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    399  03.12.05  Hopeless Romantic  Knocking Up A Mother And Daughter
         comments = The setup of this story BOTHERS me so much that I could not bear to
         read your story. :-(
        But frankly, I think that our sex organs have evolved over the
        millennium so that healthy women conceive during REPEATED  enjoyable
        intercourse IN SPITE of their best efforts to use primitive birth control
        techniques (excluding 'the pill' and surgical sterilization). Conversely, it
        is my understanding that successful lactation naturally inhibits most
        woman's ovulation, although using that concept as a birth control
        strategy is considered UNRELIABLE by modern standards.
       Accordingly, I think that the story would be more REALISTIC if both
       mother and daughter became pregnant more than once by the same black man
       IN SPITE of the often expressed wishes of all three of them. Indeed, I
       suspect that it is the willful VIOLATION of several accepted COMMUNITY
       STANDARDS that enhances their adrenalin flows and thus greatly
       strengthens their mutual sexual enjoyment of this interracial threesome
       relationship. Doing it all 'bareback' should just spur their pleasure yet
       another notch! :-(
       (Eskimo: Yeah, so you sort of liked the story, this is good, we're making
       process.)

    398  03.12.05  Alan  Kentucky Girl
         comments = It was a bit long but a touching tale! It would have been
         fun if she shares himm with her sisters and maybe even the parents!!
         (Eskimo: Loved the comments, but! I was trying to keep it somewhat
         realistic. Yeah, an earlier commenter said it was highly unrealistic that
         her father would have just dropped her off at his door, but, doing her sisters
         and mother? Okay, it does sound interesting, not to mention fun, but then the
         story would have been even longer, and that was your first complaint.)

    397  03.12.05  Hopeless Romantic   Iqbal
         comments = <>
         For starters, I usually ignore stories written by or about southeast
         Asia for a long list of foolish reasons. Thus, I read this one JUST
         BECAUSE of your request for comments, sensing that you had written a rather
         unusual story.
         Overall, this story is lacking a certain 'something' compared to your
         usual efforts. But upon looking back it could be due to the complete
         lack of dialog....yada, yada, yada.....
         (Eskimo: Well, you did get the 'foolish' part right. Think about it,
         the writting style was completely different from my normal methods, chances
         are, I didn't write it.)

    396  12.11.05  Mohammed  Toys 2
         comments = the story is seducting but too long
         so try writing a short story behanchod,
         (Eskimo: Too long? Checking the file size, it's probably below average in size.)

    395  03.12.05  Bobby  Carla's Business Trip
         comments = loved the way you explained in details
         (Eskimo: Thank you, you can never have enough details....or sex!)

    394  27.11.05  msht  Cassie And The Biker Twins
         comments = that apartments with the snow.  sounds like those just
         across the line into mich. in whiteword township..  i enjoy your stores
         (Eskimo: No, actually, I had no particular apartment comples in mind,
         since I'm not from the Toledo area, I had no clue of any to begin with. In
         all of my works, I do try not to give an exact street name in a particular
         city, maybe a compass direction, but that's about it. And in the stories that
         are not fiction, such as 'Swingers Diary' and 'Listening In', I change the settings
         so no one can figure where they took place.....although one or two readers have come
         close with some guess's.)

    393  25.11.05  Tony  Stories
         comments = Well done.  Keep up the excellent work.  I always enjoy your
         stories.
         (Eskimo: You know, it's just dawned on me, but it looks like that
         I've gotten a bit of a following here. Not in my wildest dreams did I
         ever think that I would get so many readers. Of course, the downside to
         all of this is trying to come up with some fresh material. But, I'm sure
         something will cum up.)

    392  18.11.05  Dan  Weekend With The Boys
         comments = Liked the story. How about another chapter and how about if
         she got knocked up and what happens after that.
         Keep up the good work.
         (Eskimo: Thankfully, this one went under the radar of Hopless Romantic. Anyway,
         I'm glad you liked the story. But, there will not be a sequel, sorry. I've way too
         many works that I've started and have yet to even come close to finishing to write a
         sequel. However, if you want to, you're more than welcome to give it a shot.)

    391  17.11.05  hopeless romantic  Wife's Friend
         comments = So when does Amy become UNEXPECTEDLY pregnant after all thus
         UNPLANNED fucking? Again, that awful RISK ought to add spice to their
         strong pleasure. :-(
         (Eskimo: You know, you really do have too much free time on your hands.)

    390  17.11.05  hopless romantic  Widower Fun
         comments = << So she moved in as well, sharing a room with Kim. Kim
         took Mindy's pregnancy real well, acted like the surrogate father. It's
         been ten years, since then Mindy had another child, fathered by me, as
         did Kim. She let me drill her for a week to knock her up.>>
         The ending of this story is particularly lame. But I think that it
         would serve nicely as the rough outline of a fascinating sequel. Indeed its
         small-town setting where everybody knows Kent's 'business' would just
         add extra spice to the story. :-)
         <>
         There are rather involved scientific explanations as to why one
         unprotected fucking leads to pregnancy and another doesn't. But the brief
         explanation sounds more like a very quick decision by Lady Luck. But I do
         think that their knowledge of the GAMBLE ought to add something to their
         sexual pleasure, especially as they strive to enjoy their pleasure but
         avoid that inevitable climax as long as possible. But do note my
         suspicion that her strong climax somehow increases her chances of conceiving!
         :-(
         (Eskimo: Well, at least you sort of liked it. You really ought to express
         your feelings better.)

