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    499  15.03.06  Patty&mick  Comunity Breeding Project
         comments = hubby and i both cum when we read it
         (Eskimo: I would have liked for you to have sent me pictures
         of that....my wife and I have a very healthy sex life, and viewing
         porn is a great way to add spice to ones marraige...too bad the
         majority don't try it. Of course, it probably comes down to self-
         esteem issues on teh wife's part, and sometimes even the husband.
         But, I'm glad that there are others out there like this couple that
         enjoy a good erotic read together.)

    498  15.03.06  Trapper  Ranch Hand
         comments = No bitching here, great story
         (Eskimo: I believe that in 2005 I wrote a bunch of very
         well-written works. Still not sure if any that I've posted so far
         this year will stand up to those high standards, but as from
         what I've read amongst the comments, they've been favorable.)

    497  15.03.06  Vince  Plantation Stud Service
          comments = enjoyed the story very much..reminded me of the book
          MANDINGO,but this gave much more vivid details. this was really a better
          scene'  thanks.vince
          (Eskimo: Actually, I liked how I ended it, making the story
          not actually be what it had seemed.)

    496  15.03.06  Diandra  Dana
         comments = i cum right the end. sexy and stmiulating
         (Eskimo: Yeah, it did get good at the end. This was another
         nudism story, as I tried to paint a picture of how non-erotic nudism
         is, in the nakedness standpoint, yet as a nudist, we're not sexually
         dysfunctional, that we do enjoy a healthy sex life with our significant
    	 other, and we don't have non-stop orgies or swapping of wives. Does
    	 that make sense?)

    495  07.03.06  Lynx  Dana
         comments = It was an incredibly pleasnt story to read.. well writen.
         (Eskimo: Glad you liked it. So far, this is my favorite story
         for the new year.)

    494  06.03.06  S S   Romancing Shontell
         comments = Your story about Andrew and Shontell was both sexually
         stiimulating as well as being a well told story.  You handled
         a possibly controversial subject in a very nice manner.  We
         read so many of black men and white women that it is nice to
         read one of a white man and black woman.  I also enjoyed your
         spelling and use of words.  I am 83 yrs of age and widowed
         since 2001.  I have thought that I would like to make out
         with an attractive black woman.
         (Eskimo: This wasn't my first story involving a white male
         with a black female. And I notice I get more positve comments on this
         typw of relationship, than the usual black male-white female ones. Of
         course, the negative comments on the latter style are usually racist
    	 in nature....sort of makes you wonder why the double standard. The same
    	 goes for portraying women as wanting sex, and men wanting sex. Social
    	 mores says it's okay for a man to enjoy using his sex to the fullest
    	 extent, while a woman is not suppose to have such urges. I do know
    	 personally a few ladies that are what one would say are uninhibbited,
    	 either sexually or about their body as nudists, and they seem so much
    	 more full of life, and have more of a positve outlook on things. Maybe
    	 they should be looked up to, and not down upon.
    	 Oh well, time to get off my soap box.....And sit back and see the hate
    	 mail I get for my next story, which is a white female-black male scenerio.)

    493  04.03.06  A Guy   Romancing Shontell
         comments = i like Shontell better than Dana.  it is less of a fantasy.
         or maybe not - i don't know about the black experience, but i imagine
         she would be getting a lot of flack for "betraying her race" and other
         such nonsense.  but that varies more by time and area i think.
         anyway, kudos on a fine story
         (Eskimo: I was wondering what sort of response that I would get from
         this one. I've had a few people slam me for writting interacial stories involving
         white women with black men, and jsut wanted to see if I would get the reverse or
         not. So far, not. As for personal experience, I did enjoy the company of a female
         African-American in my younger days....and no, money was not exchanged....it was
         an itneresting event, elading up to and during the process of making love with her.
         I'll enver out it to pen and paper, so don't bother asking.)

    492  04.03.06  Jim  Dana
         comments = I enjoyed the story.  There are a few typos you might want
         to take care of.  One is a bit of a howler: "a more viral sperm count".
         That seemed incredibly perverse until I figured you meant "virile".
         (Eskimo: LOL  I changed that one, glad you brought it to my attention.
    	 Seems Spell check and my going over is not 100% fool proof.)

    491  03.03.06  Ian   Summer Heat
         comments = a good stroke story is great. a well written stroke story is
         just that much better .thank you.
         (Eskimo: TY)

    490  03.03.06  Tom   Summer Heat
         comments = absolutly amazing took me 5 nites to read
         (Eskimo: This was one of the five fan favorites of 2005. Right behind
         Justice For Megan and Kentucky Girl. And just ahead of Olive and Ranch Hand.
         It's going to be tough to duplicate the popularity of any of these works
         in the future, but I'll try.
    489  01.03.06  David  Breaking In Party
         comments = What a wonderful story! I loved it! Do you have other stuff
         available that is not on asstr? Would you consider requests?
         (Eskimo: At this time, I have never posted any story on any other
         site. Asstr is my home, and I don't plan on leaving it...unless the right
         amount of money rolls in. As for requests, I have done a few in the past,
         but it always takes me a long while tog et them finshed.)

    488  27.02.06  Phil  April
         comments = I thought this story was great, I don't know if it is
         possible for a guy to cum so much in one day!
         (Eskimo: I'll have to read the story to see how many times he did
         orgasm in one day. But as for me, a few years ago Mrs. Eskimo was rather
         inspired, as she helped get me off six times one very long, hot summer evening.
         I thought my balls were going to fall off, and it took me three days to
    	 recover.)

    487  27.02.06  Don  Filling The House
         comments = Only one of several of your stories and all quite enjoyable.
         You are a good author. Thanks much.
         (Eskimo: This was actually a sequel to an earlier work, which is
         titled Beginning Of A Harem. I presonally didn't like how it came out,
         and have for the msot part refuced to write any more sequels to my
         story's. BUt, I'm glad you liked it, and I hoipe you enjoy my other works
         as well.)

    486  26.02.06  Duncan   Summer Heat
         comments =  Hi, you write a nixce story, enjoyed it very much, had a
         chuckle
         thinking about it too. Just imagined how I would have liked to have
         been the hero.
         Did alright anyhow. Thanks a lot.
         (Eskimo: This story was inspired by the memories of family trips
         to the area mentiend in the story. Thinking about it, that's where my
         interest in voyeurism was first discovered, what with a bunch of older
         female cousins, and a bathroom with curtains that did not close all the
         way. Long story, but it had nothing to do with the story I wrote. And no,
         I didn't score with anyone, except for with myself, of course.)

