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    99  11.02.04  ken  Molly's Boys
       comments = I love this type of fun, hot, respectful sex between adults.
       I also love the groups, threesomes, and moresomes. Keep them coming.
       (Eskimo: As you all can tell, multi-partner sex is my favorite, although
       in reality, I know it's not practicle, as it really is too much like work. I am
       working on a few new stories, may have them done by end of month. Haven't really
       had time to work on my writting as much as I would like to.)

    98  25.01.04  dave   story page
       comments = Enjoy your stories -- keep up the good work -- i am
       not super critical .. but do find so many writers of erotica
       ofetn ignore good grammar ... frequent have no idea of verb
       tense .. and make horible spelling errors that it distracts from
       flow of story and I end up just clicking off link -- It is
       refreshing to find one that cares enough to try and pay attention
       to such things -- I share you backgroud .. born and raised in Illinois
        .. am 70-year old retired journalist -- taught some colleg
       writing courses ... but really don't claim to be an expert ..
       just a horny old fart--
       (Eskimo: Actually, I suck in English, but getting better, now
       that I run my stories through spell check, and then go over them and
       see if I need to make changes. My biggest problem isn't spelling, but
       typing. Oh, and I can relate to the horny old fart, even though I still
       haven't hit fifty yet. By the way, if any one is wondering, I copy and
       paste all messages, errors included.)

    97  25.01.04  brian  Filling The House
       comments = Ecellent dream fantasy to those who enjoy impregnating our
       wives. Only finances stopped our family at three. This story warmed
       me up as what we call an artic blast is blowing from the north upon
       England
       (Eskimo: This has become the latest topic for me, you'll
       probably like Breeding Of Chris as well. And yes, we know about artic
       blasts, the central US is getting one now. So, I need to write to
       keep warm myself.

    96  24.01.04  dave   Molly's Boys
        comments = I loved the story. Not ofter does a story keep me
    	hard all the way   through but this one did. Maybe I identified
        with it since I am from a bit south of Indianapolis. I am
        afraid to show the stoy to my wife. She might get ideas. On
        second thought that would be a good thing. Your stories are
        great, keep up the good work, Dave
    	(Eskimo: Wow, you ain't that far from me, little more than
    	a hundred miles. Let your wife read them, you may never know what
    	might happen. I enjoyed writting this story, it had a wonderful effect
    	on me as well.)

    95  24.01.04  Catherine  Patricia's Vacation
      comments = Great story... hope you don't mind, but I had two nice little
      orgasms     reading it :)
      (Eskimo: hell no I don't mind! Sounds like I would like to watch
      you read.)

    94  21.01.04  john  Patricia's Vacation
       comments = Good story. The other couple on vacation added a first
       time twist and the gang bang was one of the best I've read. The
       ending was outstanding. Not enough writers have the women
       appreciate their husbands, boy friend or man.
       (Eskimo: Thank you, just something I came up with during this cold
       midwestern winter.)

    93  06.01.04  Alabama Flash  Wife's Friend
      comments = DAMN GOOD IS ALL I CAN SAY
      (Eskimo: LOL, thanks for reading.)

    92 04.01.04  Jen  stories
        comments = You have got to be one hot fuck baby ....... so in
    	tune. I love the way you understand and communicate every shread
        of horniness. I would give anything to give you my hot, sweet
    	pussy. I wrote a story about getting fucked by 6 guys on a pool-table
        one night, and posted it somewhere on this damned site. I was
    	expecting lots of response .... which makes me think I did
    	something wrong and it never got on the net. Whatever. I wanna
    	be one of your gangbang whores. They are top-notch sluts.
    	MMmmmmm..... Send me something hot ...... Jenn
    	(Eskimo: ohmy! Sounds like a story needs to be written
    	about Jen. Give me some time, and I'll work on it.)

    91  01.01.04  lew  Maggie
      comments = A great action story. Well told and riveting. Thanks
      for sharing it with us.
      (Eskimo: Thank you.)

    90  14.12.03  tphile  story page
       comments = Hi Eskimo I can give you some possible reasons for you not
       getting much feedback. Its hard to know when you have a new story
       posted. It needs to be quick and simple and flawless. We can't gov
       by the ftp site dates since you reload all of them frequently. The
       Date in the index section is great but we have to scroll thru the
       whole page to find them. Some authors put new stories at the top of
       the page instead of in alphabetical order or a flashing NEW marker.
       Personally, I do not like having to search thru a site to find
       the new stuff. There are a lot of sites out there of favorite
       authors and it can be really tedious. Also the "but thats another
       story" ending on most of your stories can get very frustrating
       and annoying. The Bane for every reader is "to be continued" on
       an absorbing story and find its abandoned and never gets finished.
       I would rather see a whole story and if a sequel happens it
       happens. and if its a multipart story, thats fine as long as
       its not like a year between parts. btw you might consider posting
       to StoriesOnLine.com you can reach more readers there and with easy
       feedback.
       (Eskimo: Okay, first item resolved. I am reposting my main story
       page, putting my stories in chronological order, newer stories first.
       And I have decided to stop reloading my stories, except for making
       corrections. I also have posted a alternative story page, with the
       stories in alphabetical order so those hunting for a specific story
       can find it. As for endings, I don't intend to add a sequel to every story
       I end as you suggest, ususally say that so my eraders can think of
       a fantast ending on their own. So I really don't consider it a bad thing,
       the usual, each their own. And as for teh other website, I tried the url
       you listed, but didn't come out, no such page.)

