After one week of using FormMail to receive comments I had twenty-five responses. Prior to this, I hadn't twenty-five in five years! Please keep on responding, I appreciate the comments, good and bad. These are the comment's that I've received so far. Please add to it. I will not include email address's, for yours, and mine, own protection.

As you can tell, I've been recieving lots of nice comments, and very few negative ones. I've found that it's not neccesery to constantly repost my stories, seems you readers find them and enjoy. I will update this page and my bio page as often as I can, as I do like to post the comments, and make comments of my own. Thank you very much, and happy reading!

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I've decided to cut down on file size by writting new pages containing the coments sent by you readers. Each page has a hundred comments. I guess you can say this is an archive of what you readers have said about my works.

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    898  18.08.08  Terry  Impregnating My Wife
         comments = what a lucky bastard; wish she was my wife; only thing you didn't say was enjoying
         licking all that juice out of her. Good screwing for the future; if you ever decide to come to
         Aussie you'll be very happily welcomed !!!!!
         (Eskimo: LOL   Although wife and I would lve to visit Austrailia, this story was a total
         work of fiction.)

    897  17.08.08  Craig   Swingers Diary
         comments = what I liked about your swinging with cindy story besides the great visuals and getn
         off was the thought patterns of all the players and how cindy was a great spirit and you both
         communicated over and over lovingly, it was the conclusion thoughts that said maybe we found out
         the big picture between each others fantasies and moreso real human needs through I see that
         swinging was not necessary to do that; talking fantasy and living loving and hopefulness and
         laughter between a couple and even platonic couple parties for fun may or could have worked
         better. (yet if you had smaller equipment, I wonder?)
         (Eskimo: I sent your message to Cindy(not her real name), she sent a very thankful reply.
         Her and her husband(I can't remember the name I used in story) are doing very well, and are
         still happily married with no desire to enter the swining lifestyle again. They still are part
         time nudists (Like my wife and I), and enjoy that when they have the chance to go enjoy life
         sans clothes.)

    896  05.08.08  Jason  Doug's Good Fortune
         comments = Great story, any hope of getting more stories based around Doug?
         (Eskimo: Probably not...try using your imagination, works for me.)

    895  24.07.08  Dave  Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
         comments = I wish I could find a way to talk my wife into geting bread  by a good looking black
         man. Do you have any suggustions
        (Eskimo: Yeah, how about just dropping her off at a black bker bar on a Satruday night
        after you've gotten her good and drunk...oh wait, you want tot alk her into it, never mind!)

    894  21.07.08  Guy  Teen Bride
         comments = Good,I am glad to see you back to your Older male,Younger Female story line.Some of
         your best stories are these.
         (Eskimo: Ah, Guy...one of my favorite critics....and yes, I do tend to do thees type of
         story's well...but I enoy writing good old fashioned fuck works too! :)

    893  07.07.08  Kenneth  Beginning Of A Harem
         comments = Dude you know how to write the most incredible story EVER! For the whole story, i
         thought i was the guy! you should become a writer or something =D
         (Eskimo: Amazing the responses I get soem times.)

    892  02.07.08  Snib  Teen Bride
         comments = Great Story!  Good to see you writing again, especially on the subject of southern
         girls. One more to add to my collection.
         (Eskimo: I'm really surprised this one didn't get mroe response, oh well...)

    891  30.06.08  Maj32 Doug's Good Fortune
         comments = Doug's Good Fortune was a great story.  It was so addictive I had to stay up
         and finish it before I went to sleep.  Is there any chance of you writing a sequal to it?
         (Eskimo: A sequel? Highly unlikely...if it hasn't become obvious to you all, but it's
         unfortunate that I have the time to write anymore. I've probably over 130 story's that I've
         started and yet to finish.)

    890  30.06.08  Justin  Toys 1
         comments = that was amazing, exhilarating and very erotic story.  picturing it was almost as
         good as the real thing, lol.  ur a great story writer and im gladly going to advance to
         part 2 2moro

    889  23.06.08  Nick  Campground Sluts
         comments = this story was great!!!! it seems so real! Everything about it is top notch!!!!!

    888  22.06.08  Alvin  Teen Bride
         comments = What happened in Georgia? What became of the lawsuit? Did any of the officials go
    	 to jail? or lose everything? Money, homes, land? Otherwise an excellent story! Welcome back!
    	 (Eskimo: LOL What the fuck? You a lawyer? Actually, I decided not to add mindless legal
    	 nonsense to the story.)

    887  22.06.08  Frank
         comments: You are actually a very good writer but there are several things that drive me
    	 crazy -- the grammar and the spelling.
         Modern word processors have both grammar check and spell check. If these were used a lot (not all) of these problems would go away.
         Now I can not be the first to say this and I am sure this is not welcomed news. The thing
    	 that is interesting is if these issues became less bothersome, then your real writing
    	 capability  would become more apparent and your writing talents would grow.
         Why do you think this is not happening?
         (Eskimo: Frank's missing the point here of why I write.....)

    886  22.06.08  JR  Teen Bride
         comments = I really like your stories. They generally have a realistic quality that I enjoy. I just
    	 finished reading “Teenbride”. There are a few typos which detract a bit. I think your talent
    	 should not be allowed to be diminished by such distractions. Great story though. Keep it up!
    	 (Eskimo: That's noting, you shold read the next comment! Anywya, thanks for the praise
    	 and understanding...after all, this isn't my way of maing a living, just a way to make others
    	 achieve a healthy outlok on love, sex and their own body.)