    389  16.11.05  hopeless romantic   Impregnating My Wife
         comments = <>
        This sentence totally chilled my enthusiasm for reading the rest of the
        story. There must be some folks that are somehow attracted to the
        thought of FORCING a woman to conceive a child, but I am not one of them.
        Instead, I would rather see this story revised so that this wife is
        still nymphomaniac, still enjoys gangbang parties and swinging parties and
        the like, but insists on doing it 'bareback' for reasons of her own.
        Indeed, at the bottom of her nymphomania is a love-hate relationship with
        pregnancy so that each time she climaxes with a cock in her depths
        (thus forcing his copious ejaculation) becomes a strongly sweet-sour
        experience.
        Inevitably, she discovers from time to time that a new pregnancy is
        underway, but she doesn't have a prayer of figuring out which of dozens of
        men that that had fucked her over the past month might be the
        biological father of the child she is carrying. Indeed, Lady Luck could have
        easily decided that this child will be a new racial mixture for her
        increasingly multi-colored family!
        By the way, while she is OBVIOUSLY PREGNANT, this nymphomaniac ought to
        enjoy exhibiting her pregnant body to all of those men that have a
        fetish for pregnant women, and watching them become hopelessly aroused by
        the thought of fucking her.
        (Eskimo: Not sure what to say here...other than get over it.)

    388  16.11.05  Jer  Turning The Tables
         comments = This was well written and the story was just great. I
         enjoyed the surprise ending. Keep up the good work
         (Eskimo: I've recieved very few comments about this one, and
         I'm not sure why. It does have an interesting ending, I do have to admit.
         Not your usual interacial story where the white hubby get's cuckolded. Now
         don't get me wrong, I enjoy IR stories, as well as most other genres, but I
         kind of get put off by those that make their IR stories where they humiate
         the hubby(Or anyone else). But, I likened this to my earlier work, The Camp,
         where revenge is involved. Of the two, I think I prefer the earlier one.)

    387  15.11.05  Lee   Justice For Megan
         comments = Wow! I just stumbled on this story. One of the best I've
         read in more than 10 years of reading erotic fiction.  I'm going savor the
         rest of your work.  read one or two a month, so i won't run out.  I
         hope you replenish the supply.  Thanks!
         (Eskimo: By far, this seems to be my best story. Even my wife
    	 liked it! So good that I'm afraid that if someone reads it first, they'll be
    	 dissapointed with the rest of my writtings. As for works on the board,
    	 there's good news, as I have started typing again, albeit very slowly. I'm
    	 going from story to story, adding bits and pieces here and there. Maybe
    	 I'll actually get one done by the end of the year.)

    386  15.11.05  Dick  Candy Learns about Love and Sex
         comments = I enjoyed the way the story built to the weekend.  Ron and
         Candy finally got the chance to express their feelings for each other
         and everyone seemed to get what they wanted.
         I wish life could really be like that.
         (Eskimo: This was one of those stories where I started it one way,
         and then started another story with a similar style, with me actually
         finishing the second one and not the first. It's also one of those hidden
         gems I've written. Most stories that people write an opinion on, I may recieve
         a negative comment or two. But not this one. It has to be in my own personal
         top ten of my works.)

    385  13.11.05  Wes  Kentucky Girl
        comments = Hi, I just finished reading "Kentucky Girl".  I can't recall
        reading any erotic literature previously that emphasizes moral and
        legal concerns in the context of the story.  Not only did your feature
        character acknowledge these concerns, but acted responsibly throughout the
        story line.  Very impressive.  You were completely successful in
        painting a visual image for your reader without resorting to shock and
        implausible scenerios.
        OK, the concept of this young woman appearing on his doorstep
        un-announced with her parents knowldge and permission does place this story in
        the category for unrealistic fantasy. An added positive element for me
        was the location you used for this story and the similarities to my own
        personal experiences.  My early years growing up was in a small town
        just west of Dayton, Oh.
        Oh yeah, I enjoyed your story very much.  I will definitely be reading
        more of your work.
        (Eskimo: I'm glad you enjoyed it. And I did think I made it as
        realistic as possible, and Ia gree, having Trixie dropped off by her father
        was a bit of a fantasy, but it worked well with the story. And you're not the
        first to commetn about this story hitting home concerning the locale it was set
        in. I've done an above average amount of travelling in my life, and I've yet to
        qualify as a senior citezen. Almost all the places mentioned in all of my stories,
        I've actually been to, and in some cases, lived there as well. I guess all that
        moving about the country has stimulated my mind somewhat, hence some rather inspred
        works have come from it.)

    384  12.11.05  sniper   Snow Job
         comments =  killer story man
         (Eskimo: Thank you. Although not in my top ten, it's still a good
         read, not to mention a nice fantasy.)

    383  11.11.05  Alec    Summer Heat
         comments = Good story. I do wish you would make sure of spellings and
         grammer. Not that I am picky but the mistakes distract from the story
         line. Overall I thought the story was great. I don't think there is a man
         who has not wanted to do his sisters when he was in his early teens and
         they were cock teasers. LOL I think some of your ideas for future
         stories are very good. The one of the young lady who returns from the Army
         to her home in what used to be Tennessee is of particular interest.
         (Eskimo: Another story that I'll have to go voer once again. This story
         insired by the memory of summer vacatins as a youth to the local mentioned in
         the story. Although no peeping on any relatins (okay, maybe a cousin or two), there
         was one time a nearby cabin with some teenage hotties (ie: they were alive!), that
         were big teases. As for the story he mentioned, I'll pass along to him what I've had
         written so far, and let him decide what he wants to do.)

    382  10.11.05  AJ   Candy Learns about Love and Sex
         comments = this story is pretty cool
         (Eskimo: I like happy readers.)

    381  09.11.05  Bob  Ranch Hand
         comments = The ending was fine. It leaves the story to stand complete,
         if no sequel is ever written. If you do write the sequel(s), great!
         Then again, I thought the first Star Wars movies was the best because
         it ended in a similar manner, and was able to stand alone as a complete
         piece of work, regardless of whether or not a seques was ever made (as
         we know, they were, and they were not as good)
         Hoping you can do sequels better than George Lucas!
         (Eskimo: I've actually have started a sequel to this one, time will
         tell if I ever get it done.)

    380  08.11.05  Bob   My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
         comments = Hot story! And no, there weren't too many characters! Carmen
         was the only character who didn't develop, but she had her place when
         she appeared.
         Technical suggestion - consider running a spelling & grammar checker
         over the story before posting.
         (Eskimo: I jsut never got around to having Carmen join in on the fun. As
         for the 'Technical' issues, I've ben working on that, going over stories that
         I've written, and finding and correcting mistakes. It seems spellcheck isn't
         100% accurate....and my rgammar never was that great, anyhow.)

