E.Z. RITER

Alphabetical Listing of Stories with Notes 
(As of August 23, 2000)

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ANNIVERSARY
MF Romance Hot. 
2800 Words. Originally posted in May 1998, rewritten and reposted in November 1999.   

A wife gives her husband a special gift for their anniversary.  It is a night to remember.  

David Rills, reviewing for Celestial Reviews, rated it 9, 7, 10, although he began his review
"God, I love this story."  It was CR's 20th for May 1998 (back when Celeste was doing monthly
ratings).  

In Rogue Review 41, Lee Vine rated it Outstanding.   

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BABY
MMF Humiliation NonConsensual Interracial Pregnancy Adultery.

7200 Words.  April 1998, rewritten in August 2000.

Sam loses everything gambling and he's in debt to his black bookie.  Sam's wife agrees to have
the bookie's child to settle the debt, but the story is more than that.  

On the original story, the reviewer for Celestial Reviews was R'khaan who rated it 7,7,7. 
R'khaan was notorious for giving low ratings to any story he reviewed.  The review itself was
more positive.  The story is much better than that, particularly after the rewrite. 

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BABYSITTER'S MOM
MFffm FF Incest Blackmail  April 1998.  

This was cute little blackmail and incest story, but it's in rewrite and won't be posted until
rewrite is complete.

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BACK IN THE SADDLE AGAIN
M+F+ Wife Consensual Gangbang Humor
7000 Words. April 1998, rewritten in June 2000.

Wil's wife has always dreamed of fucking a cowboy.  Wil and his boss help her make the dream
come true. 

No reviewed.    

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BAD GIRL
M+F+ FF  "Many but mild" story codes.  
3300 Words. April 2000.

A woman reading an erotic story on a plane meets the author and tells him she wants to be a bad
girl for the only time in her life.

In CR 363, Celeste rated it 10,9,9 and said it was "sexy with some interesting twists and turns."

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BALLBUSTER 
MF Ds BD Romance.  4700 Words.  February 1999.

He loves her but she was a bitch (even her mother said so).  She realizes she loves him and she
wants him back.  He sets out the terms.  I considered this a romance and was very surprised (and
disappointed) by the firestorm of controversy it created.  

In Celestial Review 316, Celeste attacked it as a sex slave story (it is not) and rated it 9, 5, 4.  I
thought Celeste was dead wrong and said so.  It's a romance.  

Lee Vine in Rogue Review 307, rated it Outstanding and said it "sizzles" and was "hot, hot, hot." 
He included in his "The Best of 1999."

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BASS BOAT
MF Adultery Light
2000 Words.  August 2000. 

A young wife deals with her husband's cheating the best way she can. 

Not reviewed. 

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BEST WOMAN (THE)
MFF Romance. 
3400 Words. June 1999.    

At a high school reunion, the wife sees her husband's interest in his old girlfriend.  The wife
invites the old girlfriend to have sex with them.  

Celeste gave it 10, 10, 10.  

Lee Vine in Rogue Reviews gave it a 7.5 of 10 and Good, saying it wasn't arousing, but it made
him think.  Lee hit way low on this one, but straight romance isn't his preference.  

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BOUND AND HELPLESS
MF Romance with very light consensual bondage.  
2100 Words. April 1998. 

My very first story posted.  It's a sweet teenaged romance which Celeste called "sophomoric"
although she rated it 9, 9, 9. 


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CAROL'S CHRISTMAS
MFF Incest BDSM Humor
1600 Words.  December 1998. 

A divorcee's children give her the Christmas present she really wanted.  

Not reviewed


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CAROL'S UNDERSTANDING
MMFFF Spanking Incest.  
4600 Words. April 1998. 
     NOT YET POSTED - IN REWRITE
Carol devises and implements a plan to trap her boss, who is the town's most eligible bachelor,
into marriage.  It's fast paced and "light".   

The guest review for Celestial Review was unfair and brutal, rating it 8, 6, 2.  He later privately
admitted "2" was a high ranking for him because he hated incest stories.  Not one of my best
stories, but much better than the review. 

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CATHY'S SENTENCE
MC, Psychological and physiological modifications.  
5400 Words. November 1999 as one of the ASSM Gala Reopening stories.   