    885  21.06.08   anon  Impregnating My Wife
         comments = after reading half of the story..it made me sick..one question..how on earth could
         u let allthose men fuck ur woman..ur asick person getting exited from something like that..
         two..how do yuo know if out of all these men..maybe one had aburst kondom..?What kind of man
         are you that cant satisfie ur woman. Four..i feel very sorry for your kids growing up in such
         an invironment..five..why would any normall person tell astory like this on the internet..both
         of you neeed help..sexadicts is one thing coming to mind..trust me there are other ways of
         getting attetion then fucking ur brains out..Please have somebody adopt ur children. Nasty
         freaks..and one last comment..ur hoe..oh sorry wife needs to get tested..regurlar..
         (Eskimo: ROFL...not only is he shy, he can't even spell correctly, and then there's his
    	 grammar! Pelase, I don't want anyone giving me any mroe shit about my spelling and grammer, not
    	 when there's morons out there that send me this garbage...guess he doesn't know the meaning of
    	 fantasy....probably another Bush supporter.... )

    884  21.06.08  Keith   Impregnating My Wife
         comments = This has got to be one of the sexiest, horniest stories I have ever read.
    	 And in my 65 years
    	 I have read a lot!  That must be one horny wife you have there.  Lucky guy!
    	 (Eskimo: I love this job! teh idiot that wrote comment #885 hated ths one. )

    883  17.06.08  Frank
         comments = 1.  It's catEgory, and the plural is categories.
         2.  The apostrophe is almost NEVER used to form a plural.  It denotes possession.  Try's
    	 is not a word. The correct spelling is tries.
         Thanks for your effort.
         (Eskimo: Um, yeah, I'll get right on it....)

    882  15.06.08  Roger  Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
         comments = i love mfm . Lts see 2 goes into 1 three ways.  I love to hear more,.
         (Eskimo: Glad you liked it, and you can read more of my works anytime right here!)

    881  14.06.08  Tony  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
         comments = No you didn't add too many characters.  This storey was AWESOME.  I new he
    	 would end up fucking Anna.  I just didn't expect your little surprise of her being a
    	 virgin.  Keep up the great work man.  I have seen ALOT worse in Hustler and Playboy.
    	 This story was fantastic.  Hope to read more soon.

    880  11.06.08  Rajeesh  April
         comments = Very nice hot and sexy story. Good work
         (Eskimo: I've actually started two sequels to this one...and have gotten no where!)

    879  08.06.08  Matt  Meadow View Court
         comments = Nice erotic story - almost believable, too.  Except for the population
    	 explosion, a great time was had by all.
    	 (Eskimo: Beleiveable? Well, okay....)

    878  08.06.08  Frank  Rita's Friendly Neighbors
         comments = Nice premise.  I share your interest in nudity.  Glad you work it in, as at
    	 the dinner table.
         Could do a sequel, with the two boys' girl friends enjoying the action as well as Rita
    	 and Julie.  Julie's husband could pleasure the girl friends as well.
        (Eskimo: I tend to refuse to do sequels.)

    877  05.06.08  Rick  Celinda
         comments = great story would love to see more chapters of it. you have an easy flow to
    	 your stories and they seem to be about real people someone i can relate to being in my
    	 late 40's myself. keep up the good work. thank you.
    	 (Eskimo: I usually try to make things realistic in my works...then sometimes, pure
    	 fantasy takes over lol.)

    876  05.06.08  Mike  Happy Birthday
         comments: This story needs to be reformatted to put in carriage returns for the end of lines.
         (Eskimo: yeah,yeah,yeah...I took care of this problem.....)

    875  05.06.08  Lamont  Happy Birthday
         comments = I enjoyed your story -- quick and dirty (Yay!). It's the
    	 first I've seen with your name on it. Are there others??
         A little editing would make it an easier read, however. There are some spelling problems,
    	 maybe a typo here and there but the most disconcerting is that you change back and forth
    	 from present to past tense. (Compare the 1st and 2nd paragraphs.)
    	 (Eskimo: I didn't pen this particular peice, and I obviously screwed up while
    	 editing it. I should have done a better job, however, I'll leave it as is for the time
    	 being.)

    874  05.06.08  Joel   Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
         comments = very interesting story. not so far
    	 fetched, really. love is the basis of christianity, so...
    	 (Eskimo: Hmmm...interesting response.)

    873  05.06.08  anon  Happy Birthday
         comments = I can't yet comment on the content, since the formatting is so bad.. i have to scroll right
         to read what appears to be a very long line..
         (Eskimo: Ooops! I fucked up...I've since corrected the problem.)

    872  01.06.08  Gary  Bonnie
         comments = Great story.  It just proves you don't need a bunch of sex to make great entertainment.  Thanks.
         (Eskimo: I liked writting this one, as it did have a good story line.

    871  30.05.08  Joe  A Slave's tale
         comments = i really love your storry, but i with you let Hardy keep
         Samantha  two girls as well.o, please write more for us.
         (Eskimo: I've kicked around hte idea of a sequel...but God, do I ever hate
         sequesls!)

    870  28.05.08  Harold  Doug's Good Fortune
         comments = I loved it.  It's not often that the "less than attractive"
         guy gets the action, particularly if he is part of the geek culture.
         This one was great and more would be even better.
         (Eskimo: This one was pure fantasy, inspred by a cruise my wife
         and I partook in this past winter. And I agree, as since I'm part of the
         "less than attractive" crowd, it's awlays ncie to see one score big...and, there
         have been a few times that this has happened to me, but not on such a scale
         that I wrote here.)

    869  27.05.08  Red  Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
         comments = that was a good story. but definately need to continue on
         with the story line. what happens with Adam and Pamela? does he stay
        with mom, go with the wanna be nudist with the awesome hoo-hoo's, the hot
        little fire fox, or will he accept the beautiful daughter of the
        mother that wouldn't mind having him for a son-in-law.

    868  24.05.08  Jeremy  Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
         comments = your stories are something else, from 1-10 I give it a 12.

    867  22.05.08  Bryan
         comments = I have just read a couple of you stories. I like them. I
         have posted about thirty stories and like you I try to put a plot, or
         some
         interesting dialogue. I agree with what you say that you get better
         with time and practice.
         I wrote non-fiction before and had four books published. This type of
         writing requires new skills.
         (Eskimo: Thank you for the comments. One of the hardest things to do is to
         come up with new plots, and to make a story not sound like one that's already been
         written.)