    379  06.11.05  Jim  Beginning Of A Harem
         comments = Another fine story!  Nicely balanced elements of sex,
         interesting characters and plot....And this story DEFINITELY deserves more
         chapters......How about it?  Thanks for writing!  Jim
         (Eskimo: I wrote one followup story, and that will probably be it. I
         Just don't like the idea of keeping on writting about the same line, as I tend
         to get bored with one set of characters. I much prefer to write about someone
         else in another setting. Which is probably why no new story as come from me in
         a few months.)

    378  05.11.05  Jim  Sam And Crystal
         comments = Nice story, interesting twist with the games and multiple
         women, but the nicest part is the three in love with each other!  Good
         job and thanks for writing!
         (Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed this one.)

    377  04.11.05  hopless romantic   Snow Job
        comments = << I was still, savoring the after glow of a great orgasm,
        our bodies still connected at the hips, as I had my upper body supported
        by both arms straight out, when I heard a sound behind me, of
        clapping.>>
        This is a rather surprising twist to your story, but it explains why
        the otherwise obviously single Aunt Bev wasn't worried about pregnancy as
        Nathan ejaculated copiously and repeatedly into her depths. But as I
        think about the story, I seriously wonder how Nathan could be so totally
        clueless about the peculiar lifestyle of his family until that very
        moment!  :-(
        (Eskimo: Well, you would be amazed at soem family secrets you might
        discover years after the fact. I could go there in detail, but why drag my
        dead realtives out of the closet. Kind of funnny in a way, from a modern
    	viewpoint. Seems everyone is concerned about things happening these days,
    	in regards to underage sex, pedo, incest etc,...YET, you would be surprised at
    	what dirt you can uncover from the past when you start searching through
    	things and asking the right person the right question.)

    376  04.11.05  hopeless romantic  Sam And Crystal
        comments = This story is delightfully long, but certainly you need its
        entire length to struggle through Crystal's problem at being such a
        large woman, and Sam's strongly lesbian tendencies.
        Note that I am glad that you included the few lines about her
        miscarriage, as it should have forcefully reminded the READER about the awful
        risks of unprotected sex. However, I think that both characters should
        have stopped to reflect upon the possibility that she might have
        successfully carried that child to term. Indeed that thought might have lead
        each of them into a combination dream and nightmare about being married
        with children and all of the complications thereof. :-(
        <>
       I am not at all sure what his gang-bang does for the story, but this
       HOPELESS ROMANTIC is particularly thrilled with the way itends! :-)
       (Eskimo: For some reason, I figured you would like this one, as
       wella s not be too keen for the other one you critiqued today. Seems like
       when I go into detail on a relationship, the story flows better. As for the
       gangbang game, jsut a fantasy....I thought about the 'winner' getting more
       than just a womb full of cum, but didn't go on with it.)

    375  04.11.05  Sid  Educating Rita
        comments = READING THIS STORY MADE ME CUM AT LEAST 5 TIMES. YOU WERE SO
        LUCKY TO GET SUCK A FUCK!
        (Eskimo: lol, glad you found some relief from my story. Keep on
        reading...or whatever....)

    374  03.11.05  Dave  re: message #372
        comments = The story is AfterShock by dotB and can be found on his
        author page on ASSTR
        (Eskimo: Thank you. Hopefully he'll see your post and find the story,
        as he didn't leave his email address.)

    373  30.10.05  anon  The Cottage
         comments = Just finished "The Cottage"  a really fine piece of writing,
         as are all the stories of yours I've read.
         I have one negative comment which is that I find this distracting from
         your fine story telling.
         Your is a personal pronoun.
         You're is a contraction of you are;  you mix them up.
         (Eskimo: Thanks for reading my works. And sorry about the grammar.
         I just went through all my works to correct mistakes, and I'm sure
         that I've missed a few things.)

    372  30.10.05  dawiz  Stories
       comments = Have been trying to find a specific story that I can't
       remember the title of, can you help? Have enjoyed many of your stories.
       1 . Main character is a older man who owns a old wooden boat powered by
       a steam engine. It also has modern features like radar.
       2. He rescues a woman he finds after a tidal wave destroys a coastal
       town. He also finds and rescues a cat.
       3. He lives on an island that has a hidden narrow passage into a
       secluded bay.
       4. There are 5 other residents of the island, the owner - an old man in
       a wheelchair, his 2 daughters, his nurse/housekeeper/lover and her
       young son.
       5. They are "visited" by member of the Canadaian Coast Guard searching
       for Russian Mafia types.
      Any Ideas of the title/author?
      (Eskimo: Um, I haven't a clue......try using google.)

    371  30.10.05  Les   Stories
        comments =  just want to say that I enjoy reading your stories and find
        that they are written exceptionally well. thank you for your erotic and
        greatly written with awsome plots.
        (Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed them. Since I started writting
        years ago, I'm constantly trying to come up with different plots. I think
        that's why I', at a sort of a standstill right now. Yeah, I've some plots
        that I'm working on, but they seem to be the same old same old. Give me time,
        maybe I'll get something done by the end of the year.)

    370  30.10.05  Vic  The Cottage
        comments = Lovely story, but I'm still not sure I understand the
        motives behind the daughter's conversion.  The rest is written in a very
        credible and compelling fashion.
        (Eskimo: Sorry, I never thought it was important to include how or
        why concerning the changing attitude of the daughter. Guess I just didn't
        think it was important enough to write about in the story.)

    369  30.10.05  Kalifornia  Caribbean Cruise
         comments = it was a good suck & fuck, but it could have been better.
    	 there was no emotion.  he married Sandy after a few days, seems to
    	 have no real feelings for her, she is just another cum receptical.
         then Kayla loses her virginity, she gets emotionally involved and wants
         to become his second wife, fuck and suck Sandy on the side.  she
         doesn't really know these people!
         then on their pre-wedding night they do women/wife swapping!  the
         bride(s), best men, groom, relatives of Kayla swap in a meaningless sex
         party.
         as a fantasy it is ok, but if it had emotion it could have been better
         than a suck and fuck.
         (Eskimo: Yeah, but it's a good fuck-n-suck story. COme on, it was all
         fantasy. Actualy, when I started this one, I wanted to be just Joe and Sarah,
         but I sort of got carreid away.)