    485  25.02.06  Meech Couple Fun
         comments = I have read a few of your stories and love them. I am
         curious about your motivation to write. Do you base your stories on real
         experiences?
         (Eskimo: Real life expereinces? Well, if they were all mine, I would
    	 have had led a very interesting life so far. But alas, no. Although a few are
    	 based on some sort of real life happenings of myself or of otehrs that I know,
    	 most all are simple fantasy's that I took to writting down. I will add to this
    	 that things that I've seen or done, have triggered the imagination in me from
    	 time to time. Without going into details, I might see something, and the idea
    	 of a sex story will come to mind. I've been told that I've a very fertile
    	 imagination, and it shows in some of my works. I guess it helps in making some
    	 of teh story's seem realistic.)

    484  24.02.06  Ed  April
         comments = liked the story a lot . Wish it was me getting in on like
         that. Am going too your story page also  Paul needs a friend too help him
         out with Beth and Alice Will you add too this
         (Eskimo: Right after I finished this one, I started two chapters as follow
         up works, never got them finished. Maybe one of these days.....)

    483  24.02.06  Woody  100 story's
         comments =  Congratulations, I enjoy your stories
         very much. Here's to the next 100.
         (Eskimo: It will be tough to do, but I've already knocked the first one
         down for the second hundred, so only 99 more to go.)

    482  24.02.06  Sylvia  Rita's Friendly Neighbors
         comments = Awesome story, made me cum lots. ;)
         (Eskimo: God, I love to hear that! I love to make the ladies happy.)

    481  24.02.06  Hank  story's
         comments = Do some bro-sis, mom-son, father-daughter stories.
         (Eskimo: I get asked to do incest all the time, but I just don't feel
         comfortable. I tend to write stories which I'm familiar with, or fantasies which
         I would like to happen :)
         So, I don't plan on writting any incest stories.)

    480  24.02.06  Alexandra   Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
         comments = Thank you for your lovely story about angel and her
         religious breeding. i am very very very happy to read about something i totally
         fantasise about continuously and dream about all the time.
         thank you for being able to understand my thoughts. i would love to
         know what inspired your fertile story.
         (Eskimo: What inspires me? Well in this case, it was the works of others
         on the 'Naked in School' series, that have been written by others. I jsut decided
         to write my own version, with a twist. Anotehr author, Jack C Lipton, has a good
         version of his own, which I strongly suggest for all to read. As for what it inspires
    	 me for my stories, being a guy, if it's involvng sex, I'm inspired!)

    479  24.02.06  whitecock  Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
         comments = if ti had been anything except with niggers then maybe it
         would have excited me more but having two white women who like to fuck
         black men thats just not right
         (Eskimo: Nice spelling and grammar, maybe you should become an
         author. I sure wish that people that get offended by something, don't read
         a story covering it.)

    478  23.02.06  a guy  Dana
         comments = Dana is a bit of a male fantasy story.  stripper with the
         beautiful body picks an average guy (who happens to be a nudist) out at
         random, makes babies and marries him.  all within 30 days about.
         and it feels like a fantasy, no realism.  she has 13+yrs stripping, but
         she has only had 3 guys?  she is wealthy because some old guy just gave
         her money, after a evening spent talking after years of looking?  after
         13+ years of stripping she is still able to get emotional with a guy,
         without having suspisions about his wanting her for her body, not for
         herself?  it is not believable.
         you could have done better, i have seen it here.  but everyone is
         allowed an off day.  it was still pretty good, even if you coulda done
         better.
         (Eskimo: Interesting you mention that it's a male fantasy. Since
         that's what most of us guys fantasize about anyway. You seem to stereotype
         strippers, not thinking that they might want to love and be loved. As for
         her picking him at random, if you read it, she did not. She became interested
         in him for what he did not do, which is consider her as just a piece of
         trash.)

    477  23.02.06  Jonathon  Dana
         comments = Dear Eskimo.
         This was a wonderful story. It was very uplifting. It's hard to
         put my finger on exactly what makes it good but it really is. I enjoyed
         it. Keep up the good work.
         Sincerely, Jonathan.
         (Eskimo: Interesting comments, thank you. I've recieved mixed reviews
         on this one.)

    476  23.02.06  Guy  Kentucky Girl
         comments = I just cant get over it that a writter who can write a great
         story like this,can turn around and put out some of the trash you do.
         (Eskimo: Well, maybe because the authr likes to write stories with a
         variety of genres. I know that might seem hard to beleive, but sometimes I
         just like to write sex trash. Fantasy? For the most part, HELL YEAH!)

    475  23.02.06  Hopeless Romantic   Impregnating My Wife, Natalie's story
         comments = In the REAL WORLD, gang bangs involving strangers ought to
         be scary  just because it is so hard to know whether any of those cocks
         are infected. Yes, I know, these stories clearly presume an imaginary
         world where STD's don't exist. ;-)
         But this story does illustrate a favorite point of mine, a clear
         distinction between genetic fatherhood and parenthood. What delights this
         HOPELESS ROMANTIC is that this husband has joyfully accepted so many
         children that are so clearly NOT GENETICALLY HIS.
         Indeed the surprise ending precludes an alternative surprise ending,
         where it was discovered to his great horror that he was hopelessly
         sterile! :-(
         (Eskimo: Good analyisis. However, remember the story was not set in
         the real world. As for your alternate ending, I had thought about that, but
         in the story in earlier episodes, I did mention that at least two of the
         children were his.)

    474  23.02.06  Hopeless romantic   Dana
         comments = :-)
         (Eskimo: For some reason, I figured you would like this one.

    473  23.02.06  Jack  Dana
         comments = While I *love* the story, I didn't follow why he was so
         willing to "be hers".
         All right, so my stories usually have a fair dose of angst to
         explain the mindset (or lack thereof) of the protagonist, but I
         kind of missed any sense of why he was so open to Dana's
         interest. Still a nice, warm, snuggly and cuddly story.
         (Eskimo: You raised a good question....I just don't have an
         answer. I had him trying to figure her out, not whether he was willing
         or not to 'be hers'. After all, in real life, if some real good looking
         lady comes up to you and says she wants you to have her baby, what would
         you do?"

