"Weekend" by losgud (lushgod@hotnomail.com). Guest review by Kim.
This story can, more or less, be described as a plain an' simple fuck-fest. The two combatants are Robert and Tracy, his sister-in-law. Supporting characters are Robert's wife Sue, and his mother-in-law, Maud, though neither plays what might be considered a significant role.
Written in the first person, from Robert's point of view, it tells of a normal monthly family visit to his mother-in-law's. On arrival, Robert finds the luscious Tracy also visiting.
Almost immediately the two wannabe lovers are groping and kissing, hiding behind plants and the like. Which is kind of strange, because Robert spends the first few paragraphs telling us proudly of his love, desire for, and loyalty to his wife Sue, and his complete faithfulness since their marriage of fifteen years. Quite why he should suddenly flip-out over his sister-in-law is never made exactly clear, other than she is one hot babe, of course.
After some carefully staged ruses to get the two of them together, outside the house, they go at it like sex-starved rabbits. In the car, in the mall parking lot, in a pet superstore, and all points in between.
They stagger back home and somehow manage to keep their hands off each other in the presence of the rest of the family. Later poor Brian is persuaded to drive Tracy home to her own flat and armed with a legitimate excuse gets to stay awhile.
The sex that follows is titanic in it's intensity and sustained creativity. After reading it I too felt well and truly fucked. It was an exhausting experience, I can tell you.
I've mixed feeling about the story. On the one hand it makes no attempt to explain just why these two should go crazy for each other, and just why Robert would jeopardize an idyllic marriage to an equally sexy lady. On the other hand the writing is excellent, the sex is awesome, and I think screw the implausibility - just lets have some more honest to goodness sex. It blew me away. Fine job losgud, fine job.