    368  30.10.05   Edd  Caribbean Cruise
         comments = Superb!
         (Eskimo: Well, some don't agree, guess that's their opinion. This is an
    	 older story that I went and re-edited.)

    367  30.10.05  Derek   Comunity Breeding Project
         comments = Nice idea. I would like to read more of this.
         (Eskimo: I've been kicking around a few other stories with the same
         theme. Matbe one day I'll get them finished.)

    366  26.10.05  Gino  Ranch Hand
         comments =   first off i'd like to say this is a very good story, on a
         league of the justice/megan story. it could have been longer and i
         would like to see connie and daughter involved but i know you're fairly
         busy with writing new stories. i've been reading a few and some of the
         shorter ones don't quite compare with the longer stories but then again i
         just like to read. keep up the good work
         (Eskimo: These three stories are by far my top three works, and you can
    	 include 'Kentucky Girl' and 'Fantasy Vacation' as the top five. Although 'Couple
    	 Fun', 'Setting Up Roger', 'Relunctance To Swing', 'Nudist', and 'Opening Her Eyes'
    	 are personal favorites as well. And although others have agreed that I should have
    	 lengthened it by including Connie and her daughter, I opted not to. Of course, if I
    	 ever start writting again, maybe I can add another chapter. As for lenght of stories,
    	 it does seem the longer ones are better. My favorite shorter works that I have
    	 written are 'Tale of Two Titties' and 'Listening In', but these are just two. I'm
    	 probably missing a few other gems.)

    365  26.10.05  IL  Stories
         comments = Your stories are VERY good.  I have read several and will
         read more.  You are in serious need of an editor.  I am much too old now,
         but if I was younger I would volunteer.  There are many spelling errors
         and some of grammar.
         (Eskimo: Yeah, this seems to be the number one complaint. During
         last week, I've been going over and editing each story again, usually finding
         errors and correcting them. If you've noticed, I've been doing this alpabetically,
         and hope to have them all done within a week or so. Of course, I'm not saying that
         they'll be mistake free.)

    364  26.10.05  Ricardo   Summer Heat
         comments = Skimo, I really loved this one! As a matter of fact I love
         most of your works. Even my poor English has not been a barrier for
         having so much fun out of reading your works. I wish you a long career as
         an Erotic Fiction Writer.
         (Eskimo: Not to sure about a long career, as at the moment I'm
         contemplating the idea of not writting anymore. Ni need for anyone to
         send messages of encouragment, I've jsut sort of lost interest at the
         moment. Maybe in a while I'll ge the urge again. On the other hand, I
         did come up with a fantastic story line, and have been kicking it around
         in my head the last few days. Sort of a 'current events' story, with a
         'what if' twist.)

    363  25.10.05  A J  Greg's New Housemates
        comments = don't know why but this story is just funny.
        8/10. great story
        (Eskimo: And what's the most amusing about this story, was that I didn't
        like it when I got done writting it. I seriously thought about deleting it.
        But, glad I didn't, as it seemed to make at least one reader smile.)

    362  25.10.05  A J Kentucky Girl
         comments = this is my favourite story of yours yet. this is a very
         realistic story based on things that can or have happened. but yo ruined it
         with the ending about the pills. i think you sholud have just left it
         with the marraige surprise or extended it a bit more to describe there
         furure. i give 9/10 execellent.
         (Eskimo: About the ending, throughout this story, I used a humorous
         style of writting. So, had to end the story with humour as well. You're the
         first to be negative on it, however. I'm glad the story seemed real to you,
         I've found this to be important in writting a good story, although fantasy
         is imortant as well.)

    361  24.10.05  A J  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
         comments = this story is an execellent stroy for who fantasize about
         there step-moms (or moms) that would usually never happaned but this
         story was very good i give 7/10 there werent to many chractors and the fact
         that this story didn't have to many charactors as most would but you
         give good short statments of who they are and no doing a paragraph worthy
         (Eskimo: Thanks for the good critique. I always worry if I'm writting
         to much detail when I describe a character, or even a scene. I want to help the
         reader to visualize teh situation, but not cause too much reading overload.)

    360  23.10.05  partyguial2k5  The Initiation
         comments = Where is the continuation to this story
         (Eskimo: It hasn't been written! Shoot, wrote this one what? Five years
         ago? Pretty sure I'll never write any continuation on this one.)

    359  23.10.05  Jada  Twins In Training
         comments = I can't wait to read this story.
         (Eskimo: You'll be waiting a while.....not sure when or if I'll ever
         finish it. I've so many other stories just like it, that I hate copying
         story lines.)

    358  23.10.05  Jada   Summer Heat
         comments = That was an amazing story. **********
         (Eskimo: Yeah, it was. I'm thinking that this one is in my top ten.)

    357  22.10.05  Mike  Ellen's Erotic Adventures & Justice For Megan
        comments =   I just read a couple of your stories and reading them has
        kept me up all night. I just read, Ellen's Erotic Adventures and Justice for Megan
        Your stories are Fantastic!
        (Eskimo: Thank you. The first one is what I would call a sleeper. Not
        too many people have read it, but it is quite good, in my opinion. The second
        been an overwhelming sucess. That and a few of my other newer works has left
        me wondering how I can top them, or if I'll even try...we'll see,)

    356  21.10.05  gino   Summer Heat
        comments =   good story, i thought the justice/megan story was better
        as it had more of a set up to it but still a pretty good read. if you
        like you can e-mail me at ***********, rest assured i will keep
        reading your work as it is very enjoyable, you did have a few misspelled
        words but with so many stories in the works you probably don't have a
        chance to proof read everything.
        (Eskimo: Wow Gino, three reviews on a Friday night? You must not have
        had a date, or you're married. Like you, I enjoyed Megan more than this one. And
        yeah, there are typo's. but not as bad as they once were. At this moment I'm
        going through each story and editing them again. Hard work, but someone has to do
        it. Seems I'm not in the writting mood of late, so not working on any new stories
        at this time. BUt no big deal, as I've close to ninety stories published online
        right now. My last few have been smashing hits, so thinking on taking it slow and
        easy on about a dozen to get an even hundred, then calling it quits.)

