feel it slipping between my lips and searing its way 
inside me.

Allie was licking softly at my mound, not touching much more than the skin itself.  She 
raised her head and sought her husband's gaze.

"Look Peter," she whispered excitedly, "She's so wet, and it smells so sweet."  

He leaned over and inhaled as his wife began to lap up my juice.  I cried out, struggled 
for composure, then let loose a flow of raspy groans as sweet Allie slid her small, stiff 
tongue between the slippery lips that guarded my channel and began to dig up inside of 
me.  Oh, it felt so good, better than anything I'd ever felt.  I thrashed about on the 
blanket, driving my body up to her mouth, as she used her fingers to spread me wide and 
scoop out mouthful after mouthful of my fluid.  

Peter shushed me gently, not really meaning it, just wanting me to hear the comfort of his 
voice.  He suckled at my neck, my throat, and whisked his strong tongue back and forth 
across my skin.  Lowering his hand, he fondled my breasts, tweaking my creamy pink 
nipples, and causing them to rise up in response.  It was as if a live wire connected my 
excited nipples to my swollen clitoris for with each brush of his fingers across those hard 
little buds, a jolt of pleasure would rise in my pussy until I was mewling out loud my 
intense need to cum.

Allie continued her explorations, her eager tongue swabbing at my lips, spreading them 
open, licking me open.  Subconsciously, I spread wider to allow her talented tongue easy 
access to the flow of my nectar.  I heard her slurp loudly, extracting from me the very 
essence of my girlhood and stabbing repeatedly at my rapidly emerging clitoris.

Peter held my head close to him, his warm skin soothing me, his touch comforting my 
body.  I looked into his eyes and saw deep tenderness as well as passion.  He kissed me 
again, and I moaned into his mouth, grinding my slit again and again across his wife's 
face.

"P-please," I begged, "I want...I want..."

"What little one?  What do you want?"  His words were like liquid, washing me, filling 
me from the inside out.

"I-I-I want to cum.  Oh please... please... please make me cum."  

His look was benevolent and understanding.  He released me and went to his wife.  
Watching her for a moment, he joined her at my sex easing his big, rough hands under 
my buttocks, lifting my hips, positioning me.  I trembled violently, my body reduced to a 
raw nerve and every touch of their hands and mouths taking me higher.

Allie relinquished my body; she smiled tenderly at her husband and drew his head down 
close.  "Taste her Peter.  She has the sweetest pussy I've ever kissed."

She moved to my side, kissing me lightly on the lips before bending back down to my 
wetness.  I felt Peter's thumbs caressing my swollen lips.  I felt him spread them apart.  I 
felt the heat of his breath as he lowered in for a taste of me at last.  At the very instant 
that he worked his muscled tongue into me, slipping it in delicious waves through my soft 
patch of hair, Allie bent and captured my erect clitoris between her lips and began to 
tongue me over and over.  I sucked in a large gulp of air and fisted the blanket with both 
hands as my body tensed on the edge of ecstasy.

And then it happened.  A rush of pleasure so great, it sent the stars spinning above my 
head, and I spiraled down slowly, an explosive orgasm rocking my body, its waves 
waxing and waning in exquisite rushes.  I felt the liquid pour from me.  I literally felt it 
ooze out in small rivers while Peter drank it down, groaning his satisfaction, as my thighs 
tightly grasped his head.

"Ohhh!  Ohh!  Oh my God.  Oh, I'm cumming," I hissed through clenched teeth, riding 
the pleasure all the way, sharing it with my two lovers.

I lay there, gasping for breath, contractions still clenching my body as Peter and Allie 
gently licked away the last traces of cum.  I'd never felt so loved in my life, and the 
pleasure was awesome.  I never knew it could feel so good.

Allie met her husband's mouth and they shared my flavor, kissing deep and lovingly.  
When Peter looked up at me with that intense, but friendly stare, I knew then that he 
would put himself inside me, and I wanted him there desperately.

I tried to speak, but could only moan so strong was my hunger for them both.  Allie held 
my upper body in her arms, my head on her lap.  She stroked my hair and kissed my 
cheeks as her hands soothed my heaving chest.  

"Take her now Peter...she's ready.  She's so ready for you, my love.  Slip your cock deep 
inside her where it's wet and warm."  Her eyes shone brightly and I felt her body tremble 
with restrained lust.

Peter rose up between my thighs, his dark gaze locking onto mine.  "Do you want me to 
fuck you little one?"

"Y-yes.  Peter, please fuck me."  I begged.

He held his cock up for me to see, proud and excited.  I saw a drop of pre-cum ooze out 
and drip down onto my skin.  Pausing a moment longer, he knelt and nuzzled the head of 
his prick up to my snug lips.  I arched instantly, wanting to spear myself on his hardness.  
Surprised by my eagerness, he grinned and began to press.

"Oh Allie, she's so tight, baby.  Her pussy is warm and soft and tight.  This is going to 
feel so good."

"Do it my love, let her coat you with her sweet juice."  Allie panted above me.

He pressed again, and the flared head of his beautiful cock slipped almost inside the tight 
ring of muscles that surrounded my opening.  I whimpered and began to writhe about on 
the blanket as his shaft began its agonizingly slow start through my spreading lips.

"Oh fuck.  This is so good Allie," he groaned.

"Peter.  I-I'm a virgin."  I stammered, suddenly afraid even though my body would not 
entertain the notion of denial.

He paused, his glans pulsing softly as he poised for entry.  Searching my face, he saw 
only acceptance and with a final nod, he began to press.  When he was in just a tiny 
fraction, Peter drew back, smiled at me reassuringly, then flexed his hips and plunged.  
Pain blasted through my pelvis and I cried out loud as I reflexively tried to pull my knees 
up and double myself over.