    89   12.12.03  Jim  Flashback
      comments = As a Vietnam Vet let me offer kudo's on a well written
       story, rarely do I get to see such a sensitive literary work of art.
       Hope you find Joku, His insight has allowed you to see what so many
       others can't (or won't) Please do not take offense..but as a writer
       I noticed that you need to proofread your art. (example: using
       I seen instead of I saw) But that did not mar in away the Brilliance
       of your word painting.
       (Eskimo: Thanks, the first part of the story was inspired by
       a relative that told me about sitting in a bunker, and a enemy morter
       round came through the roof, but failed to explode. Claims the longest
        thirty seconds in his life. He was staying overnight when he told us,
       and that very night he had a dream like the one I mentioned in the beginning
        of the story. Scared the shit out of all us with his screams at 2:30 in the
    	morning. All else in the story, including the detonation of the shell,
       were purely fiction on my part. As for the grammer, I miss a lot of stuff
        when I proof read...mainly because I never was that great in English,
       oh well.)

    88  09.12.03  chuck  Camp Diary
      comments = Your spelling is pretty good but the writing is repetitive
       and boring.
       )Eskimo: One of my earlier works, are yu talking about the story
       being repetitious, or all my stories in general?)

    87  28.11.03  B   Camp Diary
      comments = Your stories are great but you need to run them ALL
      through a 'spell check.' The misspelled words are a distraction
      from the merits of the stories.
      (Eskimo: Ooops, oh well. I ran it through spel check and
      reposted it already. I'll check others when I find the time.)

    86  23.11.03  Fred  Cottage
       comments = Just thought I'd let you know, this isn't the first of
        your stories I've read. I've enjoyed all your writing, enough,
    	that I thought it time to tell you. Thank you much for writing
    	and more to the point publishing your work. Fred
       (Eskimo: Thanks for letting me know. Wish more people would
       let me know what they think.)

    85  18.11.03  lindsay  College
    comments = I really enjoyed this story and was wondering if this
    story was continued?
       (Eskimo: Not sure, I could, if I ever find the time.)

    84  13.11.03  chuck   The Cottage
       comments = People with hyperthermia are excessively hot. Your folks
       were suffering from hypothermia, low temperature. You should really
       use a spell check. Probably a third of the paragraphs contain at
       least one serious misspelling. This is a serious impediment to
       reading — and Word has a grammar check that might confuse you but
       make reading clearer. chuck
       (Eskimo: Ooops! Okay, guess I better edit this one again and
       repost. Thanks for your help.)

    83  10.11.03   liz    Cheryl's Gangbang
     comments = I loved it. It was really good, made me hot. I would have
     liked to have known what each of the guys looked like just a little
     bit more. Other than that, it was good.
     (Eskimo: Since I'm male, I have a hard time describing men. But
     you do bring up a good point, and I'll work on it. Glad it made you hot
     though.)

    82  10.11.03     Grace     Toys For Mom & Daughter
      comments = Dear Eskimo1958, Over the past 10 years, I have read
      literally tens of THOUSANDS of erotic stories on the internet,
      books, magazines, you name it...... I've read nearly all of it!
      But let me just say here that " Toys " is one of the most fascinating
      stories I have ever read......... ever! I'm very sure that it is
      obvious to many people that you are an author a class above nearly
      everybody else in this genre. Let me just tell you that I really,
      really, enjoyed reading this excellent story, and being "involved"
      in this fascinating world that you have created for all of us......
      Please keep writing MORE of your wonderful stories! ..... and
      thank you very much for brightening-up my day! My warm regards,
      Grace K.
      (Eskimo: I'm speechless, thank you. And I'll try getting some
      stories finished soon. Having writers block at the moment, not to
      mention real life getting in the way again. I am happy that I
      finally recieved a comment about this story, as I thought it is one
      of my better ones.)

    81  10.11.03   t   Relunctance To Swing
      comments = reading your words tooking me to a totally throbbing
      experience. keep the good stuff coming.
      (Eskimo: LOL, and don't forget the kleenax.)