    355  21.10.05  gino  Justice For Megan
         comments =  best story i've read in a long time, i just stumbled onto
         your work and i think i'm going to enjoy being here
         (Eskimo: I'm overjoyed that you like my works. Keep on reading,
         you might find smoe more you find interesting. And if not, go on to the
         one.)

    354  21.10.05  gino  Fishing Trip to Canada
         comments =  i've been to Canada twice fishing, nothing like this ever
         happened to me(what a shame) the last time i was only 12 yrs old. might
         have to go back and get into the great fishing and who knows what else,
         i thought this was a great story man
         (Eskimo: This was inspired by a actual trip, and an actual fantasy.
         Yeah, I would have liked it to happen as well, if I was single.)

    353  21.10.05  anon Molly's Boys
         comments = Very good
         (Eskimo: I enjoyed this story, as it was on my favorite subject, which
         is group sex. I've probably a good dozen stories in the works involving this
         particular genre, ex\specially the older woman and younger men aspect.

    352  21.10.05  a guy  Carrie
       comments = Kathy, Cathy, and Carrie.  there was some name confusion in
       the story Carrie.
       (Eskimo: Kept ya on your toes, eh? I'll read through it again, I may have
       screwed up here and there, not like that isn't possible.)

    351  21.10.05  Simon   Summer Heat
       comments = I've enjoyed nearly all your stories, have the page
       bookmarked even, and I'll continue reading them as they come.  Great stuff,
       well written + proofread (very important).
       (Eskimo: Another of my top stories, but unfortunatly, a 'coming of age'
       story that I'll probably have to delete from my site. I have been going over my
       works, and editing them once again, and have found that they're better reads.
       Some may not be the type of story that you migght enjoy, but in that case, just
       go to the next one and try it out.)

    350  18.10.05  wetlander  Camp Diary
       comments = Becomes somewhat stultifying after a short while . . .
       Didn't bother to read the rest. You make your point tho - The sex acts
       themselves are essentially uninteresting when out of a context.
       (Eskimo:  Excuse me, got to go look up 'stultifying', if I can find that
       fuckin' dictionary...meanwhile, I really wasn't making a point, just writting
       a story. Another futuristic event, like what I mentioned in message #348. The
       future has been on my mind a lot, wondering what is in store for the human race,
       what with the Allah and Jesus freaks around us and such. And then there's the
       Corporate World, they've done us a lot of good, from destroying our planet's
       resources to 'slave' labor and everything in between. Obviously, I'm not
       republican.)

    349  18.10.05  wet2lander  Candy Learns about Love and Sex
       comments = Very nice development of their relationship. Your philosophy
       of sexual learning as presented in this story is a sex-positive
       approach that I honor. Wish it had been available culturally as I grew up (to
       the extent that that ever occurred). Good job!
       (Eskimo:  Yeah, definitily one of my better stories. I worked a long time
       on this one. And time is something I haven't had letely. Been thinking of
       retiring from writting. Even though I've about a hundred stories started. This
       was actually my second attempt at this story theme, the first one has yet to be
       completed, and it may never will be.)

    348  18.10.05  Kalifornia  Breeding Of Chris
      comments = well.  not my cuppa tea, nope.
      it is not the racial thing, but the coldess, the lack of caring.
      it is like they are a bunch of animals, not even erotic since you have
      to have human emotions to be that.
      but maybe someone else's thing.  btw, eskimo, have a pie?
      (Eskimo: have a pie????, no idea what that's about. Anyway, you sort
      of mised the point. The story was set into the future, in a society that uses
      sex for not just reproduction, but for entertainment as well. No inhibitions,
      jealousy, mind games, or anything ewlse. Just good old fun sex. And pleasureable
      sex at that.)

    347  18.10.05  Jaclyn  Candy Learns about Love and Sex
       comments = This story made me cum as many times as Candy did and I
       loved it.  It brought up the old feelings of exploring a new person.  I 'm
       a younge women who;s married and already if looking for other ways to
       get off.  This story made me desire my husband in ways I haven't before
       and I thank-you.  The story was very well written and painted a
       beautiful, vivid picture in my mind.
       (Eskimo: Oh yeaaahhhhh, another female fan. I'm glad you enjoyed
       the story. And Mrs. Eskimo and I hope your hubby enjoyed your desires.
       This probably ranks as one of my top ten stories, even though some would
       say it's pedo, since it concerns underage sex. Speaking of which,
       I've been thinking of taking this one, as wel as a few others, offline.)

    346  17.20.05  Hopless romantic  Changing Values
      comments = Another delight for a HOPELESS ROMANTIC! :-)
      (Eskimo: I sort of figured that you would enjoy this one.)

    345  17.10.05  Hopeless Romantic  The Cabin
       comments = Once I got beyond her history, this story is a delight for a
       HOPELESS ROMANTIC! :-)  <>
       There many natural and disease related reasons for infertility. But I
       have a suspicion that chronic bad sex and chronic marital problems can
       lead to TEMPORARY infertility. Accordingly, this HOPELESS ROMANTIC
       prefers that VERY GOOD SEX and a very stable and satisfying relationship
       EVENTUALLY led this couple into a totally unexpected pregnancy.
       Note that I can't escape the idea that sex is all about making babies
       and taking care of them until they become sexual adults. Accordingly,
       very good sex within a healthy relationship ought to lead a couple into
       pregnancy in spite of their selfish wishes (in the absence of birth
       control pills or the like)!
       (Eskimo: Hmmm, lot to say there, HR. I never did say why she
       couldn't bear a child, didn't think I needed to. But at his much older
       age, and probably less viable and healthy sperm, this may also have
       contributated to their lack of having any offspring together. Thanks
       for your comments.(

    344  11.10.05  Don  Melanie, An Introduction
        comments = sounded real, believable, well written and very erotic
        (Eskimo: I really had the intention of continuing this one in more
    	chapters, but it seemed so real, why make it more into a fantasy?)