    472  23.02.06  Al  Ranch Hand
         comments = very good ! :)
         otherwise :"I would have liked to extend it by adding Emma's co-worker
         Connie and her daughter into the story, having Connie joining Emma and
         Frank in the bedroom, and her daughter becoming a lover of Ned and the
         girls"
         It's quite simple :
         the bad husband is discovered by the police then a divorce connie is in
         a deap sorrow she go to see her friend and she reveal that either she
         is attracted by frank or that she need a man : her's was in no condition
         to satified her ... or she discover emma going at it with ned and then
         is explained the whole thing after maybe a little "blackmail" to reveal
         it to frank ... ;)
         (Eskimo: Actually, I've started a sequel for this, not long after I
         finished the original. But, time gets away from you, I move to other works,
         and put some stories on the back burner, so to speak. Maybe one of these
         days I'll get back to it.)

    471  23.02.06  Al  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
         comments = Well !
         this one is REALLY nice you should "come up"(excuse the pun ! ;))
         with the sequel !
         and to be clear :
         "I may have added too many charachters" is not ! ;)
         well you can add an other ... for exemple the friend of anna ...
         and a little bit off threesome ... with more lesbiannism could be a
         good idea
         (Eskimo: Although I do like your thinking, I don't think I'll
         be working on a sequel. However, your ideas could be developed into
         another and completely different story. I'll just have to come up
         with a plot and characters for it.)

    470  23.02.06  S  Home Schooling
         comments = Its not bad. I could have gone for a little more repetition
         about which person had what physical characteristics. Overall well
         done. Also I liked the obvious twist at the end, not the cameras, but the
         parents knowing and going at it.
         (Eskimo: I liked what you had to say. I think I did lack in describing
         the characters in this one, but can't explain why I did not. It could be
         because I did not want to use an overkill in words, whch sometimes happens
         in stories, giving way too much descriptive on people and events. The trick is
         to find an even balance between not enough, and being excessive.)

    469  22.02.06  Luigi  Justice For Megan
         comments = A great story exceedingly well told.  I very much enjoyed
         every word.  Iam definitely going to read some others of yours.  Wished
         that they could be downloaded and read at my leisure.
         Keep writing and thanks so much for sharing them with us.
         (Eskimo: I've now written and posted 100 stories, with number 100 being
         posted today. And by far, I think this story has been my best work. Some
         have been close, others don't even compare. Just wish I could bottle it
         and use on my other writtings.)

    468  22.02.06  Jon  Kentucky Girl & Ranch Hand
         comments = I just finished RH and KG. You put out some mighty fine
         literture.
         (Eskimo: Thank you. 2005 was a very good eyar for me, as I've recieved
         lots of praise for these two stories, as well as the Megan story and a few
         others. Hopefully, 2006 will be just as good. I've already posted six new
         works for the year, so I am ahead of last years pace, when I posted sixteen.
         I'm now at ninety-nine total, and I've a few that are about there, but need
         some final touches. Please cum back for more.)

    467  22.02.06  Dave  Meadow View Court
         comments = I wish things like that had happened when I lived in
         Greenwood, Indiana!
         (Eskimo: Yeah, it would have been niced if it had happened to me
         anywhere! After I wrote this, I never did check to see if there was
         actually a street with this name in that town. It would be funny if
         there is. Oh yeah, if you don't know much about Greenwood, it is
         considered to be rather red-neckish...maybe I'll work on a story about
         that, just food for thought.)

    466  21.02.06  Joe   Stories
         comments = A very well written tale, well edited, that I enjoyed very
         much.
         (Eskimo: Thank you, I just wish you would have mentined which story you
         had read that you are commenting about.)

    465  21.02.06  Lee  Meadow View Court
         comments = luved it..spurted a hot cum  all over..more please...maybe
         have a panty only day-everyone wears panties..or a one tit out day-one
         tit showing all the time..etc..tease..fuck..and please...mmmm
         (Eskimo: Interesting commetns and suggestions...not to sure what to
         say about them, although I guess I could develop them into another story.)

    464  21.02.06  Kay  Widower Fun
         comments = Well written, I'm not sure if you meant it to be so, but I
         couldn't help but see the humor from some of the situations you put your
         characters in.
         (Eskimo: I always try to lighten up my stories with a bit of humor, as
         that tends to make them more believeable. This was one of my older works, glad
         someone found it and enjoyed the story.)

    463  20.02.06  Pedro  Justice For Megan
         comments = great story, well set up. Just wish you could let someone
         proof it for you before posting to catch the typos and missed words. If
         you don't have anyone else, you could try me. I've been proofing my own
         and other's professional work for some time.
         (Eskimo: Looks like I'll have to go over this one once again. As for
    	 proofing it, I am not a professional, so I can't pay anyone to do it, sorry.)

    462  20.02.06  Edthedawg  Impregnating My Wife
         comments = amazing story - loved every minute of it and can't wait to
         hear more...  where can one find pix or vid clips?
         (Eskimo: Glad you liked it, and I've no idea where you can find pix
    	 or video clips.)

    461  20.02.06  Gary  Tagalong
         comments = Id love to hear more about Sam's pregnancy.
         (Eskimo: Read my reply to the next comment. I wrote this one
         about five years ago, I can't even remember it.)

    460  16.02.06  Mike  Monica
         comments = Another very good one,reading it put a smile on my face. How
         about a part 2 with either or preferably both Katherine's character
         devlopment and or further adventures of the happy couple/couples.
         Thank you for posting your stories.
         (Eskimo: A sequal??? HEll NO!!!! Thanks for the suggestion, but it
         seems whenever I start a sequel, it just gets hung up somewhere along
         the way, and I never seem to finish it. I've about twenty stories
         that I've started that are sequels to an earlier work, and have yet to
         finish them. But, thanks for asking.)