    80  03.11.03   Danny   Beginning Of A HArem
       comments = First, let me say I truly enjoy your writing. Suffice it to
       say several of your works are in my 'read again' archive. I
       realize RL often gets in the way of recreational writing, but I
       hope you continue to post. Second, of all your stories, IMHO,
       "Harem" begs for a sequel. Having read your comments I know you
       are considering one so I am just adding my vote.
       (Eskimo: Well, looks like I better get busy on that sequel. I
       have started it, but trying to find the direction I want to go with.
       Maybe by end of year, but that is only less than two months away. Also
       have a few other stories trying to get done as well. Not to mention
       next parts of the April story.)

    79  29.10.03    Rick  Relunctance To Swing
      comments = I truly enjoyed this story. It's is well written and very
      stimulating and believable.
      (Eskimo: It's not often I get such a quick, positive response
      from one posting. I must have realy done good this time. Thanks for
      reading and enjoying the story.)

    78  29.10.03  David  Relunctance To Swing
      comments = You have a very nice style. I dont really like violent
       sex.
       (Eskimo: And I kind of liked this story. Thanks to "matt"
       the oppurtunity to write it.)

    77  28.10.03  Surni  Beginning Of A Harem
      comments = I'm jealous as hell!
      (Eskimo: I'll take that as a positive review.)

    76  27.10.03  Clara  Breaking In Party
      comments = lol...SICK....
      (Eskimo: That's a strange combination of responses.)

    75 27.10.03  Marty   flashback
      comments = Is a nice story .Is hard to find authors that think romantic
      stories are boring without a bunch of perverse if not plain perverted
      plot lines .Well just looked at your story page and see a couple that are
      a bit out my taste range but for the most part they look like some
      good stories.
      (Eskimo: Thanks, I try to make the stories to include romance, although
      some people's idea of romance is a bit whacko. Hope you enjoy all
      of my stories that suit your taste.)

    74  26.10.03  Patrick   College
       comments = Hi, I am a fellow Canadian and enjoyed this story and
       others you have written. Well leaving off this story where you
       did could be an ending, it does leave one hanging. Was this your
       intention or are you going to add more to it as I hope you will.
       Anyway, THANK YOU for the stories you have wriiten that I have
       read so far. I did note one typo when you used filler insted of
       filled her as in filled her mouth with his come. And I did not
       see any of your previous storys signature hte insted of the
       in this story, so you are now either spell checking your stories
       or have an editor. If you would like an aditional proof reader,
       I would enjoy that previage. While not working as one now I was a
       technical writer for 9 years. If you decine I understand, my reason
       to offer proofing your stories is to get to read them sooner, as
       i reraly like them.
     (Eskimo: I probably will not add a sequel. Thought of adding a
      group scene with their friends, but not sure I'll ever get around to
      it. And I did run this story through spell check within the last week.
      Unfortunatly, not all words were corrected properly. Will have to re-proof
      read it once more. Also, you might want to check your own spelling lol)

    73  24.10.03  cadisfly   Beginning Of A Harem
      comments = This is an interesting and well written story. There
      are many typos, but they don't impact on the flow much. I am
      interested in a sequel to this...have you written it yet? Hope
      you do Cadis Fly
      (Eskimo: Yes, I'm working on a sequel. May have it done by
       beginning of 2004, I hope)

    72  22.10.03   Cisco    College
       comments = Hi, I just wanted to tell you that I loved your story
        "College" that was posted on www.asstr.org. It was very hot, as
        well as a really good story. The characters and relationships
         between them were really well done. The sexual descriptions
    	were intense. It seems to me that this story is just begging
    	for a sequel, because it can go so much further. I can see a
    	natural evolution of events and dynamics between the couples:
    	Jess with Shellie, Cathy letting Leroy be her "second," the
    	girls further exploring their lesbian desires, hot sex in the
    	guys' shower, and Donna being passed around by the guys, and
    	by the girls. There is alot that could happen leading up to Cathy
    	and Jess' wedding which I and I'm sure others would love to read about.
    	Anyway, thanks for a great story!
        (Eskimo: I jsut edited the whole thing, and already someone has
    	offered their praises, see #69. Well, you bring up some good ideas,
    	now I am going to have to quit my regular job and work on writting porn
    	full time....not! Anyway, I'll keep it in mind. I am working on a few others,
    	will keep you all posted.)

    71  21.10.03    Dean   Visiting Challenge
      comments = The story was fun once you got passed the part of the
      story that looked like it might rip apart a good relationship. I
      hope to see the next years return visit.
      (Eskimo: I sort of thought the beginning was fun as well. Oh
      well, at least you enjoyed the rest. Damn, another request for a
      sequel to another story. I realy do need to get paid for this.)

