Note: This story was dynamically reformatted for online reading convenience. responses 1 6.07.03 Wayne Widower Fun comments = Great story really enjoyed it. Thanks 2 6.07.03 J C Visiting Challenge comments = Thanks for such a wonderful story. You have a great gift, please keep up the good work. 3 6.07.03 Jerry Sex Cabin comments = Good story, could it be expanded into a book? 4 7.07.03 Charles Camp comments = Very nice story/ Glad to see the bad guys get it every once in a while, although I would have liked it a little better to have seen them tied and tourchered a little the next day. are there any other stories like this out here? 5 7.07.03 Bill Cabin comments = What a great story. You are blessed with a great talent. Do you have any more stories, if so I would love to read them. Thanks for sharing this one. gmfactoryrat@netscape.net 6 7.07.03 Daniel Cabin comments = This was a very refreshing story. First, it was filled with compassion. Paul reaction as he undressed and bathed her was natural. It didn't dissolve into a "six hours after we met, she was sucking me dick" story. And I thoroughly enjoyed the fact she was not a "38DD" (there are not enough stories tauting the sexuality of small-breasted women. Thanks for killing off her abusive husband. I will be reading more of your stories. dapperd47@aol.com 7 7.07.03 anon Cabin comments = thank you 8 7.07.03 anon Wife's Friend comments = I loved the story. It was hot, had great details and was believable. Keep it up. I hope you take them to other settings, where they could explore things in a more public arena. 9 7.07.03 Phil Widower Fun comments = Hello Eskimo1958-- I just read your story Widower Fun and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. You had good character development (which is hard to find these days). I was surprised at how much abuse Kent took from Kim, but all in all a good story. Do you have any others? Are they posted at ASSTR? My e-mail address is p_lynx@hotmail.com Thanks 10 7.07.03 Julian Camp Diary comments = Interesting but I suggest you develop the characters more. Make us feel who they are. 11 8.07.03 OKK Carribbean Cruise comments = Good story, a bit too much luck for the two main guys, makes us wish it was us, right? You consistantly misspell the word friends - a bit distracting. 12 9.07.03 Rob Carribbean Cruise comments = very well written, warm free-for-all fantasy. if only the real world were like this........a few weeks every year, lol 13 10.07.03 anon April comments = great story 14 10.07.03 mschur April comments = Great short story! Really enjoyed it. Would like to read more of their adventures. 15 10.07.03 Bill Triplet Auction comments = the best 16 10.07.03 Dom The Camp comments = Whewwww, what an emotional roller-coaster ride that was! Like Mario Puzo meets Foxy Brown, or one of those "Mafia Princess movies with balls. Needed the love story ending. It helped my stomach begin to un-knot, and testes to slowly drop into place. 'tho it wasn't the usual "stroke story" I expect to find here, (rape doesn't turn me on) it certainly was a fine piece of writing. I will have to read a hotter selection next time. I hope you reconsider your attitude against Pedo (completely consensual, curious, or a little Lolitaesque perhaps?) Interresting you have no problem with the balls-hacking-stick-up-the-asshole -bullet-to-the-brain, violence in this piece; but young people enjoying thier first sexual experiences, are out of bounds. Hmmm, different strokes... I guess. So, thanks again, I'm glad I noticed your listing, and will try to read more. Sincerely, Dom Sanzone 17 10.07.03 John Carribean Cruise comments = This is an all time best story I have heard and matt I would love to be in ur shoes for that. 18 10.07.03 Christine April comments = One of my favorite stories now, i haven't read one as good in a long time. 19 10.07.03 frog Carribean Cruise comments = please continue the story line!!!!!! 20 10.07.03 Jerry Carribean Cruise comments = > you write good enough said. 21 11.07.03 Harveen Carribean Cruise comments = This was the best fucking story I have ever read. That might not mean much, because I only started to read these stories about 1 1/2 years ago. But, damn, the "Carribean Cruise" was amazing! Please continue writing!! 22 11.07.03 Johanna Cindy comments = Excellent mix of life and fun!!!! Wish I could have been Cindy. 23 12.07.03 Thacker Wife's Friend comments = That was some steamy stuff man! I always like stories where one takes time to undress and does it orgasmically slow. keep writing! 24 12.07.03 Arthur Cottage comments = Yo, Eskimo! This was great! Very well done. Thanks for sharing it, I will be reading more from your site. God Bless and keep you. Arthur 25 12.07.03 Justin Wife's Friend comments = best story ever 26 13.07.03 Chuck Cabin Surprise comments = The spelling is atrocious. The story is graphic but interesting. 27 13.07.03 JM41 Harem comments = I hope you comtinue this character. 