When Cathy cheats and betrays Mr. Thompson, he hires a company specializing in correcting
those kind of situations.  I wrote it so the Gala would include a mind control story.  

In Celestial Review 345, Celeste gave it 10, 10, 10.  


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CHIP MALONE
MFFF Humor Spanking 
5400 Words.  July 2000

The story of a horny young man and the even hornier women he lives with.

Not reviewed by Celeste, Lee or LadyCyrrh, but received very favorable comment from others. 


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DEALING WITH A BASTARD
MFF, FF, Threesome.  
2700 Words. April 1998.  

The second story I posted, this is about a man having an affair with two women.  He connives to
make them a threesome.  

Celeste rated 9,9,9.


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DIANA'S SLAVERY (Parts One and Two)
Heavy Sado-Masochism.  Violent.  Warning!!  
4900 Words. April 1998.    

This is a violent story of a college boy using pain and drugs to make a sex slave out of the girl of
his dreams.     

R'khaan, reviewing Part One for Celestial Reviews, gave it a 5, 5, 4, but, remember, he had a
history of underrating stories and there were more than a few complaints about him in ASSD.  I
got a lot of e-mail from people they liked it and one e-mail saying I was a very sick person.  


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DOORS
MF Romance
750 Words.  May 2000.

A sweet story of a man and wife, and the passages in their lives.

Not reviewed.


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EVESDROPPING
MFF Adultery
250 Words.  1999.

A very short story about a woman overhearing her lover tell his wife of their affair.

Not reviewed.


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FREED
mfF Humor First Time
1600 Words.  2000.

The story of a young man who discovers what that thing is for. 

From Mary Jorsay Gandmar, guest reviewer in CR 359, 
"This is a first-rate example of a situation where the controversial rating 
system simply breaks down. How do you "rate" a story that's so terrific? 
Three perfect 10 aren't nearly good enough.


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FINDING BETSY
MF Romance
2800 Words.  June 2000

Two wounded birds fly together and heal.  A lovely little romance written for the "Ruthie's
Foursome" project.


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GARDEN (THE)
MF Romance. 
2900 Words.  May 1999.    

A man's wife has died.  He realizes his daughter's best friend loves him and that he loves her.  It
is a "really sexy story with almost no explicit sex." (Celestial Review 326).  

Celeste rated 10, 9, 9.5.  That's too low, but she'd just returned to active duty and was trying to
keep three ten ratings to a minimum.

Rogue Review 401 (Lee Vine) rated it 8 of 10 and very good.  He rated it low for lack of arousal,
which is not surprising since it had no sex to speak of.  Again, too low for a very sweet romance.

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HANNAH'S HUMILIATION
F Humiliation. 

4200 Words. April 1998.    

This story was written at the request of a female reader who specified the parameters. 

An older woman is humiliated by a younger, more attractive woman and her friends.   

Not reviewed.  I received little e-mail on it except from the woman for whom it was written.  She
really liked it.   It's a favorite download from my archive site.


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HEAT 
MF Romance Hot. 
1600 Words.  June 1998.    

This is a mood piece about two lovers doing what comes naturally.  Read it with someone you
love.  

In Celestial Reviews 290, Sven the Elder rated it 10, 9, 10. 


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JASON'S POWER 
MC Multiple Teen Incest Preg etc. Romance
10400 Words.  April 2000.

Jason can hyponotize anyone.  He hynotizes Cindy, the fifteen-year old next door who's the
narrator, and a host of others.  To no surprise since Jason's a teenaged boy, there's a lot of sex
involved. 

In CR 364, Celeste gave it 10, 10, 10

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KAREN 
MF Surrender Ds Romance.  
10,500 Words.  August 1999. 

Polly brings her fianc‚, Eric, home to meet her parents.  The next morning, Eric and Karen,
Polly's mother, began an affair.  

One correspondent of mine asked why I didn't use the reluctant story code.  I replied Karen was
eager, not reluctant.  

In Celestial Review 335, Celeste said it was a well written sex slave story, but she didn't "buy-
in" to sex slave stories.  She rated it 10, 8, 8.  She missed the point.  

In Rogue Review 414, Lee Vine rated it a 10 of 10 and Excellent (retroactively raised by him to
Outstanding).  He included it in The Best of 1999.    