"Oh, poor baby."  Allie whispered, comforting me with soft touches and gentle words.

I groaned a little, already feeling better, and tried a tentative smile.  "I-it's okay now.  I 
wanted this."

Peter stayed still for a moment as Allie tightened her grip on my hands, holding them 
high and not allowing me to move.  She nodded eventually to her husband and he began 
to fuck me.  His powerful hips drew back, tightened, then slammed back inside with great 
force.  The pain faded away as the eroticism of the moment filtered through to my brain.  
A beautiful woman was holding me while her husband fucked me passionately.  My 
voice came through again, my familiar moans mixing with the sound of the surf as Peter 
drove his cock in and out of my slit.

"Tell me baby.  What does it feel like inside her?"  Allie's voice was hushed and low, her 
words slipping out in a rush of emotion as she squirmed under my head.

Peter drove in another inch, lifting my legs and brushing his fingers across my clit.  I rose 
up to meet him, securing for myself another piece of his wonderful cock.

He grunted, and answered his wife, "It feels like I'm surrounded by warm, thick molasses 
on a cold night.  She's so hot Allie, so soft."  Turning his eyes to me, he lowered his 
voice, "I love fucking you Rain.  You feel so good wrapped around me.  Baby, you're so 
sexy."

I only moaned at him, begging him with my eyes to bury that tool deeper.  He was inside 
me and I felt full, but I sensed that he still had a lot of cock left to fuck me with.  

Allie bent her head and pulled my nipple into her mouth; she sucked and bathed my 
breast and I heard the passion hum from within her as she whispered for me to enjoy her 
husband's cock, to let him put it all the way in.  I nodded at her and prepared to feel his 
length slice through me.

"Want some more Rain?  You've only taken about two thirds so far.  Do you want all of 
my cock?"

I didn't know how it would fit, but I began to beg him to give it all to me.  I cried and 
twisted in Allie's arms, trying to impale myself deeper on his hard dick.

"F-f-f-fuck me.  Peter.  Please, let me have it... all of it.  Oh god, please fuck me!"  With 
every syllable I uttered, he slammed back inside, his cock stirring up my juice and 
sending me back toward that spiral of pleasure.

"Allie honey, I can feel her juicing.  It's running down over my dick.  So hot...so fucking 
hot baby.  Come and get a taste while I fuck her." He said to his wife.  Looking down at 
me, he whispered, "Little one, I'm about to fill you to capacity.  I'm going to drive the 
entire length of my cock all the way in your pussy.  Is that okay?"

I tensed up, but nodded at him as Allie slipped away.  With one powerful surge, he buried 
his cock, a harsh moan slipping from his lips, his handsome face twisted in pleasure.

"Oh my God!"  I cried, "Yes... oh yes Peter... Allie... it's good... it's so good.  F-fuck me 
harder!"

I felt the gentle sweep of Allie's soft tongue as she licked my juice from her husband's 
balls.  He whispered his satisfaction as he spread his legs for her.  His moans told me how 
good her tongue felt on his tight, cum-filled sac.  

As he began to fuck me in earnest, his hips and ass driving his cock past my clutching 
walls to a place no other man would ever reach, Allie instructed him to lift my body up 
high.

I felt his large hands grasp my cheeks and his strength carried my small body up and 
away from the blanket while he rotated his hips and ground in a little deeper.  I think it 
was her tongue at first, though it might have been a finger, but something warm and wet 
brushed against my tight asshole and I almost fainted it felt so good.  

"Yes... Oh... oh God, I need to cum," I groaned, jerking my frame hard against Peter's 
body.

Allie slipped a finger up and began to press it against my other hole, insistently working 
until we both felt a small pop and she was in to the second knuckle.

"Peter, I'm fucking her too. She likes it... she likes having us in both of her holes."

Peter renewed his thrusts and soon I felt the exquisite burn of Allie fucking my tender ass 
while Peter plunged his cock in and out of my pussy.  I was trembling, on fire, my body 
calling out for release.  I felt Peter's cock surge as it grew harder and he began fucking 
me with lightening fast strokes.

"I'm gonna cum Rain.  I'm going to fill your sweet pussy with all my cum.  Does it feel 
good baby?  Do you like me fucking you?"

"Yes... yes...ohhh yes... god, please don't stop!"

Allie thrust her finger deep inside my ass and began to twist it around.  She fucked me 
vigorously, her own body enjoying my response.  "Flood her darling.  Spew your cum 
deep inside her.  Make her cum now Peter. before you blow."

Gasping, he reached down, wet his finger and rubbed it quickly across my exposed 
clitoris.  Once more, I was drowning in pleasure, feeling it rise up and roll across me, my 
tummy clenching, pulling at him, sucking him inside me.

"Hurry Peter... oh hurry... I'm cumming... cumming... Mmmmm...give it to me 
now...please shoot your cum in me."

And as I took the path through that spiral, I felt a hot blast of liquid warmth fire off inside 
of me.  Peter froze, his head back, his cock planted all the way in, moaning, groaning as 
he squirted his cream deep into my cunt.

"Take it," he wheezed, "Take my cum Rain... oh baby, you're so sweet... please, take it 
all!"

Together we came, our bodies tight and tense as indescribable pleasure filled our bodies. 
Panting loudly, Peter leaned over and pulled me close, he kissed me and rested his face in 
my hair as our heartbeats became quiet and steady.

Allie bent over and kissed us both, her face lit up with joy at seeing her husband pleasure 
me so well.  Rising up on one elbow, Peter drew Allie close to us.  Smiling, he kissed her 
and whispered to me.  "It's her turn now, huh little one?"





