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    299  27.07.05  WM   Summer Heat
       comments = wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
       (Eskimo: Thank you.)

    298  26.07.05  WM  Ranch Hand
      comments = im in my 70s and emjoyed your story very much. wish i could
      have been ned years ago. if any body complains tell them to piss off.
      (Eskimo: LOL...Like your comments. Hope I make it to 70, much less still
      enjoy reading about sex...oh, and having sex as well.)

    297  23.07.05  Dave  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
      comments = hello, i have just read this story, now i have read most of
      your work on asstr over the last few months and felt i may be able to
      comment on this one, i read the ranch hand first as you commented it was
      the better of the two stories ,
      i didnt think there were too many characters they padded it out nicely
      and it felt more real, i like my stories to have substance and
      believeability, i did feel that it was a little short i could see his
      step mother settling down with her new beau, anna becoming his and a rash
      of kids, the baby making comment led me towards that thought and so with
      his step mum and new mother in law a happy, baby filled future lies in
      wait, hope this helps.
      (Eskimo: I'm really surprised at how well recieved this story was. I
      do agree that it was a bit shorter than it should have been, maybe some day
      I'll add on to it. The thought of kncoking the ladies up does sound appealing.)

    296  22.07.05  hopeless romantic  Ranch Hand
       comments = <>
       I thought that Emma said that both girls were 'on the pill!'
       (Eskimo: I did...even though the girls are on the pill, they're still
       very much fertile. Without going into great biological detail, all the
       pill does is make the woman's body think she's pregnant already.)
       Nevertheless, I think that May ought to flinch as the thought
       penetrated her well fried brain that she was just ONE PILL away from getting
       pregnant. Indeed, her dreams ought to be filled with  rather pregnant farm
       animals!
       By the way, was it ever explained to Ned that he would be SEXUALLY
       COMMITTED to May and Molly for a LIFETIME?
       (Eskimo: Well, didn't think it needed to be explained. And today's age, it seems
       no one is commited for a lifetime of togetherness.)
       <>
      I like this idea, especially if Connie can't find a mate of her own.
      (Eskimo: I like it too, just trying to figure out a good way of
      working them in.)
      <>
      Gee, doesn't Ned have his hands full with May & Molly? Perhaps the
      daughter can bring her currently unemployed boyfriend, who complains at
      first that he has been sent to 'reform school' by the nature of his new
      job on the farm. But eventually, the new boy can give Ned the time off to
      get a degree at the local 'cow college' and thus gradually take over
      the farm as Frank ages!
      (Eskimo: Hmmm, now that's a thought....actually, I had thought of
      a son of Connie, but a boyfriend of the daughter does have better possbilities.)
      In this modern era, a woman has SOME CONTROL over fertility by deciding
      when to start and stop taking 'the pill.' But otherwise, she is still
      NOT meant to know JUST WHICH FUCKING resulted in her pregnancy.
      (Eskimo: We'll work on the pregnancy theme at another time.)

    295  21.07.05  anon   Summer Heat
      comments = I loved this story i read it nonstop for 7 hours all night
      long. I just couldn't stop reading. I was captured in the story waiting
      to see what would happen next. Great use of detail! I felt like I was
      actually in the story. The only bitchin I got to do with this story is I
      didn't like the ending where the girls all got pregnant and the twins
      had a bad life. Also I would've liked it if Randy nailed his mom and
      Lucy. I thought he was, considering he was spying on his mom and Lucy and
      they seemed to be sorta flirting with him walking around and swimming
      nude. I would like to read this story again revised considering what I
      just said. ;) I think if the ending was revised with no pregnancy and
      changing what happens to the twins it would be more believeable. But
      Great story. I was blown away. Best story i've ever read of this sort. Nice
      Job!
      (Eskimo: Yeah, about the ending.....I guess I wanted it to sound like
      real life, where not everybody lives happily ever-after....at least the twins
      eventually did move in with Alice and Randy. And no, I am not changing the
      story. Another thing, I thought long and hard about having Randy at least
      nail Lucy, but thought better of it...again, I tend to try to make my stories
      somewhat realistic. I mean, how may guys actually do their moms? Now maybe if I
      had it set in West Virginia......)

    294  20.07.05  Jon  Ranch Hand
       comments = Great story, Please Continue with the story, the way you
       planned
       GoooooodJob!
       (Eskimo: I really wouldn't say a sequel is planned...thinking about it
       would be a better term. However, this is one of the few stories that I've
       written where a sequel could be written. Plus, please remember, at this time
       I currently have over seventy stories started. Some of which I've only written
       a few paragraphs. Most are about mid-way done, some are near completion and I've
       just haven't figured out how to end them the right way, and then there are those
       that I just have sitting around and have no idea what the fuck I'm going to
       do with them.)

    293  20.07.05  DT  Ranch Hand
       comments = I'm a writer myself but am confined to sports as fiction
       isn't really my thing. Still, I enjoyed the story and your twist of the
       girl's parents giving their permission for Ned to pop their cherries.
       Made for a good read.
       You're another reason why I'm glad I stumbled upon the ASSTR.ORG site.
       Take care and keep up the good work. If I would ask for something I
       really like stories that involve preteen girls although I think 10 is
       about as young as I like. Any younger and they just aren't big enough.
       Sometime I'd like to see a story where a 16-year-old, maybe paired
       with a black man get to make some kiddie porn by screwing several girls
       aged 11 to 14. Take care Thanks again.
       (Eskimo: Gee, I don't know, pre-teen? I'm pretty sure that I will
       not be writting anything with that involved. Of course, I'm sure you will find
       some out there, if you look for it. I also tend to write teen-with-teen stories,
       not really into adults with underage, although this story is just that, but not
       too extreme. As for the plot, I'm starting to get the knack of making things
       interesting in the story. Yeah, you can count on there being sex, but writting
       a way on how it leads up to sex can be a lot of work...not to mentino a very
       fertile imagination.)

    292  19.07.05  Jack  Melanie, An Introduction
       comments = The subject is my comment.  Great story!
       (Eskimo: Glad you liked. Jack sent me three messages, unfortunatly, I
       fucked up and accidently deleted one of them.)

    291  18.07.05  Jack  Ranch Hand
      comments = I think it was an extremely good story.  It was fun to read
      and it would be a very good thing if you decided to include Connie and
      her daughter in a sequel.  Although I suspect it would suffer from a
      reality standpoint if you did in fact include Connie's daughter with
      Molly and May.  Although it makes a hell of a story. (A good enough reason
      to do it!)  Have a great day.  After having read your story I am not
      overly concerned about W, Karl Rove, or pretty much anything else for
      that matter.  Thank you for sharing your stories with us.
      (Eskimo: Yeah,, the reality versue fantasy part is kind of holding
      me back here on the sequel. I eman, Ned already ahs two hot teen pussies
      at his disposal. Of course, Frank can always service Connie and her
      daughter. We'll see.)

