

[BSFSF] Officer Koccick's Billy Club: A Review [MF, hum]
by Christine "Green Leafy Dragon" Indigo (christineindigo@juno.com)
http://www.asstr.org/~christineindigo

DISCLAIMERS AND DISTRIBUTION RIGHTS: I'm going to collect all of these
flashes and short shorts into one file and copyleft them as soon as I
have enough of them written to make it worthwhile. (Well, maybe not this
story.)
Until then, you may distribute them freely online. This story has
explicit 
heterosexual activity and is not intended to be read by minors.

NOTE: I was going to rewrite "Missing Panties and a Curbside Seat" and
post it as part of Bradley Stroke's festival, but then I realized that
it's much, much longer than the allowable eighteen lines--it's 53 lines,
and the rewrite would make it even longer! However, I did promise you all
a second BSFSF story, so I cobbled one together in a hurry.


Officer Koccick's Billy Club

Length: Big. Really big. Fortunately, the Officer was experienced and
sensitive, and he knew how to work with a tool of that impressive size:
Instead of ramming it in up to the root and thrusting as hard as he
could, he gently stimulated me by putting it in just the head at first,
pumping it until I was mewing and crying out for a few more inches of
him, and then pushing it deeper and deeper in until we both came with a
scream. Three Stars.

Width: Nice and thick and satisfying, like a cold smoothie on a hot day.
Filled me up nicely and made me want more. Four Stars.

The Way He Used It: The most important part, of course. Read my comments
under "Length." Four Stars, and I wish I could rate it a Five.

Overall Impression: When I was led into the Bradley Stroke offices to be
punished, I had no idea what I was in for. The website clearly said that
I was supposed to be spanked with Officer Koccick's hard rubber billy
club--instead, the Officer confronted me with his nearly billy-club-sized
hard-on, with a rubber already put on it. He spanked me with it once,
porn star style, and then had his way with me right there on the
mat-covered floor. Four Stars--and I have two more comments.

1: If this is what the punishment is like, I wonder how amazing the
reward is. However, I guess I'll never know, because:

2: This comment is on the nineteenth line, so I think I'll probably be
punished again. I can't wait.




 