28 13.07.03 Bob Cabin comments = hey that was a really good story & the thing about it is that it could really happen.its not wild & unbelievable. thanks 29 13.07.03 Mat Cabin comments = To use the word 'seen' you need to precede it with 'has', 'had' or 'have' otherwise you should use 'saw'. I have seen... I had never seen... She has not seen... 'I saw' but not 'I seen' Great story though! 30 14.07.03 Carl Harem comments = What a fantasy! I've read it twice and I hope you do a continuation. Actually I've read all your stories at ASSTR and enjoyed them all. 31 14.07.03 Ed Western Trip to An Orgy comments = This is one of the best stories I've read in quite a while. IMHO it has the right mix of story and sex, and the descriptions of the sex are well done. I would have enjoyed more description of the DP sessions (what it felt like for all concerned when she was impaled on two pricks). I give this story the highest marks. 32 15.07.03 KC Texas Fun comments = Hi,i thought the story was real good,but would of liked it to be more graphic in nature,maybe a little coercing or nc,i like the way it built up your emotions too.i tend to lean toward stories about PTA mom's or soccer mom's being coerced into degrading acts for one or son's friends,which is black and very graphic about the acts he makes her do until he is satisfied about his first white women experence and releases her from his torment,so she can resume her life as he can his.I know you have your own style of writting as everybody does,but wish someone could write a story on this format,anyway great job, have a good one and thankx for allowing the comments 33 16.07.03 Rags Harem comments = Hi Just cant wait to see what happens to Joe next ;-) KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!! Rags 34 17.07.03 Streve Harem comments = Please continue. It is well written and very enjoyable. Let me know what you plan on doing. 35 20.07.03 ahotstory Couple Fun I found and downloaded one of your stories today. (Couple Fun) I am not far enough into the story to give and opinion but I am far enough to make a request. The story codes as you have used them are misleading if not partially incorrect. Lower case 'm' and 'f' mean "teen male and female" and some of your story codes should be changed to 'M' and 'F' .Thank you for all your work and I hope to write you again in a few days. ahotstory 36 20.07.03 Spunky Swingers Diary Thanks for revealing yours and Cindy's exploits. Very well written. A lot to think about Regards Spunky and Q 37 22.07.03 Dick Wife's Friend comments = Mercy. Lucky threesome. Glad the husband and wife are open enough to share and feel comfortable in doing it. All three have the best of both worlds. Lucky Amy to have such good friends to help her give her virginity in such a loving relationship. 38 22.07.03 tphile stories comments = Just want to say that I have been enjoying your stories. Is there some way you can hilight the brand new stories from the reposts when you post them? I especially enjoyed the humor one and would love to read more like them Harem was a lot of fun but that has to be the worst title ever. It also gave away the plot. you should give it a better title. maybe something sports related like The Benchwarmer or Equipment Manager or even something goofy like Have Dick Will Travel. :) The Garage was another favorite. The chance meeting and opposites attract is always fun I hope we will get to read some new ones soon tphile 39 22.07.03 Dick Rohwder Vising Challenge comments = WOW! What a story. Well done. 40 23.07.03 Fred stories comments = How do you find the time to write so well? I have only read a few of your stories yet each is so different. Are you a professional writer? Whatever, just keep up the good work. And thanks a lot for posting these stories on the ASSTR system. 41 2.08.03 Jack stories comments = I really like the stories. Would like to hear more about you. 42 3.08.03 Mschur Opening her eyes comments = Very well written short story. Thanks. 43 8.08.03 Mary Garage comments = Way to go! Passed this story along to quite a few at work. They all enjoyed. Keep them coming. 44 15.08.03 Abe stories comments = Hi! I've read all your stories and think that they're fantastic. I first read 'Western trip to an Orgy' and 'Carribean Cruise' a couple of years ago and still enjoy reading them now. Character development is good, though I feel that some stories are far better than others (the triplet auction felt so sterile to me while the previously mentioned two and 'Visiting challenge' had characters that projected their feelings and warmth in a way that is rare among stories). Keep up the good work! 45 17.08.03 Steve stories comments = Enjoyed myself 46 24.08.03 John Texas Fun comments = I loved it, what a fabulous story! Certainly got me revved up. Long live ASSTR Cheers John 47 24.08.03 JM41 Becky comments = AS usual another good story.Your proof reaser missed a lot of run together words [ 2 words w/o a space between them].....KEEP WRITING!!!...JM41...... 