    459  13.02.06  Roger  Stories
         comments = I'm not the Roger in "Setting up Roger", but I have read a
         number of your stories as well as many comments from other readers.
         They did turn me on in some cases, but since I am 74 and have an enlarged
         prostate, apparently with some cancer, I do have a problem with an
         erection at times. For those with the same problem, a Dr. Lin seems to have
         some answers:  search for "love positions" - I may order something from
         him.
         Now to the main topic of my comment.  It seems that you must have had
         some problems with Christians in the past and I agree that some of them
         are way off base and are not in agreement with what the Bible says
         about sex - but it is to be just with husband and wife.  I have always had
         a desire since I was eight to be a nudist, which is what drew me to
         your website, but circumstances have not allowed it.  I noticed that you
         and others who have commented have indicated that they are not
         Christians, but I would suggest that you look at the website:  "Reasons to
         Believe" and check out their evidence of the earth's having had a Creator.
         The originator of the organization is an astrophysicist and checked out
         all the main religious books before deciding to become a Christian
         since the Bible had all the steps of creation in the proper order compared
         to the other religious books - two was the best that they could do.
         And since we live in only four dimensions (length, width, heighth, and
         time), do you know that there it has been proven that there are at least
         11 dimensions involved in this universe with two of them being
         dimensions of time?  Evolution is not an answer - check out this site.  Only
         the stubborn scientists are still trying to deny the evidence for a
         creator.
         Also, check out what has happened to the United States since 1962 when
         the Supreme Court ruled out the Bible from our public schools.  A graph
         of crime in this country has climbed dramatically since that date.  In
         addition, why does the ACLU want the Ten Commandments out of our sight?
         What is wrong with telling kids that murder of innocent people is
         wrong, etc.?  We could go over all ten, but that should be sufficient.  The
         ACLU was started by a Communist and you should know what the Soviet
         Union did and what China does to Christians!  And do you know that 15,000
         Chinese are currently deciding to become Christians every day?
         As I said above, sex is supposed to be between husband and wife.  Now
         that we don't have the Bible in the schools, and crime is on the rise
        (in fact, one in 39 Americans have spent some time in prison, according
        to some statistics) we have too many kids growing up without a father
        and in some cases a mother.  As a former public school teacher, I know
        some of the problems they have and studies show that those without a
        father or those who have been abused have a harder time growing into good
        citizens.
        So, the idea of loose sex or sex outside of marriage may be enticing to
        the hormones, but we do hopefully control some of our other urges,
        don't we?  Accept for some gang members or extremely hardened criminals,
        most of us do not go get a gun whenever someone displeases us and blow
        them away nor do most of us ram our cars into those of others when they
        cut us off on the freeway, though the urge might be there.  Those are
        the kinds of things that the Ten Commandments were written for.  We all
        have a choice - the questions is:  what will it be?
        I hope that I made some sense after all my rambling.
        (Eskimo: Well, you got the rambling part right. And, I'm not sure
        where to begin. Let's start with my supposed anti-christian stance. In
        actuality, I'm anti-consrvative RELIGION. It doesn't matter wether it is
        Christian, Muslim, Jewish, or even pagan, religious fanatics are a problem
        in this world, and in America.
        Now, lets' move on to evolution. Yeah, I beleive in it. Lots of reasons,
        mostly because it's around us everyday. Can you say pesticides? Insects and
        weeds evlove to combat the use of them, a lot more swiftly than we, as humans,
    	evolve to withstand new diseaes, bird flue being a good example. Also, having
    	travelled the world, seeing Gods such wonders as teh Grand Canyon, the Alps, and
    	thousands of other natrual phenonomens, it's take his work billions of years to
    	shape this planet, not seven days like some book says.
    	Okay, the sancity of marraige. Reading between teh lines there, you seem to equate
    	the nudist lifestyle with promiscuity. Not hardly! In over  a dozen years of
    	enjoying hte nudist lifestyle, we've never ran into anyone, nor have we asked
    	anyone, to swap spouses. Now, the ugly side of being known as nudists. We have been
    	approached by swingers that were not nudists, that heard we were nudists, and were
    	mistaken in thinking that we would be interested in swinging.
        On the America today. The ration of those having spent time in jail. Please note that
    	the number of DUI's have increased greatly. That probably spiked it somewhat, as has
    	better police work. Was life in America better in the fifties than today? I don't
    	think so, just ask any older African-american. Has family life deterioted? Probably,
    	but why? Personally, I think it's parenting skills, not lack of prayer in school. I
    	raised a child, with my sife, of course, no real religion was involved. He's in law
    	enforcement. As for failed marraiges, why? Good question. Alcohol, drugs, abuse, all are
    	leading contributers. Is it worse now than say fifty years ago? My answer is no. I've
    	heard plenty of stories of drunken parents, where the non-drunken partenr put up with
    	the otehr, for the sake of teh kid. Even when there was child-abuse. This shit
    	didnt happen overnight, it's been going on for, well, since before the bible was written.
    	As for self-control. Don't blame the lack of releigion. Instead, blame the media. What are
    	we bombarded with every day? Commercials and piss-poor shows that use sex as a tool. Not
    	mention the destruction of our young peoples sefl-esteem, especilly the females. Which
    	brings me back to the nudist lifestyle for a second. From my perspective, most American
    	nudists are middle-ages, mediun age in the late-forties. Most are not what you would call
    	physically fit. But, tehy all, for teh most part, are happy with their appearence.
    	And beleive it or not, most consider themselves Christian, and are happy with the way God
    	made them. And I firmly beleive that all younger people shold experience it at an early age,
    	maybe the fashion industry would take a nose dive because of it, but so what.
    	Well, gues I did ramble as well. I'lls top for now, you all have a nice day.)

    458  07.02.06  Charliez  Stories
         comments = I have read all your listed stories and can come up with
         only one answer.There has to be at least two people writting as
         "Eskimo1958.
         I can not belive that the same person who wrote "Megan","Ky
         Girl,"Wingman",and some other very good stories,could have also authored such low
         pieces of shit such as," Swingers Interacial Weekend-","Knocking Up A
         Mother And Daughter",To name only 2 of the worst of 10 or 15 realy bad
         ones.Why the mixed race stories?Do you get some type of sexual release
         by having white women fuck niggers?This tends to degrade all white woman
         as sluts or whores.Would you please in the future have the "Good"
         Eskimo1958 write more and the other Eskimo1958 go off someplace and jackoff.
         (Eskimo: Whoa there, Chuckie....let's not get upset about a story or two.
         First, I believe variety is the spice of life, that's why I wriote a little bit
    	 evrything, as long as it does not involve underage, watersports, rape(well,
    	 usally not), watersports, or anything involving pain(Okay, maybe a little bit
    	 of pain is okay). And second, you didn't mention a thing about a few of my
    	 stories where a white man has sex with a non-white woman, why is that? Sounds
         like you don't get laid often enough, and I think I see why.)