    290  18.07.05  Bob  Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
       comments = This was a great story.  I would like to see a sequel or
       continuation of it.
       (Eskimo: Don't think there will be a sequel to this one. I will write
       more stories witht eh sdame theme in mind, though.)

    289  18.07.05  JP  Ranch Hand
      comments = THE IDEA OF A SECOND STORY COVERING THE MENTIONED STORY LINE
      SOUNDS LIKE A GOOD ONE.  THEN THERE IS THE POSSIBLITY OF A THIRD STORY
      AS THE GIRLS GO TO COLLEGE, OR EVEN TO BRING THEIR OWN CHILDREN INTO
      THE STORY WITH EACH OTHER.
      (Eskimo: Okay, when I get time, I'll work on it. It'll probably be a
      year before I get it posted. But I'm sure that I'll have other new fine reading
      material online here between then and now. So check back often.)

    288  18.07.05  Mike  Ranch Hand
       comments = Hi,Reading this story, one can tell that the writer enjoyed writing
       it. I do look forward to it’s continuation. Thanks again for posting.
       (Eskimo: There's a good chance of this story to be continued, as well as
       the story My Step-Mom And Our Freinds. Just not sure when I'll even get started
       with continuing either ine.)

    287  18.07.05  Maura  Breeding Of Chris
       comments = I just recently got an old computer from a friend and found
       your sroty site. I just finished reading your breeding story and  I am
       dripping wet. I had my 15 yo daughter redit also as I have been trying
       to talk her into breeding I think your story may help a lot I tried to
       find pictures of a black man with a younger white girl but it is
       impossible to find much of anything when you are not very smart And I have to
       admit not having finisher high school I am not too bright. Any way I
       was just wanting to tell you how i loved yourfirst story
       (Eskimo- I think we have the champion message of the day here. I sure
       hope my readers can tell fantasy from fiction.)

    286  18.07.05  Ralph  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
       comments = Excellent story, I don't think there were too many
       characters, I do think you could enlarge this story though.  Seems
       like there is a lot of the summer break left.
       (Eskimo: A continuation? Well, not sure, but if there was to
       be one, this story has the best chance of having one. Let me give
       it some thought for a spell. I've over fifty other works started that
       need my attention as well.)

    286  18.07.05  Leo  stories
      comments = You are a hell of a good writer. A good plot all the time,
      good description of personality and hot, steaming sex.
      I enjoy each and yveryone, keep up the good work. Thanks
      (Eskimo: Thanks, you've obviously have read some of my better
      stories. I've written some bad ones as well, but at least I admit it.
      Actually, my head is starting to swell, with all this praise that I've
      been recieving of late.)

    285  18.07.05  anon  My Step-Mom And Our Freinds
      comments = Enjoyed the story. Pretty hot.
      (Eskimo: Thanks for writting.)

    284  18.07.05  tigerd  Justice For Megan
       comments = Thank you for the excellent story.  It had an interesting
       plot, with several twists and turns that I didn't see coming.  The sex
       scenes were nicely balanced, too.  They weren't so detailed that they
       went on for page after page, and yet they weren't glossed over completely
       either.  And it's always fun when the bad guy gets what's coming to him
       in the end.  A previous comment from another reader questioned the
       impending marriage between Ethan and Cathy, and I have to agree.  It seems
       hard to believe that she would have anything more to do with him at
       this point.  The only other criticism that I have would be for you to
       spend a little more effort in the editing of the typos throughout the
       story.  They can be somewhat distracting at times.  Anyway, I still did get
       to enjoy a really fine story, and I didn't even spend a cent on it.  I
       really shouldn't complain too much.  Thanks again.  I plan on reading
       many more of your stories now that I have found you.
       (Eskimo: You mentioned the details as written, I always wonder if I'm
       spending enough time on details, and at otehr times if I've spent too much time.
       Glad I found a good balance in this story. As for Ethan and Cathy, yeah,
       it was hard to swallow, but I had to do something. Thought about Cathy bumping his
       arrogant ass off the planet or at least cutting his nad's off, but this was the
       better alternative. As for the typos, I always run my stories through spell
       check, and then read them through again. Seems I tend to make some miss's
       once in a while, sorry. And yes, it is free, so why complain? There isn't much out
       there that is, at least in porn.)

    283  18.07.05  Jimdeeus  Caribbean Cruise
      comments = loved it,are you going to have a 2nd part to it. keep it
      comming.
      (Eskimo: Sorry, no plans for a second part.)

    282 18.07.05  John  Breaking In Party
      comments = good shit
      (Eskimo: I always thought this to be one of my 'fuck stories'. Not much plot,
      but lots of sex. But I am glad you liked it.)

    281  18.07.05  Kyle  Candy Learns about Love and Sex
      comments = That was one of the best stories i have ever read, it kept
      me involved from the first word to the last word
      (Eskimo: I liked this story, it was a good 'coming of age' story, where
      a young lady discovers her sexuality, along with a young man, who also was rather
      inexperienced on the ways of love. Glad you liked it. I consider this story one of
      my hidden gems.)

    280  16.07.05  Marcus  Justice For Megan
      comments = WELL DONE! i'VE READ A LOT OF STORIES OVER THE YEARS AND
      THIS RATES RIGHT UP THERE. SYMPATHETICALLY TOLD, BELIEVABLE, EROTIC BUT
      GENTLE . I BET YOU ARE A NICE PERSON. YOUR GRAMMER IS A BIT IMMATURE /
      YOU'RE / YOUR / ETC BUT VERY IMPRESSIVE ALL THE SAME.
      (Eskimo: Come on, my grammar sucks! I try to catch them when I
      proofread before posting, but you know, shit happens. But I am glad that
      you enjoyed the story.)

    279  16.07.05  David H  Husband's Indiscretion
       comments = First may I tell you that you are a great writer.  You could
       write comedy for some of the great  comics of the past, like Jack
       Benny, Bob Hope, Red Skelton and others of their ilk.
       But I digress this story kept me going and set me up for the punch line
       like nothing I have read recently.  Keep up the good work.
       (Eskimo: I've always been told that I'm a terminal smartass, and of course
       I never take anything seriously, including life. This was one of those stories that
       evolved from a joke, and I just put sex into it. Glad you found the humor in it.)

    278  14.07.05  Ivan Maggie
      comments = I like the story very much, but I'd like to hear it in a
      audio way, if you can do that for me, I'll be much obliged to you -
      failing that, you might want tell me where I can get (download) some erotic
      audio. Thanks for your time spent on reading this.
      (Eskimo: Although asstr.org does not have any audio stories, literotica.com
      does. You might try them. As for the above mentioned story, I wrote it two years ago,
      and have for the most part forgotten about it. Glad someone took the time to read it
      found it enjoyable. I had to go and see what it was even about, as I could not even remember
      it at all. I probably will never do an audio version of any of my stories. First reason being
      for bandwidth concerns, and another because I'm pretty sure that I couldn't sound like
      a woman having an orgasm.)