    70  20.10.03    John   The Cabin
      comments = very nice damsel in destress storie

    69  20.10.03  Jeremy  College
         comments = Speaking as a white Canadian football-oblivious
    	 computer geek, pretty much all of the lifestyle content in
    	 this story was foreign to me (and while I do go to university,
    	  we have no frats and I'm sure even our star athletes don't
    	  have special dorms). Normally I have no interest in such
    	  things; if I can't relate, it's boring. But even so, the
    	  characterization was so strong, so well-done and believable,
    	   and Jess so likeable, that I followed the story to the end
    	   for its own sake. It wasn't the most strokeable story I've
    	   read even today, but it was the best-written I've read on
    	   asstr.org for quite a while. But you do need to do something
    	   about your editing. Spelling errors (for example, above my
    	   hips is my waist, not waste), typing errors (for example,
    	   I think "teh" shows up about 20 times), and punctuation
    	   errors (apostrophe is _not_ for pluralizing, dammit). It
    	   certainly didn't ruin the story, but it detracted very slightly
    	 Thanks for a good story. I'll get around to reading some of
    	 your other work soon, I think. =]
    	 (Eskimo: Thank you, I enjoyed your points. Seems
    	 my spell check let me down on the word 'waste', I should have caught that.
    	 As for punctuation, yeah, I'm guilty. I never did like English class,
    	 but then, I never thought I would be writting porn and need it.)

    68  19.10.03  alex  Beginning Of A Harem
      comments = You gotta finish this story
      (Eskimo: lol, see above.)

    67  19,10.03  rustyken  Stories
      comments = Nice job on your stories. Have enjoyed April and Harme
       as well as several others. You indicated future additions to
       harem an april. Good idea. Cheers, Rustyken
       (Eskimo: I'm working on additions on both, well, at least I was.
        Sort of workingon some other stories, maybe pick back up on sequels in
    	the near future.)

    66  08.10.03  greg   Couple Fun
      comments = Anoher good story, graet writing

    65  07.10.03   tapen  Listening In
         comments = I had a similar experience at Blackpool in England
    	  last summer. It was more like a cock to cunt orgy and some
    	  sucking and muff diving. I was cold, and got up with a very
    	  stiff neck and dozed all the way back home the next day. I
    	  should have thought about the telephone, damn!
    	  (Eskimo: Loved this story, since it actually did happen.
    	  Although the location was changed, didn't want anyone to trace it back to
    	  me.)

    64  07.10.03  GEB    story page
      comments = I`ve read your stories; Harem, Becky, and Setting up
      Roger they are excellent stories. The people in your stories seem
      to be very real. As for misspelled words or improper english it
      dosen`t distract from the stories. Your one of my top 5 favorite
      authors. Keep writting !!!!!
      (Eskimo: Wow, I enjoy responses like this, that's what I live for....
      well, besides actually havig sex of course.)

    63  06.10.03  Orlando  story page.
      comments = I was checking all your novel and I found out that I've
       read most of them, I have also stored them and I only do it with
       the ones that I want to read again. If you're a reader you know
       what it means. Please keep on writing; although to be honest,
       since I'm a latin and raised with old standards (I'm 45), I
       sometimes do not agree with the subject, specially sharing, I
       confess I'm a male chauvinist pig, what's mine it's mine, for as
       long as she wants, once she looks for another one, she's not
       mine (and the other way aroun too). Having said that, please
       write a longer novel, you're one of the writers on ASSTR that I
       consider that could do it.I'm not into good words; but if you
       haven't understood what I wanted to say, I will say it: "YOU
       ARE A GOOD WRITER", keep on doing it.
    	 (Eskimo: Wow, I love praise, even from someone that doesn't
    	 always agree with what I write. Thank you. Now, a novel? Not
    	 sure if I have the time, I do have a few works on the burner, maybe
    	 I can do something with one of them. Stay tuned!)

    62  5.10.03  tom  Wife's Freind
      comments = Good Story. You should do another chapter. If Amy is
      10 year younger, then still is still young enough to start a
      family......
      (Eskimo: Not sure if I want to do another chapter of this one, my thinking
      here is why mess with it? Let the readers fantasize on their own on
      what happens next.)

    61  30.09.03  tphile   Beginning Of A Harem.
       comments = I agree with Terris, you should develop the relationships
       more and put off the pregnancies till much later.  We need to get to know
       them first.
       how about sailing or on a RV road trip with him as captain and the
       women as crew.  they form a company weekend sports team.
       the girls escort him to the company picnic or school reunion.
       ski resort or tropical island holiday
       How about a Dude Ranch Connestoga Wagon trail drive.
       and please change the title  ;)
       (Eskimo: Okay, I'll make the pregnancy thing a later chapter.
      I've some ideas, should get something going sometime in the future.
       Sometimes it's best if I just let ir sit idle and come back to it. Now,
       what title do you suggest?)