    457  06.02.06  Raza  Stories
         comments = It would be nice to have a story where children
         observe/watch/spy on their parents having sex, with each other as well as other
         partners. The other partners may be same sex as well as opposite sex so
         MF, FF & MM. The stories do not necessarily have to have incest.
         It would be really exciting if there was a story like a swinging nudist
         sex farm etc, where families go in the summer. It could be a nudist
         plus swingers resort. The children can see adults (including their
         parents) having uninhibited swinging sex, with different partners of the same
         as well as different genders so MF, FF and MM, as well as possibly
         group sex. At the same time children/teenagers can have sex with each each
         other. Observing sexual acts is no issue so sex can be initiated by
         different partners even when groups or families are together or if they
         run into one another separately, e.g. whilst strolling around the resort.
         So a woman can approach a childs mother whilst they are sitting as a
         family to initiate sex with her or can run into her whilst walking, with
         the child nearby watching and they have sex.
         (Eskimo: Interesting concept....however, I'm not too comfortable with the idea
         of adults haveing sex with underage children, especially pre-teen. However, I'm
         sure there are those that read thjis that are, and they may sit down and write
         such a story. But not me. Thanks anyway.)

    456  05.02.06  Bob  Wingman
         comments = Thank you for your stories! I have been enjoying them!
         FWIW, I think Wingman is better than Justice for Megan. More believable
         maybe; less religious BS. Though the cumuppence ending of Megan is
         choice! Thanks again!
         (Eskimo: I think the ending to Megan is a lot better than to this
         one. Other than that, the story's are both relatively similar. Just a
         variation of the same theme in both stories.)

    455  02.02.06  Jerry  Olive
         comments = you did good.
         (Eskimo: This is a story that has inspired a bunch of new ones, but as of
         yet, I hadn't finished a one. For some reason, just can't get past the middle.)

    454  30.01.06  anon  Home Schooling
         comments = i need a video
         (Eskimo: Don't we all! Not to much story to this one, but the sex is
         interesting. I'm sure the porno producers read it, they might make one of it.
         And they better write the check to me!)

    453  29.01.06  Richard  The Cottage
         comments = Love your story. Have read several others. Please keep up
         the great work.
         (Eskimo: Another of my earlier works, I've always liked this one,
         and it just doesn't seem to get much response, although this is the second
         comment in a week concerning it. I always thought that the story made this
         one, and the sex was rather nice as well.)

    452  29.01.06  Matt Iqbal
         comments = loved it
         (Eskimo: I enjoy simple, pleasent comments.)

    451  28.01.06  Earl The Irishman  Widower Fun
         comments = love the plot and the ending was fantaboules i would love
         the chalange of converting them from lez to my kind of loven
         (Eskimo: I'm glad you liked this piece. It's one of my older works,
         and I even go back and re-read it from time to time.)

    450  27.01.06  hopeless romantic  Wingman
         comments = This story is delightfully written, and this HOPELESS
         ROMANTIC is delighted that Sandy and Kurt spent so much time together before
         having sex. Indeed, it is delightfully old fashioned for them to wait
         until he has the firm promise of a good job and a firm date for a
         wedding before 'doing it.' Last but not least I am particularly happy that
         they never used condoms although I am neutral about her having never used
         'the pill!'
         Conversely, I suspect that it is UNREALISTIC for a college boy and girl
         to share a bed together for so many nights IN TOTAL NAKEDNESS without
         having sex, even if he is a lifelong nudist. Indeed, I think that
         despite their FIRM INTENT, his very erect cock will just slip into her well
         lubricated cunt on an unplanned basis as they cuddle together in total
         nakedness. Then after simply enjoying the resulting pleasure, their
         involuntary stroking will begin, intensifying until their mutual climax
         (and his ejaculation) is impossible to avoid.
         Furthermore, it is UNLIKELY that she became pregnant that first night
         as you have implied, unless they took very special measures toward that
         end. It is more likely that pregnancy occurred SEEMINGLY at random
         while they were enjoying good sex at frequent intervals, only discovering
         that it had happened a few weeks (or more) later when she FINALLY
         realized that she was no longer having menstrual periods.
         Last but not least, both of them should have had some trepidation about
         enjoying her first time on an UNPROTECTED basis, just because that act
         could SO EASILY lead to PARENTHOOD (and all of the burdens it implies).
         Mindful of this, I think that it is very important that he TRIES each
         time to hold his ejaculate for as long as possible to prolong their
         pleasure. Furthermore it is the effect of her orgasm strongly milking his
         cock that finally FORCES him to ejaculate in her depths. Indeed, they
         should soon discover that when sex is THAT GOOD, his copious ejaculation
         into her depths is just UNAVOIDABLE. And this grim realization adds a
         tartness to the act that adds intensity to their pleasure!
         (Eskimo: You really ought to stop thinking so hard, as it seems obvious
         to me that it destroys the enjoyment of reading a story.)

    449  27.01.06  Jake  The Cottage
         comments = Great story, if it's true.
         (Eskimo: So are you saying that since it is not true, that it's a
         bad story? Oh well. I've always liked this one, although I rarely recieve
         a comment about it. Not sure why, could be of the unusual setting, which is
         just another place that I've visited in my life. For some reason, places that
         I've visited tend to end up in my works. I guess knowing the area helps in
         describing the scenes. Do you want examples? Well, read more of my works.)

    448  26.01.06  Looney  Wingman
         comments = Great story. I like all your stuff and this one is just as
         good as the rest.
         I would like to hear the story of what happened between Simon, Diane
         and Sarah. I think it would be interesting.
         (Eskimo: A story of Diane, Sarah and Simon could be interesting,
         but I'm afraid it would develop into a bondage story, and I just don't
         feel comfortable with that genre. I was worried about this one, as I was
         not sure that I had spent way too much time writting the story line before
         getting to the sex.)

    447  26.01.06  Bob  Justice For Megan
         comments = This is a wonderful story. Thanks for posting it for my/our
         enjoyment. The build-up to the 'Sting' is well done in my opinion. I
         look forward to reading more of your work now I have found you on ASSTR.
         Thanks again.
         (Eskimo: Well, unfortunaltly, this has been probably my best story
         so far. Although there are a few others that rank right up there. I guess
         you'll just have to read them all and see which ones you like. I enjoy a
         good plot, and this story has an excellent one. I think that's what raises
         it above all others that I've penned. Hell, even my wife enjoyed it!)