48 26.08.03 Gus Widower Fun comments = is superb. The characters are very well developed, giving the reader a slice of reality that is rarely found in erotica these days. I just finished the story about the 6'10" mailman and his bisexual lover Jade, and now my dick feels like it went through a giant Lewinski. Keep up the great work. All the best. 49 26.08.03 Vic Canoe Trip comments = Great story, but two college teachers use spell check , correct grammer and proof readers, Check out Nick scipio for a well written story. 50 27.08.03 Guy Mollie comments = This is a piece of shit. 51 30.08.03 tphile Becky comments = nice to see a new story and this was a pleasant one. I'm a fan of Nick Scipio's Summer Camp so I liked this being set in a nudist camp I suggest you proof this some. I'm not sure if its Susan or Roxy as the dead wife I like the name Roxy 52 30.08.03 Glynn Becky comments = Wow... That was a really great story... I have to say that it was a shame that it ended there... It could have gone on longer... But I can't fault you for the way you put it across. It really is very good! Thanks Glynn (ATSC!) 53 31.08.03 Simon Harem comments = I'm not sure if the rom tag is appropriate for this story. I didn't see anything especially romantic about it. None of the women are especially emotionally connected to your protagonist from what I can see. Yes, they like him. And yes, they enjoy sex with him. But I'm not sure that but a couple of them would consider him to be much more than a casual friend? Still, a good story. Nice work. 54 3.09.03 Irene Mollieboys comments = darling i love your stories,can't get enough!!!! you are GREAT and get me off every morning.....irene* 55 13.09.03 Keith stories comments = loved them how about pedo and little girl stories? 56 13.09.03 Bill Hayes Cabin comments = Excellent story. You really should think about making a series out of it. 57 17.09.03 anon stories comments = i wasn't enchanted by April; great idea, hot writing, somehow something didn't quite click for me. Maybe that April's problem kept being put as "her needs" not being met. But i *loved* the tale of two titties. boy, did that work. Excellent writing, very funny, very well done. keep up the good work. and thanks for giving us a form for comments; a lot of authors love comments, but don't make it this easy to send responses. 58 26.09.03 Laci stories comments = Dear Eskimo! I'm from Hungary, and I like your works, I think the best are the orgys! Would you mind if I translate them to Hungarian? 59 29.09.03 Peter Camp Diary comments = I liked the story. But why having set the events in the future ? From my own camp experiences, when boys were in minority, well the path of events went quite far and active, even if the 100% nudity for males all the day wasn't of course the rule (only at night, or when no adult was watching us (during part of trekking activities, for instance). 60 29.09.03 Terris Harem comments = Interesting story. There are some spelling errors, but they do not cause too much problems. There was only one point where I had to think what you tried to say (there was a weight on his hips when he woke up). I would like to read a continuation of this story, where some time has maybe passed and John plans the weekend activities. So he has one weekend for each lady, but this time John makes all the arrangements. There might be also some things that do not go by the plan (maybe some drunk in a bar gets too pushy and tries to grab his ladyfriend or something) and how he reacts to the situation deepens the bond between John and the lady in question. 61 30.09.03 tphile harem comments = I agree with Terris, you should develop the relationships more and put off the pregnancies till much later. We need to get to know them first. how about sailing or on a RV road trip with him as captain and the women as crew. they form a company weekend sports team. the girls escort him to the company picnic or school reunion. ski resort or tropical island holiday How about a Dude Ranch Connestoga Wagon trail drive. and please change the title ;) 62 5.10.03 tom wife's freind comments = Good Story. You should do another chapter. If Amy is 10 year younger, then still is still young enough to start a family...... 63 6.10.03 Orlando stories comments = I was checking all your novel and I found out that I've read most of them, I have also stored them and I only do it with the ones that I want to read again. If you're a reader you know what it means. Please keep on writing; although to be honest, since I'm a latin and raised with old standards (I'm 45), I sometimes do not agree with the subject, specially sharing, I confess I'm a male chauvinist pig, what's mine it's mine, for as long as she wants, once she looks for another one, she's not mine (and the other way aroun too). Having said that, please write a longer novel, you're one of the writers on ASSTR that I consider that could do it. I'm not into good words; but if you haven't understood what I wanted to say, I will say it: "YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER", keep on doing it. 64 07.10.03 GEB stories comments = I`ve read your stories; Harem, Becky, and Setting up Roger they are excellent stories. The people in your stories seem to be very real. As for misspelled words or improper english it dosen`t distract from the stories. Your one of my top 5 favorite authors. Keep writting !!!!! 