    866  15.05.08  Maria  The Cottage
         comments = CAN'T STOP PLAYING WITH MY PUSSY--GREAT STORY.
         (Eskimo: Well, a pciture of you playing youerself would be greatly
         appectiated..as long as you're over the age of 18 of course.)

    865  11.05.08  Thos  Wingman
         comments = I've just discovered your stories and immeditely read
          several -- they're simply great! It's too late in the night to expand on that
          comment, but I'll certainly be reading them all and may get back to
         you with specific comments on why I like them so much.
         I do have one nit-picking complaint, however. Like so many other
         non-professional (American?) writers, you seem not to have been taught when
         to use "XX and I" and when to use "XX and me". To figure out which to
         use, try replacing the phrases with either "we" or "us", or try dropping
         the "XX and". 'Sandy and I  looked at each other' is grammatically
         correct (We looked..., I looked..., Sandy and I looked...); 'a conversation
         with Diane and I' is not: (... with us, ... with me, ... with Diane
         and me).
         (Eskimo:  Ohhhhh noooooo! It's the fuckin grammer police!....oh well,
         at least you enjoyed the story.)

    864  11.05.08  Donald My Big Trouble Making Cock
         comments = I'm sitting here with a smile on my face softly chuckling to
         myself.  Great story!  I read the first few paragraphs and was going
         to stop, but I try not to guess/judge stories until the end.  I'm so
         glad I did that!
         Several times in this story, I found myself actually laughing out loud.
         One of them was the scene with first session before the Deans and the
         president.   Hilarious.  Yes, I knew the jokes were coming as I read
         them, but the timing and words still made me laugh.  Great work.
         The ending was interesting.  Most of the time, the authors delve into
         the "other" path that a story like this could take.  Thank you for not
         trying to make a moral statement at the end (well, for not going into
         those other moral judgements/ending).  I did find it amusing, too.
         "Serves them right for ruining a good thing" came to mind many times.  No,
         that's not a nice thing to think, but, it is true.  In real life, I
         would probably think the same.
         Anyway, thank you for a great read and for helping me relieve some ...
         stress  .... and relax on this raining Sunday afternoon.   hehe  Like
         John, I now need a nap too.
         (Eskimo: I webt and edtitred it again, but I'm not syaing it is still
         without errors.)

    863  09.05.08  Peter  Jimmy & Cindy
         comments = This looks like one of your earlier stories. I enjoyed it,
          but it was written so quickly and not edited that it leaves the reader
          very confused at points.
         The transition between Jimmy and Cindy sometimes happens mid-sentence
         because of writing speed. Either that or the Jimmy/Cindy cue is missing
         or not formatted.
         I think it is really worth your time to take this one and plan some
         time to re-edit and repost it.
         Suggestions: Make the Cindy.Jimmy transitions clearer by either putting
         the transition sections in CAPS or <>.

         Yes, I think that looks better than caps.
         Then do a review for grammar errors. Most of your stories are a lot
         cleaner than this. It won't take much time and it will be a lot easier on
         the reader.
         Plot: You really don't have to change a thing. The plot is interesting
         and complex with a lot of changes. By the end of the story you get a
         lot better at showing us surprises with the change in point of view. If
         you re-write we might find out some new things that would surprise us.
         But really, you don't have to change anything.
         One note: Your story is really unusual in the ASSTR world because it
         deals with the childlessness issue. That hits many couples and women
         particularly hard. If you did do a re-write, you could spend even more time
         on it. Also, how you dealt with Cindy's self examination of her high
         school pattern behavior as an adult was good. Very good. And most
         surprising.
         I think overall, my feeling was that this was potentially an award
         winning story that did not win one because it was written very quickly.
         Maybe it was a contest challenge? At any rate, why not take the time to do
         a rewrite sometime and beef it up a little. There is nothing wrong
         with the sexual descriptions. Your sense of emotion is great. You might do
         a tiny bit more with the VOY feelings in the last lake scenes.  But
         all in all, the best thing would be a pass for grammar and Point of View
         clarification.
         I've read a bunch more of your stories since my last note and continue
         to enjoy them. Like all writers, I put out internet stuff without too
         much editing sometimes too. I can't tell you how many times I've hit
          on my blog the gone DAMN! And had to immediately fix 6-10 little
         typos.  I am getting better at waiting a day and then posting. This helps
         because the new eyes I have then really do spot new things.
         Thanks again.
         P.S. I loved the Big Man with woman concept in the biker stories. Big
         men don't get the good writeups they need. Would not mind seeing one
         with a Big Guy  with a redhead and blonde tall both, who meet in the woods
         or camping, or watching kids play t-ball....
         (Eskimo: Whew! I thought he would never get done writting! Actually, I
         am grateful of your comments. However, at teh top of the story, you would see that
         I am not the author. I will passthe note along to Anne, as it is one of her works.)

    862  09.05.08  Bruce   Rosa
         comments = I liked your story a great deal. Good build up, with some
         hot sex plugged in at good places. (One does read these stories for sex,
         even if it's not the only thing that's enjoyable about them!) I liked
         the characters. Realistic. You're a good writer. Proofreading would've
         lead to fewer distractions.
         Thanks for having the story available for me to read.
         (Eskimo: Obviously, proofreading is not one of my better points.)

    860  09.05.08  Guy  Doug's Good Fortune
         comments = Well Done!!! A very good start.Glad your able to  write/type
         again.
         We enjoyed the story and are looking forward your next one.
         (Eskimo: Okay, who kidnapped Guy and is sending comments in for him?)

    859  08.05.08  Bruce  Olive
         comments = ...how do ya' like that?!
         Nicely written story, with hot sex.
         It's all to rare to find a realistic, hot and well-written story with
         an older man or woman who is genuinely sexy. Thanks for reminding me
         that such stories exist.
         (Eskimo: This story has been around for a while, but it's always been
    	 well liked.)

    858  08.05.08  anon  Martha
         comments = Good reading. PLEASE USE SPELL CHECK................ON ALL
         OF YOUR STORIES.   Thank you.
         (Eskimo: Spel check doesn't always work that well....get over it.)