    277  14.07.05 Celtic Cowboy  Justice For Megan
      comments = WOW! That is one of the best pieces of adult fiction anywhere
      bar none. I had got tired trying to sort the wheat from the chaff at ASSTR
      and have been spending my time at Storiesonline.net. It was just a stroke
      of luck (no pun intended) that I found it but I bookmarked you page and
      will be back I promise. As a writer myself I like to read others work and
      compare is to mine. Hope your not offended if I don't do that with this
      story , my confidence is shaky enough.  I had just worked up the courage
      to post  a flash  story on Beyond the Far Horizon Gina Marie Wylie's new
      site. It's going to take another bottle of Glenlivet to post the next one.
      All kidding aside that was a very good story if they rated them here I'd have
      given you a 10 out of 10, If you have a mailing list or decide to start
      one use this address to contact me
      (Eskimo: I really do need to figure out how I wrote a story that
      has recievd so much postive feedback. Was it the plot? Was it the fine
      mixture of a story and sex? Was it the buildup of innocence in the
      begining to wild, passionate sex? How can I top this? Maybe I ought to
      retire from writting while I'm ahead! Nah, think not. Hope to have a new
      story online by 20th July. It won't be as good as either Justice For Megan or
       Summer Heat, but it should be entertaining none the less. I also hope to have
      another story completed by the end of month. I think it will be well liked..I hope!)

    276  13.07.05  Rob  Justice For Megan &  Summer Heat
      comments = Hi,I came across Summer Heat & Justice for Megan, read and enjoyed both of them. I agree with you that without plot, stories are boring. I was surprised to see you had written so much. I've been reading stories from ASSTR for a long time, and had not previously come across your work.
      There seems to be a dearth of talent/quality on ASSTR these days, a far
      cry from the late 1990's when it seemed there were lots of really good
      authors writing regularly. My personal view is that the quality decline
      started after Celeste stopped reviewing.
      For this reason then, I was delighted to find your stories. I hope you
      will keep writing and posting. I look forward to reading more of your
      work.
      (Eskimo: Thanks for finding my stories and enjoying them. I find
      your view of things quite refreashing. I do try to give some sort of plot
      in most of my stories, and the last coupler I've written have been warmly
      recieved. I've seen the Celeste reviews, and never had a story reviewed
       there. I did have one reviewed by Crimson, and the review was rather
       negative for the story. Oh well, such is life. Haven't seen Crimson review
       any others of late, not sure if still being done. There use to eb awards as
       well, haven't heard anything lately about that either. I've lots of things
       to say about this, but not sure how to put in words. Anyway, thanks for
       reading. Not sure about the talent of other authors. Dark Vision, Scipio,
       Jacl Lipton are a few of the good ones that come to mind. I really should
       post a page of authors I like, maybe if I get the time when my regular life
       calms down, I'll work on it. I have noticed soem authors list me on their
       pages, and I really should return the favor.)

    276  12.07.05  Roger  Breeding Of Chris
       comments = Hi, That was a great little story. I liked the idea of a  breeding club/group and inter-racial mixtures.
      I've been to some of the Pacific Islands where whites and Melenasians
      have inter-bred they make some of the most beautiful girls in the world.
      Liked the story, would like to see more of these families couplings and
      of course off-spring.
      (Eskimo: I think I could have done this story better, it was way
      too short and impersonal.....maybe I'll work on something a bit different.
      I do enjoy the idea of writting stories set ito the future, something about
      fantasy in it that I like. I've done a few so far, more on the computer that
      I've started, but for one reason or another, just haven't finished.)

    275  11.07.05  EspressoBolus  Following Directions
       comments = I found this story haunting in the sense of "lingering in
       one' thoughts".  I have personal issues with men fathering children
       recklessly, although in this case I am aware that the women contrived    to gather the seed, regardless of the husband's thoughts on the subject.  The smile on his face (and in his eyes) says he is OK with being used as a
       stud.  I find the whole thing disurbing. But enough of that!  You write
       well and you make me think! An author cannot hope for more; except
       perhaps a 3 book contract with Doubleday or Knoph's. Oh well
       (Eskimo: Yeah, a contract...now that would be sweet....sorry
       about your personal issues...well, no, not really.....anway, glad to
       have made you think, instead of just whacking your meat...or if female,
       knocking the hooded man....)

    274  11.07.05  hunghandsome  Greg's New Housemates
       comments = This story was so hot! I wish I was Carl and was enjoying
       all these women as well as seeing them on such a hot black stud as Greg
       (Eskimo: Another satisfied reader....and not one of my best works,
       either. For some reason, people like reading interracial sex. Watching is
       okay as well. I'll have to work on another story with that theme in mind.)

    273  09.07.05  hoopeless Romantic   Summer Heat
       comments = The bulk of this story is a delight for this HOPELESS
       ROMANTIC. Indeed, I feel that it is only normal and NATURAL that the two
       women and three girls became pregnant as a result. :-(
       I do wish however that the epilogue of the story was changed so that
       Amber and April had a more enjoyable adulthood, possibly spending a
       lifetime living with Randy and Alice in a sexual foursome.
       (Eskimo: I thought of your idea. But, reality reared it's ugly head
       and I made it more of an unhappy version, except things did get better in
       end. Sorry to disappoint.)

    272  07.07.05  Hawk  stories
      comments = I hope to see these soon.....
      Accidental Journey-April-Ash Hollow-Getting AC-Intro To Swing-daughter and
      Mother Rental-> Neighborhood Swing-Ranch Hand-Trip To Rez-Twins In Training
      (Eskimo: Probably of this whole group, I'm only close to finishing
      one of them, and that's 'Ranch Hand'. 'Getting AC' is a short one that
      only needs a bit more before I can call it done. 'Ash Hollow' I'm having
      issues on how to finish. Just have the opening scenes done on most of the
      others you've mentioned, although 'Neighborhood Swing' has a lot done, but
      needs a lot more work. I think I'll be trashing 'Trip To Rez', as well as
      'Accidentel Journey', although I might incorporate the latter into a different
      story. And I have no idea what 'Daughter And Mother Rental' is, as it's
      not one of mine, but it does have a good idea behind it, may have to put
      that one on the starting block.)

    271 07.07.05  bosnchad  Justice For Megan
      I just finished reading this exciting and excellent story.  I
      stumbled on to you stories on ASSM and can only say I'm so glad I did.
      I usually hang out of Storiesonline.net but they dried up for a while
      and if they hadn't I'd have missed this best story of 2005.  Thanks
      (Eskimo: Thanks, not sure about the best of 2005, though. My
      fellow writter Jack C Lipton has put out a few good works this year,
      as has a host of other authors.)