65 07.10.03 tapen lisening in comments = I had a similar experience at Blackpool in England last summer. It was more like a cock to cunt orgy and some sucking and muff diving. I was cold, and got up with a very stiff neck and dozed all the way back home the next day. I should have thought about the telephone, damn! 66 08.10.03 greg couplefun r comments = Anoher good story, graet writing 67 19,10.03 rustyken stories comments = Nice job on your stories. Have enjoyed April and Harme as well as several others. You indicated future additions to harem an april. Good idea. Cheers, Rustyken 68 19.10.03 alex harem comments = You gotta finish this story 69 20.10.03 Jeremy college comments = Speaking as a white Canadian football-oblivious computer geek, pretty much all of the lifestyle content in this story was foreign to me (and while I do go to university, we have no frats and I'm sure even our star athletes don't have special dorms). Normally I have no interest in such things; if I can't relate, it's boring. But even so, the characterization was so strong, so well-done and believable, and Jess so likeable, that I followed the story to the end for its own sake. It wasn't the most strokeable story I've read even today, but it was the best-written I've read on asstr-mirror.org for quite a while. But you do need to do something about your editing. Spelling errors (for example, above my hips is my waist, not waste), typing errors (for example, I think "teh" shows up about 20 times), and punctuation errors (apostrophe is _not_ for pluralizing, dammit). It certainly didn't ruin the story, but it detracted very slightly. Thanks for a good story. I'll get around to reading some of your other work soon, I think. =] 70 20.10.03 John Cabin comments = very nice damsel in destress storie 71 21.10.03 Dean Vistingchallenge comments = The story was fun once you got passed the part of the story that looked like it might rip apart a good relationship. I hope to see the next years return visit. 72 22.10.03 Cisco College comments = Hi, I just wanted to tell you that I loved your story "College" that was posted on www.asstr-mirror.org. It was very hot, as well as a really good story. The characters and relationships between them were really well done. The sexual descriptions were intense. It seems to me that this story is just begging for a sequel, because it can go so much further. I can see a natural evolution of events and dynamics between the couples: Jess with Shellie, Cathy letting Leroy be her "second," the girls further exploring their lesbian desires, hot sex in the guys' shower, and Donna being passed around by the guys, and by the girls. There is alot that could happen leading up to Cathy and Jess' wedding which I and I'm sure others would love to read about. Anyway, thanks for a great story! 73 24.10.03 cadisfly harem comments = This is an interesting and well written story. There are many typos, but they don't impact on the flow much. I am interested in a sequel to this...have you written it yet? Hope you do Cadis Fly 74 26.10.03 Patrick college comments = Hi, I am a fellow Canadian and enjoyed this story and others you have written. Well leaving off this story where you did could be an ending, it does leave one hanging. Was this your intention or are you going to add more to it as I hope you will. Anyway, THANK YOU for the stories you have wriiten that I have read so far. I did note one typo when you used filler insted of filled her as in filled her mouth with his come. And I did not see any of your previous storys signature hte insted of the in this story, so you are now either spell checking your stories or have an editor. If you would like an aditional proof reader, I would enjoy that previage. While not working as one now I was a technical writer for 9 years. If you decine I understand, my reason to offer proofing your stories is to get to read them sooner, as i reraly like them. 75 27.10.03 Marty Flashback comments = Is a nice story .Is hard to find authors that think romantic stories are boring without a bunch of perverse if not plain perverted plot lines .Well just looked at your story page and see a couple that are a bit out my taste range but for the most part they look like some good stories. 76 27.10.03 Clara Breaking IN Party comments = lol...SICK.... 77 28.10.03 Surni Harem comments = I'm jealous as hell! 78 29.10.03 David reluncance to swing comments = You have a very nice style. I dont really like violent sex. 79 29.10.03 Rick relunctance to swing comments = I truly enjoyed this story. It's is well written and very stimulating and believable. 80 03.11.03 Danny harem comments = First, let me say I truly enjoy your writing. Suffice it to say several of your works are in my 'read again' archive. I realize RL often gets in the way of recreational writing, but I hope you continue to post. Second, of all your stories, IMHO, "Harem" begs for a sequel. Having read your comments I know you are considering one so I am just adding my vote. 81 10.11.03 t relun comments = reading your words tooking me to a totally throbbing experience. keep the good stuff coming. 