    60  29.09.03  Terris   Beginning Of A Harem.
        comments = Interesting story. There are some spelling errors,
    	 but they do not cause too much problems. There was only one
    	 point where I had to think what you tried to say (there was a
    	 weight on his hips when he woke up). I would like to read a
    	 continuation of this story, where some time has maybe passed
    	 and John plans the weekend activities. So he has one weekend
    	 for each lady, but this time John makes all the arrangements.
    	 There might be also some things that do not go by the plan
    	 (maybe some drunk in a bar gets too pushy and tries to grab his
    	  ladyfriend or something) and how he reacts to the situation
    	  deepens the bond between John and the lady in question.
    	  (Eskimo: YES! CONSTRUCTIVE COMMENTS! I LOVE IT! Anyhow, I'm
    	  working on a second part, where the women decide to be impregnated.
    	  Maybe I'll start it over, and go with your idea. As for the spelling,
    	  I put it through spell check, like all my worls, seems sometimes I
    	  miss things.

    59  29.09.03  Peter  Camp Diary
      comments = I liked the story. But why having set the events in the
       future ? From my own camp experiences, when boys were in minority,
        well the path of events went quite far and active, even if the
    	100% nudity for males all the day wasn't of course the rule (
    	only at night, or when no adult was watching us (during part of
    	 trekking activities, for instance).
    	 (Eskimo: In the beginning of the story, I mention it was
    	 post-civil war, where new social mores now cover the land. I'm
    	 wanting to expand on this theme, jsut haven't finished the stories
    	 concerning it. All would be set in the future, with one just at the
    	 end of the war, and the others well after. Kind of like Sci-Fi.)

    58  26.09.03  Laci  story page
      comments = Dear Eskimo! I'm from Hungary, and I like your works,
      I think the best are the orgys! Would you mind if I translate
      them to Hungarian?
      (Eskimo: Alright, coming to another language near you!)

    57  17.09.03  anon  story page.
       comments = i wasn't enchanted by April; great idea, hot writing, somehow
        something didn't quite click for me. Maybe that April's problem
    	kept being put as "her needs" not being met. But i *loved* the
    	tale of two titties. boy, did that work. Excellent writing,
    	very funny, very well done. keep up the good work. and thanks
    	 for giving us a form for comments; a lot of authors love
    	comments, but don't make it this easy to send responses.
    	(Eskimo: Working on two sequels of April, hopefully
    	you'll enjoy them more. Thanks for the response for tale of two
    	titties! Thats the first feed back I've gotten on it. It was
    	inspired by a friend and her night at a swing club. She was also
    	the one that gave me her escapades at a swing club in my "Swingers
    	Diary" story.)

    56  13.09.03  Bill Hayes  Cabin
      comments = Excellent story. You really should think about making a series
      out of it.
      (Eskimo: Thanks for the comments, and the sugestion. May work
       on the idea.)

    55  13.09.03  Keith   story page.
      comments = loved them how about pedo and little girl stories?
      (Eskimo: just don't think I can do that, but thanks anyway.)

    54  3.09.03  Irene  Molly And The Boys
       comments = darling i love your stories,can't get enough!!!! you
       are GREAT and get me off every morning.....irene*
       (Eskimo: oh my! Glad I can get your day off to a good start.)

    53  31.08.03  Simon  Beginning Of A Harem
      comments = I'm not sure if the rom tag is appropriate for this
      story. I didn't see anything especially romantic about it. None of
       the women are especially emotionally connected to your
       protagonist from what I can see. Yes, they like him. And yes,
       they enjoy sex with him. But I'm not sure that but a couple of
       them would consider him to be much more than a casual friend?
       Still, a good story. Nice work.
       (Eskimo:  In the story,  Joe has to please the ladies, not just
        sex, but in courting them as well, so I placed that under romance.

    52  30.08.03  Glynn   Becky
         comments = Wow... That was a really great story... I have to
    	 say that it was a shame that it ended there... It could have
    	 gone on longer... But I can't fault you for the way you put it
    	  across. It really is very good! Thanks Glynn (ATSC!)
         (Eskimo: Maybe a sequel? Who knows, although I've been working on
    	 a few other sequels as it is, not sure if I like doing that.)

    51  30.08.03  tphile  Becky
      comments = nice to see a new story and this was a pleasant one. I'm a
      fan of Nick Scipio's Summer Camp so I liked this being set in a
      nudist camp I suggest you proof this some. I'm not sure if its
      Susan or Roxy as the dead wife I like the name Roxy
      (Eskimo: Ooops, yeah, I thought I started her as being named Roxy,
      and when I can, I'll corect the text. Thanks for catching it. Being a nudist
      helped in writting this story. Planning on a couple more with similar theme.)

    50  27.08.03  Guy  Molly And The Boys
       comments = This is a piece of shit.
       (Eskimo: This guy had a similar style of critisism for a few
       of my other stories as well. You would think after reading one he
       wouldn't read anymore.)

