"A Nice Surprise" is pure fiction, a product of my imagination and nothing else. This is a story about an 18 year old man and an 11 year old girl having sex for the first time; it didn’t happen and the people involved do not exist and the places are made-up, as well. Please enjoy this story.  Frenchie 

Story codes: F, M, g*, Mg, Inc, Sex


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A Nice Surprise



It was a cool, brisk morning on this November day as Janice hurried to put on her robe .

"Brrr..",  thought the 11 year old.

She was a bright young lady with fine golden blonde hair and sparkling blue eyes and always a cheery smile on her face. She loved life and what it had to bring her. 

The weather was getting cooler and Janice loved it. Her budding breasts were stiff with the colder air around them.

She sat back down on the warm, comfortable bed, thinking how delicious it would be to cuddle under the covers and be warm and cozy. She had just about given in to those thoughts when there was a knock on her door. It woke her  from her reverie.

"Yes? Who's there?"

The door opened and her mother came into the room.

"Janice, I might have to go to New York this afternoon and your little friend from around the  corner is away on that school trip she won." her mother said. "Do you think you and David will be all right?" she asked. "I'll just be gone tomorrow and Sunday. I'll be back on Monday afternoon."
"Well, I don't know..." she trailed off. "David has been teasing me an awful lot the past week."
"That's because  he loves you, dear. But if it will make you feel any better, I'll have a talk with him."
"OK, mom." Janice said with a knowing grin.

Janice's mom left that afternoon for New York leaving her with $50.00 in cash so that David and she could buy food. David was nowhere around.  He must  have left before Janice woke up, which was about 10 o'clock. Janice put the breakfast dishes in the dishwasher and went to the bathroom to have a long, relaxing  bubble bath. 

David came home just after 4 o'clock.

"Where's mom?" he asked.
"She had to go to New York and will be back Monday afternoon." Janice told David. "She left you a note on the kitchen table and she gave me $50.00 so we wouldn't starve." Janice chuckled.
"So where's your friend, er, Sadie, is it?" David asked.
"She's in Washington, D.C. on a field trip and she won't be back until sometime next week."
"So who's going to stay with you and protect you from me?" David gave a sinister laugh.
"You're going to protect me from all the evils of the world." She said with a slight grin.
"Well, that's no fun!" David said. "I'm gonna want to tease you and there's nobody to take your side."
"Go take a shower! You stink." She said.
"Hmm... yeah. I guess you're right." He said, pretending to smell under his arm pits.


Janice decided to put on the nightgown that uncle Harry had given her for her birthday. It was pink satin with a white sheer fabric over the outside and trimmed in fine lace. It was a bit too big for her slender frame, that's why she hadn't worn it until now. She figured it would accent her little pubescent body enough so that David would maybe take a genuine interest in her and show her a thing or two about, love making. She spayed her wrists and body with perfume and went to the living room to watch television, one of David's favorite pastimes. 

David pretended not to notice his young sister sitting on the couch when I came into the room. She was absolutely gorgeous! A total babe! A knockout! He couldn't look at her. He felt weak in the knees as he sat down beside her. He had to do something to regain his composure otherwise he would take her right now!

"How about some popcorn and a movie?" he suggested.
"That sounds good." she answered. "You make to popcorn and I'll get a movie. OK?
"Yeah, good idea..." David said.

David was weak and a little bit uncoordinated and his mind was on getting out of the room before he made a fool of himself. He was almost 18 and he was thinking like he was 11, like his sister. He wanted to do right by her but he was still a virgin and he had wondered what it would be like to feel his cock in a real live pussy. He thought he could please her and himself at the same time and just so long as she didn't tell anyone else, all would be cool. 

As the two got up from the couch, they bumped in to each other almost knocking Janice down. David grabbed her and straightened her out before she fell. His strong hands grabbed her breasts as she reeled. He thought to let go but she might fall. He held her tight. She was about a foot and a half shorter than he was and weighed about 75 pounds. David weighed about a hundred.