82 10.11.03 Grace toys comments = Dear Eskimo1958, Over the past 10 years, I have read literally tens of THOUSANDS of erotic stories on the internet, books, magazines, you name it...... I've read nearly all of it! But let me just say here that " Toys " is one of the most fascinating stories I have ever read......... ever! I'm very sure that it is obvious to many people that you are an author a class above nearly everybody else in this genre. Let me just tell you that I really, really, enjoyed reading this excellent story, and being "involved" in this fascinating world that you have created for all of us...... Please keep writing MORE of your wonderful stories! ..... and thank you very much for brightening-up my day! My warm regards, Grace K. 83 10.11.03 liz cheryl comments = I loved it. It was really good, made me hot. I would have liked to have known what each of the guys looked like just a little bit more. Other than that, it was good. 84 13.11.03 chuck cottage comments = People with hyperthermia are excessively hot. Your folks were suffering from hypothermia, low temperature. You should really use a spell check. Probably a third of the paragraphs contain at least one serious misspelling. This is a serious impediment to reading -- and Word has a grammar check that might confuse you but make reading clearer. chuck 85 18.11.03 lindsay college comments = I really enjoyed this story and was wondering if this story was continued? 86 23.11.03 Fred Cotage comments = Just thought I'd let you know, this isn't the first of your stories I've read. I've enjoyed all your writing, enough, that I thought it time to tell you. Thank you much for writing and more to the point publishing your work. Fred 87 28.11.03 B Campdiary comments = Your stories are great but you need to run them ALL through a 'spell check.' The misspelled words are a distraction from the merits of the stories. 88 09.12.03 chuck Camp Diary comments = Your spelling is pretty good but the writing is repetitive and boring. 89 12.12.03 Jim Flashback comments = As a Vietnam Vet let me offer kudo's on a well written story, rarely do I get to see such a sensitive literary work of art. Hope you find Joku, His insight has allowed you to see what so many others can't (or won't) Please do not take offense..but as a writer I noticed that you need to proofread your art. (example: using I seen instead of I saw) But that did not mar in away the Brilliance of your word painting. 90 14.12.03 tphile stories comments = Hi Eskimo I can give you some possible reasons for you not getting much feedback. Its hard to know when you have a new story posted. It needs to be quick and simple and flawless. We can't gov by the ftp site dates since you reload all of them frequently. The Date in the index section is great but we have to scroll thru the whole page to find them. Some authors put new stories at the top of the page instead of in alphabetical order or a flashing NEW marker. Personally, I do not like having to search thru a site to find the new stuff. There are a lot of sites out there of favorite authors and it can be really tedious. Also the "but thats another story" ending on most of your stories can get very frustrating and annoying. The Bane for every reader is "to be continued" on an absorbing story and find its abandoned and never gets finished. I would rather see a whole story and if a sequel happens it happens. and if its a multipart story, thats fine as long as its not like a year between parts. btw you might consider posting to StoriesOnLine.com you can reach more readers there and with easy feedback 91 01.01.04 lew maggie comments = A great action story. Well told and riveting. Thanks for sharing it with us. 92 04.01.04 Jen stories comments = You have got to be one hot fuck baby ....... so in tune. I love the way you understand and communicate every shread of horniness. I would give anything to give you my hot, sweet pussy. I wrote a story about getting fucked by 6 guys on a pool-table one night, and posted it somewhere on this damned site. I was expecting lots of response .... which makes me think I did something wrong and it never got on the net. Whatever. I wanna be one of your gangbang whores. They are top-notch sluts. MMmmmmm..... Send me something hot ...... Jenn 93 06.01.04 Alabama Flash wife friend comments = DAMN GOOD IS ALL I CAN SAY 94 21.01.04 john patricias comments = Good story. The other couple on vacation added a first time twist and the gang bang was one of the best I've read. The ending was outstanding. Not enough writers have the women appreciate their husbands, boy friend or man. 95 24.01.04 Catherine Patricia vacation comments = Great story... hope you don't mind, but I had two nice little orgasms reading it :) 96 24.01.04 dave mollies boys comments = I loved the story. Not ofter does a story keep me hard all the way through but this one did. Maybe I identified with it since I am from a bit south of Indianapolis. I