    49  26.08.03   Vic  Canoe Trip TO An Orgy
      comments = Great story, but two college teachers use spell check , correct
       grammer and proof readers, Check out Nick scipio for a well
       written story.
       (Eskimo: They taught Animal Husbandry, not english....besides, it wasn't written by
       a college teacher(LOL), I'll get on it and make corrections one of these days. My older
       stories I didn't run through spell check and went over and edited them myself, so some
       need to be reviewed by spell check.)

    48  26.08.03    Gus   Widower Fun
      comments = is superb. The characters are very well developed, giving
       the reader a slice of reality that is rarely found in erotica
       these days. I just finished the story about the 6'10" mailman and
       ver Jade, and now my dick feels like it went through a giant
       Lewinski. Keep up the great work. All the best.
        (Eskimo: Giant Lewinsky?  Anyway, thanks for reading my stories
        and enjoying my writting style. Hopefully by November I'll have
    	two or thre more done.

    47   24.08.03     JM41    Becky
      comments = AS usual another good story.Your proof reaser
      missed a lot of run together words [ 2 words w/o a space between
      them].....KEEP WRITING!!!...JM41......
      (Eskimo: What's a 'proof reaser'?)

    46  24.08.03  John   Texas Fun
      comments = I loved it, what a fabulous story! Certainly got me
      revved up. Long live ASSTR Cheers John

    44  15.08.03   Abe   story page.
      comments = Hi! I've read all your stories and think that they're
      fantastic. I first read 'Western trip to an Orgy' and 'Carribean
      Cruise' a couple of years ago and still enjoy reading them now.
      Character development is good, though I feel that some stories
      are far better than others (the triplet auction felt so sterile
      to me while the previously mentioned two and 'Visiting challenge'
       had characters that projected their feelings and warmth in a way
        that is rare among stories). Keep up the good work!
       (Eskimo: That's what I like to hear, readers that come back
       and re-read the same story because they enjoyed it so much the
       first time. Yeah, I didn't like Triplet Auction either, something
       definitly missing. But we can't write great stories everytime. I've
       been working on a few stories at once, hopefully you, and others
       will enjoy them as well.)

    43  8.08.03  Mary    The Garage
      comments = Way to go! Passed this story along to quite a few at work.
      They all enjoyed. Keep them coming.
      (Eskimo: Thanks Mary, I knew you would like this one. But, don't your
       Co-workers have jobs to do? Working on about a dozen new stories, probably
       won't have anything posted until October, 2003.)

    42  3.08.03  Mschur   Opening Her Eyes
      comments = Very well written short story. Thanks.

    41  2.08.03  Jack  story page.
      comments = I really like the stories. Would like to hear more
      about you.
       (Eskimo: Wow, guess I'll have to post a bio page, never thought of that.
       I'll work on something for it.)

    40  23.07.03  Fred   story page.
       comments = How do you find the time to write so well? I have only
        read a few of your stories yet each is so different. Are you a
    	professional writer? Whatever, just keep up the good work. And
    	thanks a lot for posting these stories on the ASSTR system.
        (Eskimo: Actually, it takes awhile for each story. I've 41 stories
    	written so far, started 5 years ago, so eight stories a year. No,
    	I have a day job, and writting isn't it. Some stories take longer
    	than others. I've one story that I've been kicking around now for
    	years. And finding the time is tough, when I get bored, I'll write,
    	until I'm bored with writting. There are times I won't write for
    	three months, then boom, I put out four stories.)

    39   22.07.03  Dick Rohwder   Visiting Challenge
      comments = WOW! What a story. Well done.

    38    22.07.03   tphile   story page.
      comments = Just want to say that I have been enjoying your stories.
      Is there some way you can hilight the brand new stories from the
      reposts when you post them? I especially enjoyed the humor one
      and would love to read more like them Harem was a lot of fun but
      that has to be the worst title ever. It also gave away the plot.
      you should give it a better title. maybe something sports
       related like The Benchwarmer or Equipment Manager or even
       something goofy like Have Dick Will Travel. :) The Garage was
       another favorite. The chance meeting and opposites attract is
       always fun I hope we will get to read some new ones soon tphile
    	 (Eskimo: You bring up a good point. I decided to repost my
    	 stories once in awhile, so they're more visible to those cruising
    	 ASSTR.org, but maybe I can do something. Not sure when next story
    	 done, probably not until after mid-September. As for "Beggining of
    	 A Harem", probably could use a new title, will have to think about
    	 that.....Have Dick, WIll Travel?....and "The Garage" was inspired by
    	 a trip through Western Colorado a few years back. Vast openess
    	 with the occasional cow in the middle of the road.)

    37  22.07.03  Dick   Wife's Friend
      comments = Mercy. Lucky threesome. Glad the husband and wife are
       open enough to share and feel comfortable in doing it. All three
        have the best of both worlds. Lucky Amy to have such good
    	friends to help her give her virginity in such a loving
    	relationship.
    	(Eskimo: lol...now what man doesn't fantasize about helping
    	 a young lady give up her virginity? I loved writting this story,
    	 and although it's fiction, I can at least think about it. This
    	 story line came up about the same time as my Tagalong
    	 story.)