    446  26.01.06  a guy  Beginning Of A Harem
         comments = i always like harems, in concept.
         the problem is women don't want to share either.  stresses develop,
         uneven sharing (of feel that way) and it all fall apart - unless their is
         an outside force holding it together - religion, or force.
         then their is the problem of the next generations: the mormons in
         texas/utah border face that, with equal #of boys you get excess possible
         husbands.  so they dump the boys for minor "rebellions" out of the family.
         or they send them out to die in battle like the muslims.
         ah well, there is always a hole in any system.....
         (Eskimo: Great, now I'll get all the Islamic nuts mad at me. Oh
         well, I tend to get lots of different zealots pissed from time to time.
         I do admire your opinon however, and I whole heartedly agree with you. Except,
         you might want to improveon your geography, as Texas does not border
         Utah. You're actually referring to Arizona.)

    445  25.01.06  Allan  Ranch Hand
         comments = I don't know how you do it....this is as nice as the frst
         one I read. You are a genious..I gues but I must read some more.
         (Eskimo: A vivid immagination helps. And sometimes, I may see
         something, and it just jumps right out at me, saying 'Write me!'.)

    444  25.01.06  Jim  Wingman
         comments = I loved this story.  Matter of fact I loved all your stories
         (Eskimo: Not sure about that, as even I hate to admit that I've written a few
         bad ones.)

    443  25.01.06  Allan  Kentucky Girl
         comments = Well..Hell..This certainly is a joy to read.
         I haven't been reading much lately and I didn't think that
         a story could be this entertaining. It was very humorious
         and erotic without being vulgar.
         Congratulations are in order.
         I've visited South Carolina, now a trip to Kentucky seems
         to be calling.
         (Eskimo: Have a nice trip....maybe you'll find her family...or cousins)

    442  25.01.06  Larry  Beginning Of A Harem
         comments = At last there is someone who knows how to write.

    441  24.01.06  Dennis  Learning With Gail
         comments = This is a gr8 story.  The sex was ok but the story was
         great.  I truly enjoyed it.
         (Eskimo: I've been thrilled at how well you readers enjoy my
         stories when there is a good story involved. Makes me happy.)

    440  24.01.06  anon  Opening Her Eyes
         comments =  You should stick to what you know.You dam sure dont know
         how to write stories about cheating slut wives.
        (Eskimo: Gee Wally, a little harsh, don't you think? Especially since
        this wasn't a slut-wife story? I would hate for you to review a story of a wet-dream,
        as you would probably screw it up as well.)

    439  24.01.06  Tony  Wingman
         comments = As always excellent writing.  I don't care for a few of the
         topics of your stories but that's just my tastes.
         (Eskimo: I try to use different topics. if I don't, I consider
    	 the stories to be basic repeats of each other. This one was rather long,
    	 before I really had any full-blown sex scene in it.)

    438  23.01.06  John  Wingman & Kentucky Girl
         comments = Just want to say that I like your stories. I love your sense
         of humor especially the Kentucky Girl and Wingman.
         Keep up the good work
         (Eskimo: I love using humor in my stories....makes the read even
         more enjoyable.)

    437  23.01.06  one  Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
         comments = do u even know what a christian is? the story was good,
         minus the whole insest part. u do realize that ur gonna burn in hell for
         that along with exploiting the whole sex & God. Your pretty sick.
         somebody fantacisizes about insest a little excesively
         (Eskimo: I just love readers that don't have a clue....what incest?
         (please note the proper spelling of the word), there was no incest in this
         story. And, if you're a real good Chirstian(notice the word should be
         capitalized), you shouldn't be reading porn! Am I going to burn in hell?
         Well, since I don't necceserilly believe in either a heaven or a hell, I really
         don't beleive so. Please use a dictionary before sending your comments from
         now on. Maybe you can get your mommy to help.)

    436  23.01.06  Brian  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
         comments = I think you are a very good writer, and no there were just
         the right amount of characters in this story.
         (Eskimo: I wasn't too sure about this one. I considered it to be
         a 'like it or love it' type. But it sems most of the reviews on it have
         been favorable. And thanks for the compliments.)

    435  23.01.06  Mart  Beginning Of A Harem
         comments = A good read, but you need to proofread it for spelling
         errors - for example, you're for your (joe talking to deborah about his
         mother)and "you won't be much use to me for the remaining FIFTH TEEN
         minutes" for fifteen minutes.  All of these will pass a spell check but still
         be wrong.
         Despite the apparent complaint, I do appreciate the stuff you have
         written and made available to us non-writers. Keep up the good work
         (Eskimo: Well, seems my re-editing didn't do to well. I'll work on it
         and repost it soemtime in the future.)

    434  23.01.06  AJ  Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
         comments = hot but weird
         (Eskimo: All this story is, is a 'fuck-n-suck' story. It was jsut something
         that came to mind rather quickly, and I just wrote it down. I probably could have developed
         it more, in way of the characters and the story line. But glad you were 'interested'.)

    433  16.01.06  Willy   Ranch Hand
         comments = I sure enjoy the story and would like to read more if u got
         more story on ranch hand
         (Eskimo: I did start a sequel on this one, but it's far from being
         finished. Seems that it's hard to equal the intensity of the first one.)

    432  16.01 06  Judy  Olive
         comments = It was great to  have a male willing to assign some sexual
         attractiveness to older woman for a change!
         (Eskimo: It seems women just love this type of story, where a younger man
         seduces or is seduced by an older woman. I'm thinking it's a fantasy on
         their part, and I just wrote it out for them.)

    431  13.01.06  Jim  Stories
         comments = Needs to be much more subtle
         (Eskimo: Please explain....you also didn't say which story's that
    	 you are talking about.)

    430  04.01.06  Sassy  Stories
         comments = I really have enjoyed your stories, though to be honest I
         have only read 3 of them. I read the one about the ranch hand who
         introduced the art of making love with his boss's 2 young daughters, the one
         about Olive, and the one with the twin bikers. The reason I chose those
         3 were because there were personal details in them that caught my eye -
         the name Olive is very familiar and beloved (and no, it is not my own
         name), the ranch background was similar to my up bringing, and third and
         last, there are twins in every generation of my family, myself being
         one. But all this is irelevant drib drab lol! My purpose in emailing you
         is to tell you how very much I loved your stories.
         The reason I loved your stories was because though they are erotic
         (extemely so...so much I had to have a brief interlude lol) they still
         kept my interest as to plot details. You could say that they "lured me
         in with the interesting titles and brief synopsis, grabbed my attention
         wholly and kept me on the hook until completion? They were extremely
         erotic without being trashy or crude. My sincerest appreciation and
         gratitude!
         (Eskimo: I don't know why, but I love it when women write to say how
         much that they enjoyed my stories. I ahev noticed that they usually mention
         how a story reminds them of something that had happened int heir lives, an
         ineresting point, I think.)