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LAURIE
MF, Romance, a nice, sexy inter generational romance.    
3200 Words.  October 1999.
A man and his daughter's good friend, who is divorced and in her twenties, find romance.   

Celeste rated 10,10,10.  


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LITTLE FILLY 
MF Romance.  
1600 Words.  April 1998.

She meets a cowboy in a bar.  He invites her out to his ranch to breed with his stallion, which is
him.  A fantasy relating to horses, this is not a bestiality story.    

This was reviewed by LadyCyrrh who gave it an A.

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LONELINESS 
Revenge.
1600 Words.  June 1999.    

Cathy played around.  Her husband takes revenge.  

There is no sex in this story, but it is an erotic sex story.  

In Celestial Reviews 332, Celeste rated it 10, 10, 10. 


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MRS. BURNS
MmF Adul Cheating Blackmail Ds. 
3600 words.  February 2000.

Father and son plan some fun things to do together - like bonking the neighbor, who loves to be
bonked.  This one is fast and fun.

Celeste rated it 10,10,10


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MY INHERITANCE 
M+F+ Mind Control. Every story code except Pedo and MM.  
140,000+- Words. April-August 1998.

This is a 52-chapter 750KB epic about a young male college graduate (Davy) who inherits $20
million, a treasure hunt for a mind control formula, 3000 women programmed to be his sex
partners and two very special women who are his full time kittens (as the programmed women
are called).  While the story appears to be about mind control and sex, it really is about power
and its use, but the sex is plentiful.    

This story was never reviewed or rated, but it has generated more e-mail than all my other stories
combined.   On www.storiesonline.net, it has been rated by the readers as among the top 10
stories archived there since it was archived there. 

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MY BOSS' SLUT
M+F+ Slut Wife Adultery Pregnancy BDSM Prostitution Interracial and probably a few more.
45,000+- words.  April-August 1998. 

Becky and Bobby can't have children.  Bobby's boss offers to be Becky's stud if she becomes his
slut.  Becky accepts with elan.  This is a fast paced wild story with a happy ending.

Sven the Elder reviewed it in November 1998 during Celeste's hiatus.  He gave it an 8.5, 9.5, 10. 
This story is second to My Inheritance in reader e-mails.  


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NIGHT TABLE 
Humorous quickie.  
700 Words. July 1999.  

Written in response to a fun question Mat Twassel posted in ASSD, this is a short piece and a fun
read.  

In Celestial Reviews 334, Celeste gave it a 10, 8, 8.   I think that's low on the first eight.  It's too
short to have a "real" plot.


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PUNISHMENT FITS THE CRIME (THE)
MF Adultery BD Romance.  
3800 Words.  Originally posted in 1998 and reposted with slight modifications in June 1999.   

She commits adultery.  He wants to keep her but knows she must be punished.  

When originally reviewed by R'khaan for Celestial Reviews, he concluded "Good Job EZ", but
gave it 8, 8, 8.  Dave Myers for Celestial Review gave it an 8 on reposting.  

In Rogue Review 88, Lee Vine rated it Good.  

I think it's a better story than that, but I'm not going to argue with three reviewers.  I may rewrite
this some day.  It had some humor in it which was light, but was there.  


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RAPING HELENA
MF NonConsensual Rape(?)
4400 Words.  1998.

Helena and her husband lose a bunch gambling.  She agrees "to work it off."  The narrator rents
her and pays her debt.  This is the story of their first time together.   One lady I know said it was a
woman's rape fantasy.  I think it's a man's rape fantasy.

In CR, Kim, as guest reviewer, gave it a 10,10,0 but said it would be 10,10,10 except rapes have
no appeal to her.  Honest review, honestly written.  

In RR 294, Lee Vine rated it grudgingly good and said while he got aroused, it made his "skin
crawl".

The question is whether or not it is a rape, because the story is tightly written and very visual.       


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REEL MEN 
MF+ Adultery.  
1800 Words. June 1999.   

While his brother and the brother's friends go fishing, Jamie stays home with their wives.  

Celeste said "this is a really sweet story" (Celestial Review 330) and rated it 10, 9.5, 9.5.  Again,
that was in her not to many three 10s period.  


