"Her Little Sister" by Charles Wood (wood2chuck@hotmail.com). Guest review by Piper

When I first read the story title, what immediately sprang to mind was some sort of illicit, immoral tale of incest, debauchery, and hot sex between a pair of sisters. You know, one of those semi-literate pieces where the story is some sort of patchwork used to bridge the gaps between sex scenes?

I was only partly right.

What I found when I got into the story, was a well-written, emotional, imaginative tale filled with incest, debauchery, and hot sex.

Donna is the older sister. Robert sort-of fell in lust with the beautiful 21-year-old woman (10 years his junior). When he visited her house to help her with her resume (he was her sort-of co-worker), he fell in even deeper lust with Allison, who is the younger sister. Allison is the more aggressive of the two, so she gets to Robert first, later that same evening. She is also the more mature and intelligent of the two, with a soul-deep understanding of human nature and motives. She understands Robert in a way even Robert doesn't (reading her big sister's diary helped). She also knows (from the diary) that her big sister has a serious case of the hots for Robert. The trouble is, big sister is being a good girl. Little sister cooks up a plan to change that.

Somewhere in the story, the sisters' mother, Debbi, gets involved. Somewhere in the story there's a little incest (which surprises all of the involved protagonists). Somewhere in the story Donna gets funky, much to Robert's delight. Now, Robert has a choice to make. Who does he want? Where is his heart leading him? Which of the beautiful women who he is so attracted to is the right one for him? What a difficult choice to make. I just wish I had his problem!

This is a first posting by Chuck. It's a long (150k) story. I hope we see a whole lot more stories of this quality from him.