"Whoa! Are you OK?"

After a brief period to catch her breath, she replied. "I guess." she said in a shaky voice. The encounter had left her breathless as well. David reluctantly released his hold on his sister and went to the kitchen to microwave some popcorn. Meanwhile, catching her breath, Janice looked through the videos trying to select something that would fit the mood.

As David was retrieving the popcorn from the microwave, the phone rang.

"I'll get it." he called.

He put the hot popcorn down and answered the phone. "Hello?" he said. "Oh, hi  mom."

The two talked for a few minutes and hung up. After having made the popcorn and talking to his mother, David was more self assured now as he wondered into the living room with the popcorn in a bowl. Casually, he said. "Did you find a movie?"

"No," Janice said. "They're all dorkie. Besides we've seen them all."
"Well, here's the popcorn." David offered. "You know, I have some videos in my room if you don't mind a little rough stuff."
"That sounds cool. Get something that's sexy." Janice ordered.


The popcorn half gone, the two sat side by side on the big couch watching "College Torrents". Janice took the initiative by putting  her hand on the inside of David's thigh. He winced as her hand settled down to a nice firm grip. He pulled his sister close to him, putting his arm around her in a position that he could reach her firm little breasts. His hand slowly felt her tiny little nipples through the silky fabric and she cooed with his ministrations.

Janice cuddled closer in an effort to gain access to David's throbbing member. She put her hand inside of his pajama pants and felt his seven inch cock drenched with the natural oil that comes with foreplay. Slowly, she started a down and up motion on his rod. He moaned approval as he moved his hand down to her honey pot which was also soaking wet. To his joy, she had no panties on. He tucked his "social" finger into her eager hole. She shivered with delight as he moved it in and out and round and round. Her breath was ragged and so was his as they pleased each other in a way they had never done before.

Janice used the oil on his penis to lubricate her fingers and she  made them contour his bulging member as she went up and down. She had to rest her hand every now and then thus prolonging the inevitable. Meanwhile,  David was able to manage to bring Janice to her first orgasm. Her little body stiffened and then she bucked several times and then went limp as the waves of ecstasy swept over her. She gave a little scream and squeezed his penis as if to thank him.

No words were spoken as they explored each others body. An hour went by. The movie had ended but they just sat there pleasing each other and reveling in the delight of something truly wonderful being shared by brother and sister. This moment can't end. They were both of the same mind. The feelings were deliciously exquisite. 

They had both slumped down and were almost lying down. David rolled over to a lying position pulling Janice on top of him. She snuggled in close and breathed a sigh. She had never known such feelings.

"I love you." David breathed, softly. "I've wanted to do this with you for so long."
"Oh..., I wish you had." She choked. "I feel so good right now, like I'm about to burst."
"Hmm..., I'm going to make you feel ten times better than this. No, even a hundred times!" 


"Why don't we go to my bed where we can relax and change positions easier?" David suggested.
"Oh, I don't want to move. I feel so good." Janice cooed.
"Come on, let's go and be comfortable. Besides, I want to get inside of you!" David exclaimed.
"Oh, I want you inside of me in the worst way." Janice said.

They got up. David went to the bathroom to relieve himself. Janice went to David's bedroom and climbed in. She was just getting comfortable under the cover when David walked in. He sat on the side of the bed and took his pajamas off, then climbed in beside his waiting sister. They cuddled close to one another and got in comfortable positions to do their ministrations. David brought Janice to another orgasm but this one was twice as strong as the first. She lay in his arms, deliciously wilted, unable to move a muscle. Her pussy was drenched and David figured now was the time to taste the nectar that flowed there.

He relinquished his hold on her and pushed the covers down then climbed between her little legs.

"Where are you going?" She asked.
"Well, you're too full of PN so I'm going to help you get rid of some of it." David said.
"PN? What's that?" She asked.
"Why that's Pussy Nectar." He said, smiling. "All girls have it. Some more than others."
"Here, let me show you."