    270  07.07.05  Arthur  Justice For Megan
      comments = Very well done, sir.This story is surely amongst your best.
      Thanks for sharing it. God Bless and keep you alway.
      (Eskimo: Wow! A repeat commenter(is that a word?). With all the praise
      this story has recieved, I wonder if I'll get some sort of an award?!

    269  06.07.05  earl   Summer Heat
       comments = Wonderful story, could not put it down.
       (Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Although I do have to
       say, I am starting to get a big head with all these positive comments.
       I'm sure there will be someone that'll be negative sooner or later.)

      268  06.07.05  a fan  Summer Heat
       comments = just read this story of yours
       and i ejoyed it much
       for me it had a nice balance of story and sex with good humor
       looking forward to reading more of your story's
       (Eskimo: Hope you enjoy my other works as well.)

    267  06.07.05  J  April
      comments = Great story, Though they never seem long enough. Thank You
      (Eskimo: I always worry that my stories get too long. Imagine that!
      I've a few stories that are long, but I just can't seem to finish them.)

    266  06.07.05  Arthur  Summer Heat
      comments = Very nicely done. I especially enjoyed the straight forward
      attitude of the hero; the entire story was satsifying and it was easy
      to delve into.
      I like your stuff! Thanks for sharing it here at asstr.
      God Bless and keep you alway.
      (Eskimo: Looks like I wrote two winners back-to-back. Sort of
      afraid to try finishing anything else. But, I am on a roll, so we'll
      see what comes up in the next month or so.)

    265  05.07.05   Ian  Justice For Megan
      comments = I've just read Justice for Megan and very much enjoyed the
      story. I s'pose a short message at leat is in order to say thanks for
      writing it.
      Now, how about a sequel? I'm not sure you've *quite* got enough works
      in progress... ;)
      (Eskimo: I've plenty of stuff that I'm working on at the moment,
      so a sequel for this one would be a long shot. Not to mention the fact that
      it would be a lot harder to accomplish. After all, what would I write about?
      Maybe knocking up Megan? When the time comes, I might kick it around some.)

    264  05.07.05  Mojo   Summer Heat
       comments = Nicely done -- another fun read!
       (Eskimo: Seems this is my second best story ever...see next comment.)

    263  05.07.05  Jim  Justice For Megan
      comments = I have to say that I don't read many good stories on ASSTR,
      but I enjoyed yours. I liked that it actually dealt with feelings and a
      story line.
      (Eskimo: Okay, it seems this is by far hands down my best story written, EVER!
      Now what the fuck am I going to do? Oh yeah, try writting one just as good, if
      not better.)

    262  05.07.05  hopless romantic  untitled--multiple office romance
       comments = This plot promises to be a delight to this over-the-hill
       male. :-(
       (Eskimo: It's not often that I get people commenting on stories that I
       haven't finished yet, and hr sent me a lengthy detailed plan for the above
       untitled and very unfinished work. If he's reading this, please send me your
       email addy, would like to discuss it with him.)

    261  04.07.05  Rush Limbaugh Impregnating My Wife
      comments = house  boat.?   147?  come on laughing out loud!
      (Eskimo: Does anybody know what teh fuck this moron is talking about
      concerning '147'? Must be some sort of abuser of prescription drugs.)

    260  04.07.05  Darkvision   Summer Heat
      comments = I started reading this story, but found it was cut off in the  group. Where can I find the complete story?
      BTW - I'm enjoying the stroy.
      (Eskimo: Not sure what happened. I posted on the newsgroups, and it
      seems some readers had no problem downloading it, while some others did. I
      emailed the link to my asstr.org page to him, hopefully he gets that. I was
      quite surprised, didn't think too many people still use newsgroups.)

    259  04.07.05  J  Candy Learns about Love and Sex
      comments = Great story. sorry it is over.
      (Eskimo: I liked this one also. I thought this was one of my
      better coming of age stories. Seems like it's getting harder to write
      fresh material, taking longger betwen stories at the moment. That's not
      entirely true, as I've lots of stories started, but trying to make them
      more than just 'fuck & suck' stories can be rather trying at times.)

    258 04.07.05  Dave  April
      comments = The story was very good! I would like somrthing like that to
      happen to me. I've got a fixation on a young girl in my neighborhood,
      but I don't think my wife would go that far! I'd be happy just to get
      the young lady though, if I could!
      (Eskimo: I sure do hope your local girl is of age, or we'll be
      reading/hearing about you in the media. And yeah, most guys would like
      something like that to happen to them as well.)

    257  03.07.05  hopless romantic  Following Directinos
      comments = << Five weeks later, I'm entering a restaurant,>>
      This is a rather surprising twist to your story. But I don't like the
      idea AT ALL that the author has TOTALLY MISLEAD me about the staging of
      the story up to this point.
      However, this HOPELESS ROMANTIC does like the idea that Julie had
      invited her sister in law over to be thoroughly fucked by Paul's
      brother, so that the apparently infertile Paul can finally become a father.
      I also like the idea that Paul did not know about Sarah's visit, and
      his brother did NOT know until later about the ulterior purpose of
      Sarah's erotic visit. Conversely, I think that realism demands that
      Sarah's brother in-law should have fucked her repeatedly over several days
      to make sure that at least one of those days was within her brief fertile
      period. It seems that we human beings are intended to be largely
      oblivious about the possibility of pregnancy before, during, and after
      intercourse; even though that end is one of two BIOLOGICAL purposes of
      human intercourse.
      Note also that I wonder if Sarah should have been primed with a
      vibrator before his arrival, unless of course the biological father
      suffers from premature ejaculation or is somehow inhibited about  interracial
      sex.
      I would have rather seen the normal cycle of mutual arousal, slow and
      gentle penetration, hard thrusting, and an involuntary mutual climax in
      which her cunt STRONGLY MILKS his cock!
      (Eskimo: Interesting analysis. Actually, I enjoy throwing a curve
      in the ending of my stories from time to time. Probably one that comes to
      mind is Husband's Indiscretion, which has a comical ending to it.
      I think that maybe you've gone into to much thinking on this story. But then,
      I've been known to be wrong.)

    256  03.07.05  dan    Summer Heat
      comments = hi there...
      just finished reading your story "summer heat".
      as I was a typical horny 15 yr old I am not sure I could have kept up
      with 3 young teen girls as randy did. but sure would have loved trying.
      I must admit I asm surprised that randy did not end up fucking his mom
      and aunt as that seemed bound to happen when they were all running
      around naked.
      all in al I really enjoyed the story. being an old 77 it did take me
      back to my youth. and yes, I am still very active sexually.
      thanks and keep writing.
      (Eskimo: You know, you pointed out something that I almost did. I had
      thought about having Randy nail Lucy, but thought better of it. After all,
      there were three hot teen cunts that were wearing him out as it is. As for him
      doing his mother, I've never been ito that sort of thing in any of my stories.
      I do have to say, even at 15, I don't think I would have been able to
      keep up with them either.)