    36  20.07.03  Spunky     Swingers Diary
    Thanks for revealing yours and Cindy's exploits.
    Very well written.
    A lot to think about
    Regards  Spunky and Q
      (Eskimo: Wish it was mine and my wife's, but I will pass it
          along to those involved. Chances are maybe one day they'll go back and
    	  watch.)

    35  20.07.03  ahotstory    Couple Fun
      I found and downloaded one of your stories today. (Couple Fun) I
      am not far enough into the story to give and opinion but I am far
       enough to make a request. The story codes as you have used them
       are misleading if not partially incorrect. Lower case 'm' and
       'f' mean "teen male and female" and some of your story codes
       should be changed to 'M' and 'F' .Thank you for all your work
       and I hope to write you again in a few days. ahotstory
      (Eskimo: Just corrected them all 7/22/03, I knew they were wrong for
       awhile, but never got around to changing them.)

    34  17.07.03  Streve   Beginning Of A Harem
      comments = Please continue. It is well written and very enjoyable.
       Let me know what you plan on doing.

    33  16.07.03   Rags    Beginning Of A Harem
      comments = Hi Just cant wait to see what happens to Joe next ;-)
      KEEP WRITING!!!!!!!!! Rags

    32  15.07.03  KC  Texas Fun
       comments = Hi,i thought the story was real good,but would of
       liked it to be more graphic in nature,maybe a little coercing or
       nc,i like the way it built up your emotions too.i tend to lean
       toward stories about PTA mom's or soccer mom's being coerced into
        degrading acts for one or son's friends,which is black and very
    	 graphic about the acts he makes her do until he is satisfied
    	 about his first white women experence and releases her from his
    	  torment,so she can resume her life as he can his.I know you
    	  have your own style of writting as everybody does,but wish
    	  someone could write a story on this format,anyway great job,
    	  have a good one and thankx for allowing the comments
    	(Eskimo: Interesting......)

    31  14.07.03  Ed   Western Trip to an Orgy
      comments = This is one of the best stories I've read in quite a
      while. IMHO it has the right mix of story and sex, and the
      descriptions of the sex are well done. I would have enjoyed more
      description of the DP sessions (what it felt like for all
      concerned when she was impaled on two pricks). I give this story
      the highest marks.
        (Eskimo: Thanks for the input, I'll keep it in mind.)

    30  14.07.03  Carl    Beginning Of A Harem
      comments = What a fantasy! I've read it twice and I hope you do a
       continuation. Actually I've read all your stories at ASSTR and
        enjoyed them all.
    	 (Eskimo: Wow, going to have you start my fan club.)

    29  13.07.03  Mat  The Cabin
      comments = To use the word 'seen' you need to precede it with
      'has', 'had' or 'have' otherwise you should use 'saw'. I have
      seen... I had never seen... She has not seen... 'I saw' but not
      'I seen' Great story though!
        (Eskimo: Well, never said I was an english major. Just passed
    	   it by the skin of my left nut.)

    28  13.07.03  Bob  The Cabin
      comments = hey that was a really good story & the thing about it
      is that it could really happen.its not wild & unbelievable.
      thanks
      (Eskimo: Sometimes I try to make them believable, other times the ole'
         fantasy kicks in and all sorts of things happen.)

    27  13.07.03  JM41  Beginning Of A Harem
       comments = I hope you comtinue this character.
        (Eskimo: In process of making a second part.Probably won't have it finished before
    	end of year, though)

    26  13.07.03  Chuck   The Cabin
      comments = The spelling is atrocious. The story is graphic but
      interesting.
       (Eskimo: oops, my bad. Forgot to run this one through spell check. Should be
       alright now.)

    25  12.07.03  Justin   Wife's Friend
      comments = best story ever

    24  12.07.03  Arthur    The Cottage
      comments = Yo, Eskimo! This was great! Very well done. Thanks for
       sharing it, I will be reading more from your site. God Bless and
        keep you. Arthur

    23  12.07.03  Thacker     Wife's Friend
      comments = That was some steamy stuff man! I always like stories
       where one takes time to undress and does it orgasmically slow.
       keep writing!

    22  11.07.03  Johanna     Cindy
       comments = Excellent mix of life and fun!!!! Wish I could have
       been Cindy.

    21  11.07.03  Harveen  Caribbean Cruise
      comments = This was the best fucking story I have ever read.
      That might not mean much, because I only started to read these
      stories about 1 1/2 years ago. But, damn, the "Carribean Cruise"
      was amazing! Please continue writing!!
       (Eskimo: Thank you, I am.)

    20  10.07.03  Jerry   Caribbean Cruise
       comments =  you write good enough said.