David was in position to view the most beautiful sight he had ever seen. A little mound that was divided in two by a slit with a cute little clit protruding from it and covered with nectar. He could have fainted, it was so beautiful. He was just about to dive in when Janice spoke.

"David, I have to pee." She said. "Do you mind?"
"No, not at all. In fact I have to do something too."

The two got up and walked to the bathroom. 

"You just went." Janice said.
"Oh, I'm not going to potty. I'm going to shave so I won't hurt you." David said, gallantly.
"What are you going to do to me?" She asked.
"You'll like it. Just wait and see." He said, smiling.

The razor buzzed as Janice peed. It wouldn't take too long because David didn't have that much of a beard yet. Janice closed the toilet covers and stood on the toilet seat. When David turned off the razor she held her arms open for an embrace. She was now as tall as he was and more beautiful than ever. He put his arms around her slender waist, regarded her for a few moments, then pulled her toward him. They put their heads on one an other's shoulder like resting their heads but both were deep in thought. A thousand questions raced through their minds.


Once back in bed, David resumed his position between his sister's legs. Her mound was dry but he knew it wouldn't be long before it would be gushing with her heavenly nectar. He slowly and deliberately went closer to the target and stuck his probing tongue out for a light touch. She shivered as his tongue met it's mark and began doing it's duty. She moaned with pleasurable pain. He redoubled his efforts and she reciprocated with a little moan or cry. Before long she was writhing back and forth on the bed, bucking and grabbing anything to hold on to. His assault on her clit was relentless. She couldn't bear it anymore. She pulled herself  up and grabbed his head. She screamed.

"David! Stop!" She screamed.

 David didn't stop. He kept probing with his talented tongue, back and forth over the tortured clit.

"David..." she said breathlessly. "Oh! Eiee! Oh stop plea..." She paused to catch her breath. "Please! Au..."

She screamed a broken scream then released his head and fell back on the bed, breathing like there was no tomorrow. Her body twitched and shook as the spasms subsided. She was limp. Wasted. And had no inclination to do anything but lay there exhausted. She closed her eyes and enjoyed the after glow and the pleasure she shared with  her brother. David came up and lay beside his spent sister. She was so young and pretty lying there weaker than any kitten would want to be. He kissed her cheek. They fell asleep in each other's arms.


Janice woke up to find herself in a strange bed. She was startled at first but the remembered the pleasure she had felt for the first time in her life. She pushed the covers down and climbed out of bed. She went to the bathroom and to get a glass of water and returned to bed with her brother who was lying there as peaceful as can be.

Instead of pulling the covers up she nestled herself  next to his wonderful thing. It looked so pathetic there shriveled up in a halo of black hair. She regarded it for a minute or so and thought about a scene in "College Torrents" where a young college student went down on her boyfriend. Janice decided she wanted to try it so she made herself comfortable and gently touched the limp member. She held it up so it wouldn't fall over and began the up and down motion she had done earlier. Soon it began to show life. She released her hold on it and bent over and kissed it on the tip. Then she opened her mouth and licked it. Then she stuck the head in and sucked on it just like in the movie. It tasted salty but she liked salt. It wasn't long that it was hard and stiff just like it had been earlier. David moaned. She stopped cold. Didn't make a sound.

After a brief period she continued her ministrations taking in at least three inches of the shaft. She liked it and didn't want to quit. David moaned again so she quit as abruptly as before, but David was awake.

"Wow!" he said. "Your just like a pro!"
"You liked it?" she asked.
"Are you kidding? There's only one thing better than a dick in a pussy." He explained. "And that's a dick in a talented mouth. And you have a talented mouth."

She returned to her sucking and fondling. Feeling he was near an orgasm, he stopped her.

"Here, lets do tit for tat or otherwise "69. OK?"
"What's "69"?" She asked.
"Here, I'll show you."

