Prometheus In Flesh What would've Happened? While I'm under no illusions there's anyone out there that's read the three parts of the story thus far and is anxiously awaiting for it all to be revealed, I do feel it necessary (for no apparent reason) to explain some of the points in the story that hadn't yet been addressed and where it was supposed to go in subsequent chapters. In case you hadn't thought of it yet, our good hero was going to seduce his new step-mother in the very next chapter. In my original plans the brother was supposed to stick around and they were going to have a threesome with the mother and eventually play around with each other. After I read some of the angels I had thought up, I decided that this story didn't need any gay elements (not that that wouldn't have been erotic, just that I didn't feel it fit with the mood of the piece). After Kevin was to seduce Maria, Stacey and Robin were to come home and they were all going to talk about sex and possibly have a bunch of it. A wonderful foursome. I was never quite sure, though, if Stacey was going to be completely involved in that foursome, if, in fact, it ever was to take place. As you probably guessed, my moronic mind had desired to save Kevin's conquest of his step-sister for a very crucial part of the story. The next part of the story that was to be revealed was the beach party that Kevin was invited to. I actually have a few chapters of a version of this story I started from that point that I might post eventually. When he's at the party he meets a girl who he believes is the love of his life. They, of course, have sex and develop a close bond. The only problem with this new relationship would be that she is from Maine and he lives in New Jersey and she has to go back up North in a few weeks. Okay, after that it gets a little hazy. Most of my stories I tend to plan out extensively, or at the very least I usually have a good idea of where I'm going, but I don't always write all of my ideas down. I had outlined and/or written the story up to the point where Kevin meets his dream girl on the beach. After that the summer was supposed to end, the girl, Christin, was supposed to go back to Maine, and Kevin would go back to school. Kevin would continue to search for his family's killers while exploring the female population of his high school as well as Robin and Maria. My original goal was to have the death of Kevin's parents be the part of a conspiracy to eliminate all of the families that could possibly manifest psychic abilities. Kevin's family, apparently were among the upper candidates for psychic abilities (hence Kevin's uncanny ability to read people) and were therefore eliminated. Kevin was going to track this all the way back to a secret organization (doesn't it have to be?) that was located (you guessed it) in Maine. And, of course, Christin's family was going to either be the head of it or were going to be important in the conspiracy. This would lead to a conflict of emotions, the inevitable sex between Kevin and Stacey, some kind of action/adventure type scene, and the eventual betrayal of Christin to her parents. With any luck it would've all been wrapped up neatly and Kevin, Christin, Stacey and Robin would all be fucking in the end. Maybe it wasn't the grandest of stories but I wasn't trying to write anything really grand. It was just supposed to be a plot driven sex story, instead of a character driven one. Obviously it is unfinished and I have no intentions of finishing it. After writing about my intentions I have even less of an inclination to finish it. If you enjoyed what was there, I'm glad. If you hated it, I'm sorry. If you thought it was amatuerish bullshit, you were right. If I ever get around to getting my new stuff up on this site I hope you come back to read it. best wishes the gnome ummagumma1@thedoghousemail.compromet~5