    Title:Filling The House
    Author: Eskimo1958
    Summary: Joe continues his living with four, fine older ladies.
    And they've a surprise for him, a small week away, where he can use
    his sperm for good use.
    Keywords: M/F, M/FFF F/F impreg

A continuation of my story, of how I ended up living with four ladies, all older than I, in suburban Buffalo, New York. It's a year and a half later, we're now moved in into our new home that Brenda and Deb had planned and had built. Talk about large! It's two stories, with the eight bedrooms up stairs. Yes, eight! Their suites, actually. Each with their own bath, and a sitting area, besides their own sleeping area. Originally, we were going with five, but the girls decided to make things a bit bigger. Downstairs is the living room, a large dining room, kitchen, two bathrooms, a library, a den, with a second fireplace,(ooops, the other is in the library), an exercise room with weights(They've pumped up more than just my cock this past year, as I'm now up to one-eighty.), and three small offices, one of which is mine for keeping books on the household, as well for work I bring home form the business. Yes, I bought Mr. Reynolds out. Actually, Deb and Iris did, sort of a birthday present last fall.

I kept the office on Main, as I also have one employee working there. We moved in in September, and now it's late August of 1987. Time flies. Dad is now living in Florida, and he comes up and visits when he wants. Seems he has a girlfriend down there already. Deb and I visited with them a few weeks back on a trip to her, and mine, favorite nudist camp. So now I've been here over a year. So what have I learned? Well, for starters, it's not all sex. Most men that hear about my relationship fantasize about what I must be doing. They probably think I come home and drill each woman at least once before dinner. Not hardly! I usually only have sex three times a week, tops! Most of the sex I get occurs on the weekend, as we all have regular, and in the cases of the two lawyers and the doctor, highly stressful jobs. Hard to believe, but the women, although they're fun in bed and enjoy sex, they need to be in the mood. They aren't like us guys, ready to jump in the sack at a moments notice. And each one is different, as I've found this out over time. Since I joined the family, we've tried a few different ways on how to handle my 'chores'. At first, we tried a rotating day thing, where each woman had me for the day, and one weekend a month. That worked for about two months, but the girls would end up wanting to switch for one reason or another. Then we tried a rotating four-day stint. Same problem, I would be wanted for some function, or someone's work schedule would foul things up. That lasted another two months. Now, ever since then, I'm open to first come, first call. And on more than one occasion, I was needed by more than one lady. Sort of like a soccer mom and her kids, only a bit more complicated and sometimes involving sex. This happens about twice a month, where I have to race all over Erie County so I can take care of engagements with two different mates. Anyway, back to differences. As I've said, I've learned lots! They all four want to be treated like queens, which I do, although sometimes it borders on Diva's. Brenda is by far the most demanding, even though she was the one that brought me into the group. She's normally strictly business, and the dinners and business meetings I have to attend with her, usually at least one a week, if not more, can be rather tedious. And she can be just as tedious in the sack. It takes a lot to get her romanced, which she and the other three all demand of me. You would hate to see my flower bill. For Brenda, I usually take her to the nicest restaurants, and then the theater, either here, in Toronto, or even Niagara-On-The-Lake. We even made a weekend at Broadway in New York. Had a great time, and blew about a thousand dollars. New York sucks if you want to save money. But, it was worth it, as after the theater, and a bit of dancing, she loves to dance, we returned to our hotel room and we had hot sex until the sun rose. She loves receiving oral sex, although giving tends to be a problem on her part. And she loves to be on top. That's the dominant part of her, naturally. She does like the outdoors, boating mainly. We went for a week long ride on the Erie Canal in a rented barge. We did everything together on that cruise, cooked, cleaned, and lots of sex. She even went topless, which she made me promise I would never tell Deborah, and I haven't. One thing I've never done, is talk about one woman to another on their likes and dislikes. Okay, maybe some with Kathy, but I even keep her in the dark somewhat. Brenda also is the one that tends to only want sex when we're away from home. Usually in a hotel somewhere. She seems more relaxed when we're away from Buffalo. It's rare when she has me spending the night with her in her own room in our house. Deborah also needs