David instructed Janice on taking the "69" position and she went at it with renewed interest because not only was David being pleased but she had her mouth full of pleasure also. She was on top of David making it easier for her to get more of his delicious cock in her mouth and David could play his tongue around her clit and into her steamy pussy with ease.

They were a perfect match and settled down to please each other as never before. By now she not only was sucking his cock like a pro but she had her little hands around his balls, fondling them with pleasurable perfection. They were in heaven. Both were breathing hard and their bodies stiffened at the feeling when it changed. Neither of them could hold on any longer and with a simultaneous scream and moan they climaxed with each other. 

Janice had a surprise when all of a sudden David's cock started swelling and twitching then a gush of cum filled her mouth. It pumped and pumped filling her mouth with a taste like no other. It was sweet yet pungent and salty yet tart. She liked it and swallowed every last drop. She had pleased her brother like never before. She was happy.

They both lay still for a while until Janice decided to come up by her brother an fall asleep in his arms. She cuddled against his beautiful body and he stroked her long blonde hair and kissed her on the lips for the very first time. A long, silent, French kiss. And they fell asleep, kissing.


The phone woke them out of very peaceful slumbers.

"Hello." David said, drowsily.
"Did I wake you, son?" David's mother asked. "Are you OK?"
"Oh, hi mom." He replied. "Yeah, we're OK."
"Is Janice still sleeping?"
"Janice is in her room, I guess. We made popcorn and watched some movies last night and didn't go to bed until late."
"What time did you stay up to?" His mother asked.
"I don't know what time it was. I guess about 12 or 1."
"I'm not scheduled to be back until tomorrow morning. We're going to work late again tonight. Are you planning on going somewhere today?"
"No, I don't feel right leaving Janice home alone. I have enough to keep me busy around here for a while and my friends won't miss me that much." David confided.
"Well, I'll call you later this afternoon to see how you're doing. Give Janice my love. And thank you for taking care of your sister for me. I love you. Bye."

David hung up the phone and looked down at his sleeping little sister curled up in his bed. She was so beautiful, innocent and vulnerable. He thought that since their mother wouldn't be back until tomorrow morning he would see if Janice would like to go to a cinema. He looked at the time. It was 9:30. They could go to a matinee and still have some time to please each other again. He took a shower, dressed and then went to wake Janice up. He shook her gently.

"Huh? What?" She stammered.
"C'mon, wake up sleepy head. It's almost ten o'clock." David said.

Stretching and rubbing the sleep out of her eyes, she managed to say. "I don't want to get up. I've never known happiness like this."

"Come on? We'll have breakfast and then we'll go see a show. What do you say?" David asked.
"No!" She said firmly. "I just want to stay here and make love with you!"
"Well, let's at least have breakfast." He retorted. "Come on, take a shower, put some clean clothes on and you'll feel better.
"David." She said, sitting up in bed and putting her head on his shoulder. "I love you so very much and I want to be near you always."
"Oh, Janice. I love you too and we'll always be together. I promise"

He pulled her to him and they kissed. Her little body pressing her small, firm breasts against his chest started a yearning in his loins. They finally laid down and kissed for about an hour.

Janice got up and took a shower and put clean clothes on like David had recommended.
They had a late breakfast and went to the living room to watch some TV.


Around two o'clock Becky came over to play with Janice. She left about an hour later. Janice found David in his bedroom reading a book. She laid next to him an arm across his chest. He put the book down and kissed Janice on the lips.

"I'm so lucky to have a brother like you." She cooed.
"I'm the lucky one to have such a beautiful sister that knows how to please her brother." David said softly.

David kissed her again. Janice broke off the kiss and moved away from David.

"What's the matter?" He asked.
"Well you said that you'd make me feel a hundred times better than yesterday." Janice pouted.
"Well, we've still got today and tonight. What do you think we should do?" He asked.

She didn't answer right away but thought of the best way to say what was on her mind. She drew closer to her brother. Held his body close to hers.