    255  03.07.05   rick  Comunity Breeding Project
      comments =  Great interracial theme. Thanks!!!!!!!!
      (Eskimo: In my personal opinion, not one of my better works. Not
      even sure why I posted it. I've been workign on a bunch off stories set
      in the future, such as this one, and for some reason, I finsihed this one.
      I think I could have done better, and one day I may get one of the others
      finished.)

    254  02.07.05  a guy    Summer Heat
      comments = i really liked this story, the polygamy thing is every guys
      fantasy.  and i like children, and fishing.
      i wonder why it never worked out for the twins, was childbirth too
      painful, or did they not have the maternal drive.  or did the young
      childbirth ruin their years at school?
      mothers - they seemed rather careless - i thought they were going to
      get condoms on one of the shopping trips to town.  then he could have
      stolen some - but too late!  now everyone involved seems a bit dim, 8
      people having sex for weeks and not one thought of pregnancy?  a bit
      much....
      btw, a writing technique thing - instead of an epilog, try using a
      flashback conversation at the end explaining what happened as they exchange
      memories.
      kudos on a nice story.
      (Eskimo: well, that's thorough! I figured there would be two items
      brought up in the comments, and you nailed both. As for the mothers, I
      mentioned a few times about alcohol was involved. The viewpoint was from
      the teen boy, he just seen them drinking. Why were the two mom's drinking?
      Could it have been because they were lonely, drowning their sorrows
      together? And then two suitors appeared, and their own lust blinded them of
      what was happening to their children? As for the twins, I never went into
      detail on why they ended up like they were. Maybe it was because of the stigma
      of teen motherhood, it ruined their life, as they had no stable significant
      other to help them along, while with Alice, she had Randy for her support.
      Yeah, I know, I didn't go into enough detail on this part of the story, but
      then, the story was about Randy, and his eye on it. Your idea on ending it
      with as a flasback conversation was good, I'll take note note of it. Actually,
      I have used that in the past, not sure why I didn't this time. Thanks for
      enjoying the story.)

    253  02.07.05  devi Candy Learns about Love and Sex
      comments = twas quite excellenr
      (Eskimo: Thank you....I liked writting this one.)

    252  02.07.05  anon   Relunctance To Swing
      comments = daaammn nigga i jerked off to tat
      (Eskimo: ??????  Well now, that's an intresting response. No idea why
      the 'nigga' comment, as there wasn't any interracial in this story.)

    251  02.07.05  Ben  April
      comments = Very well written.  These days good stories don't need to be
      filled with slutty work.  This well done and almost seemed possible.
      (Eskimo: Thanks Ben. I do think it was more fantasy than realistic. I
      have been kicking around some follow-up stories, concerning April at college
      as one scenerio, and her mom and neighbors in another. Don't think I'll
      ever get them finished, though.)

    250  30.06.05  jay  Impregnating My Wife
      comments = WOW i loved ur story, "Impregnate my wife"! Insperational..
      i would love to be in such a position as u were in that story. I too
      find it unbleavably erousing to see my wife being fucked by strangers.
      alas i have not been so fortunate so see such events =(   However my wife
      is open to such things, but we are.. well a bit shy.. in bed (having
      sex)we talk about it but out of bed it becomes ... no so... real.. u
      know?  .. i just dont know how to make it go from fantisy to actually
      happening. do u go to swingers clubs to get started or what? well if u have
      any advice or comments u can e-mail me at (withheld for privacy)  other
      wise... keep up the great work!
      (Eskimo: Thanks for enjoying this story theme. Some write me and say
      it's a terible genre, but it seems there are just as many that enjoy it. I
      guess as long as you can seperate fantasy and reality, you can probably do
      allright. This story, by the way, was purley fantasy. I have been thinking
      writting a story about this couple concerning one of their earlier breeding
      sessions. Please mind that it's only in the thinking stage. Happy reading,
      keep those comments coming! ps- I've already emailed Jay and discussed about
      getting his wife involved in swinging...maybe some day we'll have Jay's account
      of that written down online here. What do you say, Jay?)

    249  25.06.05  scott  Justice For Megan
      comments = i have read many of your stories, but for some reason missed
      this one. it brought back lots of memories from my college days. when i
      moved to ga. the only school i found that would not charge out of state
      fees was atlanta baptist college. talking about a life twist. very
      small and very dogmatic. i lasted for two years before transferring to a
      state university for my senior year.this story would definitely deserve a
      ten.
      (Eskimo: Damn! How the fuck am I going to top this story? Or even equal
      it? Well, I'm sitting back and re-reading it. I have a plot, one that's
      not just take her clothes off and fuck her silly. It's sort of fantasy, but it
      has a good dose of reality in it as well. It has romance, which someone
      has already noted. Maybe I'll just quit while I'm ahead.)

    248  20.06.05  anon  Justice For Megan
      comments= This story is ABSOLUTELY PERFECT for a HOPELESS ROMANTIC! :-)
      (Eskimo: All these nice comments about one story, it's starting to go
      to my head...both of them....wonder if any of you nominated it for a Silver
      Clitordis" award.)

    247  12.06.05  anon  Vacation Bonding
      comments = "Yeah, life is good "That may be so,but your story stunk.Too
      much sex.A wife takes on 12 0f her step sons friends?Get real ass
      hole.You write some very good stories at times,but then you get on your
      nigger and too much sex kick and go to hell.
     (Eskimo: LMAO, no, really. I love it when someone trashes one of my
     stories. What the fuck tehy want? A fucking masterpiece everytime? Sometimes
     I get bored, and I just want to write a 'fuck' story with lots of fantasy. And
     that's what this was. Oh well, I did get good comments about this one as well.
     So you just can't please veryone.

    245  06.06.05  Madhu  Justice For Megan
      comments: Read your May 2005 stories, viz., Justice for Megan and Following
      Directions. Nicely done. Look forward to many more from you, especially
      conception stories, as you had earlier indicated.
      (Eskimo: Thanks, and I am working on a few other conception stories, but
      only one real seriuosly.)

    246  12.06.05  Ralph  stories
      comments = Love your stories and am anxiously awaiting any new or
      completed ones.  Look forward to them
      (Eskimo: I'm hoping to have a new story up by mid-july.)

    244  05.06.05  bob  Olive
     comments = Interesting story. Good plot development. Good sex. What
     more can one ask for?
     (Eskimo: I've actually started a few other stories with 'Olive' in
     mind. They're not the same 'Olive', but each involve an older woman and younger
     man(or men). No idea when or if I'll ever get them finished.)