    343  08.10.05  Jim  Olive
       comments = this story  i just read  i love it   the way  she playd  u
       at first  till  you  got  her  in bed   you  should have  put in a
       little  ass fucking also thank you  for letting  the  other people
       read  your storys
       (Eskimo: Nice to see that my readers are just as perverted as I am.
       And also enjoy a sex story with an actual story!)

    342  03.10.05  Richard  The Camp
       comments =   Enjoyed the story and hope to find more of your work to
       read as lay awake at night.
       (Eskimo: Hope you do enjoy reading my other works. Currently, I'm going
       through and re-editing my stories when I have the time. Glad you enjoyed this
       one!)

    341  30.09.05  anon  Olive
       comments = Super
       (Eskimo: I do enjoy the comments, even the ones that are short and
       sweet!)

    340  29.09.05  Tom  Big Send Off
       comments = I like the use of my name.
       (Eskimo: Okay, glad you enjoyed it.)

    339  24.09.05  Greg  The Cottage
       comments = Although it was demented, and perverted and a rather odd
       fantasy. I found it good material and enjoyed it as much as it sounds like
       you did writing it.
       (Eskimo:  Interesting....I agree with perverted. However, not sure about
       demented and odd fantasy? The story was inspired by a vacation we took years ago
       up into Ontario, where we took a sight-seeing cruise out of Parry Sound. Seeing
       the many cottages on the islands in Georgian Bay got me to thinking. As did the
       rather obnoxiuos French-Canadian...long story there, but anyway, I am glad you
       enjoyed it.)

    338  18.09.05  Johnny  The Cottage
      comments = I enjoyed your story, how do I get more and keep up the good
      writting!
      (Eskimo: You can read more of my stories by just looking for them...
      no idea when the next new one will be finished.)

    337  16.09.05  lordy  Jane And I
       comments =  Excelent lets have more
       (Eskimo: I think that I've written too many stories...had to go read it to see
       what the story was about....I may have a new one out sometime in late October, maybe
       November. Other persuits have been taking up way too much of my time lately.)

    336  10.09.05  jj  April
       comments = Good story, some good character developement, certain
       fantasy element in the number of times a man of that age could cum,  nice
       fantasy tho. Enjoyed the story.
       (Eskimo: I think this story heped my writting stye, as I really started to
       develop the stories characters much better. As for the man's sexual prowes, was it
       fantasy or possible? Well, a few years back, with soem rather nice inspiration, I was
       able to get my rocks of five times within four hours. However, it took me about four
       days to recover. My skinny ass dragged for what seemed like an eternity.)

    335  05.09.05  dwarf   Snow Job
       comments = I really enjoyed this story, I loved the classic setup.
       Although I am hoping there will be a sequal to this one.
       (Eskimo: This was one of those stories that I wrote while the idea
       was freash in my head. Not to many reades have commented about this one,
       which is too bad. I think it was one of my better short works. As for a
       sequel...god I hate sequels.....we'll see. If I get bored enough, I might
       actually write one. Of course, I've about a dozen others that you readers
       have asked a sequal for as well.)

    334  04.09.05  dwarf   Setting Up Roger
       comments = I laughed my butt off reading this story, I only wished it
       would have been longer.  Can't wait to read more.
       (Eskimo: I enjoyed writting this one. Most came from personal expereinces
       that have happed to my wife and I in the nudist environment. Anotehr story
       I wrote, "Nudist", was also inspired by this life-style.)

    333  02.09.05  Andy  Ranch Hand
       comments = I really liked the story!  Can't wait to read more from you,
       and I hope you do give this one a sequal... Thanks for posting your
       writing, I truly enjoy reading all that i have so far.
       (Eskimo: Although I do have a sequel started, there's no telling
       when or if I'll get it finished. Just check back fromtime to time to see
       what's new.)

    332  01.09.05  Alli  Ellen's Erotic Adventures
      comments = Makes one feel horny and jealous
      (Eskimo: Glad you liked it. Not one of my most read works, but
      a lot of sex in this one. Could have written more story into it.)

    331  30.08.05  Jaded  Kentucky Girl
      comments = It was cute and very funny. And he was true to his word. He
      didn't have sexual relations with her until they were married. It was
      humorous and worth reading.
      (Eskimo: I'm having a very hard time deciding if I want to continue
      writting. Two stories I've written and posted this year have been unbelievably
      well recieved, not sure if I can repeat the performance. So, it may be a short
      spell before I finish one of the many works that I currently have on file.)

    330  27.08.05  Ed Kentucky Girl
       comments = read your  "Kentucky Girl".  Then I read it several times again. I
       thoroughly enjoyed it. It is well written and has a story line that is believable
       or at least plausible.  That is important to me, as well as having a happy ending.
       I live just east of Kentucky in West Virginia along the Ohio and Big
       Sandy rivers. Pikeville is not to far from here. Trixie's family sounds much
       like the people who live in the West Virginia's hollers not far from
       here.  That cause me to wince, or perhaps grin, when you describe
       Trixie's family. I have heard the phrase, "that's hitting mighty close To
       home," and that surely was.
       I enjoyed the humor, the obvious as well as the fuddle.  The brother-in-laws smirks
       and the sisters looks.  I smiled at them.  But  the birth control pills was the best.
       I laugh aloud at that. I look forward to reading your other stories and hope that
       some of them come up to this one. Please keep writing, and posting your stories.
       What are your favorites?
       P.S. The only flaw that I found, was when Trixie fell asleep and was snoring in minutes.
       A beautiful delightful girl like Trixie couldn't possibly snore, even if she came from
       the hollers of Kentucky. No doubt that her mother would, but not her.
       (Eskimo: Now why can't the negative coments be this well written and thought
       out? I would say that this story and "Justice For Megan" are two of my best works that
       I have came up with in the last year. Although " Summer Heat" was pretty good as well.
       As for my older works, I don't know where to begin. The humorous ones I enjoyed
       writting. And of course, I always enjoyed the ones involving group sex. It does
       seem that my writting style has improved over the alst year or so, and it seems
       to me that it's making it more diffiuclt to come up with good fresh material.
       I've been trying to write new ones that are not copying ones that I've already
       written, which is proving to be a difficult task. But we'll see. I can say
       that of the stories I'm close to finishing, there's a wide range of genre.
       I've also been working on a 'mind-control' story, something that I've never
       tried before. Sort of stuck at the moment on it, but maybe something will inspire
       me to finish it by years end. If not, it will be one of many that will get trashed
       before completion.)