am afraid to show the stoy to my wife. She might get ideas. On second thought that would be a good thing. Your stories are great, keep up the good work, Dave 97 25.01.04 brian filling the house comments = Ecellent dream fantasy to those who enjoy impregnating our wives. Only finances stopped our family at three. This story warmed me up as what we call an artic blast is blowing from the north upon England 98 25.01.04 dave stories comments = Enjoy your stories -- keep up the good work -- i am not super critical .. but do find so many writers of erotica ofetn ignore good grammar ... frequent have no idea of verb tense .. and make horible spelling errors that it distracts from flow of story and I end up just clicking off link -- It is refreshing to find one that cares enough to try and pay attention to such things -- I share you backgroud .. born and raised in Illinois .. am 70-year old retired journalist -- taught some colleg writing courses ... but really don't claim to be an expert .. just a horny old fart-- 99 11.02.04 ken mollie's boys comments = I love this type of fun, hot, respectful sex between adults. I also love the groups, threesomes, and moresomes. Keep them coming. 100 20.02.04 revonic snowjob comments = great story.....did not see the ending cumming,so was surprised. i need a sequel or a continuing story. 101 21.02.04 joe convention comments = Very good reading thank you 102 24.02.04 jenny stories comments = Hiya poop head i know you atre like Lian gosh your such a poop head 103 05.04.04 charley filing the house comments = A truely Outstanding story as are most of yours.I hated to see you end it with a kind of a cold ending.We got to know the girls and you kind of left them short after they got back from the Lodge.You covered about 15 years or so in a short para.Lots of questions not answered.Look at Frank D. and what he has done with "Dance Of A Lifetime".I belive that Joe and the girls have a lot more to say. 104 10.04.04 Linda stories comments = I love your stories because they have some build up prior to sex. I would love to be on your mailing list for new erotica. 105 15.04.04 Lady widowerfun comments = One of the best stories i have read in a long time. Very well written with plot along with the story well told leading up to the sex. Very good. 106 20.04.04 Olive couplefun comments = Dear Eskimo1958, I have just completed reading Couple Fun, in its entirety for the third time. It is so nice that you have given us readers the opportunity to communicate to you how much your inspirational writing is appreciated. The story was totally uplifting to say the least. The characters seemed so warm and believeable. They are drawn is such a way that each and every one (except Mark) seems very attractive to this reader and others, I am sure. I found myself wishing that I could just enter the story and give each and every one a hug. As a 58 year old widow, I especially appreciated how you were able make characters of different generations appear very sexually attractive to the readers and to the other characters. You did a wonderful job of creating very exciting sex scenes. The characters all seemed so happy and well adjusted as they were almost constantly celebrating their own very healthy sexuality and that of the other characters as well. I have been widowed twice, in 1971 and in 1997. My late husband Jeff was much younger that me, but Our Lord and Creator chose to call him Home when he was only 41. We had six wonderful years, together. Jeff introduced me to swinging shortly after we married. We shared so many exciting experiences together, and with so many others. Even though I have always appeared to be the age that I am, Jeff had a way of making me feel really sexy and good about myself. With his loving encouragement I felt really good about approaching people of all (legal) ages as partners in passion. This letter is getting to long. I am sure that you are bored with my meandering thought. Please write if you get time Warm wishes and wet sloppy, lenghthy tongue kises. Olive 107 24.04.04 dwdirtydeejr1 garage comments = great story! frist story i took the time to read but the title and resyult fit perfect i love it. never read a story that long but it was great 108 25.04.04 anon couplefun comments = ...spellchecking and editing go a long way to improve the readability. Your readers will be much happier if you correct the verb conjugations - "I saw" instead of "I seen" and "it doesn't" instead of "it don't." There were countless mistakes of this nature, plus abysmal spelling mistakes. Sure, the content of the stories is what really matters, but these mistakes really detract from the enjoyment of their reading. 109 25.04.04 stewart stories comments = Your stories are quite well written, although I would like to have more facial semen shot themes: cum baths, glazed faces, drinking cum from glasses, I also like non-violent camping, swinging and large group family themes. A gangbang club might be fun. The bigger the orgy the better, especially with good set up. keep up the good dirt! 110 28.04.04 Jim stories comments = Just read some of your stories. Liked them a lot. You certainly have a sense of humor. I am also amused with your spelling!! 