"Four Seasons" by Frederick T. (an19164@anon.nymserver.com). Guest Review by
BillyG
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The story "Four Seasons" is a light-hearted sexual romp.  Frank Mailbu and
wife Vicky, recently from 'Vegas and now living in Ogden and in the process of
forming new friends, both have a penchant for young girls.  Setting up a
slowly evolving seduction of their 15-year-old baby sitter, Traci, the
Mailbu's contrive for her to see a video of them getting stoned on marijuana
with another teenage girl, 16-year-old Michelle Sabat.

The story moves slowly through the four seasons but doesn't quite make it as a
slowly measured seduction.  Traci's willing enough and it just takes the right
setting for her to jump into the erotic pool with her employees.

The story has lots of explicit sex but somehow lacks an erotic tug.  Perhaps
it's too superficial, for we never get to know the protagonists.  We know
almost nothing of their fears or desires, save to get laid.  The plot is
superficial and quite limited, failing to emphatically delineate a beginning
or an ending.  Save the stereotypical bisexuality of the women and the charge
one might experience fucking the baby sitter, there are no points of dilemma
or erotic energy in this story.  Still, it remains as a light-hearted, no-
consequences stroke story.

Ratings for "Four Seasons"
Athena (technical quality): 8
Venus (plot & character): 6
BillyG (appeal to reviewer): 7