    243  05.06.06  Tim  Justice For Megan
      comments = I just wanted to thank you for a very enjoyable story.  As a
      very far left "none" I was pleased with the way you dealt with the insane
      right and showed how folks on both ends of the spectrum could be rational.
      An old limerick comes to mind:
      There once was a lady from knizes,
      Who had breasts of two different sizes.
      One was quite small
      And was nothing at all.
      The other was large and won prizes.
      The story was really very enjoyable.  Read it in one gulp.
      (Eskimo: I love limericks...but anyway, glad you liked the story. This
      one seemed to be the biggest hit that I've written so far.)

    242  25.05.05  civilmage  Cassie And The Biker Twins
      comments = I like the story. I liked the romance as well as the sex. I
      know it's a complete tale. However, I still find I want to know more
      about what happens to Gabriel, Richard, Robert and Cassie as well as what
      happens with Thomas growing up in such an open family.
      (Eskimo: Why is it everyone thinks I should continue the story's I
      write? NOt sure what to say, except that maybe that they all just lived
      happily ever after.)

    241  25.05.05  Don Nudist
      comments = Swinging sex does occur in nudist camps, but it is pretty
      much well hidden. I did a research project in college on them and I
      personally fucked a woman that could not get pregnant...barebacked. I saw a
      lot more barebacked sex amongst others and did not see any resultant
      pregnancies.
      (Eskimo: Well, I can only say, that my wife and I have been going for over
      a decade, and we've never seen it, except for when a swingers group entered the place
      we normaly frequent, and kind of got out of hand. They've been told to never return.
      Our nudist friends (and family), can probably agree with that. I have seen swinging
      at campgrounds, but in both instances, neither were nudist resorts, and one was
      actually a state park. And yes, our close friends that do swing, wouldn't go to a
      nudist resort, she just doesn't think she could be naked in front of a lot of people.
      Go figure!)

    240  24.05.05  Lar  Justice For Megan
      comments = this has to be one of the best stories i have read on the
      web...great job
       (Eskimo: Wow, six favorable comments, and I'm damn near spechless!
      Since the following six comments are for the same story, I'll just comment here
      on what the readers have had to say. I enjoyed writting this one. It had a plot,
      as well as a few plot twists. Sorry about the length, but it seems that I spaced
      the sex scenes apart at good intervals. As for the different breast size of Megan,
      I actually have seen someone with this condition at a nudist resort, and the idea of
      writting it into the story as a way of showing her inhibtion just came naturally. Yeah,
      the conservative background towards premarital sex could be considered a stretch, but
      from personal expereinces, it seems to be more common than people would like to admit.)

    239  24.05.05  DaMac  Justice For Megan
      comments = hey very interesting read, u're a great writer, keep it up.

    238  24.05.05  Roly  Justice For Megan
      comments = I like your style! Very - real. I could certainly relate to
      Jeff - seemed like I knew him well.
      I started reading it because of the title - I was in the mood for a bit
      of female revenge. I didn't realise how long it was but couldn't 'put
      it down' - just had to find out how it ended. Very clever! The good guys
      get their women, the bag guys get what's coming to them.
      Thanks - I'll try another one next time I'm in the mood for reading...
     !

    237  24.05.05  xjum  Justice For Megan
      comments = Nicely done

    236  23.05.05  Jim Justice For Megan
      comments = Good romantic story...Nice detail, nice twist about the
      different size breasts...Interestingly enough, I once had a girlfriend with
      similiar breasts....we called them Burt and Wheeler, after a local
      liquor store chain...lol  Anyway, I liked it very much, but found the
      tolerance by the parents and family of premarital sex unlikely with such a
      conservative religious background....but so what....thanks for writing
      it....Jim

    235  23.05.05  Mike  Justice For Megan
      comments = FANTASTIC STORY!!! A++.. nothing better than sories with a
      .. well, story.. believable background, realistic.. very nice :)

    234  21.05.05  Don  Breeding Of Chris
      comments = Whyzit that no stories are hardly ever written about white
      men fucking nigger sluts and knocking THEM up?
      (Eskimo: Congradulations, you just won the champion message of the day. You might
      want to go back to my Interracial Sex Stories page, and do some looking. While
      there, you will find four stories where it's white male and black female.)

    233  20.05.05  s  Justice For Megan
      comments = Except for the minor typos and spelling (I have the same
      problem -- I am a professor at Michigan State University), I truly enjoyed
      this story.  In many ways, it is a satisfying story.  I enjoyed the
      transformation of Megan; I liked the fact that Jeff now has a new and
      larger family (as well as Kevin).  This is a good story and one that I
      enjoyed.  Yet, it leaves several themes unresolved.  I am interested in
      what happens with April or Cathy and Ethan.  I hope that you explore these
      themes in latter stories.  A good, well written, satisfying story.
      Thank you.
      (Eskimo: Well, the story was from the eyes of Jeff, and he was more interested
      in what was happening, as well what may happen to, Megan and himself. I could
      write another with the viewpoint of Kevin, Ethan or any of the other characters from
      the original, but not sure if this would be a good idea. Thanks for your input.)

    232  20.05.05  a guy  Cassie And The Biker Twins
      comments = first, i like this story.  i thought it was going to be a
      very rare polyandry (2hubbys sharing 1 wife) marriage story, but it
      turned in a kind of group marriage story - which are also pretty rare.
      the one weakness i find is the lack of background/backstory on Gabriel.
      everyone else we get a pretty good feel for who they are, but Gaby
      comes out of nowhere as the second wife, and we never get much info on
      her
      (Eskimo: I did give some background on Gabriel, a few paragraph's
      at the beginning of the party scene, although it may not have been too
      indepth, I thought it provided enough background for Gabriel and her mother
      as well. Actually, there was probably more background on those two, than there
      was on the two main male stars of the story, the twin bikers Richard and Robert.
      And I agree about the polyandry theme. Even though I'm a guy, I always thought it
      make more sense to have two males with one female. If you think about it in our
      society, it would make more sense. After all, although it is unfair, guys tend to
      make more money than women in the workplace. This would mean two higher incomes, and if
      she decides to work, more the better. This also would reduce the financial burden that
      comes to play due to maternity leave, raising children, etc. Of course, this is just
      my humble opinion.)

    231  18.05.05  Doug  Husband's Indiscretion
      comments = Great story. The end had me rolling on the floor.
      (Eskimo: Even my wife liked this one.)

    230  18.05.05  Bab  Justice For Megan
      comments = Why would they force Cathy into a loveless marraige?
      Just get child support and be a single mother, or find someone else.
      Idea: it might have made a good second chapter of useing this retro
      xtianity to give Jeff Cathy as a second wife with Megan - polygamy!
      (Eskimo: Take a look at message #226. As for teh polygamy
      idea, I thought about it, but I didn't want to make the story into
      too much of a fantasy. It seems realistic as is, so why bother adding
      somethign that would be totally off the wall. I know, what I have
      happened to Ethan and Cathy is a bit of a stretch, but it is not as bad
      as adding Cathy to the love life of Megan and Jeff. Oh yeah, five responses
      to one story within 24 hours of posting, a record for me. Thanks guys and
      gals!)