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SALLY AND ME 
This story just disappeared in the mass of ASS when ASSM was down.  It's in rewrite and not
included herein


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SHARING 
MFFF Romance Humor.
3500 Words.  October 1998.   

Jack likes sex every day.  Monica, his girlfriend, likes it twice a week.  Monica comes up with a
solution.  She shares Jack with her friends.  

Rated Excellent by Rogue Reviews (No. 169).


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SHARING KIM 
MMFFF FF Wife Sharing Exhibitionism Adultery. 
10300 Words.  November 1999 as one of the ASSM Gala Reopening Stories.   

Before he marries Kim, he tells her she'll have sex with his best friend.   

In Celestial Reviews 345, Celeste rated it 10, 10, 9.5, with the deduction apparently for the
problem of a man pushing his wife into adultery.  

In Rogue Reviews 257, Lee Vine gave it an 8.0 of 10 and a Very Good.  I think this is a little
low.


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SLAVES
Violent Sado-Masochism. M+Ff+ NonConsensual

A man who runs a breeding farm of women, who have babies that he sells, captures a mother,
Elise, and a busload of girls, including her two daughters, to add to his herd. 

Dave Myers, as guest reviewer in CR, did not rate it but gave it a tentative thumbs up.

LadyCyrrh in Annex Reviews gave it an A+, but said it was "too realistic and comples" to be
arousing. 


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SPEED
MF Romance. 
3100 Words.  May 1999.    

Suzy loves car and sex with her husband.  She combines both.  

In Celestial Reviews 317, Celeste rated this a 10, 9, 9.  I think that's too low.  This is one of my
favorite stories.


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SUELLEN'S WEDDING 
M+F+ Humor. 
2500 Words.  May 1998.    

This is an over-the-top humorous story about a rather wild wedding. 

The reviewer for Celestial Review obviously had a humorecotomy immediately before he read it
and gave it a 2 in a caustic review.  However, Wyyrd liked it and asked that I post it in his
www.hootisland.com site.  I also received some great mail on it.
  
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TRUST
MMF Adultery Cheating Anal Oral Prostitution 
6200 Words.   December 1999.    

I'm not sure of the story codes on this one.  

The wife's boss establishes very rewarding financial security for his mistresses, who are women
he selects to bear his children.  The wife wants to become his mistress so her children can have
the best possible genes.  Or is that what she wants?  

In CR, Celeste called it "very creative" and gave it a 10,10,10.  

In Rogue Reviews 472, Lee Vine rated it 9 of 10 and Excellent.  That surprised me.  I thought
he'd rate it higher.  However, he did include in The Best of 1999 so I really have no complaint.



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ULTIMATE MIND CONTROL (THE)
Mind Control, Humor. 
2900 Words. April 1998.    

This is a "silly but entertaining" little piece with a mind control theme that is "humorous rather
than sexy". (Quotes from reviewer).

A man who runs a company to program women to be sex slaves meets the woman he can't
program.   

DG reviewing it for Celestial Reviews gave it an 8, 9, 8.  


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V DAY
MFF Adul Cheating FF Preg
5300 Words.  February 2000.

A wife gives her husband the ultimate Valentine's present: her best friend whenever he wants
her.  And the wife asks him to make the friend pregnant.  But why?

In CR 359, Celeste gave it a 10, 10, 10 and said the story made her think and to "check it out."


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WANDA
Slut, Humor. 
2100 Words.  April 1998.    

Wanda is the ultimate slut and this is a story about her wedding day.  

Not reviewed.  Included in Wyyrd's hootisland site. 


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WINDOW
MFF Light

A man and his wife discuss whether they should have sex with her younger sister. 

Not reviewed.


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WINNING DENVER
MF NonConsensual(?) Romance(?)
5200 Words.  

Some of the stories I write aren't easy to fit into story codes and this is one of those. 

Chet's offered the opportunity to have sex with Denver if he pays off some of her gambling
debts.  But they fall in love.

In CR, Celeste gave it a 8, 5, 5, and said I should have worked harder to make this a good story. 
As a result, I wrote Raping Helena which was "one of the stories trying to get out" of this one.
I think Celeste's review was too harsh and so did a bunch of other people.  

You be the judge.  This one and Raping Helena might be read at the same time to see how an
author can and does change a story.        