111 07.05.04 Rob Candy comments = I read your new story "candy..." - the 1st of your stories i've read - and, in my opinion, it was well written with a nice mixture of humor and insight along with the hot sex. I found the references to the Athens area intriguing as I am also from Ohio and familar with some of places mentioned in the story, ex, Hocking Hills and Old Mans Cave. It made the story more vivid. And while all these stories require some suspension of disbelief, this one had enough reality to the character's personalities to make the wild siutations more acceptable - nice touch! Thanks! and hope to enjoy more of your work! 112 08.05.04 JM candy comments = I rars is a quite well, written piece of work. Its both more realistic than mostm at least with the ammount of sex that happenes, and The people in it seem rather familiar...as if they are real peopl. Some would say the actions of the Families is unlikely in the extreme ( Which I disagree with, from personal experience, having been through a situation in some ways mirroring this when I was 16.) Looking forward to seeing a continuation of this story telling of life at the Shirley house. 113 22.05.04 x stories comments = THANK YOU VERY MUCH. 114 24.05.04 Bill CoupleFun comments= Hi Eskimo, I've been reading some of your stories on Asstr , and like them and your style very much. Perhaps, though, you might want to consider having someone edit them? Or at least do a "spell check"? Please keep writing. I don't mean to be critical, I'm just making a suggestion. Bill 115 06.06.04 anon husbands indes comments = This is the funniest story i have read here. Super job. A classic short story 116 06.06.04 Wilbur P Husbands indesc comments = Great!! 117 10.06.04 Gabe Candy comments = This story was fantastic, and I'd love to read more. 118 14.06.04 Guy impreg comments = What a piece of shit.This has got to be the worst story I have read in the past 5 yrs,After a lot of good ones you just had to jump down in the gutter and come up with this turd.God save us. 119 14.06.04 anon cabin comments = a real love store very good i loved it 120 16.06.04 tom homeschooling comments = That is a very hot story. I can hardly wait to read another from you. Sixteen kids, wow, I ahd a tough time keeping them al;l straight. 121 17.06.04 guy weekend comments = I have Read all your stories and I like them well enough to reread some 2 of 3 times.But I have a problem with this one, WHY did you write it?Is it a fuck story?If so,it stinks.Is it a Young-Old story?Again,not much.A divorced thirty-four year-old blonde,ten years of little or no dick.A great start that I am sorry to say it went down hill after that.I hope your next one is back to your normal high level. 122 18.06.04 blandseer hubbyplaything comments = Very nicely done story! It was erotic, and entertaining. Good job drawing your characters and their personalities. It always helps a story if the characters are believable and sympathetic. 123 18.06.04 anon hubbyplay comments = Just to let you know that someone out there is still reading your well written stories 124 19.06.04 vez stories comments = Just to let know---I tried your Feedback thingy----it did not work--- I was trying too tell your stories are top shelf!!!!!!!! 124 11.07.04 miro stories comments = Hallo,i must writte you after i was reading your story.I like it very much. I was very excited when i read that.I love reading sex stories.I imagine my girlfriend in the storie.She is very beatifull, but very shy.Please can you writte story about my girlfriend.I have oneThema that excited me incredible.Thanks for your answer. 126 12.07.04 Peter hubbyplaything comments = OO opening paragraphs so so near reality. Wonderful fantasy. Thanks for sharing your writing 127 07.08.04 Missy stories comments = hey dude u sound heaps cool how old r u well betta go catch ya l8er 128 18.08.04 John hubbyplaything comments = great story. Every mans dream. 129 24.07.04 Charley couplefun comments = It is hard for me to belive that a writer who has done a number of outstanding stories could write a piece of shit like this.I have to admit that your last few stories have gonr downhill some.But this one takes the cake for PISS POOR.Can you say,AIDS?Can you say SLUT?Can You say WHORE?I hope what your working on is better than this one and your other recent writtings. 130 03.10.04 H hubby plaything comments = Excellent story-Well written and a real thriller! It definitely increased my attention span.Write more of these! I particularly enjoyed the respectful treatment of the women-no "bitches",no abuse.A believable fantasy(how's that for an oxymoron?) hscros@aol.com </ym/Compose?To=hscros@aol.com&YY=41228&order=down&sort=date&pos=0&view=a&h ead=b> 131 04.10.04 cowboy parents comments = Basically a great story. Hard to understand how an observant teen age person wouldnt have figured out his parents lifestyle sooner. 