    429  04.01.06  Fritz  Stories
         comments = Your stories are o.k. but lapses in grammar spoil them for
         me, no hard feelings. Nobody is perfect. BUt we have to keep trying.
         Thanks.
         (Eskimo: Yes, you're right, and remembering what letters need to be
         in uppercase is also important.)

    428  03.01.06  A Guy  Key West Balcony
         comments = nice, but felt....short.  like it was a piece of a longer story.
         unsatisfying, as light fluffy biscuit is - when you smell the rest of the
         banquet thru the door.
         (Eskimo: An interesting anology....maybe I could have written a bit more, but
         I didn't....possibily a followup with just the mom, maybe? The daughter was the appetizer,
         while teh motehr was the prime rib? And then both for dessert? It does have
         possibilities, I do admit that. I do have to add, that this was a quickly written
         story, less than a few hours. I've some works that I started years ago, and have never
         finished. So, for a very short story, I am very satsified with it the way it is.)

    427  03.01.06  Bud   Following Directions
         comments =    You asked about a different name for this story.
         How about " The Treasure Hunt" ? After reading this story it is appropriate.
         (Eskimo: Hmmmm, that is a good title, I'll have to think about it.
         Then again, your title has given me the idea of another story. Now, to find the
         time to write it.)

    426  03.01.06  hopless romantic  Key West Balcony
         comments = <>
         This line spooked a HOPELESS ROMANTIC into believing that this was just
         another story about a delightful ONE NIGHT STAND, until I read on to
         the far more hopeful ending.
         Yes, I would LOVE to see the story continued, particularly if Mom
         become so jealous of her daughter that she really wants to SHARE his cock.
         By the way, it was never mentioned whether she was 'on the pill!' Mom's
         disclosure that she is NOT, occurring later that day might add some
         rather strong spice to this story!
    	 (Eskimo: Another indepth review by everyone's loveable literary
    	 critic, the Hopeless Romantic. I ended the story as I did, because I thought
    	 adding more to it to involve the motehr would only ruin it, make it
    	 to long. I did enjoy writting htis one, seting the mood and plot came out
    	 rather well, I thought. And, it made the reader wonder what was to happen
    	 next at teh end. It gave the reader the inspriation to conjure in their
    	 own mind what might happen next. Obviously HR cmae up with his idea.)

    425  23.12.05  Gene  Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
         comments = genius alternative world
         (Eskimo: Yeah, it would be nice, wouldn't it.)

    424  22.12.05  Pascal  Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
         comments = comments = The Sunday episode is the same as the Monday episode.  It
         looks as though part two has been loaded over part one.
         Could you please check it for me?
         (Eskimo: SHIT!!! I totally fucked things up, hadn't I! Okay, I
         luckily had a backup copy, which I edtied quickly and reposted. Sorry
         to make a mess of things.)

    423  22.12.05  Doug  Kentucky Girl
         comments = You are and excellent writer & plotter.
         MINOR Point: on your Main Page (titled WARNING) you have links thus:
         All Stories
         Story Catagory's <<<< that's called a Greengrocers' Apostrophe
         No biggie, but lose the apostrophe ;)
         (Eskimo: Thanks for pointing that out, I'll change it soon. And thanks
         for reading and finding enjoyment of the story.)

    422  22.12.05  Mike   Summer Heat
         comments = Great story

    421  22.12.05  Richard  Justice For Megan
         comments = One of your best.  I really enjoyed it.
         (Eskimo: Even Mrs. Eskimo liked this one. This is probably my best
         story, as far as reader comments go.)

    420  21.12.05  Bill Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
         comments = Your link to "Angel's week ... Sunday" points to a chapter
         titled "Monday". The link for "Angel...Monday" also points to a chapter
         titled "Monday".
         (Eskimo: I think I found the error and have corrected it. If there are any others,
         please let me know.)

    419  19.12.05  Melissa  Ranch Hand
         comments = i love reading stories like this. half way into the story i
         camw can you believe that????????????
         (Eskimo: Gee, not sure if I believe you or not, why not send pictures? Don't
    	 worry, they won't be posted on the internet.)

    418  18.12.05  olnik  Ranch Hand
         comments = hellow,your story is great.my gf also like porn story.i give her your story.
         (Eskimo: Glad you liked it.)

    417  15.12.05  Warwick  Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
         comments = Angel 1 is a really good start at an unusual background for
         a story. Looking forward to the continuation.
         (Eskimo: I hope to have the next installment posted by Christmas. I've
         never done a whole series before, so please bear with me. I figured that this would
         be a unique story, and I'm trying to keep the reader interested through all chapters,
         which can prove to be difficult.)

    416  15.12.05  Gary  Lover
         comments = A very good story. Having written both true sexcapades and
         fiction fantasies I loved the gang bang. My mistress, a white 37 yr old
         nymph, took on 4 well hung black guys allnight long. Could hardly walk
         the next day. I was not able to se them but Terri said they called her
         "a trooper"
         (Eskimo: Yeah, a good gang bang is something special, would like to hear
         of your mistress' story in detail.)

    415  14.12.05  Richardv   Swingers Interacial Weekend
          comments = Nicely done. Kept me reading fast all the way. It was a real
          nice read. Sexy too.  I love this kind of story, My favorites are about
          Mothers in law who finally give in after a struggle.
          (Eskimo: Mothers in law????....hmmmm.....I'll have to think on that one.)

    414  13.12.05  Rocky   Breaking In Party
         comments = This was a good story and sexually pleasing.  I'm curious if
         you are still doing this and how old you are now?  I mean this most
         definitely does sound like a fun event to do.  I've been in threesomes
         before but never in orgies with that many people.
         (Eskimo: This was one of my earlier works. As for mya ge, let's say I'm
         not fifty yet. And no, I don't do orgies. And no comment about multiple
         sex partners, as my mommy may be reading this. Glad you liked it and sent me
         a pleasant comment.)

    413  13.12.05  P   Snow Job
         comments = This was great and super sexy at the same time.  I really
         enjoyed it.  Thank you for your effort and very nice writtings.
         (Eskimo: I wasn't to sure if this story would be well recievd by the
         readers. But, I was pleasently surprised that it has been. It could be considered
         just another 'fuck-n-suck' story, but as I said, it has recieved good comments.)