    857  08.05.08  Dave   Doug's Good Fortune
         comments = I really like that most of the participants were respectful,
         loving and considerate.
         (Eskimo: Well, looks like I'm back...for one anyway....)

    856  08.05.08  Stact  Cindy's Quest
         comments = One of the few erotic stories that tied sex in with a story
         line that truly had me glued to the screen. Very few erotic stories are
         anything more than fuck stories. This one is so much more. You are an
         excellent author
         (Eskimo: God, I love praise!!!!)

    855  08.05.08  GG & TC  Doug's Good Fortune
         comments =    Doug`s story is GREAT and I see you are back in great
         writting style. Keep writting look forward to next story. This is a 10 of
         10 story !!!!!!! GG & TC
         (Eskimo: oI was sort of worried that I made this one a bit too unrealistic, I mean,
    	 six women in all? Waht the hell did this guy eat? Besides pussy, of course.)

    854  08.05.08  Peter  Monica
         comments = I've spent a good deal of this morning reading a number of
         your stories and as a writer myself, I thought I should tell you how
         much I enjoyed many of them. While some of the elements are not always to
         my personal taste, your writing style itself and warm rich character
         development has made all of those I have read far more enjoyable than
         many stories I read.
         Monica for example, has great heart in it. That's what I like about all
         of your stories, they all seem to have great heart and that makes me
         enjoy reading them all the more.
         I've only read about 10-15% of your stories today, and already I know
         that I will be back for more soon. I think that you should really be
         working on mainstream novels - perhaps you do already and this is only
         your sidleline for juicier stuff, but really there is nothing much more
         graphic than many of the Harold Robbins books, you seem to be the right
         age to remember when those were THE books.  So why not go for it?
         Or perhaps try to get an editor interested in publishing a collection
         of your short stories?
         You may not think you are ready, but you are.
         You might wonder why anyone would BUY a collection of your stories when
         they are already available online. The fact is that reading with a
         computer is just not as comfortable as reading with a book.  I bet ASSTR
         has some way of determining how many stories are read by each Author, at
         least at a minimum how many pages are loaded, this might be good
         evidence to try to get an agent with.
         Again, even as a book author as need be you could publish under a
         psuedonym. If it was good enough for the Nancy Drew books...
         Say, while I'm at it, you might try a humorous satire about a sexy
         inquisitive girl named Nancy and her first time with her boyfriend Ned. The
         Secret of the Young Cock? Adventure on Larkspur Lane?
         Thanks a lot.
         (i>(Eskimo: Actually, a few years back, a adult publisher did approach me about
         publishing some of my works in one of those monthly things that you would find in
         adult bookstores. The payout wasn't great, think it was $25 per story, and  I
         almost went trhough with it. And no, I don't write anything else but porn. I get bored
         way too easily to write anything beyond a short story, so a novel is out of the
         question.)

    853  08.05.08  Dave   Doug's Good Fortune
         comments = Loved it, especially the ending!

    852  08.05.08  Marlon   Rosa
         comments = Wow, two stories in one morning, and again a well written
         one. As I stated before I love stories of MILF and younger men, and you
         certainly know your subject.
         One thing I've noticed of authors on this site is their reliance on the
         spell check button, which in no way enhances your stories.  Please do
         not take this as criticism but rather as a critique of a modern day
         electronic writing.  It is disconcerting to be reading a pleasant story
         and to be stopped short and have to go back and read the sentence again
         because the word written is not the word intended.  If you have editors
         then they should catch these mistakes but if you need somebody to vet
         your work then you should have access to readers who are willing to do
        this for you.
        Thank you for the story though, any sexual content in your writings, is
        very satisfying to a 43 yr old woman who has fantasies of younger well
        hung men.

    852  08.05.08  Marlon  Mrs. Driggs
         comments = I really enjoyed this fast paced short story.  Well written
         about one of my favourite subjects, MILF and younger men, and all legal
         and consensual. What older women want with none of the emotional
         attachments, just plain ole fuckin' with two horny young guys who can go on
        forever.

    851  08.05.08  Rich  Amusement Park Adventure
         comments = Thanks a great story.  I thought it was a little slow to
         start but once it got going it was a great Read.  Looking forward to
         hearing the rest of the story.
         (Eskimo: glad you liked.)

    850  03.05.08  Jim
         comments = At 78, I'm finishing up a 75,000 word autobiography about my
         sex life.  It started with Sally Rand at the Chicago World's Fair in
         1934... My wife and I are bisexual and have an open marriage, love each
         other and have been married 54 years, so I have a lot to write about.
         But have you ever heard or read of such a project?  I may publish if
         enough persons believe it would be of value.  The names would change to
         protect the "innocent."  Thanks for your thought.
         (Eskimo: Interesting note, however, he's 78 now, he would have
         only bn 4 in 1934....things that make you go 'hmmmmm'.)

    849  01.05.08  Mark  Celinda
         comments = Celinda was the first that I've read of your stories but I
         don't think it will be the last. You don't read many 'Adult' stories
         these days with such a compelling storyline. My only complain is that it
         should have been longer.
         (Eskimo: In regards to making the story's longer, I get that a lot,
         but I tend to get bored with the story, and whnt to finish it. Amazingly,
         they still read okay....usually.)

    848  01.05.08  Leon  A Slave's tale
         comments = Superb story, and so well written. The master's wife when
         she came back home, would have been erotic making it with Hardy and or
         maybe her daughter.
         Anyway, a very very entertaining read. THANK YOU VERY MUCH
         I'll now have a go at some of your other stories
         (Eskimo: I played around with that thought of includng the master's wife
         or daughter, but opted out for it. I decided the way I told it would be more
         beleiveable.)

    847  29.04.08  Beth
         comments = I am a new reader, enjoy all the stories.  Started to read
         some of the comments and who is the dude named Guy?  He sounds like a
         real pain in the ass.  I think he is not too happy with the way the
         world  runs.  If one doesn't like, don't read. Simple. I enjoy the different
         reads.  All the different types of writings.  Looking forward to more.
         (Eskimo: I'm glad you've enjoyed the many variety's of my works. I try to
         provide somethign dierent each time, which is probably  one of the many reasons
    	 why I have not posted anything new in a while. As for Guy, I find him and his
    	 rants mildly amusing, which is probably why I post his comments here, for
    	 others to enjoy.)