a lot to get relaxed. My favorite little nudist, we usually escape for a few days each month to some resort somewhere. Last month was Florida, we've made six trips so far. But we also love to go to one of the places across the border in Canada as well. Next year, she's having me get a trailer and put it at one of them. We usually go out once a week, whenever I'm free. Dinner and a movie, she isn't into dancing, so we usually return home, go to her room, and have some great sex, and then talk. She's definitely the talker of politics. We usually have discussions hours on end. Happily followed by more sex. She's rather open minded on regards of sex. As long as it isn't painful, she will do it. And she is rather daring at times. Returning from a resort near Toronto one night, she had me pull my truck over into a rest area, and we had sex in a darkened corner of the parking lot. I'm sure people saw us and knew what we were doing, as she sat on my lap, rising and falling on my cock, as I diddled her clit to orgasm. Iris is the one with the most mixed emotions. Up high at one point, and needing a lot of hugging at another. I spend lots of time with her, she enjoys me, and Kathy too, reassuring her. I can understand her situation, being a OB/GYN can be tough. Lots of sadness involved, but there's joy as well. As for our relationship, she talks things out with me a lot, more than Deborah on personal things. We also tend to go out once a week, usually to one of her favorite jazz clubs. We've flown to Chicago as well as Memphis and New Orleans(Again!) to see one act or another. And in the sack, she's a big girl, and there’s a lot to love there. She wears me out the most, usually draining me four or five times in one night. The others complain at times, saying she's going to fuck me to death. Kathy is by far the most spontaneous, although Debbie is close behind. We usually spend at least two nights a week with each other, and sex is not always involved. Since she makes the least amount of money, we obviously don't do extravagant things like I do with the other three. Which is fine by her, as she would much rather go camping to a State Park or even up to the Adirondacks for some romance by the camp fire and in a tent. She also has said she wouldn't mind joining Debbie and I for a weekend at what ever nudist resort we put the camper at. So, life was looking great, and I was thinking, I hope it never ends. But anyway, it was late August, and starting from the middle of last month, I had noticed some strange happenings of late. On a few occasions, I noticed the girls talking amongst themselves, and then clam up when I entered the room. At first, I didn't give it a thought. Then, it happened a few more times, before stopping all together. I wanted to bring it up with Kathy, but decided not too. And she was acting a bit strange as well, a little edgy I thought. Plus, for the last ten days, I hadn’t had any sex. And I knew the girl’s aren't having their period. After this long with four women, I knew when who was about ready to be out of commission, At dinner, for once everyone was there. Not a usual happening, as usually someone has somewhere to be. I didn't think anything about it, until Brenda asked me, "Joe, what would you think about a group trip?" Well, this is interesting. "Sounds good, to where?" "Oh, just a small cabin, up in the Adirondacks." She said, with a rather strange smile. I know that smile, it usually is a business smile. Warning bells were going off in my head. But do I listen, hell no. "Yeah, that sounds like fun. When?" Deborah took over, she sensed my edginess, "Labor Day weekend. We'll be gone for two weeks." Iris and Kathy had stoic faces on, although Iris looked a bit apprehensive. Iris has been working out the last four months, she has lost twenty-five pounds, and I swear none of it from her chest. "Two weeks? Gee, I don't know." I looked around. Yeah, it is my slow time, and I haven't had but the one week long vacation with Brenda late last summer. It's been all weekend junkets to somewhere, four days at most. And I do have an assistant that can cover for me. "Oh all right, since it seems you've all taken care of everything anyway." Their faces all had looks of relief. Now what the fuck is up with that? The girls talked away, and I just started thinking. I knew they were up to something, but the question is, what? We were to leave in eight days. Damn, that doesn't give me much time to get my work caught up and get ahead. So, for the next week, I worked twelve hour days, every day, and even brought work home on Sunday. The Labor Day weekend arrived, and Friday night I slept like a baby, finally getting some well deserved sleep, while a strange thought entered my mind, I hadn't had the enjoyment of any of the ladies in a long time. I shrugged it off, soon drifting off to sleep. Kathy woke me early in the morning, my clock read four-twenty. I wanted to roll back over, but she was insistent, saying she would have breakfast ready for