    19  10.07.03 frog   Caribbean Cruise
      comments = please continue the story line!!!!!!
      (Eskimo: I'll have to give it some thought. It's possible, but will
          need lots of work.)

    18  10.07.03  Christine    April
    comments = One of my favorite stories now, i haven't read one as
    good in a long time.

    17  10.07.03  John   Caribbean Cruise
     comments = This is an all time best story I have heard and matt I
      would love to be in ur shoes for that.

    16  10.07.03 Dom   The Camp
      comments = Whewwww, what an emotional roller-coaster ride that
      was! Like Mario Puzo meets Foxy Brown, or one of those "Mafia
      Princess movies with balls. Needed the love story ending. It
      helped my stomach begin to un-knot, and testes to slowly drop
      into place. 'tho it wasn't the usual "stroke story" I expect to
      find here, (rape doesn't turn me on) it certainly was a fine
      piece of writing. I will have to read a hotter selection next
      time. I hope you reconsider your attitude against Pedo (completely
      consensual, curious, or a little Lolitaesque perhaps?) Interresting
       you have no problem with the balls-hacking-stick-up-the-asshole
       -bullet-to-the-brain, violence in this piece; but young people
      enjoying thier first sexual experiences, are out of bounds.
       Hmmm, different strokes... I guess. So, thanks again, I'm glad
       I noticed your listing, and will try to read more. Sincerely,
       Dom Sanzone
       (Eskimo: Sorry about the no pedo philosiphy, but this is America that I live in.
       You know the place, all right to show violnce and distruction, but just a little
       bit of underage nudity or sex, and all hell breaks loose.)

    15  10.07.03  Bill  Triplet Auction
      comments = the best

    14  10.07.03  mschur  April
      comments = Great short story! Really enjoyed it. Would like to
      read more of their adventures.
       (Eskimo: Working on a continuation of this story. May have something
          by end of year, if not sooner, please check back often!)

    13  10.07.03  anon  April
      comments = great story

    12  9.07.03 Rob   Caribbean Cruise
     comments = very well written, warm free-for-all fantasy. if only
     the real world were like this........a few weeks every year, lol
      (Eskimo: he-he, yeah, really.)

    11  8.07.03  OKK     Caribbean Cruise
    comments = Good story, a bit too much luck for the two main guys,
    makes us wish it was us, right? You consistantly misspell the word
    friends - a bit distracting.
      (Eskimo: Thanks for pointing that out, I've re-edited and now posted it back up.)

    10  7.07.03  Julian   Camp Diary
       comments = Interesting but I suggest you develop the characters
        more. Make us feel who they are.
    	(Eskimo: This was one of my first stories, after the first 'Hockey
    	Groupie' story. I like to think I've gotten better.)

     9  7.07.03  Phil   Widower Fun
       comments = Hello Eskimo1958-- I just read your story Widower Fun
       and wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed it. You had good
       character development (which is hard to find these days). I
       was surprised at how much abuse Kent took from Kim, but all in
       all a good story. Do you have any others? Are they posted at
       ASSTR? Thanks

     8  7.07.03  anon  Wife's Friend
      comments = I loved the story. It was hot, had great details and
      was believable. Keep it up. I hope you take them to other settings,
       where they could explore things in a more public arena.
       (Eskimo: I'm working on that, always trying to change the settings.)

     7  7.07.03   anon  The Cabin
       comments = thank you

     6  7.07.03   Daniel     The Cabin
       comments = This was a very refreshing story. First, it was filled
        with compassion. Paul reaction as he undressed and bathed her
    	was natural. It didn't dissolve into a "six hours after we met,
    	 she was sucking me dick" story. And I thoroughly enjoyed the
    	 fact she was not a "38DD" (there are not enough stories
    	 tauting the sexuality of small-breasted women. Thanks for
    	 killing off her abusive husband. I will be reading more of
    	 your stories.
        (Eskimo: Thank you, I try to make all my stories a bit more involved than just
    	   fuckin' & suckin'. Although fantasy comes in from time to time.)

     5  7.07.03  Bill    The Cabin
       comments = What a great story. You are blessed with a great
       talent. Do you have any more stories, if so I would love to read
        them. Thanks for sharing this one.

    4  7.07.03 Charles  The Camp
      comments = Very nice story/ Glad to see the bad guys get it every
      once in a while, although I would have liked it a little better
      to have seen them tied and tourchered a little the next day. are
      there any other stories like this out here?
       (Eskimo: I'm sure there are, but you'll have to look for them.)

     3  6.07.03  Jerry Sex  The Cabin
      comments = Good story, could it be expanded into a book?
      (Eskimo: hmmm, maybe. I'll have to give it some thought.)

      2  6.07.03  J C   Visiting Challenge
      comments = Thanks for such a wonderful story. You have a great
      gift, please keep up the good work.

     1  6.07.03 Wayne     Widower Fun
       comments = Great story really enjoyed it. Thanks

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