    229  18.05.05  Wetlander  Justice For Megan
      comments = Took awhile to get the connections with the title and the
      description but overall, one of your better stories. Good job!
      (Eskimo: That's one of my weak points, coming up with a good title, not
      sure why I picked this one, just did. And I do think this was one of my better
      stories, mainly because it actually told a story and wasn't a 'fuck & suck' job,
      which in my opinion is okay from time to time. Afterall, sometimes I even want to
      read about sex, seeing the words how someone described a sexual situation.)

    228  17.05.05  Lynn  Justice For Megan
       comments = I don't know how to thank you for writing something that I
       enjoy reading.. . . I haven't been on in a while and see that I have a
       lot of catching up to do. Great Job. Would be great to hear from you.
       (Eskimo: I am assuming she meant the above story, another person that
       liked it.)

    227  17.05.05  Mike  Justice For Megan
      comments = Hello, congratulations and thank you for another great
      story. You have a terrific imagination and a very good writing style.
      Please keep writing and posting. I know that I am not the only person who
      enjoys and appreciates your stories. Thanks again, Mike.
      (Eskimo: Thank you....seems I've recieved different viewpoins on this
      story. I like that.)

    226  17.05.05  a guy  Justice For Megan
      comments = sorry, but forcing Ethan to marry Cathy is a bad idear.
      Cathy would be better off with someone who loved her, not the scumbag.
      Ethan shoulda been sent to help harvey.....
      (Eskimo: Hmmm, didn't think about that scenerio....where the hell
      were you when I was writting it? Of course, I shold have made it clearer
      that for some strange reason, Cathy was still very much in love with Ethan.
      Which brings us to the age old question, why do women want losers that treat
      them like shit? Oh well, at least your ead the story.)

    225  05.05.05  Jim  Olive
      comments =      I found this story to be a very enjoyable read.  You
      have mentioned writing another Olive story with no connection to this
      one....I would rather read a sequel, featuring the daughter's interaction
      with Thomas.
      I think this is one of your top stories, very imaginative and well
      written.  I look forward to reading more of your stuff!
      (Eskimo: I thought about a sequel...and don't like it. However,
      I have started a couple of more stories featuring Olive in different
      scenerios. NO idea when I'll get them finsihed.)

    224  01.05.05  jinglehimershmit   Carrie
      comments = it was alot better than cassie and the biker twins i'd say.
      please tell me when you are going to make another pregnant sex story
      (Eskimo: As I tell most of my readers, it's best if you come back
      abuot once a month, and check my main story page. I usually have story codes
      depicting what's in each story, and my main story page has the latest
      twenty stories that I've written.)

    223  01.05.05  jinglehimershmit  Cassie And The Biker Twins
      comments = it was pretty good except it was a little drug out in
      details and getting to the good stuff
      (Eskimo: Well, that's different. Seems I get told from time to time
      that I don't provide enough details throughout the story.)

    222  28.04.05  anon   Filling The House
      comments = We,your fans belive its time for another chapter in the life
      and times of " the four ladies and Joe"(and the Kids)
      (Eskimo: LOL, thanks, but, I really don't think that I can come up
      with another chapter. How about a hint on a topic? And no underage themes!)

    221  25.04.05  Madhu  Carrie
      comments = You are a very imaginative writer. Any new story? Being a
      mother, I want babies two in the episodes just the natural way.
      (Eskimo: I may have a new story or two by end of May, depending on
      how much free time I may have. I also seem to be running into the same old
      problem, of starting a bunch of stories, and not getting them worked to
      completion.)

    220  26.04.05  Madhu  Opening Her Eyes
      comments = Just excellent. Keep up the religion. Best of luck

    219  26.04.05    Glen  Impregnating My Wife
      comments = Wow...Would love to have a wife like that!
      (Eskimo: Purely fantasy.....would it really be pratical?)

    218  25.04.05  anon  Changing Values
      comments = You left it a lot of room to grow.You should do it.
      (Eskimo: Don't think I will. I sort of didn't like this work,
      although the lesbian sex in it was pretty good, I thought.)

    217  23.04.05  anon   stories
      comments = "Lover"-This piece of shit is just another nigger fuck
      story.
      "Turning The Tables"-A very good nigger story,(For a change)
      "The Cottage"-One of your Best
      "Widower Fun"-A well done gay tail.
      "Western Trip to an Orgy"-A lot of words that say nothing.
      " Swingers Diary"-It was wasted time to write this piece of shit.
      "The Garage"-All I can say is,OUTSTANDING!
      "The Cabin"-Another great story with just the right amount of sex
      " Swingers Diary"-You just dont get it do you? A piece of shit
        I could go on,but;
       I am sorry to say that the last 6 months your stories have gone down
       hill and turned to shit.
     (Eskimo: Please note, I did post this as written, so don't go slamming on me for
     racist ramblings. I've no idea who this guy is, and he is entitled to his own opinoins.
     However, he sort of lacks consrtuctive critisism. Not sure why he commented twice about
     "Swingers Diary", maybe he hated it twice as much. Actually, that story wasn't meant to
     be so much about sex, than it is about the actual lifestyle from a couple that
     expereinced it. )

    216  14.04.05   DT  Triplet Auction
      comments = Great concept, liked it but almost wish it had gone on longer. How about next
      time underaged girls are used. Maybe inthe 12 to 16 year range. Could be some kind of
      slavery set up.
      (Eskimo: Interesting idea, but not to sure if I want to go there, considering the issue
      of child porn. Under seventeen sort of gets me worried.)

    215  12.04.05  Gerry  Olive
     comments = I REALLY enjoyed the story and the way it was told...GREAT stuff..I'll want
     to read MORE. I am writing a story myself and you inspired me to "get back with it"
     THANKS ! JIM
     (Eskimo: Wow, two favorable responses in one day, what more can a horny author want?
     Good luck on your story, can't wait to read it.)

    214  12.04.05  Luigi   Filling The House
       comments = A very pleasant fantasy well written. I intend to read more of your stories
       but did wish to thank you for writing and sharing them with us.
       (Eskimo: Thank you, glad you enjoyed it and I hope you enjoy my other works as well.)

    213 07.04.05  Ball Four   Cassie And The Biker Twins
      comments = This story kept my interest all the way thru. Good story. I liked it.
      (Eskimo: I wondered how you readers would react to this one. Glad I'm one-for-one so far
      on it.)