us shortly, and to get up. One girl or another had already packed my suitcase, so no problem there, as I headed for my bathroom, and took a hot shower to wake up. Things were quiet during breakfast, and I was getting worried, as a thought popped into my mind, wondering if this was going to be a vacation to dump me. But then, I thought, why would they do that, after spending all this money and all. And Iris just put me through a complete physical last month, and I mean complete! She did lab work on my blood, stool urine, and even my semen. Shit, it hit me, maybe she found something! But then, if she had, she would have started some sort of treatment program already. And I feel fine. They had me drive Iris's Cadillac, with Iris in the front, and the other three in the back. Still no talking, as we rode on down the Thruway, towards the mountains of northern New York. It was a seven hour trip, just near Saranac Lake, as we finally reached our destination, sort of. I found once we got to a office of a rental agency, Brenda and Deborah went in, and came back out with some keys, and we drove to another road, then down it a ways to a small marina. There, we got out, Brenda went to a nice size twenty-four foot bayliner, and we followed, bringing our suitcases along. She barked out orders, nothing unusual there, and we piled on, with me casting off the lines, and her at the helm. We rode about three miles down, then docked in front of a big cabin, and I mean big! It looked like one of those old time Adirondack Lodges from the late 1800's with big massive logs. And the interior, I was amazed. My eyes were already flashing dollars across them, thinking how much this was going to set the household back. As I took a seat, and took it all in, I said loudly, "You know, a simple cabin would have done just fine, Brenda." All four looked at me, and then broke out laughing, with Debbie saying "Joe, you really got to loosen up some times." "Well, guess that's why we're here then, huh?" I said, and quickly noticed the smiles fading to grins. Okay, I'm tired of this shit, as I said "Now, what's the real reason we're here." A look of surprise, from all, save Kathy, who looked at her feet, a pained look on her face. Well, let's push the envelope here, "This isn't my going away present, is it?" Brenda burst out laughing, and the other three chuckled, as Brenda replied "Good god, no. Far from it." She approached me, and sat on my lap, her fingers running through my hair, as the others came over as well, lovingly patting me, and such, "Let's just say it's a surprise, and we'll tell you at the end of the time we have here." She kissed me on my lips, something she normally doesn't do except when we're alone. My left hand fondled her ass, and I was more than surprised when she didn't stop me from doing that. That's another taboo with Brenda, no real signs of affection in front of anyone, including the other three women of the house. They parted, and said for me to take my things to my room. The kitchen was fully stocked, and they would have lunch ready shortly. I was also asked to carry the bags to each of the rooms, which I did. That wasn't hard, the girls each had two suitcases, except for Iris, she had a third. Actually, it was her medical bag. Funny, she never brought it along on trips before. But then, this is a longer trip. I went to my room, big four-post bed, made of rough hewn logs, couldn't describe it if I wanted too. But very nice looking. I unpacked, and afterwards took a seat. One good thing about this trip, I should be getting some romance. You see, all four ladies run about the same cycle, with Brenda being the exception, running about three days behind the other three. And her period should have ended last weekend. So I smiled, anticipating some fun in the sack. Don't get me wrong, this relationship is more than sex, lot of work involved, as I've said earlier. But, I am a man none the less, and I love sex. Lunch came around, and I made my way down, and we had sandwiches with some soda and chips. After which, Debbie asked if I wanted to fish. I just shrugged and replied in the affirmative, and we went down to the dock, and threw in our lines. Her and I spent the whole afternoon fishing. Did okay, mainly pan fish, but we didn't keep any. Finally, at about six, we headed up to the lodge, and entered. No one around, at least not in the living area. I called out for them, as Debbie looked shocked for some reason, and I heard Brenda hollered out from the upstairs "We'll be down in a minute." Debbie gave me a kiss, saying "I'll be right back." She headed up the stairs and across the open balcony to Iris's room, and entered and closed the door. Now what the hell they up to? A minute later, the door opened, and I watched as Kathy and Brenda came out, dressed in just bathrobes. Interesting. Did they all become lesbo all of a sudden? With Deb & Kathy that wouldn't surprise me, but not Iris. They smiled, as Brenda said "I'll get dinner going, we're having grilled