    846  28.04.08  John  College Graduation Present
         comments = What a great story, it reminded me when I first left home.
         I came from the Bronx, New York.  I started work at the age of 21 in
         Washington DC.  One night at a club I met this woman who was 36 years
         old.  I met her at 8 p.m. and by 9 p.m. we were heading for my motel room.
         I did have romance sex with prior girlfriends, but this was my first
         and only marathon.  Your story brought back wonderful memories.
         At the age of 66 it is mostly memories now.
         (Eskimo: This was a 'what if..' story, thanks in part to a chance meeting at
         a small town college between yours truly and an older woman. No, there was no sex, but,
         what if...?)

    845  25.04.08  Robert  A Slave's tale
         comments =  i like all your stories but my favorite to date is a slave
         tale keep up the good work
         (Eskimo: If I was to re-write this one, I would most likely make it
    	 longer. In my opinion, there were more chapters there, just waiting to be
    	 written.)

    844  23.04.08  Lorenzo   Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
         comments = I loved ur story and i thnk it was so good wat a pitty 1 of
         thows kids wernt mine i love u mwha
         (Eskimo: Okay, I'm back to oasionaly posting the comments. I guess reading the wonderfully
         penned works of some of my fans drove me to it. Maybe I'll even finish a work
         before summer starts.)

    843  15.04.08  Guy
         comments =  Nothing since Dec 07 ? Did I drive you out with some of my
         comments on some of those trash stories you submitted ?.You are too
         good a writer to put out some of these later stories.i.e.,A Slave's
         Tale,Trained By Uncle Joe,Campground Sluts,and Julie & Rachel.I have to ask
         why,when you also wrote,Bonnie,Martha,Pizza Shop Intern,and Becoming A
         Nudist.In any case,I read all you publish,good or bad( by my
         standards).So,get with it and let us see something new.
         (Eskimo: Ahhh Guy, nice to hear from you....December 7th? Don't remember that one,
    	 must have been while I was uncer the influence of those painkillers. A couple
    	 of surgeries later, and I'm starting to feel like typing again, maybe. I'm
    	 obviously not going to apoligize for lack of material, or quaility for that matter,
    	 but as usual, life has thrown me a few curves in the liine of health and carrier
    	 issues. The latter has involved a hell of a lot more hours than I am accustomed
    	 to, and I had to cut back somewhere to get more important things accomplished.
    	 The former hasn't helped, as I couldn't type all that well to begin with, and with
    	my injury, it made it even more difficult. Will I finish any thing? Who knows. Check
    	back from time to time and find out. Hell, I haven't even updated my comment page since
    	August, where does the time go?)

    842  30.08.07  Maxine  story's
         comments = the stories are so real, such a feeling of warmth, my friend
         and I love reading them afetr school... please write some more
         (Eskimo: It's nice to hear that at least some of our youth take time to read.)

    841  28.08.07  Henk  Canoe Trip To An Orgy
         comments = Loved the Dorset and Kawagama refrences!
         (Eskimo: Alright! Someone that actually knows the palce mentioned in the story! Glad you
         liked it. This was one of my earlier works, and I don't think it was one of the good ones.
         Probably not even in the top half, actually. I think I sort of put too much sex into
         this one, although the story line itself is pretty good.)

    840  27.08.07  Peter For Profit  story's
         comments = Came across your story online about you and your wifes sexual adventures.
    	 Would lobve to see a picture of her. You have some kind of woman.
         (Eskimo: My wife is flattered for the itnerest, however, she flatly
         refuses to have her picture sent out or posted.)

    839  23.08.07  Joao  Widower Fun
         comments = Very hot. I love it.  :o))

    838  23.08.07  D  Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
         comments = awesome story , i actually jerked off just reading some of
         the stuff. just so yah know , even a 22 year old appreciates a nice
         story as it has been known in the past that us young men do not.
         (Eskimo: Nice to see that this story provided some stimuli for
         someone.)

    837  21.08.07  Snib  Pizza Shop Intern
         comments = Found the other religious bigot I was thinking of, he's in
         Cindy's Quest.  I had forgotten that he was a religious bigot hidding
         behind a pulpit.
         Great story!  Just to my liking.  Strange romance with plenty of
         twists.  Like Beating Off Bob you can be pretty sure that the female lead is
         going to be pregnant by the end of the story, but the way you get there
         is always interesting!  I am amazed at all the ways you find to
         advance the story.  Donna's adventure was a twist I didn't expect.
         (Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed the story's. I'll probably keep
         on writting, just maybe fewer and farhter in between works. My creativity and
         patience has been lacking of late, and it's hard trying to come up with something
         new each time.)

    836  21.08.07  Snib  Bonnie
         comments = Great story!   Enough story and adventure to keep the story
         moving whith some sexual tension to make things interesting.  I sort of
         knew where the story was going but there were enough quick turns to
         keep it interesting.
         I don't really know what to call Beverly's brand of Christianity, maybe
         religious bigotry?  I remember you using the same type characters in
         Justice For Megan and one other story where the bigot's tried to get
         custody of some children and the congregation ran the pastor out of town.
         It is sad that there are people who label them selves as Christian but
         don't have the faintest idea of the love of Christ.
         Hope you enjoyed your "retirement"!  It looks like you are going after
         quality over quantity which is fine with me!
         (Eskimo: I try to make my works interesting, and even though the ending is
         probably very evident, it's the path to it that I try to keep the readers guessing.)

    835  13.08.07  Mork  Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
         comments = Hi..I did read you story and I like it. There is any second
         part ? Sincerely..Mork (Patagonia - Chile).
         (Eskimo: No second part planned, sorry.)

    834  11.08.07  Griff  Bonnie
         comments = good yarn.!!