    412  13.12.05  Chad  Angel's Week Of Religious Breeding, Sunday Ceremony
         comments = One can only dream! Great story.
         (Eskimo: This is teh first story in a series, it's my stab at the
         popular 'Naked In School' series by another author here at asstr.org, and
         I'm glad you liked it. I hope to have the next chapter posted by Christmas.)

    411  13.12.05  Chad  Vacation Bonding
         comments = Story was great, knowing my family This could have been more
         than a fantisy, But that was back in the day and I am sure it never
         crossed anyones mind except maybe4 my older sister and my self. Now that
         could be a story.
         (Eskimo: Another reader who has a childhood that I might want to hear
         more about. This was all fantasy on my part, as I had a somewhat normal
         family upbringing...of course, what's normal?)

    410  13.12.05  Tester P   Iqbal
         comments = Very thought provoking and interesting story. well, raeding
         this brought back my memories of childhood. I also happened to see a
         movie on similar theme some years back.
         (Eskimo: I don't recall any movie like this story, but if there is one,
         I would appreciate someone telling me. And of course, you now have me interested
         in hearing about your childhood.)

    409  12.12.05  Bernie  Olive
         comments = great story made me very horny, its good to hear stories of
         more mature fems
         (Eskimo: I've a few stories with this particular theme. And each
         one is unique. Kind of makes me wonder if I've a repressed Oedipus complex.
         I do have one or two more on this suubject that I'm presently working on, but
         no timetable on when they'll be completed.)

    408  10.12.05  Albrecht   Summer Heat
          comments = absolutly great story! thank you
          (Eskimo: Thank you for taking the time to read it and sending
    	  me your comments. I think the year of 2005 saw some of my best works so
    	  far, and I hope to improve for 2006.)

    407  07.12.05  Stork  Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
         comments = damn, that was hot
         (Eskimo: Thank you.)

    406  07.12.05  Uzra  Iqbal
         comments = I read this story attracted by its title in Urdu. Indeed, a
         very well written story, very realistic; one of the best on this site.
         Congratulations.
         (Eskimo: I've been pleased with the responses so far with this
         one. I'm not too sure how to add another one like this, but maybe I can.)

    405  07.12.05  E.T.  Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
         comments = Enjoyed the story. Hope you'll have more chapters. Maybe the
         daughter's friend might like to be part of it too.
         Keep up the good work.
         (Eskimo: Don't think I'll be adding any more chapters, I think the
         ending of this one was enough. I ahte beating a story to death, and so I
         usually use one cast of characters for just one story, limiting it to one
         story plot.)

    404  06.12.05  Jon  Ranch Hand
         comments = SUPER!!!  This is one of the BEST, Please keep on. Add more
         to this story. Thanks
         (Eskimo: Although I've started a sequel, it's sort of dead in the water, as I've
         been busy workingon other projects. Maybe by end of next year I'll have it done, if at all.)

    403   06.12.05  Sharon   Iqbal
          comments = A very good story I read after quite some time though
          different from your usual stuff. Could we have more on similar themes?
          (Eskimo: Yes, there's a reason it's different. As for your second statement,
          it's possible, but not in the near future.)

    402  05.12.05  Doug   Justice For Megan
         comments = just read a long story you dis about a coledge couple , on
         from perdue and a yung girle from another. Hope you do more. The passion
         and most of all the compassion you expresed was so great, refreshing,
         ok just plain awsome. I felt the love. keep it up
         (Eskimo: Thanks for reading and enjoying the story, since the comments
         are flattering, I won't say anything about spelling and grammar...tempting...but I
         won't.....no need to slam a student from U if IN.)

    401  04.12.05  Hopeless Romantic  Cassie And The Biker Twins
         comments = Normally, I abhor CONDOMS just because of the way that they
         interfere so strongly with my sexual pleasure. Indeed I wonder if
         condoms likewise interfere with a woman's pleasure. Furthermore, I suspect
         that the mutual strong pleasure of an UNSHEATHED cock is important to
         the emotional bonding that occurs during repeated good sex.
         I am delighted however that the condoms are eventually FORGOTTEN,
         with the result that both women unwittingly become pregnant, just as
         NATURE intended.
         (Eskimo: Hmmmm, the more I read his comments, the more I start to
         think he's one of those white extreme right-wing closet perverts....anyway,
         I'll refrain from such finger pointing, mainly because he actually liked the
         story, in his own unique way. I asked my wife, an expert on sex, as we do it
         quite iften, and her comment on the use of condoms is that she enjoys both ways
         about the same, but when it comes time for clean-up, she would prefer that they
         would be worn...seems Mr. Eskimo cums in buckets....As for other women that I've
         had the pleasure of 'knowing' over the years, for the most part, condoms were used,
         but the enjoyment of it for both parties involved never seemed to be diminished.
    	 Actually, in my own expereince, as well as my wife's, it seems condoms tend to
    	 prolong the experience, as it kept me, and whatever former lovers my wife once had,
    	 from cumming too soon, and since most women, damn near all from my own personal
    	 experience, in both participating and viewing live, tend to take a lot longer time to
    	 achieve their climatic goal during intercourse, while oral does the job real good before
    	  (and during, guess you would have had to have been there) actual copulation. Whew, looks
    	  like I've gone into sex therapy discussion. I'll stop at that.)

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         comments =
         I like the idea that this story begins with his flirting with two young
         women that work closely together. As both of them rise to his bait, he
         deliberately dates both of them separately in order to arouse their
         COMPETITIVE instincts. Indeed the women's ongoing stream of well veiled
         hints to each other just enhances his apparent progress with both women
         beyond his expectations.
         But it is only after he is forced to intervene in an absolutely
         horrible 'cat fight' between the two women, do they realize that the
         acceptance of ultra-modern ethics allows both of them to successfully SHARE his
         delightful sexual assets. Indeed, the fun of this story should be the
         obvious difficulty that all three have in overcoming their own series of
         misconceptions about sexual threesomes, first within their own evolving
         relationship, and later among their family, friends, and other
         co-workers!
         (Eskimo: Getting pretty bad when you start critiquing stories that I
         haven't even come close to finishing yet....and in the case of this one, I
         probably won't finish it. I probably won't finish it because developing the
         story it just isn't coming out the way that I would like...and I'm almost
         positive not the way that this particular reader would like lol)

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