steaks and scalloped potato's." She was smiling, as was Kathy, although hers was a rather nervous looking smile. I just shrugged, and went into the living room, and sat down to read a book I brought along. Brenda worked on dinner, as Kathy helped. I heard them talking softly, but didn't pay them no mind. Iris and Debbie soon came downstairs, and I noticed both in bathrobes. I suddenly felt over dressed. Now what are they up too? An hour later, dinner was ready, and we sat down to eat. Afterwards, I went on back to the living room to continue with my book, as the girls were talking about various subjects. An hour into my book, I noticed the girls all go upstairs, and into an empty sixth bedroom. Now I am curious, but just kept on reading. It was quiet up there, too damn quiet. After about ten minutes, I saw out of the corner of my eye, two figures come out, and head across the balcony towards the stairs. I lifted my head and I about died. There coming down the stairs were Brenda and Debbie, neither wearing a stitch of clothing on. I put the book down, and watched, as they came down the stairs, and right up to me. Reaching out with their hands, I took a hold of them, and they pulled me to my feet, as they led me back upstairs to the room they came from. As I ascended the stairs, I caught a whiff of incense, it aroma smelling quite pleasant. They had me enter the room first, and I was amazed at what I saw. There on the bed, laying on her back, with a pillow under her ass was Kathy. Her legs were spread out, and she was moaning, as Iris was between her thighs, licking her slit. Damn, my cock sprung to attention, as Brenda and Deborah started peeling my clothes off, without saying a word. I was naked in seconds, and the girls led me to the bed, as Iris moved away from Kathy's wet slit. Kathy moaned, at the sudden disappearance of Iris's gentle tongue, but soon sighed, as I eased my cock into her cunt, held onto her knees and slowly started pumping her with a slow, steady fuck. Now, the whole time, I'm thinking, what the fuck is going on? Is this some fantasy thing the girls thought up or what? And why do I care? Hell, I'm happy, as I watched both Iris and Debbie lay down next to Kathy, one on each side, and start massaging and sucking on the closest tit each. And suddenly I felt a hand down below, and saw it belonged to Brenda, as she massaged Kathy's clit. I felt Kathy's vaginal walls shudder, as she cried out softly, signaling an orgasm. Brenda, her hand still on Kathy's sensitive clit, sat up, and kissed my neck, whispering "Go ahead stud, fill her womb with your seed, fuck her good with that long cock of yours." Oh man, I hate encouragement. I stiffened and grunted, as I shot a few weeks worth of cum into her tight hole. My spurting manhood and Brenda's hand triggered Kathy's own orgasm, as she cried out loudly. I pulled out, and sat back on my haunches, as Brenda dived in between Kathy's thighs, thrusted her fingers into her gooey cunt, and started finger fucking her, as she tongued her clit. Well, this is a surprise! All four of my lovers, giving each other tender loving. I smiled, and rolled onto my back, and crawled under Brenda's upturned tush. Her slit was begging to be sucked, as I grabbed her hips, and lowered her snatch to my lips. I ate her snatch for awhile, and felt someone start sucking my limp tool. Brenda came hard once, before crawling off my face, and I saw it was Iris sucking my rapidly expanding pecker. She smiled at me, and I felt a hand tugging my arm. Turning, it was Deborah, saying "Come on, you're hard and ready." I noticed a sense of urgency in her voice, as Iris left my cock, and kissed it's tip, before I went towards Kathy, only to be stopped buy Deborah, saying "No big boy. My turn to feel that prick of yours." She smiled, and turned around onto all fours, waving her bare ass at me. Well, if that isn't an invite. I just shrugged, and grabbed her hips, and entered her easily. I started sliding my meat in and out of her slick cunt, her vaginal muscles gripping my meat, trying to milk the next load out. I felt a tongue on my balls and looked down and behind me, finding Brenda down there, on her back. Iris was over at Kathy, and I was curious to see her inserting fingers into her gaping, well fucked pussy, saying "Let me get you off one more time, maybe it'll help his seed do the trick, baby." I blurted out "Do the trick for what?" Oh shit, I froze. Only for Deborah to turn her head and hiss at me, saying "Don't stop, keep fucking my hot cunt! Fill it with your hot cum!" It was most definitely an order. And I complied. I was thinking, never a good thing while fucking, but was thinking none-the-less. Is this a breeding situation? I looked at Iris, who was looking at me, as she fingered Kathy’s hot slit, "Um, Iris, am I suppose to knock up Kathy tonight?" Kathy, eyes closed, giggled, saying "Oh god, I hope so." Brenda, all business like, stated underneath me, "You've almost figured it out stud." As she then grabbed a