    833  11.08.07  Ralph  Bonnie
         comments = Great stories. I especially like the nudism story lines.
         From your writing I suspect you know the scene personally. At least I
         hope so,as I am forming much of my imaging of that setting based on what
         you have written about it. It is an experience I have often wished for
         but not had the opportunity.
         (Eskimo: It's a safe bet to say that yes, we've expereinced the nudist lifestyle. We
    	 still do practice it from time to time, but not nearly as often as we once did. And for
    	 those interested in it, you can find plenty of resources at such sites like AANR.com.)

    832  11.08.07  Jim  Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
         comments = Ive read 3-4 stories toay an an only say thank you for your
         great tallent at telling a story.  It was so clear I could picture
         myself there as a bug on the wall watching and enjoying.
         (Eskimo: Funny you mentin that...I've found the one major thing that helps me
    	 write, is to visulize the situation, as if I'm there watching the action unfold in front
    	 of me. Yes, this is fantasy working, but a healthy fantasy at that. This is probably why
    	 I have so many works started and unfinished, as I then start thingking about other
    	 ideas and move on to them.)

    831  10.08.07  Hopeless Romantic  Bonnie
         comments = This 'Hopeless Romantic' is delighted with your story, even
         if their first intercourse was delayed until they were properly
         married.
         (Eskimo: Easily explained, she has six kids! And they kept getting interupted.)

         [as she grabbed a sheet and threw it over us both, not bothering to
         even disengage from me]
         I frankly think that the older girls ought to get used to seeing their
         mother and stepfather having sex when they walk UNANNOUNCED into the
         marital bedroom, particularly after visiting a nudist camp. Even better
         yet, such moments ought to be used later on as a springboard for rather
         frank discussions about sex and marriage.
         (Eskimo: Hmmm....well for starters, I don't think Bonnie would have gone for
    	 a 'frank talk'! Maybe alone without Stephen, but not with him. He had that with
    	 Randy in the story.)

         [The conception took place the first month of our marriage]
         At age 35 more or less?  I think that it would be more realistic and
         indeed more interesting if conception didn't occur for a few months.
         Nevertheless, it is important to me that they had intercourse so frequently
         that they were never able to figure out just which time led to
         conception.
         (Eskimo: Six kids in sixteen years, I don't think reproducing was one of
    	 her weak points.)

         [Beverly still lives with us]
         I am really surprised because I really expect Beverly to be the kind of
         person to carry her grudges for a lifetime. Indeed, it might have even
         been necessary to use the proceeds from Stephen's house to buy her a
         little cottage across town if not further away. Indeed proximity to
         Beverly's church may have been an even more important factor so that her
         congregation could support her in maintaining her great anger for a
         lifetime! :-(
         (Eskimo: The proceeds from selling Stephens house went for the addition
    	 to Bonnie's house. I ignred Bev for the most part towards the end, because her type
    	 should be ignored.)

    830  10.08.07  Joe  Pizza Shop Intern
         comments = You DO write some of the best stories.  The sex AND story
         line are fun.  Human.  And pretty rare.
         Thanks.
         (Eskimo: I really did thought about adding more to this one, but decided againt it. I
         tend to hate longer wors as I thnik the readers tend to get bored and move on to
         something else. A short story, with a plot that leds to sex, or in some cases, more sex, tends to
         get more favorable reviews.)

    829  09.08.07  Dave Bonnie
         comments = check your spelling twice before posting to your site
         (Eskimo: OH NOOOO! Another fucking english major! I have since corrected most of the
    	 errors.)

    828  09.08.07  Dave  John's Adventure In Babysitting
         comments = this one is good but not s good as working with charlotte
         (Eskimo: Personally, I preffered this one over Working For Charlotte.
    	 Each have their good points. And both are of a older female/younger male theme. Some have said I
    	 could have expanded Charlotte a bit more, but thought it ended well jsut the way it is.)

    827  08.08.07  Cheryl  Carrie
         What an inventive family...and that LeRoy is a person after my own
         heart....not to mention Kathy.
         (Eskimo: Glad you liked it....I seldom receive commetns on this one, have even
         sort of forgotten about it.)

    826  08.08.07  Floyd  story's
         comments = I REALLY LIKED YOUR STORIES OF GANGBANGS.  TURN ME ON.  I
         KEEP LOOKING FOR A STORY I READ A LONG TIME AGO.  IT WAS ABOUT A CLUB
         THAT ABUCTED FOUR PREGNANT WOMEN.  THEY WERE USED AND ABUSED THEN KILLED.
         LOVE TO FIND IT AGAIN.  OR DO YOU NO WERE I CAN FIND STORIES LIKE
         THAT?
         (Eskimo: There are some readers that should just be turned in to the authorities.)

    825  08.08.07  Big Cock  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
         comments = i'd love love to see a fucking video
         (Eskimo: Hell! I'd love to star in it!)

    824  08.08.07  Robert  story's
         comments = i think there great

    823  08.08.07  Sonny  Doris
         comments = I have always wanted to fuck older women specially redheads.
         I was raised in a family that didn't talk or discuss sex at all and
         that caused me to be very shy around women I would look but never touch I
         am so sorry about that now wish I would have tried! I would love to
         have a three some but know that wont happen with my wife she is strict
         old school.
         enjoyed the story very much
         (Eskimo: There was no basis for this oe, just purely fantasy on my part
    	 as the author. Although, please note that my significant other is quite a bit
    	 older than myself. Just don't tell her I said that!)

    822  08.08.07  Tommy  Pizza Shop Intern
         comments = a sweet romantic story.
         well written too, but then all yours are.
         kudos!
         (Eskimo: My latest creation, not sure what inspired me to write it,
         and it took what seemed forever to finish it. Glad someone liked it.)