    329  22.08.05  Rod  Kentucky Girl
       comments = i went back and read it a second time.the best story i've
       read on the net.i still say you are writting my history.haha.how did you
       know about elkhorn,pikeville,etc.next thing you will be in
       shelby,phelps,jenkins or rockhouse,keep up the good work.
       p.s dont listen to guy,he's a negative whiner,you rock!!!!!!!
       (Eskimo: I just happened to have visited that part of Kentucky a few
       times in my life. Most of my stories cover places that I've been to over
       the years. Even places that I grew up by. As for Guy, he seems to only like
       one type of story, and can't broaden his horizon to enjoy other scenerios.
       Too bad, but oh well.)

    328  17.08.05  George  Breeding Of Chris
       comments = The story was good, but i believe that it could have been a
       little bit longer and had given a clear sign on how they were doing it.
       But overall the story was horny. keep it up.
       (Eskimo: You're right, I should have made this one longer. I've
       thought about adding parts to it, but just haven't gotten around to it. I
       do remember that when I wrote this one, that I sort of rushed it through. I
       had the main idea in my head, but didn't expand on it.
    327  14.08.05  Guy  Couple Fun
       comments = There sex stories and then there are SICK stories.I read all your stuff
       and for the most part its OK.But some of your stuff is very sick.The
       actions of the people in this piece of crap is beyond anything anyone
       could understand or belive.A very sick and perverted mind had to have
       written this.To belive that a non-whore woman or girl could have intercours
       30  or 40 plus times in the time you wrote is stupid to say the least.
       Clean up your act or look for some anti Eskimo fan clubs.
       (Eskimo: LOL, I'm not even going there, except to say diversity is part of
       my best repetoire. Oh yeah, we're having a great vacation.)

    326  13.08.05  Guy  Getting AC
        comments = Its very hard to understand how an author like yourself
        would lower themself to write s piece of shit like this.You write a great
        story like "Kentucky Girl" and also this thing.I had hoped you had more
        class.Its a stupid fuck story that says nothing and goes noplace.
        (Eskimo: Well, seems that Guy didn't like this one. Oh well, guess
    	I'll have to go and cry myself to sleep.)

    325  11.08.05  Bob  Kentucky Girl
       comments =  Very good, quite funny in parts also. Keep up the good
       work. Loved it.
       (Eskimo: Thank you.)

    324  11.08.05  Adventure  Stories
      comments = I enjoyed the story very much. It really kept me excited and
      anticipating. But the twist at the end was unexpected and therefore
      wonderful. Pretty hot too overall. More?
      (Eskimo: Not sure which story it was that this person was comenting
      about. COuld have been any of my latest works.)

    323  11.08.05  Larry  Olive
       comments = Great story. I enjoyed it as  read it even though I thought
       I knew how it would end. But Suprise!!!
       (Eskimo: This one was sort of easy to figure out, not like some of
       my other works. But it's still a good read.)

    322 10.08.05  Hopless Romantic  Getting AC
      comments = <>
      Your story left this HOPELESS ROMANTIC all 'hot and bothered' from his
      cock to his morals. But rest assured that my morals were properly
      relieved by this ending. ;-)
      (Eskimo: HR tends to like stories with a happy ending. Glad it
      got him/her off, as well.)

    321  10.08.05  Hopeless Romantic   Kentucky Girl
      comments = I have all kinds of WIERD feelings about your story, just as
      you intended! ;-)
      << We're still married, even after six years.>>
      Nevertheless, I am utterly delighted with this concluding remark!
      (Eskimo: LOL, sometimes I think that you think way to much about
      what you read. But that's okay, since you enjoyed the story.)

    320  10.08.05  Joe Kentucky Girl
       comments = Face it you heard the joke and just had to write a story to
       use it. It was a pretty good yarn though.
       (Eskimo: Actually, it's all original, I jsut got lucky, that's all.)

    319  10.08.05  Dave  Kentucky Girl
      comments = Eskimo, Great story, really sweet and funny. I'm still  laughing aboout
      the last joke. Keep up the good work.
      Dave
      (Eskimo: Sure hope to!)

    318  10.08.05  Big Fan  Kentucky Girl
      comments = Hi, I just want to say how much I enjoyed reading your story Kentucky
      Girl. The build-up, plot, characters and your style are fantastic and the story
      is really well written. It is amazing given the right length  of the story and I
      really appreciate the work you have put in. Please  continue to write more hot
      stories. Thanks for your great work. 5/5 vote
      (Eskimo: I've been doing a great job of late of getting the right combination
      of reality, plot, build-up and lenght...starting to scare me....very appreciative
      of all that have liked it.)

    317  10.08.05  Mike  Beginning Of A Harem
      comments = I liked the basic story, the concept is good and the writing
      generally is OK. It is let down by basic grammar and spelling errors -
      being English these particularly irritate me. Please check the
      difference between you're (short for you are) and your (possessive form  of you).
      Spellcheck only works to a point - proof-reading is still essential to
      find words that are correctly spelled but used in the wrong context.
      (poop-shoot vs poop-chute, for example)
      Otherwise - keep it up!!!
      (Eskimo: I've recieved similar complaints on this one in the past,
      but I've just never gotten around to going through it and editing it again.
      Maybe one of these days......)