ball between her lips, and sucked hard. I groaned, as a rush of cum spurted out of my cock and flooded Deb's hot box, triggering her own orgasm, as she cried out loudly. I sank back, my cock pulling out of Deborah's slick cunt, a trail of cum leaking out, which Brenda rolled over and licked away. My cock was deflating, two hot fucks in less than twenty minutes, even a bit too much for me. As I watched the girls, and gently stroking my meat, I asked "So, I take it more than one wants to get impregnated." Deborah, now rolled over o her back, with Brenda laying next to her, each playing with each others twat and breasts, smiled at me, saying "Yep, you've to get all four of us knocked up this week." My jaw drop, "All four?" I stated, "And why didn't you tell me before now?" Iris crawled over, and inhaled my cum covered meat, as Brenda replied "Didn't want to put you on too much pressure." Kathy was on her side, as she said "We all are on fertility drugs, and you are on vitamin supplements, with a lot of vitamin E." "Oh." Was all I could muster, as Kathy crawled over, joining Iris in cleaning my cock, or was it getting my cock hard once more? Either case, they were doing a great job. I felt my manhood twitch, as the blood flow started to return to my monster meat. "So, um, like, do I knock all four of you up tonight?" They all giggled, except for Brenda, always cool and calm Brenda, "No Joe. Not all in one night." She left Debbie's snatch, and came over, I reached out and grabbed her left boobie, my cock jumped an inch. "Debbie and Kathy are at their most fertile tonight, and probably tomorrow. Iris will be in two days, then me, a day later." Debbie moaned, saying "You're going to be a busy boy, Joe." Iris and Kathy chuckled, as my cock was about there. Kathy didn't want to wait anymore, as she pushed Iris away, and crawled onto my lap, facing me. Iris, behind her, reached under Kathy's ass, grabbed my swollen, red meat, and aimed it for her friends cunt, rubbing the head of my cock into her slit. Kathy lowered hips, settling my cock into her wonderfully tight vagina. Kathy locked her lips on mine, as she started gyrating her hips, pulled her face away, and said "I'm going to fuck your sperm out boy!" Oh yeah, a challenge. I was still back on my heels, as she was straddling my waist, her hands on my shoulders, my hands at her side, just even with her beautiful breasts. She started riding me, and I started thrusting and my throbbing cock into her cunt. She arched her back, her body falling away from me, as I reached around her waist, and grabbed my hands, her arms falling to her side, as she cried out, an orgasm sweeping through her body. I pulled her up against me, burying my face into her breasts, kissing them with hot kisses, as she started bucking again. My cock was almost there, I could feel the old fun familiar feeling of my cum surging forward. Our lips locked, as I made one final lunge, her cunt sinking all the way down my shaft as I felt my cock spasm, sending another load of my seed to her waiting womb, hoping to nail an egg. I didn't realize she had wrapped her legs about my mid section, as I gently laid her down, tracing kisses on her lips, face, and neck, before heading south to her tasty, hardened nipples. Her face was one of beauty, her head laying on the pillow, her vibrant red hair framing it all, and a satisfied smile on her face. I sighed, as I tried to catch my breath. But that wasn't to be easy, as I felt hands on my chest, and a pair of small boobs pressed into the middle of my back. Ah yes, Deborah, girl number two for the knock-em-up contest. I pulled back out of Kathy, she making a whimper of my cock vacating her paradise. Turning around, I had Deb in my arms, and we were kissing passionately. I saw a glimpse of Iris, as she went over to Kathy. Brenda was sitting on the bed, her back up against the headboard, her fingers in her pie. I chuckled, all four of my ladies. And I was to see if I get all four pregnant. My cock twitched, flaccid, but twitched none the les. I think it liked the idea of such a wonderful challenge, as I laid Deb down on her back, and buried my face in her snatch, tasting the combined juices of our earlier liaison. Deb always loved my tongue, and how it worked her slit. She, like the other three, had a preference. She loved for me to lick the whole slit, while playing with her nub with my forefinger. And reaming both her holes usually got her off as well, and mighty quickly I might add. As I was eating away, a mouth was soon sucking my half-hard cock. God, how long have we been going at it, I wondered. It seemed like hours, but I'm sure it wasn't more than maybe forty minutes, and I already had emptied my balls three times. In the back of my head, I wondered if the remainder loads of the evening would be of much use, but what the hell, at least it would be for a good cause. It took awhile for my cock to get hard, and I wasn't surprised to see it was Brenda was the one working it in her mouth, once I was