    821  07.08.07  Doc   Rosa
         comments = Thoroughly enjoyed the story. Grew up in Buffalo N.Y., not
         far from what was then called Buffalo State Teachers College. would not
         surprise me to learn that you and I have walked the same earth ...  Now
         living in midwest north of Milwaukee.
    	 Look forward to the fruits of your future labors ....
         (Eskimo: It's suffice to say that yes, we probably have walked the same earth. I
         grew up in teh Eastern Suburbs, and am now like you settle din the midwest. If you have
         read my other works, you'll notice I tend to use similar places, as they're palces I've
         been to, or know rather well.)

    820  03.08.07  Leeroy  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
         comments = That was fantastic! good work mate!
         (Eskimo: And the funnny part is, this story gets a lot of postive comments, yet
         I really didn't enjoy writting it. I actually thought about not posting it. I should
         have ended it after the main story character had done it with his tep-mom and the
         neighbor lady and daughter, but I didn't.)

    819  01.08.07  Scott  Amusement Park Adventure
         comments = I am a very, very average guy; nothing special at all.  Yet,
         in graduate school I met and had two classes with a grandmother who
         was very special and far from average.  We too wound up having a sexual
         fling and yes she too was far more exciteable than I...yet for some
         reason we lasted.  Yes, I did meet her married too daughter and once said
         that she "felt" more than "saw" what attracted her mother to me.
         For nine years the three of us became a very intimate threesome to the
         point that both got pregnant and had my babies, which their husbands
         accepted with considerable reluctance and trepadation.  Daughter Carol's
         oldest daughter and I became intimate too, with full knowledge of her
         mother and grandmother and she too got pregnant but miscarried.
         So, if your story is a fantasy, it is a very nice one indeed, for in my
         care with very few changes it is a true one.

    818  17.07.07  anon  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
         comments = Pretty good lol

    817  17.07.07  Bob  Becoming A Nudist
         comments = Eskimo, just finished reading "Nudist", had to tell you it
         was one of the better stories I've read here, that I appreciate the
         effort it took to write it. It read like a very convincing and genuine
         memory of a young guy's initiation into his first intimate sexual
         relationship in an unconventional way. The plot development of Jeff's being
         brought into the nudist lifestyle via Terri and her mom and then having
         three-way sex with them packed an erotic punch. I liked the humorous
         attitude of Terri's mom, her down-to-earth personality and her postive
         attitude towards her daughter's sexuality. I also liked the combination of
         voyeurism on the mother's part and Terri's frisky exhibitionism. Jeff
         comes across as a likeable guy, smart enough to go along with the
         adventure. The story had the right combination of dialog, description and plot
         surprises right up to the last one. Not sure how I feel about Jeff's
         being sandbagged into marriage via Terri's plot to rope him by geting
         herself knocked up but as he was ok with it what the Hell!
         (Eskimo: Seems like a lot liked this one. I wonder if it's because it brings
    	 back memories of youthful fantasies.)

    816  15.07.07  Hopeless Romantic  Becoming A Nudist
         comments = I will admit to having a PURIENT interest in UNPROTECTED
         intercourse. Thus as Terrie and Jeff entered the motel room at the nudist
         resort, I wondered if Mrs. Jones had put Terrie on 'the pill' between
         the first and second sessions at the nudist camp.
         I really don't like the idea that Mrs. Jones was able to successfully
         schedule her daughter's intercourse so that she was sure to become
         pregnant. Instead, I think that our bodies have evolved so that very good
         sex lures us into an ongoing sexual relationship, and that pregnancy
         occurs SEEMINGLY AT RANDOM in the course of a month or two or perhaps three
         of that relationship. Conversely, it wouldn't surprise me if one of
         her very good orgasms somehow initiated the release of an egg cell. But
         most important, we human beings are NOT expected to figure out just
         which of many very enjoyable acts of intercourse lead to her pregnancy and
         the resulting heavy burdens of parenthood!
         [Then, her whole body stiffened, but I keep lunging into her, as she
         then let out a sharp, erotic cry, her tight pussy yanking hard on my
         cock, making me groan out "Oh man, damn!", as I felt my pecker erupt deep
         inside her body, sending hot ropes of cum into her convulsing womb.]
         I think that you have this sequence of events EXACTLY RIGHT!
         [And, after all these years, we're still together, with a heck of a lot
         of adventures. Adventures that would entail writting a few more
         stories.]
         This 'Hopeless Romantic' really wants to know the secrets of success of
         this delightfully long marriage! :-)
         (Eskimo: A sequel sounds nice, but it'll never happen. Although the comments
    	 for this one have been posistive, I personally don't consider it to even be close to one
    	 of my best. In the top half, yes, but not in the top ten percent. I couldn't even tell you
    	 why I think that, although probably not the same reasons mentioned in the comment above.)

    815  15.07.07  Ron  Becoming A Nudist
         comments = Hot, wish my parents would have been open, I realize this is
         a fantasy, but really, I wish I may parents were more open, sweet,
         sexy story

    814  15.07.07  Oral Rex  Becoming A Nudist
         comments = I like this story. The pace is good, the story builds up
         nicely and the characters have just enough meat to be believable. Nie
         work.

    813  15.07.07  Frank  Becoming A Nudist
         comments = For the story, "Becoming a Nudist,":
         It's bicycle 'pedaling', not 'peddling'.
         (Eskimo: I've been told that already, jsut never got around to correcting
    	 it. It's now been changed.)

    812  14.07.07  Frank  Nudist
         comments = Your story is pretty realistic.  I've visited five nudist
         resorts (hate those who call them "colonies") in Florida, Black's Beach
         and Elysium in California, and two nude beaches at Clubs Med in the
         Caribbean.  There was more sex on the grounds of the Cavalieri Hilton on a
         high hill in Rome where, rounding a corner where the hedges were 7 feet
         high, I stumbled upon a mostly clothed couple, literally coupled while
         standing upright.  I think the Internet has helped promote nudism and
         the AANR.  A group that combines nudity and sex is Family Synergy - as
         an "alternative lifestyle".  They insist that newbies undergo an
         'orientation' on proper behavior and not intruding where not wanted.
         (Eskimo: It's always nice to get comments from other nudists. Even if
    	 they happen to seem to be English majors.)