    212  17.03.05  Michael  Changing Values-
     comments = I liked the story. I thought it was funny. I especially liked how Misty
     decided to change her ways for the better about halfway through, because it was
     completely unexpected, and it immediately made her a better/more important character.
     I'm not sure how to explain that, but it made her seem more like a real person that
     you can care about, as opposed to just some jerky roommate you don't like. Because
     before then, she was just important to the story as Tammy's roommate, but after, she
     became the main character of the story (along with Tammy). See, the story comes off
     as Tammy's story, until Misty decides to change, and then it becomes Misty and Tammy's
     story. Re-reading the story, yeah, there was stuff about Misty, but I only cared about
     her in relation to Tammy. But after she decided to change, I started to care about
     her. I think that's great, because both Misty and the story take a turn for the better
     at that point. Anyway, great story! Top-notch characterization. Keep up the good work!
      (Eskimo: I love a positive review!!! Although truth be told, I thought I could
      have done better by dragging out the changing of Misty to a more enjoyable human.
      But, it seemed to have worked out well in the end.)

    211  11.03.05  Morris   Greg's New Housemates
      comments = enjoyed dtory first of your stories i have read better than other other
      authors i have read
      (Eskimo: I don't think I'll be going out on a limb by saying that English is not Morris's
      primary laguage.....maybe Al can translate.)

    210  04.03.05  al  Canoe Trip To An Orgy
      comments = There is an old hunting aphorism that applies here: "When the feathers fly,
      you've usually hit a bird". I think I touched a sore point of Eskimo. The question of
      whether any parties enjoyed their sexual encounters is not germain. The author
      determines what was enjoyed or not; the characters are not independent but their
      "attitudes" are in the hands of the author. My comments about portraying responsible
      sexual behavior still stand.
      (Eskimo: Whatever, Al.)

    209  01.03.05  al  Canoe Trip To An Orgy
      comments = This story encourages irresponsible behaviour and fails to serve as a model
      for the prevention of sexually transmitted diseases, some of which can
      result in death. Serial unprotected sex by three women with up to 10 partners is
      almost guaranteed to result in STD transmission. This type of behaviour will almost
      certainly transmit HIV, genital herpes, syphilis, gonorrhea, and other such
      diseases. There is no mention of the responsible use of condums to mitigate
      agains disease transmission and against unintentional pregnancy. I believe that
      the authors of such erotic stories have an obligation to remind readers about
      the hazards of unprotected sexual intercourse. I hope that future stories will
      exhibit more responsible behaviour. A further problem is that this story displays
      women as objects of sexual gratification rather than as people. The three women
      in this story can be fairly categorized as "cunts" rather than as individuals
      with feelings and intelligence
      (Eskimo: Well, I pretty much ignored  most of Al's message. Most readers of porn are
      more interested in getting aroused than they are worried about safe sex. Speaking of which,
      reading leads to it, as most are probably masterbating as they read. There's no sex safer than
      getting yourself off with your own hand. As for intellect, Al sent me the same message
      twice from the same story page. However, the ending of his diatrabe is a bit disturbing. Why
      doesn't Al look at the story from the woman's point of view? Why can't he see the story as
      the women getting sexual gratification from the men? Does this idea bother him? Is it against
      his beleifs for a woman to enjoy sex? He doesn't say anything negative about the men, yet they
      seemed to be fucking up a storm as well. Personally, we (as in my wife and I) know a few women
      that enjoy sex with men (one-on-one and in groups). And, they're average, respectable women.
      Does Al think they are 'cunts' too? Enough of this soapbox standing,
      happy reading guys...and gals....and keep those fingers moving.)

    208  28.02.05  Dave  Breaking In Party
      comments = The only thing I have to say Nice job. You were very discriptive and can;t
      wait to read a new one.
      (Eskimo: Thank you, no idea when I'll be posting any new material. I'm sort of
      at a stand still right now. Lack of time and patience is taking it's toll.)

    207  25.02.05  tom  stories
       comments = How about a story involving a wife who has to go to a business meeting
       out of town and finds that the hotel her meeting is in also has a few hundred high
       school boys from sports teams staying there for a local competition.She may never
       make the meetings.
       (Eskimo: I like your theme, but not sure if I'll ever get to finish one like
       it. It does have definite possibilities.)

    206  25.02.05  anon  stories
       comments = I really like your story about the future breeding. It was great with
       the interracial flavor to it. Can you write more. Thanks
       (I've been working on a few other stories with about the same theme. And,
       as with most of my other works in progress, I have no idea when or if I'll ever
       get them finished.)

    205  23.02.05  peterm  Candy Learns about Love and Sex
       comments = Great stoty, By the end I was begginning to visualise Candy and her
       desparate and untutored feelings. You captured her very well. I look forward to
       reading more of your stories
       (Eskimo: I enjoyed writting this story. It's about young love, and
       accapting of ones own body. I was working on another version, but took this
       road instead. Maybe someday I'll finish the earlier story, and see what response
       I'll get from it.)

    204  18.02.05  jerryt  Olive
       comments = > you did a complete story with a good ending. I enjoyed
       (Eskimo: Glad you liked this one, I have started working on another
       Olive story, completely differetn from this one. No idea when I'll get it
       finished, however.)

    203  14.02.05  rpowell  Picking Up My Parents Surprising Lifestyle
       comments = Love that story!!! Was hoping there was a continuation, but haven't
       found it. Keep up the GREAT Work!
       (Eskimo: There probably will not be a continuation.)

    202  08.02.05  Chris  Fantasy Vacation
      comments = Hi there Only recently found your list of stories and slowly working
      my way through them. I have read your Bio page and decided to offer a couple of
      comments if you don't mind. After reading several, in no particular order, I
      did see your writing style change but still enjoyable. Typos still exist but
      from reading your bio it looks like you do try and fix them when you can or
      are informed of such. Maybe it's me but stuff typos bug me. Maybe because I
      proof read stuff I see more, who knows. Something I did see, however, is that
      somehow your characters in a copule of your stories, do seem to jump into the
      situations a little too quickly with no sort of hesitation on their part.
      Maybe this was just fast forwarding in your writing but it did seem odd. I
      found the short sentences describing certain scenes a little jumpy but again
      if it is your style I can live with that. I am not too crazy on the incest
      stories, at least by blood, but by marriage, that's okay. Bottom line, I
      like your stuff and will try and eventually read them all. Cheers Chris
      (Eskimo: Thanks Chris, that was a very thoughtful review of my writting.
      I do notice what you say about my stories are true, not sure why I write them
      like that, mabe because I'm afraid of loosing the interest of the reader, and
      want to jump ahead to the good part.)

    201   04.02.05  Rodney  Lover
      comments = I love this story.
      (Eskimo: Amazing, as I don't even consider this one as one of my top works.)

    200 03.02.05  Jenn  Carla's Business Trip
      comments = I loved the story was it true and did you ever meet up with them again.
      (Eskimo: This story was purely fantasy on my part.)

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