    316  10.08.05  A Guy  Kentucky Girl
      comments = hahahahahahahahaahhahah heheheheheheh hohohohohohoh
      roflol.
      (Eskimo: I guess he liked it. I;ve a few stories that I have tried
      to write with a humorous slant. This one really did the trick.)

    315  10.08.05  John  Kentucky Girl
      comments = This was without a doubt a great story.All of us men can
      only dream of such a moment "EVER" even remotely happening like that!I
      guess i'll try saving a life! But, how often does that happen if ever! The story
      was genuine in nature with a great deal of inocents to it. It was tastefull &
      respectfull and not like other stories that are pure trash. Keep up your "GOOD"
      work! Was this a real story or your imagination?
      I guess this was just a stroke of luck. Thank You
      (Eskimo: Save for the beginning, a chance encounter with a busty
      little thing that was in over her head, the story was all imaginaition.
      But, I am glad you all liekd it.)

    314  09.08.05  Alex  Kentucky Girl
      comments = hahahahah that's hilarious. good job!!!
      (Eskimo: Thank you.)

    313  09.08.05  Jack  Kentucky Girl
      comments = I liked the punch line at the end...
      Reminds me of an old joke where a guy is given suppositories and in a
      follow-up visit to the doctor complains that they taste so awful...
      (Eskimo: Funny thing, the longer I worked on this story, the more
      humorous it became. I needed a good, funny ending, and it eventually came
      to me. I actually got that part down long before I had even started the
      sex scene.)

    312  09.08.05  Pete  Kentucky Girl
      comments = how did you know my life,i was born in pikeville,schooled in
      elkhorn and work in dayton now.did you pick the town names from a
      map?it sounded like you knew what you wrote about.i knew several   families
      like trixies.one special girl named rose and one named tootsie.would love to
      tell you a bit about them so they could be added to a story love
      your work.great writting.
      (Eskimo: In one day I got eight responses on this story. Seems my
      fellow perverts enjoy comedy with their porn. Although I'm not from Pikeville,
      I've lived nearby for a breif time, and I've worked there on occasion too,
      all a very long time ago. I'm rather familiar with the Dayton area, and the
      opening incedent at the waterpark north of Cincinnati was actually a recent
      and true event. The rest I made up. As in most of my stories, I pick locations
      on places that Ive lived, worked or visited over the years.)

    311  07.08.05  David  Olive
      comments = this is with out a doubt one of the best stories i have ever
      read. older men younger women is the norm,your's has turned it into a
      new era. hope other's or your self keep writing stories like this.
      (Eskimo: I've actually have experience in real life going against
      norm, as my wife is almost a decade older than I. And we both agree, there
      is nothing wrong with a mature, older woman getting her brains fucked
      out by a young man.)

    310  06.08.05  Ken  Couple Fun
      comments = at first it was hard to figure which group i was with on in
      to the story it got easier great storie
      (Eskimo: This was one of my first really great pieces of writting. It
      seems everyone liked it. It was also one that I enjoyed writting as well. The
      story just sort of flowed out of me. I just wish all my works were this easy to
      compose. Or as well recieved by you readers.)

    309  05.08.05  Ray  Stories
      comments = Enjoy your stories a lot, always look forward to new ones!!!
      (Eskimo: Not sure when next one will be posted. Time kind of gets
      away from me, maybe in a week or two. I do have one that's about finished.)

    308  05.08.05  Ivor Ranch Hand
      comments = a second chapter at least is deserved as at the moment the
      story is left hanging.
      (Eskimo: I've been kicking around the idea of a second chapter. Yeah,
      I've got it started. And yeah, I've no idea when the fuck I'll get it
      finished.)

    307  04.08.05  Julie  Couple Fun
      comments = You have quite the gift for writing erotic stories.  Hell,
      it took me 2 nights to read your story!  I thoroughly enjoyed it.
      One side note, not likely that all that sex resulted in so many
      simutaneous orgasms, but it was fun, fun, fun to imagine.
      Thank you for sharing your joys.
      (Eskimo: I am overjoyed when a woman responds to my story's. Not sure why,
      maybe because I'm happy that what I wrote got them off. Hey, if I can't do it in
      person, let it be by pen! And imaginiation is a wonderful thing, too.)

    306  04.08.05  Brad  Caribbean Cruise
      comments = I was really impressed by the amount of actual story, some
      writers go directly to the sex, not building anything up. This story was
      very detailed, Great Work!
      (Eskimo: This story, as well as "Couple Fun", were two of my first
      really good stories. I've written some better since, and some real dogs as
      well. BUt we all can't be perfect.)

    305  04.08.05  Dick V   Olive
       comments = This was a wonderful read. I wish i could find many more
       stories done so well. This story gave me goosebumps in a very nice way!!
       Thanks
       (Eskimo: Thank you for sending your comments, and that goes for everyone that
       takes the time to read and respond to my stories. I've a few other works similar to
        this one, something about an older woman that always got my motor running. And wife
    	always enjoys the idea of a younger man...please note that it's only an 'idea'. No
    	applicants need apply.)

    304  01.08.05  Larry   Summer Heat
      comments = Great Story
      (Eskimo: Seems like this story has ben well liked. Although some have not liked
      the ending concerning the twins. I guess I was trying to be too realistic in what happened
      to them.)

    303  30.07.05  WM  April
      comments = again, if only dreams could come true.
      (Eskimo: Seems as if WM has a lot of free time on his hands. And yeah, this
      is a good dream story.)

    302  29.07.05  WM   Swingers Diary
      comments = good. i wish......
      (Eskimo: In this story, wish's did come true for some friends of ours.)

    301  29.07.05  WM  Caribbean Cruise
      comments = loved it. great humor.
      (Eskimo: I like this guy, he sent comments on three of my stories. He
      also sent me his email, but when I responeded, it bouced back. If you're
      reading this WM, thnaks a lot.)

    300  28.07.05  Paul  Ranch Hand
       comments = a that is one of the best i wish he was me pleasing them
       ladys wow thankyou x
       (Eskimo: Another story that's everyman's dream...multiple female sex partners!
       I've always wondered if this would work in the long run.)

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