    811  14.07.07  Frank  Setting Up Roger
         comments = Nice story - the location seemed to be Paradise Lakes or
         Lake Como.
         The security crew made me think it was Paradise.  Tampa is the
         lightning capital of the world, so that part fit, too.  And Homosassa Springs
         being less than 2 hours away.
         The past tense of lead is led.
         A quick look is a peek, not peak.
         (Eskimo: Neither one, as it was set at a resort in the middle of the state. We did
    	 visit Como this past spring though, first time in about five years or so. A lot nicer, save for
    	 the obnoxiuos fat ass drunk rumpranger.)

    810  12.07.07  Me  Cassie And The Biker Twins
         comments = excellent

    809  11.07.07  Kay  Cindy's Quest
         comments = For me, while I enjoy erotica, it was the kindness shown and
         how the racial tension was handled. All in all, a very good uplifting
         story.

    808  11.07.07  Matt  Cathy, Daughter, And Friends
         comments = hey man whats up i just have to know is this a true story id
         like to know
         (Eskimo: I not only wish the hell it was true, I wish teh fuck it had
    	 happened to me! This one was purely fantasy.)

    807  01.07.07  Jim   Summer Heat
         comments = Dear Mr.Eskimo,
         I just finishing reading your "summer heat" story on www.asstr.org and
         I am blown away! I'm not sure how much of the story you remembered, but
         the way you developed the characters are amazing. The little details
         you incorporated during the teasing and sex at the beginning was
         incredible. Even though at the end of the story felt rushed and repetitive
         (pretty much the Randy had sex again and again...)the over all rating of
         the story was good. I really enjoyed the plot, where there was suspense
         of the mother finding out and reward for quick thinking.
         I definitely will be looking forward to your next story!
         (Eskimo: This is one of my better works. Even Hopeless Romantic liked
         it!)

    806  30.06.07  Hopeless romantic  Slut Cherie
         comments = [They all expressed the same sentiment, as I asked "Momma,
         are they all for me?"]
         This 'Hopeless Romantic' thinks that there are important health reasons
         to avoid sex with strangers, anal sex, and so on. Indeed, six hours of
         orgasms ought to leave both mother and daughter utterly exhausted (if
         not much worse).
         But I think that this would be a better story if the noises that she
         heard from her mother's room frightened her about sex with just ONE man,
         thus the thought of eight men was too horrible to even contemplate.
         Indeed, her deflowering was an unpleasant experience at best. However,
         since the pleasure of sex is so addictive, it is important that she
         enjoyed each man better than the previous. And indeed even though she was
         exhausted beyond words, she was frankly disappointed when the last man
         left.
         One more thing, in keeping with the 'trailer trash' theme, I think that
         it is important that her mother explains to her that because of
         welfare benefits (before Clinton's reforms), Cherie's pregnancy was essential
         to the maintenance of their meager lifestyle. Furthermore, the evening
         had been carefully planned so that the social workers would never be
         able to figure out just which man would be forced to make child support
         payments! :-(
         (Eskimo: Actually, this was jsut a quick 'fuck-n-suck' story I wrote one night
         while the Mrs. was away. So I really didn't put much thought into this one.

    805  30.06.07  Hopeless Romantic  Celinda
         comments = The overall plot is a delight for this 'Hopeless Romantic'!
         ["We're not using protection, Celinda."]
         I think that the story ought to be tweaked so that both of them NEEDED
         the sex (without condoms) but DID NOT want the heavy burdens of
         parenthood. Yes, I know that his sister-in-law right next door is an OB/GYN,
         but there might be REASONS why Mei would prescribe 'the pill' or the
         like for Celinda. The theme of a revised and expanded section of this
         story is that the better the sex, the harder it is for him to avoid
         ejaculating into her depths.
         I also like the idea that they TRIED to abstain from sex during what
         should be her most fertile period, but their mutual addiction to sex
         (another product of its great pleasure) made that extremely difficult.
         Indeed, they felt compelled to 'cheat' on the margins of her fertile days
         on numerous occasions.
         [No, she didn't get pregnant that night.]
         Unless they had JUST ONE OR TWO acts of sex between menstural periods,
         I think that it is rather important that neither of them can figure out
         just WHICH ejaculation resulted in her pregnancy. Indeed, the sheer
         lack of knowledge avoids blaming each other for the unwanted results of
         THAT particular night.
         Furthermore, it is rather important to me that the experience of
         clutching each other's body as his fat cock reaches into her hot depths,
         nurtures a strong feeling of emotional UNITY. Indeed it is that strength
         that keeps them together in spite of the growing hardships of pregnancy
         and parenthood!
         Finally, it is the hormones released into her body during her pregnancy
         and nursing that slowly conditions her to acceptance of her fate as a
         mother.

    804  29.06.07  Robert  A Slave's tale
         comments = i thought it is well written and possaible   I think
         most of the slave  were treated a little worst. it was intertaing and
         enjoyed reading it thank you
         (Eskimo: This one suprised me. I was expecting some negative feedback, but so
    	 far it seems to be well received.)

    803  29.06.07  AJC  story's
         comments = Could you make more orgy stories like "Breakingin Party" and
         "Meadowview Court"? Admire your work. Thanks.
         (Eskimo: I'm like you, I enjoy orgy stories, but they seem to be the hardest to
    	 write. Also, it seems they get the most negative reviews. I do have quite a few of this
    	 type started, but most are far from being finished.)

    802  28.06.07  Tom  A Slave's tale
         comments = You know this gave me an idea, I don't know if its your
         thing, but how about writing a story where a scientist travels back in
         time. You can have him fuck the woman of that time he travels back to. This
         was a good story by the way.
         (Eskimo: Interesting concept....I may have to start one on that theme, but
    	 no telling how long it will be before I finish it.)

    801  28.06.07  Bill   Rosa
         comments = Very enjoyable. I have always enjoyed the thought of being
         able to understand a language when it was thought I didn't. This could
         easily stand a couple of more parts.
         (Eskimo: Sorry, no added parts are forseen. But I am glad you enjoyed it.)

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