"David, I want to feel you inside of me." She said in a low voice.
"Oh, Janice. You make me so happy and there's nothing more that I want." David said in a weak, trembling voice. 
She held him closer. "Oh David." And they kissed.

After a while, David started to get undressed and he beckoned Janice to do likewise. He suggested they go to the bathroom so they wouldn't be interrupted if nature called. That done they climbed into bed. They kissed for a little while as he played with her pussy and she with his cock. The juices started flowing and pretty soon they were soaking wet. 

He placed her on her back on a pillow so that she was comfortable. Then he explained to her that there might be some pain but it would soon go away and he asked her again if this is what she wanted.

"Oh, yes. I want you deep inside of me." She said, weakly.

He had his cock in one hand and Janice's ass in the other and he started rubbing his cock the length of her slit. Up and down, back and forth. She moaned all the while. That turned him on all the more. He was ready to shove it to the hilt.

Then he took the other pillow and put it under her butt and he told her he was ready to try and put it in and that this is where the pain would come in. She told him she was ready. He pushed against her body hard and with drew his swollen rod. He repeated the process, gaining a little penetration with each thrust. After what seemed to be an hour, he was finally able to get the head in. He leaned forward and laid on his sister to rest. 

"Oh, It feels so good, David." She said in a hoarse voice, she was so weak. "I've never felt anything like it."
"I may not be able to go all the way in this first time. It might be too painful." He warned her.
"Please put it all in me." She begged.

He kissed her and propped himself up ready to try to get more penetration. With renewed energy he began thrusting in and out. He'd never felt a pussy so tight. But, then he never had a virgin before. He pushed and shoved. It popped out. He put it in again. He pushed and pushed. He was gaining ground but he didn't want to hurt he sister. He left it in at the maximum penetration and fell over his sister. His member twitched. He was still, very still so he wouldn't cum in his sister and thus blow his wad, 'cause it would be all over then.

The wave passed and David lay on his sister's chest. He thought he would try once more and then give up because the pressure he was using was going to eventually bring him to orgasm and he wanted to enjoy a little of his sister with full penetration.

"How are you doing?" He asked.
"Oh," She said. "It's heavenly. I've never felt this good."
"No pain?" He asked.
"Just a little." She volunteered.

He told her about what he planned to do and warned her that if he started to cum, it would be all over. That he would have to pull out of her rather than risk an unwanted pregnancy.

He figured that he was half way in and that another three inches would be pay dirt. He pushed himself up and reached for his cock. He pulled it out. Janice gave a groan. David then lubricated his cock and her pussy again. Then did it again. Then he got into position and he shoved real hard. Janice let out a little whimper. He pulled almost all the way out then shoved it in again. It was working. He could feel her pussy grabbing his shlong with good resistance. He pumped in and out and each time he could feel it going in a little more each time. Janice was moaning loudly now. That turned David on even more. He thrust in and out until he was sure that it was going in all the way. The feeling was so good. He'd never felt anything like this before. He slowed down on his thrusts because he didn't want to cum just yet. It had to last a little longer.

He pulled himself upright to see what it looked like to be in all the way into the tightest pussy in the world. He motioned for Janice to look also but she was too euphoric to respond. He rested a while until the feeling of impending orgasm subsided and then began slow, measured thrusts. Oh what a feeling.

In about fifteen minutes he began feeling the strains of an orgasm that was so strong he knew he would be unable to stop them. He slowed his tempo to make it last as long as possible. Finally, he pulled his dick from her steaming pussy and shot his wad all over his sister. She was too out of it to care.


They took a shower together and ordered pizza for supper. They watched TV until it was bedtime for Janice.

"I love you, sweetheart." David said to his sister as he held her close.
"I love you too." She said. "I wonder when mom is going to New York again."

They kissed goodnight and she went to bed.


Laissez les bon temps roulez  

Let the good times roll

Frenchie

-30- 


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