132 04.10.04 Harold turning comments = Rough justice -- but true justice. When those who hurt others are hurt they scream the loudest. Keep it up! 133 04.10.04 chris parents comments = One of the best mid-size stories I've read. The group idea has always fascinated me, this has fueled the intrigue =) 134 05.10.04 anon paretns & carla Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle I like the opening of the story. However, swinging where more than 1 male is involve is not my style. When the story goes into that mood, I stop reading. Carla's Business Trip I like this stroy's plot. Very original. However, I'm not into 'inter' and sex involving more than 1 male. When story goes... Don't get the wrong ideas. Your stories have very good plots and that is what I'm after. Keep writing. I may not enjoy the sex but I'm very sure others would. Thank you for writting. Please keep those stories coming. 135 06.10.04 Chris college comments = I loved the story and how it was all unfolding, but did you ever write the continuation of it? if so could you drop me a link 136 06.10.04 TM parents comments = I liked this story as well. I don't mind having more than one male in the story. Heck, it might even be nice to have some MM action in it. Looking forward to more of your stories. Also, I think I would like to read your version of your friends finding their daughter and her new husband! 137 07.10.04 Alex Couplefun comments = Hi, i loved your story couple fun. Keep on writing! alex from Holland, europe 138 09.10.04 Bill relunctance comments = great story 139 09.10.04 d Jane comments = Very well done! I'm impressed. 140 10.10.04 Jack stories comments = Hey why no bi stories? Is that not your thing at all? Jack 141 10.10.04 scott grage comments = i,ve just finished six of your stories. i'm bad that way. pick an author and read for several hours. i definitely enjoy the style. plot,sex, and romance. no dogs, no incest, and no killing for violence. i continue to marvel at the quality of material on the internet. i'm disabled and this is much better than the library and i can change the print size and read to my hearts content. thnks so much......scott 142 10.10.04 scott carrie comments = hi again. i'm not sure if u like ga or not. i live an hour outside of atlanta near where your fellow with the empire should be. am still ejoying reading but have to leave for a wk in ms.......scott 143 11.10.04 mike parents comments = Any chance of continuing Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle? If so, I might suggest that since John has already made it with his cousin, that the story line drift in the direction of incest. 144 14.10.04 Charlie Greg comments = I really liked your story - the characters seemed very real & natural, and the dialogue was very realistic. I'm just jealous of Greg as I never had anything similar ever happen to me (I wish!!!!) However, I noticed that part of a line seems to be missing in the story when Carl and Greg are talking about Carl & Elaine having a baby. The end of the line was - ."v I said "Well, congratulations then." Please let me know if you correct the text as I'd like to keep a copy to reread from time to time. Thanks again for a great read. 145 15.10.04 Renee parents comments = Boy, that's John's a lucky man! Nice read! 146 15.10.04 Renee grace comments = This story was good, but it would have been GREAT if it wasn't for all the typos. 147 21.10.04 BIGBUNKYSR business trip comments = Hey. Great story, those guys missed that ass hole. 148 23.10.04 Bob homeschooling comments = This is a great story. In a similar cenerio, how about a Seventh grade (13-14 yr-olds) party i.e.:Halloween or Birthday with parents (chaperones) called away and The Kids left to their own games or devices. 149 24.10.04 anon gail comments = Excelent story. Well done. It's so good that there's nothing for me to comment except that keep up the good work and looking forward to your next stories/installment. 150 27.10.04 Don Greg comments = Why can't you and Carl, and Elaine, Krystal, Beth and Abby just all live together under one roof, naked of course, and fuck without restraint with anyone you want to fuck? To Hell with "marriage"(s), etc. Or maybe be married, legally so the babies are well provided for, legally, but just fuck at random, whenever, with you fathering both Abby's and Elaine's babies and Carl doing the same? And when you and Carl get too old to father babies any more, and Abby and Elaine reach menopause and can no longer get impregnated, perhaps the younger generation can make grandparents out of all of you. In the meantime as those babies grow into adolescence, you can fuck them, too, and make babies with them likewise. And with your acreage, you should be able to fuck in the grass, out in the trees, wherever, just like you were in one big nudist camp. 151 27.10.04 silkmaze stories comments = I really like the stories with a black female and white male. The standard stuff BM and WF is all the same. I also enjoy your preg stores. widower fun 2 vis chall 1 cabin 5 camp 2 wife friend 3 camp diary 1 carribe cru 6 April 3 Triplet Auct 1 Cindy 1 Cottage 1storyresponse