good and ready. I had brought Deb off countless times, before Brenda said I was ready for some more action. Deb sat up, and I started to as well, but she pushed me onto my back, and crawled on top. She impaled her tight, squishy cunt onto my shaft, and started rocking away. My balls were aching, I hadn't had to perform like this since I first joined my ladies, and never this much in such a short amount of time. Finally, after what seemed like forever, her body stiffened in one massive orgasm, as the sweat dripped from her nipples onto my chest, her cunt clamping onto my cock, milking out a load out of my abused cock. I was exhausted, as I was out like a light after that one. But not before I heard Kathy giggling, saying "Seems he needs some rest." And Brenda saying "Yeah, give him an hour or two, okay?" Wasn't sure what time it was, but I was woken later, my aching cock throbbing, as not one, but two pair of lips were nibbling on it. Opening my eyes, I looked to see Kathy and Debbie, but no Iris and Brenda around. Deb read my mind, "They went to bed, seeing as they weren't going to get filled until their turn anyway." I smiled, as Kathy swung a leg over my torso, saying "But, we still will be, hopefully at least one time each before sun rise." She was facing my feet, I getting a wonderful view of her cunt swallowing my cock as I replied, "Yeah, but will I last until sunrise." Deborah, my sweet Deborah, crawled up, kissing my chest, saying "Where's there's a mouth, there's a way." And she was right. For after twenty minutes of riding, Kathy coaxed another load of my worn meat. And after thirty minutes of them sucking my cock, with me tasting the sweet nectar of Kathy, I rose once more, to be able to take Deb as she laid on her back, her ankles pinned down to her ears, as I drilled her hard for thirty minutes, before dumping my last load of the night. The next day, after I slept for ten hours, I just strolled around the lodge naked. And whenever I was hard, I took turns with Kathy and Deborah. I did both three times each, before going to bed with both. The following day, Iris had me wait, as she took her vaginal temperature, waiting for what she calculated to be a good time. I also think she was waiting for my sperm count to rise again, although she said I should be good to go, considering I had great test results. I looked at her rather puzzled, before she smiled, reminding me about my physical a few months back. She required me to give a sperm count, which I did. The night before the exam, as well as teh night after, I had relations with both Kathy and her. Seems it was planned, as the next day, she called me at my office, telling me I was needed to try another sperm test, saying my first one was tainted. Well, it wasn't tainted. They just wanted to see how much recovery I had. Seems I had great recovery, as my second test was just barely below my first. Iris wanted more privacy than Kathy and Deborah. She just wanted me, and me alone. From after dinner, until late the next evening, we were in each others arms. We made love probably a dozen times, in a combination of positions, before I finally moved on to my own bed, exhausted and spent. I was worried that Brenda would be a waste of time, thinking I might not be able to get the fourth one in. But, the next evening, Brenda had plans of her own, as she had Deborah join us. And what she had done to Deborah just nights before, Deborah did to Brenda this night, and much of the following day. The best was when after about the fourth load I pumped into her fertile body, I was leaning up against the headboard, with her laying on her back against my chest, my tool firmly wedged in her well-oiled snatch, as Deb sucked her clit. Her orgasms were the most intense I had ever seen, as she came hard for ten minutes, damn near wrenching my cock from my body. I enjoyed every minute of the week, the feeling of my loving ladies, giving their fertile bodies to take my seed. We left the lodge at the end of the week. All five of us were carrying smiles, hoping tests in a few weeks would reveal good news. All four turned up positive, and I was thankful, as if all turned up negative, I think another session like that would probably kill me. Kathy's parents were elated when they found out six months later after the ultra sound that their only child was carrying twins. Seems the fertility drugs worked well, as Iris also carried twins. Both were full term pregnancies, which is unusual for multi-births. Kathy had a pair of girls, Iris had boys. Deborah had a healthy little girl, while Brenda delivered a bouncing baby boy. All were born within a week. So, we had an even amount, great. We hired a nanny, and had two nurseries built, one for the three girls, and one for the three boys. We never had any more children, my four ladies and I. All six are now in high school, and doing quite well. So, this story ends, but not the love the five of us have for each other.

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